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Only One Leaf Left (Mission-Pack)


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Only One Leaf Left (OOLL) is a mission-pack made in DYOM V7.0.

Only One Leaf Left means that if a tree doesn't have any leaves on it, it means it's dead. So only one leaf left is only one last chance left to succeed in life and do something right and defeat the baddies.

 

 

STORY

 

"My name is Carlo McVann and I did something wrong in life, one simple mistake and you already have one last chance to live, otherwise you're dead. I've been running for four months now since that mistake I did. My wife and my 19 years old son are dead, because of this stupid mistake I did. I still have only one leaf left, one last chance to get everything right. I never expected my life to be this sh*tty, I never expected I will have to learn how to shoot. For four months I'm being chased by the devil... I need to live, I need to survive... I must, I have to!"

 

 

 

CHARACTERS

 

CARLO MCVANN

"Introduced since: Introduction"

Carlo is the main protagonist of the story. He's 38 years old and he was a business man in Los Santos. He had a wife and a son before all this. He made a mistake by doing something that the mafia of Las Venturas didn't like. Now, for four months, he's being chased by the mafia. His wife and son got killed, he cannot ask help in the police as the mafia has an informer in every police station of San Andreas. His only last hope is to stop the mafia himself.

 

OLIVIA

"Introduced since: Raid"

Olivia is a secret FBI agent, working on Carlo's case. She's 30 years old and she lives in Los Santos. Instead of taking Carlo to protect him, she wants to help him stop the very same mad man in Las Venturas, the leader of the mafia. She believes if they work together as a team, they might defeat him and his filthy goons.

 

MARK

"Introduced since: Raid"

Mark is the "capo" of the Mafia in Las Venturas. His job is to take care of Carlo in Los Santos, sending goons after him and also do some quick business in his one warehouse.

 

KALVIN

"Introduced since: Guardian Angel"

Kalvin is a secret FBI agent, he's a friend Olivia in work. They did some cases together, fought crime together. But the agency got tricked and his current job/case is to put both Olivia and Carlo either to custody or death.

 

FREDIV

"Introduced since: One Leaf For You"

Frediv is the one that sent the hunt on Carlo. It's seems that Carlo did something really bad that really pissed him off. Frediv is to blame for Carlo's wife's and son's death, as he is in control of the biggest mafia in San Andreas.

 

 

MISSIONS

 

Episode 1: The Chase

IntroductionBeing ChasedSet SailFinal Stand?

Episode 2: A Helping Hand

RaidHow do you like to be chased?Mansion StruggleA Lovely TripEpisode 3: The Fate of the LeafGuardian AngelA Pain in the AssOne Leaf For YouOutro

 

 

LET'S PLAYS

 

You may do let's plays on the missions and post the links to your videos in this topic, I'll highlight them here! smile.gif

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It's finally here! I've been waiting for this for a long time. Will give feedback once the 1st mission is released. It sure would make the topic look better with some headers.

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Thanks for the support, guys! c:

 

Mission 1: Introduction is released.

(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )

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Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.

 

I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

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Thanks for the support, guys! c:

 

Mission 1: Introduction is released.

(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )

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Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.

 

I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

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I'll play the introduction later. It's great to see the old designers back smile.gif

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Thanks for the support, guys! c:

 

Mission 1: Introduction is released.

(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )

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Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.

 

I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

I got it from googling "free non-copyrighted music".

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Thanks for the support, guys! c:

 

Mission 1: Introduction is released.

(Special thanks to Arejai for his tutorial of adding sounds. (: )

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Did you continue long road and MHP or you handover it to some body.

 

I'm still thinking of what to do with those...

LCJ, where did you get the music?

I got it from googling "free non-copyrighted music".

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You wont get sued for using music from video games or other stuff, as long as you dont claim yourself as the author tounge.gif

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Which mafia is following Carlo? the leonies, the sindacco's or the forelli's, or your own mafia?

 

Anyway, good luck with this. icon14.gif

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Aww look who is back. I played the intro mission and it was TRASH GARBAGE AND sh*tTY MAN!! Kidding tounge.gif

 

I loved it biggrin.gif! It is pretty short but the music is awesome in the intro. The moving cutscenes are better than what I know right now biggrin.gif.

 

Good luck on this MP icon14.gif

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Platinum Card

After playing this mission, I think you will have one of the most downloaded mission packs come January. icon14.gif

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Played the introduction. It has been short, but nice!

 

Nicely done with the moving cutscenes tounge.gif

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Awww, thanks guys! ((:

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You wont get sued for using music from video games or other stuff, as long as you dont claim yourself as the author tounge.gif

 

I know, but I'm using the non-copyrighted music not for me, but for those who, if will, do let's plays on the missions. I don't want them to get copyrights warnings. (:

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Which mafia is following Carlo? the leonies, the sindacco's or the forelli's, or your own mafia?

My own mafia.

I think, I don't wanna lie, but I think I never used any content from the original San Andreas game, I don't know, but I think that way.

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Mission 2 Released, by the way! (:

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I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations whatsthat.gif

They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.

If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

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I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations whatsthat.gif

They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.

If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

Dont judge him, he's been from a retirement that lasted like 2 months. Im happy that he even got around on making a new MP. He's gonna' return to his normal style of desinging soon. I hope bored.gif .

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I played the 2 missions. But sadly, it didn't come to my expectations  whatsthat.gif

They were too short in my opinion. The music in the first mission felt too "happy", it's better in the 2nd mission though. I really think you should have combined them, perhaps even the 3rd mission, because the "chased" part didn't seem to end. But the rest is positive, you made good use of the new features, especially the moving cutscenes and the new objects.

If only they were longer, i'd give it 7/10 but for now, it's 6/10. Sorry  confused.gif It's just that i expected something way better than this. I hope the next ones are improved.

Dont judge him, he's been from a retirement that lasted like 2 months. Im happy that he even got around on making a new MP. He's gonna' return to his normal style of desinging soon. I hope bored.gif .

If everybody gave him positive reviews, he would not become better, so you are wrong, people should always give advice to the maker about how to improve their mission.

 

Anyway, the second mission was good, only it was a little short.

I was gonna say something about how you were lazy about using the same cars, but then those guys said that you stole one of the cars, and then I realized that it was their gang car.

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it's 6/10. Sorry

 

That's pretty much what I expected, actually.

I'm the one who needs to say sorry.

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Anyway, the second mission was good, only it was a little short.

Every mission will be short, I think, I don't know yet.

Because that is why I can't finish Matthew Hegan's Path, that's the biggest mistake I made... 200 missions, jeeeez what was I thinking. biggrin.gif

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Plus, this mission-pack is more like a testing test, get everything figured out with V7 and then do the two biggest projects and those are the Ghost Ship: Remake and my part in Cold Year 2.

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P.S. Mission 3 is released..

 

Each Episode will have for four missions only, so yeah. confused.gif

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Played 1st - 3rd mission and they're pretty amazing. I loved the first action, when we need to kill two of those guys; I'm almost die there. The 'parkour' part was very nice, though. It's a very cool way to escape.

 

Well, this is my positive feedback. I don't have any more constructive comment, since the others have said it.

Anyway, these missions were pretty good, even though they're short. Tired of the .noa files, uh? lol.gif

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That's the worst mission I have ever played in my whole life!!..ha ha ha
How's that for a joke?? I think it is one of the most thrilling and interesting mission packs I have ever played..

 

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Now that New Year vacation ended...

 

Mission 4 released. Episode 1 Completed.

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Tired of the .noa files, uh?

 

Yes. I am. biggrin.gif

 

 

 

 

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Mission 4 released. Episode 1 Completed.

Played the mission, music choice was good, but the mission was short and had a lack of intro cutscenes...

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