KaRzY6 Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 (edited) CONTENTS• Story •• Characters • • Missions • • Map • • Reviews • • Videos • • Screenshots • • Credits • Tom Price is an employee at The Well Stacked Pizza in Idlewood. His day is the same everyday, working and sitting at home. But one day at work, something will change that. A Balla member, named Freddy, attempts to rob the store. Tom grabs the store's shotgun and kills him. Freddy's fellow gangsters change the crime scene around and Tom is convicted of murder. Tom is sent to prison... Name Description Tom Price Tom is the protagonist of the mission-pack. He is 25 years old, and doesn't have a lot of money. He lives in a unit in Willowfield and is an employee of The Well Stacked Pizza in Idlewood. Living in the scum most of his life, Tom has become self dependent and doesn't take sh*t from anyone. Andy Richmond Andy is the manager of the Idlewood Well Stacked Pizza. He can survive but struggles with money. The Idlewood store is losing business and Andy struggles to keep the store running, pay his employees and have a bit of money left for himself. Andy cut most of his stuff and does most of the shifts himself. Freddy Freddy is a gangster in the "Ballas", a Los Santos street gang. Not much is known about Freddy, but he has several criminal offences for robbery in the Idlewood area. Officer Tenpenny Tenpenny works in a police squad called "C.R.A.S.H", who specialise in gang crime. Tenpenny is called to the Well Stacked Pizza because Freddy was involved in the street gang called the "Ballas". Officer Jacobs Jacobs is a rookie in the "C.R.A.S.H" squad and is partnered up with Tenpenny. Detective Leppard Leppard has been a detective for 25 years and is very well respected throughout the state of San Andreas. Leppard had a little bit of time to take the case of Freddy, but most of the time he does more important cases. Mr Waters Waters is a lawyer, specialising in murder cases. Waters has been a lawyer for 12 years, but rarely wins the cases of his clients (because most of the time they did do it). 1. Sudden Change - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21544 2. Sneaking Ballas - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23329 3. Behind Bars - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23406 KaRzY6 - Mission designer UNRATED69 - GFX designer Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - DYOM creators NOTE: First mission is made with v6.1. Second mission and onwards is v7. This thread is still under construction. Edited January 22, 2013 by KaRzY6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LFarmer Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 (edited) Just played the mission. Not much to say. Well, here's my rating. 3.5/5 I'm looking forward to this MP. Keep up the good work and good luck! Edited October 4, 2012 by LFarmer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 Finally you made another mission-pack I already play the intro, i liked it. Here's my rating: I give you /5 hope you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 Thanks LFarmer and XProyect for playing the mission and giving some good ratings and feedback. I seriously thought there'd be more posts, but doesn't matter. Might start to make the 2nd mission today. (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 Yeahhh, I think I'm gonna get back to playing dyom mission and give feedback. So yeah good luck, man. I'll give this a try soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DroidX Posted October 5, 2012 Share Posted October 5, 2012 For a moment there I thought the robber freddy was going to be ryder seeing how everything played the same! And since when does a gangster pack up a body Armor. My rating 4/5. Will play the next One so keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted January 18, 2013 Author Share Posted January 18, 2013 New mission, about time I started designing. This is the first time I have tried designing with v7, I mainly just learnt the cutscenes in this mission. Expect some more action in the upcoming missions, as well as some of the new v7 features. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 Too bad people do not appreciate the work of others. I hope you don't cancel this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 I hope you don't cancel this I'm not dude. Too bad people do not appreciate the work of others. What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Oh. I meant that people just look at your topic and they just walk by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 Oh. I meant that people just look at your topic and they just walk by. Yeah, I hope some more people start to play this and comment. Also, I'm working on the next mission now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 Like for example me. Feedback is coming soon and if you need GFX,here i'am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted January 22, 2013 Author Share Posted January 22, 2013 New mission released! Check it out! Like for example me. Feedback is coming soon and if you need GFX,here i'am. Thanks Andrej, I would really appreciate some feedback. I like the logo, but if you wanted to make some headers, that would be great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted January 22, 2013 Share Posted January 22, 2013 I saw there is written map in the main post,but you haven't got the map. So i thought if you need map (teritories,icons radar,etc..) i could make you. But if you need new logo and headers,i'm here to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted January 23, 2013 Author Share Posted January 23, 2013 I saw there is written map in the main post,but you haven't got the map. So i thought if you need map (teritories,icons radar,etc..) i could make you. But if you need new logo and headers,i'm here to help. I would like a map, but not till the mission-pack is finished, so I know all the locations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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