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ok ill prob be on tonight:D but not for long bc i have work in the morning so yeah biggrin.gif and yeah ik darkness hope to get this rolling weel prob have a couple dry run throughs to rehearse this sh*t

 

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ok ill prob be on tonight:D but not for long bc i have work in the morning so yeah biggrin.gif and yeah ik darkness hope to get this rolling weel prob have a couple dry run throughs to rehearse this sh*t

yo zombie add me on psn enjoi_thepain and MMD-Stingray (I could be on either account) asap so I can help record

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I'm working on a script, should be done today.

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yeah ill be on tonight mate, hopefully uou can start this up icon14.gif

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So far here's part one.

 

Part I

 

Screen flies over Liberty City while a man is narrating in the background

 

 

Micheal

 

(Narrating)Liberty City also known as the Land of opportunity. It's funny, I've been living here my entire life and I never got the opportunity to have a decent life, but many people got their opportunity and look at them now, living in expensive houses, driving expensive cars, wearing expensive clothes. I look at them and I just get mad and think that could've been me but it's not apparently. In this city money buys everything and money always seems to be missing from my pocket, but all that's gonna change.

 

Screen now shows Micheal Malone, a desperate man trying to get some money to get out of Liberty City, maybe he will have his chance.

 

 

Micheal

 

(Narrating)I heard from a taxi driver in Hove Beach that there was a secret poker game happening today and that it was easy to win, I made plans to make it to the game. I needed a ride and I didn't have enough money to pay for a taxi, so I went to my friend John's house which wasn't far.

 

Micheal reaches John Rollins home. John is a close friend of Micheal who always helps him.

 

 

Micheal

 

Hey John how's it going?

 

John

 

Good, until you walked in.

 

Micheal

 

Very funny. Anyways I need a favor.

 

John

 

Oh sh*t here we go.

 

Micheal

 

f*ck off, I need your car I'm going to Dukes.

 

John

 

Why are you driving all the way to Dukes for?

 

Micheal

 

To get us some money.

 

John

 

For the last time you are not going to use my car as a getaway vehicle.

 

Micheal

 

What no.. There's a back room poker game that's easy to win. I could get a few hundreds and walk out with a smile on my face.

 

John

 

Is this a joke, you don't even know how to play poker. And how do you know that it's easy to win?

 

Micheal

 

One, it's not a joke. Two, I do know how to play poker. Three, I heard it from a taxi driver who always goes there and wins.

 

John

 

Oh yes take the word from a taxi driver who probably makes more money driving a cab than he does in a poker game.

 

Micheal

 

You're not being very supportive of my plan.

 

John

 

What plan, that is not a plan, that is a stupid fantasy.

 

Micheal

 

Are you going to lend me you car yes or no?

 

John

 

........keys are on the table.

 

Micheal

 

YES, thanks man I own you one.

 

John

 

More like three hundred. Don't wreck my car and fill up the gas tank.

 

Micheal gets in the car and begins to drive to his destination

 

 

Micheal

 

(Narrating)When I told John that I knew how to play poker I lied but it can't be that hard. I'm feeling really good about this, this might change my life.

 

Screen fades to black and the title is shown. After the title the text "Three Hours Later" is shown. Screen shows Micheal rushing into John's residence.

 

 

John

 

Hey man where's your hundreds and your smile?

 

Micheal

 

THAT f*ckING GAME WAS FIXED, I KNOW IT WAS.

 

John

 

Whoa slow down alright tell me what happened.

 

Micheal

 

I lost.

 

John

 

You see what happens when you act like a dumbass. What did you lose?

 

Micheal

 

Everything.

 

John

 

What exactly is everything?

 

Micheal

 

By everything I mean, everything.

 

John

 

What DO you mean everything?

 

Micheal

 

Do I have to spell it out for you?

 

John

 

You say you lost everything but you barely had anything. How bad were you?

 

Micheal

 

I did pretty good at first, won over 200 grand.

 

John

 

Okay that's good.

 

Micheal

 

Then at the last game I had this great hand, Aces over 5's. I thought the hand was great, so I......

 

John

 

You what?

 

Micheal

 

Doubled down.

 

John

 

You doubled down and lost, so that means you lost over..

 

Micheal

 

400 grand. But the problem is worse. I owe this guy named Nicholas Gibson..

 

John

 

Wait, THE Nicholas Gibson?

 

Micheal

 

Yeah, why?

 

John

 

Do you have any idea who he is?

 

Micheal

 

A guy named Nicholas Gibson, how the f*ck should I know.

 

John

 

Nicholas Gibson is a Loan Shark who kills people that don't pay him back.

 

Micheal

 

Oh sh*t.

 

John

 

Oh sh*t is right because do you know what this means?

 

Micheal

 

No what?

 

John

 

This means you own 400 grand to one of the most dangerous loan sharks in Liberty City.

 

Micheal

 

400 f*cking grand? How the f*ck are we gonna get 400 grand in three days.

 

John

 

Three days? Oh well that's just perfect. The only way we can that much money in three days is if we rob a bank.

 

Micheal

 

Wait you're right, that's our only solution.

 

John

 

What is?

 

Micheal

 

Robbing a Bank.

 

John

 

I was joking when I said that. You are officially out of your mind.

 

Micheal

 

400 grand in three days to one of the most dangerous loan shark in Liberty City. What other choice do we have?

 

John

 

.........If we're gonna do this, we need the proper requirements.

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GTA4Zombies?

im so sorry guys im not gunna be able to be on tonight work kicked my ass todayD:

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mayhem that is a great script, so do we each pick a character? and who will be editing this

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StonersDarkness

yea... which charactor is which? do we pick or are we assigned? i don't really care...

 

and every one needs to add me... PSN: StonersDarkness

 

(yea... it is my GTAF name... lol)

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Guys I think that we need a schedule for times when we are rehearsing.Saying rehearsal tonight doesn't narrow it down.I'm in Latvia,so I don't know if I'll make it when it's night at the director's country.I assume that others have encountered the same thing,so a schedule would be handy.The times for rehearsals are yet to be discussed,I assume.

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im EST... USA, so whatever you guys are tounge.gif

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Dr-Mayhem111

I'm ready to rehearse.

 

Part II

 

Micheal and John cruise around the city looking for people with the proper skills for the robbery. Screen shows Micheal driving John's Blista Compact in Acter Industrial Park on Plumbob Ave.

 

 

John

 

Where are we going?

 

Micheal

 

Just hang on, we're almost there.

 

John

 

You know that's what people say before they take their victim to their deathplace.

 

Micheal

 

Oh stop being a bitch.

 

John

 

I just don't want to end up being chopped into a million peices.

 

Micheal

 

If you don't shut the f*ck up I will make that happen.

 

Micheal notices some kind of gathering happening just up ahead. He gets closer and stops and see's some kind of street racing event happening, which was what he was looking for.

 

 

Micheal

 

Look we're here.

 

John

 

Holy sh*t, what is this place?

 

Micheal

 

The place we have looking for. Come on.

 

Micheal turns off his car, Micheal and John exit the vehicle and walk closer to the action.

 

 

John

 

What are we looking for?

 

Micheal

 

It's not what, it's who.

 

John

 

Okay, who are we looking for?

 

Micheal

 

Guy named Ghost.

 

John

 

Ghost?

 

Micheal

 

Yeah he's a street racer. Remember we need another driver to do this thing. I heard from a couple of guys in Bohan that this Ghost guy was the best street racer in Liberty City. If we can get him in our crew, we would have no problems with the cops 'cause this guy's the best.

 

John

 

Okay how do we convince a guy we can't find yet to join us?

 

[/b]Micheal[/b]

 

I don't know. Ask around.

 

The two ask around for Ghost until they heard a man annoucing the next race.

 

 

Race Announcer

 

Alright let's get ready for our next race.

 

Two cars pull up, a Sultan RS and a Super Charged Dukes.

 

 

Race Announcer

 

In the Sultan we have the bad boy from Broker, MilliN10. And in the Dukes, the nightmare from the streets of hell, goes so fast you can barely see him....Ghost.

 

Micheal

 

Did he just say Ghost?

 

John

 

Yeah he did. He's about to race who are you going to convince him to join us?

 

Micheal

 

I know how.

 

Micheal sneaks over to a car that looks just like the Sultan RS that was about to race. His plan was to ram MilliN10 out of the road and be his replacement and try to talk to Ghost. Once he gets close to him he starts talking as he is driving at very high speed.

 

 

Micheal

 

Hey Ghost I have to talk to you.

 

Ghost

 

What the f*ck, you're not Milli. Where is he?

 

Micheal

 

It doesn't matter, look I have a business proposition for you.

 

Ghost

 

A business propo.. WATCH OUT!

 

Ghost warns Micheal about a car he was about to hit. Micheal manages to dodge the vehicle and continues to talk to him.

 

 

Micheal

 

So about the business proposition.

 

Ghost

 

Look kid, we can't talk like this. Try to beat me to the finish line and maybe I'll listen to your business proposition.

 

Micheal

 

Okay sounds good. Where's the finish?

 

Ghost

 

You're gonna have to find that out yourself.

 

Micheal

 

What.....sh*t.

 

Micheal calls John to ask him where the finish line.

 

 

John

 

Hello?

 

Micheal

 

Dude where's the finish line?

 

John

 

Why the f*ck you asking me?

 

Micheal

 

I'm asking you to find out QUICK!

 

John

 

Okay okay hang on.

 

After a while John finds out the finish line location and tells Micheal.

 

 

John

 

Okay the finish line is at a old mansion in Westdyke.

 

Micheal

 

Okay I know where it is thanks.

 

Now that Micheal knows where to go, he continues on with the race and beats Ghost. They meet up at the Mansion and Ghost is ready to listen to Micheal's proposition.

 

 

Ghost

 

Okay what proposition you talking about?

 

Micheal

 

A proposition that could get you a million dollars in a matter of minutes.

 

Ghost

 

Okay I'm listening.

 

Micheal

 

I'm planning a bank robbery and I need a quick and slick driver like you. So you in?

 

Ghost

 

Uummmmmm.....yeah okay I'm in.

 

Micheal

 

Alright, I'll contact you later with the details.

 

Ghost and Micheal get in their vehicles and drive away. Micheal calls John to tell him that Ghost is in.

 

 

John

 

Well?

 

Micheal

 

He's in.

 

John

 

Yes, now we have another driver. So far this plan is going good.

 

Micheal

 

Yeah. Now we need a pilot, some shooters, and a demolition man, do you know any?

 

John

 

No, but I know someone who does.

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I'm willing to be an actor, promoter, and 2nd director since u know my skills! biggrin.gif Preferably a actor though.

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mayhem the script is great and we had some good fun working things out tonight, like where the gambling will take place and what car he drives.

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Part III

 

Micheal, John, and Ghost are gathered at the Clucken Bell in Star Junction discussing about recruiting more people. John says he know a guy that knows all types of people and that he can get a pilot, some shooters, and a demolition man but there is a problem....... he's in prison.

 

 

Micheal

 

Okay now that we have another driver things are going good but there are a few more people that we need.

 

John

 

I know a guy who knows all types of people. From Bums in Bohan to International Drug Dealers in Vice City. He knows them all. But there's one problem.

 

Micheal

 

What is it?

 

John

 

He's in prison.

 

Micheal

 

You've got to be f*cking me?

 

Ghost

 

What's he in for?

 

John

 

Alot of things, he's been wanted by the FIB since 1988. They arrested him a few months ago.

 

Ghost

 

Is his name Victor Gutierrez by any chance?

 

John

 

Yeah it is, you know him?

 

Ghost

 

Everybody in the racing syndicate knows him.

 

Micheal

 

Okay we all know him but the fact that he's still in prison is kinda f*cking up our plan.

 

John

 

I know, I mean the only way we could contact him is we break him out of prison.

 

Micheal

 

John you're a genius.

 

John

 

Oh sh*t, I really gotta learn to shut the f*ck up.

 

Micheal

 

We could break him out, but how?

 

Ghost

 

I have an idea, it ain't much but it should work. Meet me at Honkers in two hours.

 

Ghost leaves but Micheal and John awhile.

 

 

Micheal

 

What do you think he's planning?

 

John

 

I don't know but just in case I'll bring a gun.

 

Micheal

 

Okay then I'll......wait what, you have a gun!?

 

John

 

Yeah, we'll talk about it later. We have to get to Honkers.

 

Micheal

 

But Ghost said two hours.

 

John

 

Do you have any idea how bad traffic is now that the bridge to Alderny is closed?

 

Micheal

 

You're right, let's go.

 

Screen goes black then shows Micheal and John driving in Berchem towards Honkers.

 

 

Micheal

 

Well It's getting late and we still have one more day to get that money or else we're f*cked.

 

John

 

Relax okay, once we break Vic out of prison it's only a matter of time we'll round up everybody we need and rob the bank.

 

Micheal

 

You f*cking kidding me, just yesterday you were telling me that I was out of my mind about robbing a bank and now you're all calm about it.

 

John

 

I took some pain killers so I'm a bit out of it but I'm focused.

 

Micheal

 

So that's why you're all calm. Give me some 'cause I'm stressed like a hooker in church.

 

John

 

Sorry just took my last one.

 

Micheal

 

Son of a....

 

John

 

Hey if you asked me earlier I could've gave you some.

 

Micheal

 

Greedy Pill Popping f*ck.

 

John

 

What?

 

Micheal

 

Nothing.

 

They arrive at Honkers and enter the club as they wait for Ghost.

 

 

Micheal

 

Where is he?

 

John

 

Has it been two hours?

 

Micheal

 

Yeah.

 

John

 

Well let's wait for him in the club.

 

Micheal

 

Alright.

 

They enter the club. Screen fades to black and shows the text "20 minutes late" then show Ghost walking towards Micheal and John.

 

 

Ghost

 

Okay I'm here guys.

 

Micheal

 

Well it's about f*cking time you got here.

 

John

 

Yeah where were you?

 

Ghost

 

Getting the stuff.

 

Micheal

 

What stuff?

 

Ghost

 

Follow me.

 

Ghost leads Micheal and John outside and shows them a van.

 

 

Ghost

 

There she is.

 

Micheal

 

A van?

 

John

 

I'm not following you Ghost.

 

Ghost

 

We're going to use this van to ram through the gate of the prison and get Vic.

 

John

 

You do know that there are guards with guns right?

 

Ghost

 

I know that dipsh*t. Just get in and trust me you'll know what to do.

 

Micheal & John

 

Ummmmmmmm.......okay.

 

The trio enter the van, Micheal and John immediately noticing the weapons that is stored in the van.

 

 

Micheal & John

 

HOLY SH*T!

 

John

 

Where the f*ck did you get all these guns?

 

Ghost

 

From a friend of mine.

 

They drive away and drive towards their destination, the prison.

 

 

Micheal

 

So what's the plan?

 

Ghost

 

We ram through the entrance of the prison, get out and start shooting, get Vic and get the hell out of there.

 

Micheal

 

Seems very thought out let's do it.

 

John

 

We'er gonna shoot at cops?

 

Ghost

 

Yeah.

 

John

 

I don't think I wanna do that.

 

Micheal

 

Fine then just shoot at them without hitting them.

 

John

 

That's not making it any better.

 

Ghost

 

I don't give a sh*t, either you shoot them or I shoot you, your choice.

 

John

 

Alright fine.

 

Ghost

 

Attaboy. Okay we're here.

 

They arrive at the prison. They stop a moment to prepare themselves.

 

 

Ghost

 

You guys ready?

 

Micheal

 

Yeah.

 

John

 

Yeah I'm ready.

 

Ghost

 

Okay then let's do it.

 

Ghost drives the van top speed towards the entrance and rams through the doors. Police shoot them immediately, Micheal and John get out of the van and starts shooting. Ghost blacks the main vehicle entrance with his van, gets out then begins shooting. After most of the cops are dead, the trio look for Vic who they find right away.

 

 

John

 

Hey Vic it's me John

 

Victor

 

Cono man, what the hell are you doing?

 

John

 

Dropping by to say hello, what the f*ck do you think I'm doing?

 

Micheal

 

Could you two stop chatting and focus on getting the hell out of here.

 

Victor

 

Follow me, I know a way out.

 

Micheal

 

Lead the way.

 

Everybody follows Vic up at the guard tower going towards the wall and jumping to the ground level. Victor spots a boat and warns everyone.

 

 

Victor

 

There's a boat. come on let's take it.

 

Everybody gets in the boat and drive away from all the heat.

 

 

Victor

 

Haha yes I'm finally out of that sh*thole. Thanks for getting me out of there.

 

Micheal

 

Sure no problem. We got you out of prison because we need your help.

 

Victor

 

With what?

 

John

 

Micheal owes Nicholas Gibson 400 thousand dollars and we're planning on robbing a bank.

 

Victor

 

Nicholas Gibson? Well then of course I'll help. What do you need?

 

Ghost

 

A pilot.

 

Micheal

 

Good shooters.

 

John

 

And a demolition man. I know you know those types of people so can you get them?

 

Victor

 

I'll have to make a few calls but yeah I can make it happen.

 

John

 

Yes, thanks man.

 

Victor

 

Anything for a guy who just broke me out of prison.

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If the film needs any drivers/racers/ badass drivers, then I'm your man.

I had a breif idea for a role. Maybe after Ghost drives the men away after the robbery, I'm a 'special forces' cop, and I use a police stinger (if this is filmed on TBoGT, otherwise i'd just use a turismo or some sh*t) and have an awesome Middle Park chase with explosions and sh*t with car crashes (of course, I won't be involved with any collisions)

 

If you need me, my PSN ID is Lazyboy8

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GTA4Zombies?

thatd be great! we could use a a stunt drivier and itd be great to coordinate this whole thing with driving so add me at gta4zombies:D itd be great if you added me and on a further not to all who read this i might be going on tonight so make sure you guys are on!:D

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me, enjoi and dr mayhem were deciding where millie gets wrecked and a good place was enjoi shunting me through the barriers off the high road in southern alderny.

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sorry for the double post but i made you a banner for the topic smile.gif i think it sums the story up

 

 

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Well, which ever role needs more professional driving, I can easily oblige.

 

If anyone wants to 'test' my driving skills, you can watch me drive from Alderney to Broker in a Turismo or any other sports car at high speeds and probably not even damage the car.

 

That's how pro I am tounge.gif

 

EDIT: Also, we're going to need people to play as workers/customers at the bank robbery scene.

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hey im on my ps3 so tonight another rehearsal im on my ps3 bc my computer broke D: EDIT:Also lazyboy id love for you to be in on this very much so you can be the stunt coordinator

EDIT #2:Id Like 4 everybody to be on today preferably b4 4 Pm Thanks biggrin.gif

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hey im on my ps3 so tonight another rehearsal im on my ps3 bc my computer broke D: EDIT:Also lazyboy id love for you to be in on this very much so you can be the stunt coordinator

EDIT #2:Id Like 4 everybody to be on today preferably b4 4 Pm Thanks biggrin.gif

Stunt Co-ordinator?

 

I want to be a driver, not some idiot who stands there and watches other people drive (and probably fail)

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ik i ment that youvcould help design nd coordinate some stunts to perform them

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hey im on my ps3 so tonight another rehearsal im on my ps3 bc my computer broke D: EDIT:Also lazyboy id love for you to be in on this very much so you can be the stunt coordinator

EDIT #2:Id Like 4 everybody to be on today preferably b4 4 Pm Thanks biggrin.gif

Stunt Co-ordinator?

 

I want to be a driver, not some idiot who stands there and watches other people drive (and probably fail)

yo lazyboy I would love to race u sometime on psn

you seem very cocky and full of yourself

add me: enjoi_thepain

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