Alan Eastwood Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 (edited) See the Part 1 of this mission pack series to understand the history : Click Here Status: Canceled Logo2 "Power had never been so sweet" Main Theme: Trailer Not yet Story: In 1996, after that Ryo committed suicide everything went back to normal, Shane left Los Santos to leave everything behind and start a new life, now living in San Fierro and lives next to his cousin Carl Jackson, will meet with old friends and enemies, and Shane had never felt before the "Taste of Power" CharactersWarning! Spoilers ahead. Spoiler Shane Wright The main protagonist of the story, he's 47 years old, he left Los Santos to live a good life in San Fierro after the death of Ryo Korahto, his archenemy. Status: Alive/Protagonist Carl "CJ" Jackson He's Shane's cousin. Has a home in San Fierro, typically half-witted but when it gets bad it gets serious. Status: Alive First Met: Just like old times Lee Korahto The main antagonist, he's Ryo's father, and is the Korahto mob boss, he will do whatever possible to avenge the death of his son. Status: Alive First Met: No Big Deal G Possibly, director of the FBI, a man with elegant dress, and about 40 years old.He is the real father of Pablo Jackson and seeks revenge for the dead of his son that was killed by Shane. Status: Dead First Met: Just like old times Dies: Falling Angels Antonio Corleone He is the leader of the Corleone Mafia, supposedly died in prison along with Dexter and Christian, but for some reason he is still alive. Status: Likely dead First Met: No Big Deal John Cross He's a mechanic from San Fierro, a pretty vengeful, Shane helps to discover who want murder, Shane knows enough and is almost impossible to trick him. Status: Alive First Met: Check yo self Jose del Paso He is a Latino who is from Mexico, trafficked drugs and is a great friend of CJ. Status: Alive First Met: Check yo self Ricardo Caracas He is a Latino, comes from Mexico, is a friend of Jose and CJ, he doesn't speak English but he understand a little. Status: Dead First Met: Check yo self Dies: Calavera Negra John Secronom He's an FBI Agent. Shane was saved two times by him and seems to bee a good guy. Status: Alive First Met: Calavera Negra Fernando Calavera He is the leader of the gang of San Fierro called "Los Calavera Negra". Status: Alive First Met: Calavera Negra Aaron Maylay He is a old friend of Shane and he stays in Los Santos with Johnny and Sarah. Status: Alive First Met: F*ck the police (Gangster 4 Life) Johnny Rodriguez He is a old friend of Shane and he is an FBI Agent but he retired because he want to spend more time with his Sister. Status: Alive First Met: Kill Wayne (Gangster 4 Life) Sarah Rodriguez She is a old friend of Shane and she was the girfriend of Erich Wright. He lives with his brother Johnny. Status: Alive First Met: Guns, Ballas and Dealers (Gangster 4 Life) Mission List: Chapter 1 : Start all over again 1) Intro: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21293 2) Sh*t happens: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21318 3) Just like old times: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21377 4) No Big Deal: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21458 5) No Big Deal Pt2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21501 6) Check yo self: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21540 7) Calavera Negra: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21616 Falling Angels: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23182 Chapter 2 : Reuniting the Families 1) Together Again: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/23291 Credits PatrickW and Dutchy3010 for creating DYOM. Michael-Knight1 and nic_23 for the logo. And You for playing the missions. Secronom President for letting me use his character. Edited September 17, 2018 by Alan Eastwood Giorgia Vinegar 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 Good luck with this, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted September 22, 2012 Author Share Posted September 22, 2012 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called Sh*t happens enjoy it! Don't forget to feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted September 26, 2012 Author Share Posted September 26, 2012 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called Just like old times enjoy it! I kinda miss the feedback, 100+ views and only 1 feedback... well... thanks Ghost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 Yeah I'm gonna give this a try soon. c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called No Big Deal enjoy it! Don't forget to feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zizo008 Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Played the missions, i didn't play part 1 so i didn't understand the story very well. Intro: I really liked the intro, very well made but the only issue is that it's short. I thought Shane lives in San Fierro, why do we start in grove street? sh*t happens: The cops where a real pain, but it's not very hard once you find a good covered spot. I didn't get the ending though, did Shane go to Jail or something? Just like old times: It was easy at the begining but the chase was very cool! And i really liked the cutscenes, makes you feel like your watching an action movie, but i think it was a little too fast for Shane to trust G. No big deal: I didn't like it when they dressed up like swat (How could Shane fit in it? LOL)Sniping took some skill and time. Nice gunfights, but the owner shouldn't just hand over the boat, you could've added a small fist fight but it's nothing big, i supposed there's part 2 of this missions right? Awesome missions man! keep up! Please give me feedback on RE4 man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 @Zizo008 Thanks for the feedback Zizo I said at the beginning of the post, you would have to play the first part to understand the story (its better for you). Sorry for not giving you feedback to your RE4, now im gonna play all the missions and giving you the feedback that you deserver, thank man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted October 1, 2012 Author Share Posted October 1, 2012 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called No Big Deal Pt2 enjoy it! Don't forget to feedback. (Haha Feedback, funny ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkthetimelord Posted October 2, 2012 Share Posted October 2, 2012 Looks good, I'll play it soon, once I am organised. Nice descriptive topic too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted October 4, 2012 Author Share Posted October 4, 2012 Update: New mission has been uploaded check it! Its called Check yo self enjoy it! New Characters added. Don't forget to feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menlow32 Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 See the Part 1 of this mission pack series to understand the history : Click Here Status: Work in progress Logo2 "Power had never been so sweet" Main Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7EcEcXPQZM4 Trailer Not yet Story: In 1995, after that Ryo committed suicide everything went back to normal, Shane left Los Santos to leave everything behind and start a new life, now living in San Fierro and lives next to his cousin Carl Jackson, will meet with old friends and enemies, and Shane had never felt before the "Taste of Power" Characters Shane Wright The main protagonist of the story, he's 47 years old, he left Los Santos to live a good life in San Fierro after the death of Ryo Korahto, his archenemy. Status: Alive/Protagonist Carl "CJ" Jackson He's Shane's cousin. Has a home in San Fierro, typically half-witted but when it gets bad it gets serious. Status: Alive/Friend First Met: Just like old times Lee Korahto Ryo's father, and is the Korahto mob boss, he will do whatever possible to avenge the death of his son. Status: Alive/Enemy First Met: No Big Deal G Possibly, director of the FBI, a man with elegant dress, and about 40 years old. Status: Alive/Friend First Met: Just like old times Antonio Corleone He is the leader of the Corleone Mafia, supposedly died in prison along with Dexter and Christian, but for some reason he is still alive. Status: Captured/Enemy First Met: No Big Deal John Cross He's a mechanic from San Fierro, a pretty vengeful, Shane helps to discover who want murder, Shane knows enough and is almost impossible to trick him. Status: Alive/Friend First Met: Check yo self Jose del Paso He is a Latino who is from Mexico, trafficked drugs and is a great friend of CJ. Status: Alive/Friend First Met: Check yo self Ricardo Caracas He is a Latino, comes from Mexico, is a friend of Jose and CJ, he doesn't speak English but he understand a little. Status: Alive/Friend First Met: Check yo self Mission List: Chapter 1 : Start all over again 1) Intro: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21293 2) Sh*t happens: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21318 3) Just like old times: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21377 4) No Big Deal: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21458 5) No Big Deal Pt2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21501 6) Check yo self: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21540 Credits PatrickW and Dutchy3010 for creating DYOM. Michael-Knight1 and nic_23 for the logo. And You for playing the missions. hey soy de argentina y queria que fueras mi amigo,todo bien? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menlow32 Posted October 8, 2012 Share Posted October 8, 2012 SOY DE ARGENTINA,y pensaba si querias ser mi amigo,tambien queria si podrias enseñarme a hacer esas misiones DYOM como vos? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 @Secreps Porfin! No soy el unico argentino aca, te recomiendo usar el idioma ingles en este foro y en cualquiera, ya que el idioma oficial de aqui es ingles, talves haga un tutorial o vos podes ver uno en youtube. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted October 8, 2012 Author Share Posted October 8, 2012 Update: New mission has been uploaded check it! Its called Calavera Negra enjoy it! New Characters added. Don't forget to feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DroidX Posted October 9, 2012 Share Posted October 9, 2012 Just played all the Story Nice Missions, Will check back for the Next Mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menlow32 Posted October 10, 2012 Share Posted October 10, 2012 hey man,you are the best in the missions,good luck and continue, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 11, 2013 Author Share Posted January 11, 2013 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called Falling Angels enjoy it! PD: This, and future missions will require dyom 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 15, 2013 Author Share Posted January 15, 2013 Update: New missions has been uploaded check it! Its called Together Again enjoy it! And its the first mission of chapter 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted January 15, 2013 Share Posted January 15, 2013 (edited) Hey, man. You asked me to play this and give you feedback, so.. Here's my thoughts. I saw you gave us the link to the previous story so we can understand this one, I didn't play it since you asked me to play this one and since I barely had time to play the first chapter of this MP. Um, I can't talk about the story much cause honestly, I didn't realise what the hell was going on. But, I didn't play the previous MP that is connected to this one, so.. But, as for the missions concepts - There is a lot of things you could improve. However, the good stuff first. - I really liked your usage of objects. Great, great work. Especially in the last mission of the chapter. - I also liked what you did in the apartment. (Killing those assassins, I loved it). - The second mission was damn hard, but it was challenging, so a for you. - I liked the boat and the car chase. Now, to the parts you could improve. - I don't know if it does or doesn't matter to the rest of the people playing the missions, but the storytelling is more than 50% of the MP for me and in this case, the storytelling is really, really hard to follow. Partially that's because I didn't play the previous MP, so I don't have the background check on every character. However, I still think that the missions are flowing way too fast even for someone who played the previous MP. - Teleport feature and spawning/hiding actors - You gotta use the teleport feature a little more. If you don't, then your mission's cutscenes get all patched up together and there is no that ''fade black rest'' in between, so it gets kinda strange after a while. Also, I've seen your cutscene angles are not set properly in some occasions. What I mean is that your cutscenes managed to catch the actors spawning and hiding on many occasions. I know cutscenes can't be perfect, nobody can make them perfect, but in some of the cases I've seen throughout the first chapter, you really could've watched a little more and try to reduce the sightings of actor spawnings/hidings to a minimum. Again, I don't know about the other players, but for me there were a little too much of that. - And the intro. The intro was a little too short and it didn't actually say anything very important. But, that's not something that bothered me, but I think it could bother other players, so I'm just pointing out that to you for the future. Overall, I'd give it a 6/10. If you work a little more on the red parts of my comment, I strongly believe your missions are gonna get on a much higher level Good luck in the future Edited January 15, 2013 by Jimmy_Leppard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 15, 2013 Author Share Posted January 15, 2013 (edited) @Jimmy Wow I guess i have to REALLY practice my skill... Yeah i think making the sequel it was a bad idea i guess. Well Thanks Jimmy i'm going to practice some more Edited January 15, 2013 by TheXProyect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted January 17, 2013 Author Share Posted January 17, 2013 I cancel this mission-pack. I think it was a mistake that I will never commit. Forgive me Secronom for using your character in vain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted January 17, 2013 Share Posted January 17, 2013 I'm sad to see you cancel this, I saw a lot of potential in this mission pack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted September 9, 2018 Share Posted September 9, 2018 I have decided to play this to check out your characters for the DYOMHL Project I mentioned in the Designers Lounge and on Discord. -The missions were quick and easy -The only exception to that was the Calavera Negra mission - my partners kept dying on me -It did show some promise to improve on the story that begun in Gangster 4 Life -The cast did present us with some old and new characters -It is a shame it was cancelled -Not that it is important but I had forgotten that I gave you authorisation to use John Secronom (I think you are one of two people whom I gave permission to) Alan Eastwood 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted September 9, 2018 Author Share Posted September 9, 2018 Thanks for taking your time to play this, Secro Most of my missions back then were planned on the spot so I didn't have much to work on. I remember that I tried to remade the intro mission and explain the history of Gangster 4 Life for those who didn't played it, and after taking a long ass time to explain EVERYTHING, it crashed. In the Calavera Negra, Carl Jackson was supposed to follow you and help but for some reason I didn't change the actor's behaviour and give him a lame ass explanation later in the mission of why he didn't move at all. I didn't want to use the old characters from the previous mission pack, with the exception of Shane Wright. Instead, I wanted to make new characters with a better developed story. I believe that is important because your character had a nice story behind it and I asked you permission because I thought that it would make the mp more interesting by making a crossover. General Scrotum 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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