kmlwin.1996 Posted August 12, 2012 Share Posted August 12, 2012 TITLE: Being Rehabilitated cammi These four walls are my prison Where I am trapped is my prison I may never leave what is my prison Sometimes voices are in my prison Evil voices in my prison They tell me to take drugs in my prison I will not do that in my prison Nothing chances in my prison Paranoia is my prison The sweet taste I will never have is my prison The creepy doctor is my prison Having hope is my prison I am protected by my prison But its thanks to my prison that I survive When the world says give up, my prison tries me one more time I love my prison kmlwin.1996 I'm standin' in the corner of the room Tears and my brain think I'm gonna blow out in the Boom I feel that I am lonely and I just want to get out of this room But there's many of my faults I done out the room So I'll gonna stay here before I end up as a good man I will change the mind of heart, and I love this art I still breathing but I don't know why I'm breathing All I know is I am trapped in this place, never be going out to be rehabilitated Yeah, I was supposed to be the good man and now I'm the bad man So, let me stay here and repair my pieces of mind I'm going through changes and I'll find what I want to find SOOO! Rehabilitation is the only way to get back in my original face and life Let's stop chasing the pain, wipe up the tears and start the new life. Mokrie Dela Cold turkey, cold shoulder I feel my skin growing colder No worries, they told her, Rehab; rebuilder. Cold grey walls and shadows of wolves, They lurk beyond, teasing all night long Darkness falls and the hunger pulls, But there is no relief, the wolves bare their teeth Night time weighs Heavy on me, The creatures of the night All mocking in their presence. Dawn grows nigh, To my anguished pleas, At the first glimmer or light Comes my fear's evanescence. Relief and release, the sun kisses me again You're cured, that's the slur they say Reintegration, I return to my shame Knowing that I shall be back here someday Coat. I grab my swords With both weak arms On the boundaries of the wards I balanced on my palms Before the accident Ahead of crash I stood on both feet Without judgement Then I was lashed I Fell on my knees I cried for savior No reply But I stumbled on these swords Inside this dull ward I grab my swords With both weak arms And lift myself, to forge my cause On the boundaries of these wards Deadline : 18th August, Saturday Feel free to vote! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndyGanteks Posted August 12, 2012 Share Posted August 12, 2012 1.Mokrie 2. Kmlwin 3. cammi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokrie Dela Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 1: Coat. 2: kmlwin.1996 3 Cammi The only true wisdom is in knowing you know nothing. Click here to view my Poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acehilm Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 1.Mokrie 2. Kmlwin 3. cammi I'd vote myself but that's cheating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cammi Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 1.Mokrie Dela 2.Kmlwin 3.Coat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The__Phoenix Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 1.Mokrie 2.Kmlwin 3.Cammi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted August 14, 2012 Share Posted August 14, 2012 1. Coat 2. Mokrie Dela 3. Cammi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted August 14, 2012 Share Posted August 14, 2012 1- Mokrie Dela 2- Coat. 3- kmlwin.1996 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted August 15, 2012 Share Posted August 15, 2012 1. Coat. - Liked the metaphores and how the sword is esscentially redemption and how the narrator tries to grab it. Good job. 2. Morkie Dela - Great little poem here, I loved the sentence structure and how it flowed. 3. kmlwin.1996 - yeah, pretty good, some of the rhymes didn't really work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 1. Mokrie 2. Kmlwin 3. cammi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Acehilm Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Whats happened to this topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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