Satourn Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 (edited) Hello, my fellow DYOMers! Today is the big day for me (and maybe for you too, who knows?), because today I have finally finished my first mission pack (believe it or not). So yeah, here you go... “You can’t know what sand hides...”STORY 1995... The Falcone Clan, once the most powerful gang in the whole desert, loses its main territory and now has to hide in ruins.1998... Dan Reed, one of the most important members of the clan, comes home after 4 years in Vice City, only to realise that the clan is no longer big and powerful. CHARACTERSDan ReedProtagonist, one of the important members of the Falcone Clan.Joe BarbosaDan’s old friend and the only partner, candidate on underboss’ place in Clan.Peter FalconeLeader of the Falcone Clan in San Andreas and former member of “The Company of Six”. His clan controls Valle Ocultado and Aldea Malvada.Dale NersLeader of the Desert Demons MC and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s Snake Farm and Verdant Meadows.Bogdan DimitrevLeader of the Russian Mafia and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s Las Barrancas. He is Peter’s only ally in the “Company of Six”.ChoLeader of the Triads gang and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s Bayside.Joey JeromeLeader of the Headhunters gang and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s Fort Carson.Kazuko HiranoLeader of the Yakuza gang and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s El Quebrados.Yu TimLeader of the Chinese Razors gang and one of the people who has the piece of desert. In his case, it’s Las Payasadas.Don GorgLeader of Gargato Crime Family and the one who wants to destroy Peter’s Clan and “The Company of Six” to control the whole desert. He is the main antagonist.OliverDon’s gunsmith and drug supplier.GANGSThe Falcone ClanTerritory: Aldea Malvada, Valle OcultadoAllies: Russian Mafia Rivals: Chinese Razors, Yakuza, Gargato Crime Family The Russian MafiaTerritory: Las BarrancasAllies: The Falcone Clan Rivals: Headhunters Desert Demons MCTerritory: Snake Farm, Verdant MeadowsAllies: None Rivals: Headhunters HeadhuntersTerritory: Fort CarsonAllies: Chinese Razors Rivals: The Russian Mafia, Desert Demons MC Chinese RazorsTerritory: Las PayasadasAllies: Yakuza, Headhunters Rivals: Triads TriadsTerritory: BaysideAllies: None Rivals: Chinese Razors, Yakuza YakuzaTerritory: El QuebradosAllies: Gargato Crime Family, Chinese Razors Rivals: The Falcone Clan, Triads Gargato Crime FamilyTerritory: The VisageAllies: Yakuza Rivals: The Falcone Clan ThugsTerritory: Whitewood EstatesAllies: Gargato Crime Family Rivals: Desert Demons MC LOCATIONSValle OcultadoOne of the main locations in this mission pack. Valle Ocultado is the new territory of Falcone Clan, which was given to them by Yakuzas, the new owners of Clan’s homeland, El Quebrados. Joe’s office is here, as well as player’s first safehouse.Alrea MalvadaOne of the main locations in this mission pack. Aldea Malvada is the new and main territory of Falcone Clan. Peter’s office and also Clan’s HQ is here.Las PayasadasLas Payasadas is the main territory of Chinese Razors, Triads’ rival. Player comes here 3 times. Also, some thugs can be seen walking here (like in the mission “Return to Sender”)Las BarrancasThe main territory of The Russian Mafia, though Russians doesn’t give missions here.Fort CarsonThe main territory of Desert Demons’ rivals, Headhunters.El QuebradosEl Quebrados is a new main territory for Yakuzas of San Andreas. Before 1995 it was a main territory of the Falcone Clan. Player’s second safehouse will be located here.Snake FarmThe main territory of Desert Demons MC. Their bar is located here.The VisageGargato Crime Family’s main territory and Don Gorg’s apartments.Las BrujasLas Brujas is the ghost town where Yakuza members and Gargato mobsters were making deals. It became abandoned after the mission “It’s Time”.MISSIONSChapter 1 - Back into sandChapter 2 - New connectionsChapter 3 - On the free wayChapter 4 - End of the TalesNOTE: These missions were created on DYOM 6.1INFOThe content is absolutely bug and crash-free. If you'll encounter a bug/glitch/crash, make sure it appears a second time. If it does, then follow these steps:Restart the game Reinstall DYOM Try to switch the CLEO versions Reinstall the game If you're playing on DYOM 7 or higher, downgrade to DYOM 6.1 (since these missions were created on 6.1) If you'll still encounter any bugs, then it must be a problem of your PC. If you want to give feedback, please note that I'd like to see a constructive one, with pros and cons. Also, I won't mind a written or video review. The logo was made by CCPD. Thanks, man, I appreciate your effort. Edited December 31, 2012 by SatournFan thehloudyss 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
NexusUndead Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Sooo, you can't actually download missions ? Edit: Just saw what you wrote, sorry. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084335 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 (edited) You can now. For those who visited this page the first time, read the 'INFO' section. It's quite important. Edited December 30, 2012 by SatournFan Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084336 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwanCry Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Your logo is too big. Resize it. And why you don't make the mission using DYOM v7.02 ? Is this MP were created before v7 release? Just asking. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084347 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 Your logo is too big. Resize it.And why you don't make the mission using DYOM v7.02 ? Is this MP were created before v7 release? Just asking. I started making it on Summer, that's why. Actually, I'll request another logo. I'll leave that one for now. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084348 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwanCry Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Your logo is too big. Resize it.And why you don't make the mission using DYOM v7.02 ? Is this MP were created before v7 release? Just asking. I started making it on Summer, that's why. Actually, I'll request another logo. I'll leave that one for now. So, this created before v7 release right? Anyway, good luck with this I'll play this later because right now I'm busy making mission for my MP. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084350 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dude1 Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Not bad Will play this fo' sure. (Я реально русский! ) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084353 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 Not bad Will play this fo' sure. (Я реально русский! ) Great that you're Russian too, but since this is an English board, English is the preferable language here. Thanks for your interest. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062084357 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KowalskiGuy Posted December 31, 2012 Share Posted December 31, 2012 Nice logo you got there. Gonna play it 4 sure, when I've time. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062087840 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted January 4, 2013 Share Posted January 4, 2013 Chapter 1: The missions were nice, the story is good. It sometimes feels repetetive. For example, go to Joe, do that, go back to Joe, Mission Passed. I think it would've been better if done with the storyline feature. Cutscenes are great and your grammar is good, few mistakes but nothing worth mentioning. The gameplay is different which is good too. Rating: 7.5/10 Feedback for next missions is coming soon. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062102195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDR Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 I played the first chapter. To be honest, I don't like the "gang war" theme that much, but these missions were enjoyable. Though the missions were all like "go to X, kill everybody, return" in summary, I believe it's like that because it's the first chapter. Like Zizo said above, it could be much nicer if this was done with storyline feature. But still missions are nice and keeps you going on. I'll give more feedback when I'm done with the other chapters. Nice work. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062104677 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 Thanks for your feedbacks, Zizo and BDR. About the storyline feature - I don't like it, to be honest. Plus it'd make a story less enjoyable in my opinion. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062106927 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 Played some missions from chapter one. I like gang theme missions but those were too repetitive. Like BDR and Zizo said. Grammar & cutcene were very good,but missions like those,i would perfer in storyline feature. But i can say: it was enjoyable! Goodluck! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062108640 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDR Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 I played rest of the mission pack. First of all, I got to say that you have nice designing skills. This mission pack was nice, but it could be much nicer. For example, all the missions are similiar to each other. You get a phone call, you go somewhere, you kill some people and return. After a point it gets very monotonus. There should be some missions that you do different things. A stealth based mission, for instance... Also, your missions weren't challenging. Even the boss fights could be beaten easily. That is a downside for the gameplay. And last, storytelling could be better. Except the missions which we did some stuff for the clan, whole chapters felt like a huge side quest to me. Ofcourse we did everything for the clan but other gangs' work was much more than clan's. All in all, like I said above, you have nice designing skills but you should improve your storytelling and mission variety. I'll give 7/10 for this mission pack. It could be better but, nice work. I was going to give 6/10 but since this is your first mission pack I didn't want your desire to be broken. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062112971 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 8, 2013 Author Share Posted January 8, 2013 Okay, I see. Thanks for your feedback, BDR. I'll try to improve and maybe make better missions. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062113742 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dude1 Posted January 8, 2013 Share Posted January 8, 2013 I played rest of the mission pack. First of all, I got to say that you have nice designing skills. This mission pack was nice, but it could be much nicer. For example, all the missions are similiar to each other. You get a phone call, you go somewhere, you kill some people and return. After a point it gets very monotonus. There should be some missions that you do different things. A stealth based mission, for instance... Also, your missions weren't challenging. Even the boss fights could be beaten easily. That is a downside for the gameplay. And last, storytelling could be better. Except the missions which we did some stuff for the clan, whole chapters felt like a huge side quest to me. Ofcourse we did everything for the clan but other gangs' work was much more than clan's. All in all, like I said above, you have nice designing skills but you should improve your storytelling and mission variety. I'll give 7/10 for this mission pack. It could be better but, nice work. I was going to give 6/10 but since this is your first mission pack I didn't want your desire to be broken. It's not his first mission pack Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062114306 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted January 8, 2013 Author Share Posted January 8, 2013 I played rest of the mission pack. First of all, I got to say that you have nice designing skills. This mission pack was nice, but it could be much nicer. For example, all the missions are similiar to each other. You get a phone call, you go somewhere, you kill some people and return. After a point it gets very monotonus. There should be some missions that you do different things. A stealth based mission, for instance... Also, your missions weren't challenging. Even the boss fights could be beaten easily. That is a downside for the gameplay. And last, storytelling could be better. Except the missions which we did some stuff for the clan, whole chapters felt like a huge side quest to me. Ofcourse we did everything for the clan but other gangs' work was much more than clan's. All in all, like I said above, you have nice designing skills but you should improve your storytelling and mission variety. I'll give 7/10 for this mission pack. It could be better but, nice work. I was going to give 6/10 but since this is your first mission pack I didn't want your desire to be broken. It's not his first mission pack It's my first finished mission pack, that's why. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062114355 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 A bump, but deserves to be. I finished playing. As a first sentence, I am going to say that this is absolutely one of the best mission packs I have ever played. I love the GTA style in this. I always try to make it simple GTA style myself and this has the very same magic which makes the real GTA's so good. You really perfected the GTA style, kept me excited all the missions. Also, the best way to make me interested in playing a mission pack, is to make it take place in the deserts of Las Venturas. So very good job. Some long drives were frustrating, but only if it happened many times in the row, like the two missions were you had to drive to Bayside, but it was okay. I'm not good at giving long feedbacks, but my rating for this mission pack is 9/10. Great job, SF, I just hope you get on to work on more mission packs Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062234284 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted February 17, 2013 Author Share Posted February 17, 2013 First of all, thank you Notna for your feedback. I didn't expect anyone else to play, comment and play. Great job, SF, I just hope you get on to work on more mission packs I have an idea in my mind, but it will take too long to make it (if I'll finish it, of course). Anyways, thanks for feedback once again Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062234336 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Living Tribunal Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Looks really Interesting.... I will try it for sure ! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062234547 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DyomKing Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 All missions are good Well done I got fun in every mission i give you 8/10 keep it up. Good luck Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062334328 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alibatman Posted April 5, 2013 Share Posted April 5, 2013 Its Amazing Mr SatournFan Nice Logo Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/539522-the-desert-tales/?do=findComment&comment=1062357055 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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