xGhostx 140 Posted August 20, 2012 (edited) Coming soon! ''And so it begins again...My name is...not important anymore, I guess. Used to know how long I'd been here. Now I've got no idea. Been a while since the outbreak started, that much I know. Holed up, with the sound of those things outside. Monster, I guess you'd call them. As far as I know, I'm the only one left...The lone survivor. Can't go on much longer though...Almost out of supplies...And if there's anyone else alive out there, I need to find them. If nothing else, I don't wanna die alone.'' Chapter 1 Mission Name Link And so it begins again... Download Time To Face The Outside World Download Party With Monsters Download A Hand Gun! Download Searching For Stuff Download - - - - - - Coming soon! This mission pack is base on a game call Lone Survivor. Watch the trailer here: I got the inspiration from playing the game, and I haven't made any mission pack using this theme before so...yeah, I decided to make it. Putting Black Ops and Portal 2 on hold for a while, I guess. xGhostx: ^^ Arejai: Headers Who play the missions Edited September 9, 2012 by xGhostx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 20, 2012 (edited) MAP Remember to check it in case you get lost. Edited August 22, 2012 by xGhostx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 20, 2012 (edited) Coming soon! Edited August 21, 2012 by xGhostx Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DestaliusDark 44 Posted August 20, 2012 Good luck! Il try it in a minute and il respond with my opinion Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 20, 2012 Ok thanks man. Appreciate it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DestaliusDark 44 Posted August 20, 2012 Ok... I guess it was alright for the intro mission. Though i din't understand what was going on :S Do i need to know the story of the Video Game Lone survivor or? Anyway There where some grammatical errors here and there. But that's ok. I had the feeling you tried to make it like a Point and click adventure game, i suggest instead of using visible markers make invisible ones? Or really small ones, well it din't really feel like i was looking for stuff, because i could see what i had to check out. There where also some strange parts like the pit/hole, i don't really get what happens there. Does he fall in the hole? Well there is not much things i can use in the hole so i don't really see the point of going in it ;P Some other strange thing was when i had to check out the sink. The characters simply says "Whats that?". i dunno, but what does it have to do with anything? Sam with looking at the blood on the ground. While it is nice checking it out, id like to know its useful that i look at those things. [ in P&C games this is different, because what you have to check out is not marked] Also, i don't get the end at all I fell into the hole again and some dude brought me home? Or was it a dream? And im not really sure why the character likes night more lol. Well, it's only the first mission, so there is enough room to improve and learn. Good luck with this! Have a good day Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 20, 2012 I did try to use invisible checkpoint but I afraid that some player can find it too hard, you know. But I'll use it in the next missions. You didn't fall into the hole. You just look deep inside it. And yeah, that's what it all about, you didn't know what happen, like were you in a dream or some dude make you or something like that. And don't expect me to make it more realistic or something like that. I just want to making it look like the game, it's like silence hill in 2D. So I guess things might get a little strange sometimes. And it's just an intro so...thanks man, I really appreciate this kind of feedback. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CallanGTA 0 Posted August 21, 2012 While you have good skills, and the map is promising, don't you think that basing it off a 2D game limits your creativity? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 ...Don't worry man. I'll try my best, I'll try to turn it into 3D. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 Headers added. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 Mission update: TIME TO FACE THE OUTSIDE WORLD \/ \/ \/ Download /\ /\ /\ Enjoy! And don't forget to give feedback! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DestaliusDark 44 Posted August 21, 2012 The Second mission was way better than the first one. The only thing i disliked was the end though It kinda felt like you gave up at the end. Like lets finish it quickly with having a hole under a bed. Anyway, good luck. Try to let out those random strange things and it will be better [The invisible checkpoints work really well ;D] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 The Second mission was way better than the first one.The only thing i disliked was the end though It kinda felt like you gave up at the end. Like lets finish it quickly with having a hole under a bed. Actually you look into the mirror in a strange room, then you just appear back to the mirror in your apartment. Try to let out those random strange things and it will be better What strange things? Anyway, thanks man, great feedback as always. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AnDReJ98 1,441 Posted August 21, 2012 Gonna try it later! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sloth the storyteller 8 Posted August 21, 2012 Beautiful are the two missions, even if there is no action aspect of the third mission Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 Okay thanks man, but there isn't any third mission, only 2 is available. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sloth the storyteller 8 Posted August 21, 2012 When will the third mission ?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 21, 2012 Tomorrow I guess. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 22, 2012 Map updated! Remember to check the map before playing. It will be updated every missions. So far, the other side of the stadium don't have any icon because you haven't been there yet. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DestaliusDark 44 Posted August 22, 2012 Nice addition ;D Though , sadly we can't just leave/enter the mirror without an objective ;/ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 22, 2012 Yeah...blame Gta:Sa or DYOM. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lee. 43 Posted August 23, 2012 Alright, played the missions. The surprises, puzzles, both visible and invisible checkpoints, it was just awesome . The only part that I don't get it, is in the first mission. At first I thought that the player fall into the hole, because the next part, you teleport the player there. And, I thought that I need to defeat the enemy. You could use a cutscene for that. And, at the first mission, in the ending, I was surprised when I look deeply in the black screen, and suddenly a man showed up in the screen. Well, you got me there . The second mission, the way you use the animation for the infected in the hall, it was very good . But, you know, why you don't use the meat object, so it will looks more realistic . I found some grammar mistakes, but, you know, that's not a major problems. Anyway, you did a good job in designing the missions, and for average, I give it 8.2/10. Keep it up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 23, 2012 Alright, played the missions. The surprises, puzzles, both visible and invisible checkpoints, it was just awesome . Thank you. The only part that I don't get it, is in the first mission. At first I thought that the player fall into the hole, because the next part, you teleport the player there. And, I thought that I need to defeat the enemy. You could use a cutscene for that. It's not real man. What's the cutscene for, you saw a monster, you have to run to the door, right? This is not like other mission pack, it's more realistic I guess, you can fight a zombie. And, at the first mission, in the ending, I was surprised when I look deeply in the black screen, and suddenly a man showed up in the screen. Well, you got me there . Yeah it's ok I guess, just wanted to make it more mysterious I guess. The second mission, the way you use the animation for the infected in the hall, it was very good . But, you know, why you don't use the meat object, so it will looks more realistic I think the meat object is just too big you know. . I found some grammar mistakes, but, you know, that's not a major problems. Which one? Anyway, you did a good job in designing the missions, and for average, I give it 8.2/10. Keep it up! Thanks for the high rating man, glad you like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 23, 2012 Mission update: PARTY WITH MONSTERS \/ \/ \/ Download /\ /\ /\ I added a new feature to this one! Enjoy! And don't forget to give feedback! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kratos2000 62 Posted August 23, 2012 Pshh. Maps. Awesome, I haven't played Lone Survivor though. I hope it won't screw my experience, I'll give you feedback once I'm finished Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 24, 2012 Hey thanks man. I'm waiting for your feedback. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zizo008 30 Posted August 24, 2012 When the next mission are out? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xGhostx 140 Posted August 25, 2012 I don't know, maybe today or tomorrow. Give me feedback while waiting please. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DestaliusDark 44 Posted August 25, 2012 Well played the third mission. It's a good but short one. Would have been better if it din't randomly end in the house. Anyway i found some strange things. when i was walking in the hallway, random peds appeared, so place a ped behavior objective next time When talking to the black guy eating in the house, he says something. But instead of his name it says (You) , so watch out with that. Again some spelling errors, but thats ok. I liked the part where i had to choose between a answer. This is why i think they should add a multiplae objective in DYOM, like different paths. Take right and you will have another objective if you take left. Let's hope they implement it Anyway, good mission, waiting for the next one Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
