Notna Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 (edited) Mission pack status: IN PROGRESS This is my 4th mission pack. It's in progress and currently contains of 5 missions. Play and enjoy! And don't forget to give me feedback! Summary Year 1999. The beautiful city of Las Venturas is full of hunters for the American Dream. Criminals, businessmen, normal people. The newest hunter is Jacob Riley, 34 years old man, who belongs to the first said class. Criminals. Jacob has arrived to the city to get what he thinks belongs to him; Ladies, money and to be the king of the criminal underworld. The mission isn't easy; other criminals in the city are on the same hunt and ready to do everything to get to their targets. But so is Jacob. Characters Jacob Riley Nationality: American Age: 34 First met: The American Dream Jacob is a small time criminal, who himself wants to be more than a low class car thief. He arrives to Las Venturas, the city of thousand casinos and mafias. His target is to climb to the top of the criminal underworld. He is though and cold blood killer, who also has a soft side. Soft side shows to his friends, and the cold blood killer side, to his enemies. Richard "Ricky" Stone Nationality: American Age: 40 First met: First Contact Ricky is the owner of a Ammunation shop in Las Venturas. He has sold guns for 15 years and is a good gun handler. He also is a criminal, he sells guns to some criminal organisations and also has connections to some organisations. Tyson Michaels Nationality: American Age: 29 First met: Midnight Shootout Tyson is Ricky's good friend. He usually works for Ricky and does jobs for him. He's very good shooter, and that leads to his amazing ability getting in troubles. Missions Chapter 1 Mission 1. - The American Dream - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21074 Mission 2. - First Contact - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21075 Mission 3. - Ammunation Supplies - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21096 Mission 4. - Midnight Shootout - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21097 Mission 5. - Drug Business - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/21161 Play and enjoy! Give me feedbacks! Edited September 13, 2012 by Notna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 (edited) Nice! Good luck man, will play the mission soon. EDIT: Done! Edited September 8, 2012 by xGhostx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 8, 2012 Author Share Posted September 8, 2012 Nice! Good luck man, will play the mission soon. Thank you I'll upload like 3 missions together from now on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 Hello again. Like I said before I'm gonna play the missions, and I did, so here's my feedback: Mission 1: Yeah I think this mission was fine for an intro, just a little bit driving. But there are 2 things I love about this mission. First is the cutscenes at the beginning, the way you describe the American Dream was great. And second, you use my favorite car <3 (bullet). This is an intro so my rating will be based on intro. Rating: 7.5/10 Mission 2: Yeah it seems like Jacob started from zero, from finding food to weapon, I mean he got a long way to go, I also like the part in the gun shop, nice and simple. I don't know, the mission is too short, I guess, you could have include this mission to the intro, too. That would be more awesome, I guess. Rating: 7/10 Overall: I don't kinda know what to say here, the mission are just simple and pretty nice, with great writing and good cutscene...speaking about cutscene, you should work on timing it, sometimes it's too short or too long, but most of it is good, especially the angle. So yeah, I wonder what would happen in the next mission, so I'll be waiting for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 Goodluck man,keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 9, 2012 Author Share Posted September 9, 2012 Thank you guys 3rd mission uploaded! Download here. Don't forget to give feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 9, 2012 Author Share Posted September 9, 2012 I'm fast as lightning 4th mission released! Download here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Notna's got a new mission pack! I'll play it tomorrow after school. About to go to sleep now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 9, 2012 Author Share Posted September 9, 2012 Notna's got a new mission pack! I'll play it tomorrow after school. About to go to sleep now. Okay, I'm waiting for that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 13, 2012 Author Share Posted September 13, 2012 5th mission released! Download here. Play, enjoy and give feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 Played all the missions. I can say this is pretty much good, but how the hell Jason's car appeared near his house in the beginning of the 4th mission after he left it at the Rockshore Docks in the 3rd mission? Anyways, keep the good work. And here's my rating (this idea became popular these days): 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xGhostx Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 What idea? The mp or the rating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 13, 2012 Author Share Posted September 13, 2012 What idea? The mp or the rating? He means the rating. And SF, thanks. And about the car, I know about it, but I had already made the mistake and I didn't fix it. Thanks for such a high rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlamingSpaz Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 Notna, mind if i do let's play about your missionpack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 13, 2012 Author Share Posted September 13, 2012 Notna, mind if i do let's play about your missionpack? I mind in a good way, go on and do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlamingSpaz Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Notna, mind if i do let's play about your missionpack? I mind in a good way, go on and do it I think i'm gonna do it soon enough, kinda busy in real life right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 16, 2012 Author Share Posted September 16, 2012 Got it, everyone is Like me, so there's not much time to do missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OG Chico Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 Hey man, really liking your missions, the only thing I don't like is the actor you chose for protagonist . But other than that, this is pretty neat, keep it on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 21, 2012 Author Share Posted September 21, 2012 Hey man, really liking your missions, the only thing I don't like is the actor you chose for protagonist . But other than that, this is pretty neat, keep it on! It's my second favourite skin, I've been waiting to make an epic mission pack to use it. Thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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