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XxIrishBlizzardxX

Could someone create a story for me?

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XxIrishBlizzardxX

I was wondering, Can someone create me a good story if I give them details?

 

Details:

 

It must be about a Mafia Family.

Make sure to include a guy called Silvio Bertossi

Have a interesting storyline.

Base it around Los Santos and Italy.

 

Thanks! smile.gif

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Dr-Mayhem111

I'll give it try.

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XxIrishBlizzardxX

Thank You!

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Dr-Mayhem111

The setting for the story, do you want it back in 1930's or 40's or maybe present day?

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XxIrishBlizzardxX

Make it start off in the 40's then have it finish in the modern days.

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Dr-Mayhem111

Benito Mussolini ordered a massacre in Trapani killing the innocent because he believed they weren't behaving under his rule. Families murdered, kids captured, houses burning, it was a nightmare. Only one family managed to escape and they soon left Trapani and went to Liberty City where they believed their lives would be so much better. They finally docked in East Hook and they step foot on American ground feeling free, until they were taken to their home which was infested with filth and rats. They managed to keep a positive attitude and decided to make it a good living place. A family of five, the father Alfonso Bertossi, the mother Maria Bertossi, and the three kids, Vittore, Josephina, and Silvio Bertossi.

 

The two oldest kids were great in school bringing home joy to their parents, but the same could not be said about Silvio who rarely attended his school and was affiliating with a bad group of people. He became violent and started stealing from jewelry stores, all at the age of 13. After getting arrested at age 16 for possession of a firearm in 1944 he was sent to Italy instead of going to jail where there he continued his ways. After learning how to survive in post-war Italy he soon became comfortable in the environment and began his new life.

 

Many years have passed by and Silvio is now 20 years old and can finally return to Liberty City. The year is 1948 and Liberty City was a wreck, people couldn't find jobs, many were homeless, businesses were closing. Everybody was going through a rough, everyone apart from the big shot, high rolling men who wore fancy suits, drove fancy cars, and loads of money, they had everything. Silvio soon wanted to be with them and tried his best. After meeting Paul Sallio, a well known and untouched man from Alderny, a relationship soon started. Paul saw himself in Silvio, he also came from from Italy because of Mussolini and came to Liberty City but it did not go like the way he expected, but he got over it. Paul Sallio was in the Union and was a captain in the Amargiano Family.

 

Silvio saw Paul's lifestyle and wanted to become part of the life. Paul got Silvio a few jobs as a driver and number courier from time to time but eventually Silvio was offered to be an actual associate of the family but he had to do one job. The job was briefly explained to Silvio and he couldn't believe he could do it but he went on and did it anyway. The job was to kill Sammy Rederro also known as Sammy Red from the Giordano Family across the river. Silvio was ordered to wait for Sammy in front of the Italian bar in Purgatory, he was equipped with a .38 fully loaded. After waiting an hour Sammy Red finally came out and started walking towards an alleyway where his car was stationed. Silvio followed him and emptied the gun on Sammy Red and soon got out of there, and he was a rewarded by being welcomed to the family. Silvio was soon living the life.

 

He was trusted by everyone and all the families knew who he was and what he was capable of. After a while he became a full member, a made man and things were getting better and better. As a soldier he was living the best life but when he got promoted to Capo at the age of 27 in 1955 he lived the perfect life. The family was still at war with the Giordano's and they set up a meeting with the Amargiano's and the Don wanted Silvio to accompany him. The meeting was an ambush and the Don was killed and in his dying words he told Silvio to run the family instead of the underboss and he did just that.

 

Liberty City wasn't safe anymore and Silvio found an opportunity at the west. San Andreas didn't have much of a Mafia influence but he wanted to change that and he moved half of the family to San Andreas, he did struggle to create an empire there but after a few bribing's, black mailing, and murders, it was all easy. San Andreas was becoming more and more beneficial for Silvio as he expanded further into Las Venturas. Silvio ran the family for many years up until he gave his son, Angelo Bertossi who was 31 years old at the time, the power in 1987. In 2008 Angelo was killed in a car bombing regards from the Lupisella Family leaving his only son, Samuel Bertossi the power who runs the family to this day in Liberty City and San Andreas.

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XxIrishBlizzardxX

Thanks a lot Mayhem! smile.gif

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Mokrie Dela

forgive me for being weird, but why not write it yourself?

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GTAb0yWonder
forgive me for being weird, but why not write it yourself?

Laziness....

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Mokrie Dela
forgive me for being weird, but why not write it yourself?

Laziness....

Jesus Christ are you kidding me?

If you cant be arsed to do the work yourself, gtfo

 

If you want to write, to learn and to improve, then we'll welcome you, but you want someone else to write and you'll take the credit?

you're trolling right?

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GentlemanSquid
forgive me for being weird, but why not write it yourself?

Laziness....

Jesus Christ are you kidding me?

If you cant be arsed to do the work yourself, gtfo

 

If you want to write, to learn and to improve, then we'll welcome you, but you want someone else to write and you'll take the credit?

you're trolling right?

He/she isn't OP. I think they were guessing why.

 

Some people aren't good at writing, am I guess that's it.

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Celestail

 

forgive me for being weird, but why not write it yourself?

Laziness....

Jesus Christ are you kidding me?

If you cant be arsed to do the work yourself, gtfo

 

If you want to write, to learn and to improve, then we'll welcome you, but you want someone else to write and you'll take the credit?

you're trolling right?

Regardless you should always respect someones request smile.gif

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XxIrishBlizzardxX

Simple reason. I ain't a great Writer. I believe someone like Mayhem is better and have better ideas. Now why don't you GTFO my topic, Please Lock.

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Celestail

 

Simple reason. I ain't a great Writer. I believe someone like Mayhem is better and have better ideas. Now why don't you GTFO my topic, Please Lock.

I was supporting you and you say that to me confused.gif

 

Anyway case closed icon14.gif

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Mokrie Dela
Simple reason. I ain't a great Writer. I believe someone like Mayhem is better and have better ideas. Now why don't you GTFO my topic, Please Lock.

I was supporting you and you say that to me confused.gif

 

Anyway case closed icon14.gif

I'm pretty sure he was responding to me.

 

@ OT Ok perhaps i was a bit harsh, but why don't you try writing it yourself - none of us are great writers and you might surprise yourself, and may even enjoy it. Don't be shy or afraid of ridicule, despite how i might appear, this forum is full of people who will help your craft and then you can get exactly what you want.

 

I'm sorry though. but i don't have time for people who are too lazy to do things like this themselves. It's really not hard, if you can read, if you can use a pen/keyboard, you can write. Try it.

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GTAb0yWonder
Simple reason. I ain't a great Writer. I believe someone like Mayhem is better and have better ideas. Now why don't you GTFO my topic, Please Lock.

I was supporting you and you say that to me confused.gif

 

Anyway case closed icon14.gif

I'm pretty sure he was responding to me.

 

@ OT Ok perhaps i was a bit harsh, but why don't you try writing it yourself - none of us are great writers and you might surprise yourself, and may even enjoy it. Don't be shy or afraid of ridicule, despite how i might appear, this forum is full of people who will help your craft and then you can get exactly what you want.

 

I'm sorry though. but i don't have time for people who are too lazy to do things like this themselves. It's really not hard, if you can read, if you can use a pen/keyboard, you can write. Try it.

I think you should also apologize to me, you yelled at me.... It hurt me.... Apology, now.....

 

Nah just kidding. Seriously though, try reading usernames next time. Just kidding.... again.

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Ziggy455

Being the Sheriff around here -I believe somebody called me that once, I forget and digress- I feel obligated to give a few points to the best of your understanding. One:

 

Why do you want somebody to write you a story? Because you feel you aren't good enough? That's what we're here for. Write something, PM me, or wait for others to break it apart and feel around for the good bits. Don't come here asking for a story and then show such disrespect to members with stupid idioms like GTFO. If you can't even take criticism or curiosity then it is you, sir, who should 'GTFO'.

 

Next, what's the point of getting somebody to write this? So you can sit on your ass and go 'See that completely generic GTA-inspired fanfiction? Not only could I not even must the energy to write it, but I also felt the need to bite the hand that fed me!'

 

Write something yourself next time.

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Eminence

Somebody mention a sheriff?

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