New Life in El Quebrados

[Rewas]

 

Hello, this is a remake of my very first mission pack "The Life in El Quebrados". Unlike my first mission pack, this pack will feature DYOM's storyline feature and better missions. So far, I'm planning to remake only the first chapter, but I'll remake the second chapter as well in the future.

 

New things:

• Storyline feature
• Better and improved story missions with extra story missions
• Side missions
• Better dialogues

The story is the same as before the remake. It follows the protagonist named Larry Smith and his friends - Gary and Mac, where they live in their hometown - El Quebrados. They are teenagers and they lived normal lives, until a gang called The Venturas Gang started to take over desert towns. The trio started their killing days by destroying the gang and retaking the towns.

 

 

 

Main Characters

 

Larry Smith II

Nicknames: L | Age: 17 | Role: Protagonist | Debut: Unexpected Surprise

Young teenager who lives in El Quebrados. He usually hangs out with his two best friends: Gary and Mac. He had a normal teenage life, until Venturas Gang started to take over El Quebrados and almost killing his friends. Larry had to become a killer to protect his town and his friends. He became a leader of his new gang called: "LMG".

 

Gary Speed

Nicknames : G | Age: 17 | Role: Deuteragonist | Debut: Unexpected Surprise

Larry and Mac's best friend. He loves fighting, shooting and hates cowards. He has good skills in shooting and fighting. He hangs out with his best friends, with his gang called: LMG and helps to protect El Quebrados from Venturas Gang.

 

Michael "Mac" McFerrson

Nicknames: Mac | Age: 16 | Role: Tritagonist | Debut: Unexpected Surprise

Larry and Gary's best friend. He lives in El Quebrados near Gary's house, because his house was burned down and his parents were killed when he was a toddler. He hangs out with his best friends, with his gang called: "LMG" and helps to protect El Quebrados from Venturas Gang.

 

 

Allies and Supporters

Harold Lyon

Nicknames: - | Age: 15 | Relationship: LMG Member | Debut: LMG is formed!

The first recruit of Larry's gang - LMG. He lives in Los Santos, but he was kidnapped by Venturas Gang and was taken to the Dessert. He escaped them and went to hide to LMG hideout, and that's where he met Larry and his friends. So far, his job, as a LMG member, is too recruit as many people as he can.

 

Larry Smith I

Nicknames: - | Age: ?? | Relationship: Father | Debut: The Ultimate Plan

Larry and Dan's father. He left his wife and his kids for unknown reason. He currently lives in Vice City, where he says that he's rich and famous, but it isn't confirmed.

 

Daniel "Dan" Smith

Nicknames: Dan | Age: 15 | Relationship: Brother | Debut: O Dan, where are thou?

Larry's young brother. He lives with his mother and his older brother. He likes to make deals, but usually gets into trouble. He was almost killed by Venturas Gang, but luckily Larry saved him.

 

Alfred

Nicknames: - | Age: 55 | Relationship: Friend | Debut: Fishing time

An old friend of the Smiths. He owns a bait shop that sells not only bait, but fishes too. Alfred cooks delicious fishes, as said by Larry.

 

Mike Toreno

Nicknames : None | Age: ?? | Relationship: Supporter | Debut: Training

A secret agent, who helps Larry to train for unknown reason. Nothing is much known about him.

 

 

Enemies

Carl Vinter

Nicknames: - | Age: ?? | Relationship: Antagonist | Debut: Mentioned only

The leader of Venturas gang. he owns a Casigula's casino in Las Venturas and controls everything from it, making it an HQ of Venturas gang. He was only mentioned. It seems that Larry knows him.

 

Larry Crane

Nicknames: Don | Age: 35 | Relationship: Enemy | Debut: The Ultimate Plan | Killed:The Ultimate Plan

One of the members of the Venturas gang. He owned Las Barrancas with many members. He declared himself as the Venturas gang leader's right hand. He has the same name as the protagonist.

 

Donald "Don" Tuner

Nicknames: Don | Age: 29 | Relationship: Enemy | Debut: Fort Carson Mayhem | Killed:Air Don

One of the members of the Venturas gang. He owned Fort Carson, that later LMG took over.

 

Kyle Basterrin

Nicknames: Dumbass | Age: 21 | Relationship: Enemy | Debut: Unexpected Surprise | Killed:Rematch

A member of Venturas Gang, who controls Las Payasadas. He tried to take over El Quebrados, by beating up who gets in his way. He almost killed Gary and Mac, but Larry avenged them by killing him.

 

 

 

Chapter 1

Episode 1 - The Venturas Gang

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Story missions:

Unexpected SurpriseRematchTrainingMcTrouble4 side missions Episode 2 - Dessert Mayhem

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Story missions:

LMG is formed!Fort Carson MayhemHelp from San FierroThe DelayAir DonNext MoveCleaning the LeftoversThe Ultimate Plan7 side missions Episode 3 - The Conclusion

Work in Progress

Edited August 16, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896

[Rewas]

 

 

LMG

LMG (In original mission pack, it's named "The Untouchables") was created by three teenagers: Larry Smith, Gary Speed and Mac, who live in El Quebrados. The purpose of this gang's formation is to assemble fighters and shooters to protect the dessert from their only enemies - The Venturas gang. Many recruiters were harmed, threatened and kidnapped by the Venturas gang.

 

 

Members

 

This post will be finished later....

Edited June 29, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896

[Rewas]

 

Like in all mission packs, trophies are just for fun. Cheating doesn't result in getting a trophy.

 

Bronze

Silver

Gold

Platinum

 

Original mission pack:

Good times... - Complete the first chapter

The End? - Complete the second chapter

Played it before it was cool - Complete 2 chapters

 

Episode 1:

The Avenger - Complete "Unexpected Surprise"

First Blood - Kill your first victim with a gun

Brave Killer - Complete all first episode's story missions

Brother in Need - Complete "O Dan, Where are thou?"

Time to move on - Complete all missions in the first episode

 

Episode 2:

Leadership - Complete "LMG is formed!"

I believe I can fly! - Complete "Air Don"

The Survivors - Complete all second episode's story missions

New Fishing Experience - Complete "Fishing Time"

King of the Dessert - Control all towns in the Dessert

Clean up the Dessert - Complete all missions in the second episode

Edited June 28, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896

[theleoncj]

Awwwwww...

Guess who's back, back again.

Coolman's back, Coolman's back, Coolman's baaaack.

 

Nice to see you in DYOM business again, Mr. 12234555896.

[CharlieSN95]

Yes! Life in El Quebrados was awesome, can't wait to play this after school!

[Darkseller63]

So, this has happened! CM is back on the road! I will try your missions out and give a feedback.

[Sloth the storyteller]

The chapter one and fantastic

I wish you good luck with your mission packs

[xGhostx]

@COOLMAN Wow, I'm gonna try this for sure COOLMAN.

 

Edited June 21, 2012 by xGhostx

[KaRzY6]

Nice to see you back Coolman. I loved the first one. Can't wait for this.

[AndyGanteks]

Good job yo.

[Rewas]

Thank you, guys, for your support. The first episode is short, it's mostly introductions and sh*t.

 

Anyway, the second episode is in progress... It will be longer than episode 1.

[AnDReJ98]

Goodluck with this bro! I played the original,then i'll and remake!

[xGhostx]

I played chapter one, I think there's nothing to complain about it. The writing is excellent, good story, nice gameplay,... But you forgot to hide the actor (Larry) and also forgot to hide the car in mission...I can't remember, if you want the player to get back to the car, just add a checkpoint, don't add another car. Keep up the good work, waiting for more!

 

 

[Rewas]

I played chapter one, I think there's nothing to complain about it. The writing is excellent, good story, nice gameplay,... But you forgot to hide the actor (Larry) and also forgot to hide the car in mission...I can't remember, if you want the player to get back to the car, just add a checkpoint, don't add another car. Keep up the good work, waiting for more!

Yeah, I forgot to mention the fails. I was to lazy to fix them up. I'll try to fix as many as I can in Episode 2

 

BTW, I created 5 missions of Episode 2. Expect episode 2 somewhere at the end of June.

[Rewas]

 

UPDATE!

 

Episode 2 of New Life in El Quebrados is now available!!! New info will be written tomorrow.

 

DOWNLOAD NOW: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=19715

[Shiva.]

Played the first episode and I should admit this, you've become my new inspiration in making Gangster themed missions after Satourn Fan. I really loved playing this. The first mission was my favourite! Yes, the first one. And, please hide the cars. In the first mission, where Kyle's guards appeared from nowhere seemed little strange. You could've made them, walk into the spot as soon as Kyle called them. anyway, I loved the use of cutscenes. Sorry, I can't play the episode 2 because I'm a bit busy right now. But, I'll back soon with the feedbacks of episode 2.

[Rewas]

Played the first episode and I should admit this, you've become my new inspiration in making Gangster themed missions after Satourn Fan. I really loved playing this. The first mission was my favourite! Yes, the first one. And, please hide the cars. In the first mission, where Kyle's guards appeared from nowhere seemed little strange. You could've made them, walk into the spot as soon as Kyle called them. anyway, I loved the use of cutscenes. Sorry, I can't play the episode 2 because I'm a bit busy right now. But, I'll back soon with the feedbacks of episode 2.

Thanks for the feedback. Not a lot of people gave a feedback of my episode 2 so far. I hope I'll get some feedback soon. This thread is kinda lonely.

[Nitesh002]

Played both the chapters.

 

Chapter 1 had a lot of flaws, like you didn't hide some of the actors/cars. You also gave the enemies high HP which was a bit annoying imo.

 

Chapter 2 was way better with only a few mistakes and a variety of missions. The fishing mission, I don't know if there a way to complete it especially with the time limit, but for me it was impossible and had to use the teleport mod to complete. Once you teleported the player in the water, he was not swimming but walking on the land under water. So I didn't find any other way to reach the surface quick apart from cheating.

 

I haven't played the original version of this storyline, so I don't know what happens ahead but it would be interesting to see Smith is more involved in the story as well and bringing the family issues of what happened in the past before they got separated. I think that would make the story more interesting than just taking over territories and fighting the enemy gang which is typical in all gangster theme MPs.

 

Looking forward to Chapter 3.

[Shiva.]

Sorry for the double post. Its due to my net.

Edited July 8, 2012 by shiva s

[Shiva.]

Alright, played the episode 2. I gotta admit one thing. I just skipped the side missions in the first episode but I decided to give a try to the side missions in this episode and I was very much impressed. The side missions were really awesome especially the fishing mission. It was really creative. In the mission, Fort CarsoN Mayhem, you made the armor as the objective but my armore was already full. It will proceed to the next objective only if you pick up the armor so I had no choice rather than to get some punches from a ped, reduce my armor and then pick up the armor. Next time, don't spawn the armor as the objective. . All the other missions were awesome. I can't really wait for episode 3.

Here comes my ratings.

Episode 1: 7/10

Episode 2: 8.9/10

[Rewas]

The summer is almost over and I'm done with my vacations. So, I'm happy to announce that Episode 3 of "New Life in El Quebrados" is now in progress.

 

Since Episode 3 is going to be the final episode of Chapter 1, this episode will have less missions and probably more shooting. I'll try to finish the missions until September, since school starts.

[AnDReJ98]

 

I played ep.1 and ep.2 and i enjoyed playing it,just small bug,you forgot to hide actors at some missions,nevermind. Goodluck with this remake! Damn school.