cammi Posted August 5, 2012 Author Share Posted August 5, 2012 I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt. Foley Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying. Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me. I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say. "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cammi Posted August 5, 2012 Author Share Posted August 5, 2012 Actually I think Ziggy is right. I used Ziggy's feedback and criticism and I have dramatically improved my writing. I went from an script or whatever the f*ck it was writer. To the writer of this - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8396558/1/Fifty_Shades_Infinity It may be small and terrible but it is a big improvement to what I used to write and I will continue it. I am a better writer thanks to the writers on here. So I thank them for teaching me to be a less sh*tty writer. Needed to get that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I just had a read of that Fifty Shades Infinity and although it's not a masterpiece, I must say, well done. It's a large improvement -still lacking alot but still,- and you should be proud of it. "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cammi Posted August 5, 2012 Author Share Posted August 5, 2012 I just had a read of that Fifty Shades Infinity and although it's not a masterpiece, I must say, well done. It's a large improvement -still lacking alot but still,- and you should be proud of it. Thanks, that means a lot to me. What is on my fanfiction.net is just an intro. If you did not see, the main character is Johnny Kibbutz from TLAD and Kelly is the ex-wife of Yusef from TBOGT that is why she is rich. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sgt. Foley Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying. Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me. I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say. My god, I was going to write a STORY and let my FEELINGS OUT. Sheesh, f*ck this section. I thought you were all nice respectful people. All you do is f*cking criticize peoples work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted August 5, 2012 Share Posted August 5, 2012 I feel like this topic is just an output for everyones stress. I feel like this forum is giving stress. Listen up now. You're from the V section? f*ck off back there then. You're not welcome here if all you're going to do is berate people who are trying to help. I have not once claimed to be the boss- look at the title under my name, it says HELPING HAND. Almost everybody who comes here PMs me to come onto their thread and critique their work, and even Wipex has PMed me apologizing for his asinine remarks because I'm the only one who has offered him constructive criticism. This is why whiny f*ckers like yourself should keep to your business in the V section - because you can't define the line between constructive criticism and bullying. Ask Cammi yourself, he'll show you the PMs I have sent him trying to help him in his quest to become a better writer. We were all like him at one point, but we accepted the criticism, swallowed it hard, took in the tips, and learnt. We didn't get V f*ckheads like yourself coming on here trying to stupidly defend somebody who doesn't need defending like a little child. He needs help, and that's exactly what he's gotten and is getting from me. I'm getting sick of all these morons who think they're being moral angels defending but in truth, they're just looking like complete and utter twats. Don't comment on this thread unless you've got something helpful to say. My god, I was going to write a STORY and let my FEELINGS OUT. Sheesh, f*ck this section. I thought you were all nice respectful people. All you do is f*cking criticize peoples work! f*ck off back to the proverbial sh*thole of this forum; The V section and don't come back. Learn to take the criticism. "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cammi Posted August 5, 2012 Author Share Posted August 5, 2012 Well bye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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