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Master of San Andreas

SSOTW #1

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Master of San Andreas

 

Short Story of the Week

 

Welcome to this new competition! Here are the rules:

  • The Short Story should have atleast 40 lines,You can exceed this limit
  • After that there will be a voting thread with your name linking to the short story post.
  • If someone votes for someone in 1st place,the person get's 5 points,2nd 3 points and 3rd 2 points.
  • You cannot vote for yourself

The Deadline is 16/11/12

 

The Theme is A GTA Short Story

 

Write a short story with GTA Characters!

 

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Fisciletti

I never made a story for a competition, but I was browsing the forums and this came up, so I simply started writing for fun.

 

Los Santos, 2013.

 

Michael: I didn't want to do that. But I had to do it.

Police officer: Alright, can you tell me your story?

Michael: I was born in Liberty City. When I turned 20, I started doing some jobs with my friend, Carl Johnson.

Police officer: Carl is dead.

Michael: I know.

Police officer: Please, go on.

Michael: After doing some bank robbers with him in Liberty City, I decided to leave the game. I moved here.

Police officer: Why did you move here?

Michael: Why did I move here? I guess it was the weather. Or the, I don't know that thing, that magic. You see it in the movies, I wanted to retire from what I was doing, you know, from that, that line of work. Be a good guy for once, a family man. So, I bought a big house, came here, put my feet up, thought I'd be a dad like all the other dad's. My kids, will be like the kids on TV, we play ball and sit in the sun, But, well, you know how it is. After losing some money, I had to go back to the game. I didn't want to do it, but I knew I had to do it. Then, I called Trevor.

Police officer: Who is Trevor?

Michael: He's a former military pilot. He lived in the desert, in a trailer. I called him and I discovered that he also had to do something to get money.

Police officer: Alright.

Michael: Then there's this guy, Franklin. I saw him on a street corner. I asked him if he needed money. He said yes. So, me, Franklin and Trevor decided to do a big bank heist.

Police officer: And we arrested you.

Michael: Yes.

Police officer: Thanks for telling me that.

Michael: Good bye.

Police officer: Where are you going?

Michael: I'm not going to stay in jail.

Police officer: Yes you are.

Michael: No, I'm not. Hello Packie. Have you killed everyone in your way?

Packie: Hello, yes I did, don't worry. Do you want me to kill this guy?

Michael: Yes, he's pretty annoying.

Packie: Alright.

 

Packie kills the officer.

 

Packie: Come on, Niko is waiting outside.

 

They go outside and meet Niko.

 

Niko: Hello, are you Michael?

Michael: Yes, nice to meet you.

Packie: Michael, we are going to take revenge on them.

Niko: Take revenge on what?

Packie: On the guys who killed Michael's children and his wife.

Niko: What are their names?

Packie: I don't know, but we know the name of the leader of the group.

Niko: What's his name?

Michael: Dimitri Rascalov.

Edited by Fisciletti

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Greenline

Erm... There's a reason SSoTM was stopped.

 

Welcome to WD.

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TenEightyOne

Union Station

 

They mean to kill him - he is sure of that.

 

They move slowly, their shadows melting into ebbing pools on the blood red floor. Closer now, he hears murmurs, the muted knock of steel, for a moment he fancies he feels them exhale across his face, sharing his air, circling in towards him, seeking, knowing.

 

So close, how can they not see him? So close - so close - and now the only sound is his own heart thumping in his ears, the electricity of adrenaline coursing through him as if sparked by the final searing flash of the dying sun as it sank below the sills of the tall, silent windows, spearing into his wide eyes in one last vain grab at life.

 

Closer, even closer, they could touch the hair on his head, part it with a single blow and smash him into oblivion right here on the patterned tiles where the dying day's umber gasps were slowly succumbing to the cold evening's blue fingers. Voices, mutters, saying his name? Looking for his trail, that's what they must be doing. They've followed him this far - they know his habits, where he eats, where he sleeps, where he loves.

 

Now they're beside him but they can't hear the thudding of the war drums in his head, the shriek of the power overtaking his body. Quickly - quickly - it must be now!

 

With all four paws scrabbling crazily over the polished tiles as they give up the last of their warmth he scoots sideways along the floor - a shout! The boots' gentle cadence is a roar now, the steel smashes into the floor beside him. The reverberations echo painfully in his madly scrambling feet as he makes one final desperate change of direction... and he's safe, still running, but deep in the dry drains that lead to the basement levels far below the shouting rat-catchers.

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TenEightyOne

Oh, sad SSOTW #1 fail.

 

I know my entry didn't quite match the rules... but oh well. It was entirely original and I tried.

 

I'm going to draw my own trophy in MS Paint. nervous.gif

 

EDIT: Kudos too to Fisciletti who also joined in with an admirable effort - nice work, chap! icon14.gif

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