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Shiva.

Episodes From San Andreas Army [Mission series]

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Shiva.

 

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This is my new Mission series. After completing my "Harsh Thunder" mission series, I'd like to proceed with the same enthusiasm to my new mission series. EFSAA contains three episodes(I'm not sure if it is going to be three) which is about the story of three different soldiers who fight like they never before did to rescue San Andreas. After completing an episode, I'll take a break and I will either start a new mini missionpack/mission series. I'd like to hear feedbacks.

 

Episode 1: The Man in Arms

 

Story

 

Tom Chist is an ambitious young man from Russia. He completed his college and he spends his life by writing novels and poems. He likes to lead a dangerous life. He decides to become a writer. But, later on he becomes inspired by his uncle who was a soldier in SAA (San Andreas Army). Tom decides to become a soldier. After several incidents in his life, he appears for the NAE (National Army Exam) and he becomes a soldier in SAA. But, his first step into army changes his life forever as his life becomes a survival game

 

Characters

 

Tom ChistHe is from Russia. He likes to write Novels. He was inspired by his uncle to become a soldierDustin KempHe is a good friend of Tom. He knows Tom from college. He likes to spend most of his life in gamblings. He was forced to join the army under the compulsion of his father.RichardHe is the member of the LITE 1 squad which is lead by Tom. He is young and efficient. He accompanies Tom in most of the tasksPaul WatsonHe is also a member of the LITE 1. He is also young and efficient and accompanies Tom in most of the tasks.John LawrenceHe is the head of the SAA. He is a gentleman and well experienced. He never likes law breaking. He works in SAA for more than 10 years.

 

Antagonists

 

Mark WilliamsHe is a druglord. He is dangerous and heavily guarded by goons. Rumour has that, he kills 50 people a month and racketing over 100 people a yearWayne JohnsonHe is an ex-soldier. He is now the leader of the civil group EZEE. He was kicked out from the army due to drug abuse. He is also the most wanted criminal of San Andreas.Jim BearerHe is the leader of a traitor group. He use to racket people for money. He is also involved in the Civil war which arose in San Andreas.Brian GallowsHe is the leader of a terrorism group. He bombed many places in San Andreas. The most remarkable one is the Bombing of the Commerce market in San Andreas. He makes may demands to San Andreas Goverment. If the goverment fails to meet his demands, he will plant a bomb somewhere in San Andreas.

 

Achievements/Titles

Achievements is an idea suggested by COOLMAN. They are just for fun. Every mission has an achievements

*Sharpshooter* - Kill all the EZEE crew members by shooting them in their head.

*I love foxes* - Complete the mission "Wayne Johnson"

*Live strong* - Complete the mission without failing.

*Air striker* - Finish the mission.

*Head busta'* - Shoot at the head of the machinegunner in the mission 'Dark Sky'.

 

 

Credits

Notna - Thanks for your amazing logo, friend.

SatournFan - Thanks for all your Russian translations, mate.

Alifjenius - Your S.A. Noire topic inspired me to make this topic.

Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - For making DYOM.

Doublepulse - For video reviews

All the people who're gonna play my mission and also people who visit this topic

 

 

Edited by shiva s

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xGhostx

A war theme mission pack, eh? My favorite, I will probably play it! colgate.gif Good luck icon14.gif

BTW, nice logo icon14.gif

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Shiva.
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Eh? I didn't really though you were going to start this. monocle.gif

Anyway, good luck.

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Shiva.
Eh? I didn't really though you were going to start this. monocle.gif

Anyway, good luck.

Hehe. Thanks, man. I wanted this to be a suprise. Can't wait for your feedbacks.

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IX-MJ-XI

 

Looks like War/ Soldiers/ Army theme is the most used these days. Anyways, this looks good and I will play the intro and give feedback! biggrin.gif

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Shiva.
Looks like War/ Soldiers/ Army theme is the most used these days. Anyways, this looks good and I will play the intro and give feedback! biggrin.gif

Thanks a lot, man. Can't wait for your feedbacks.

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Lee.

Played the 1st mission. It's really cool. I really loved the shootout biggrin.gif

But, what language does Tom use to speak to his friend/soldier?

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Shiva.
Played the 1st mission. It's really cool. I really loved the shootout biggrin.gif

But, what language does Tom use to speak to his friend/soldier?

Thanks a lot, friend. Gald you liked it. The language used is Russian because Tom is a Russian. Thanks once again. Btw, I'm playing your crisis day. Expect my feedbacks soon.

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IX-MJ-XI

Intro:

• The mission is overall nice and simply...... AWESOME!

• I like how the way you introduce the character. They got into a accident, problem happens then another one happen.

• Nice usage of cutscenes, explains a brief of history about the happenings, gangs, problems, and other important stuff. A additional point to me. biggrin.gif

• Good thing that you really put an effort to learn a bit of Russian, another plus on that.

• The shoot-out. Damn, nice, the covers, "head-shottable" enemies, simply flawless.

• There are some things you forgot. When about to face the enemies, you've equipped Tom with M4 (correct me if I'm wrong, if you put that on purpose). On the first cutscenes, you should've focused on Dustin or Tom when they are the one talking, since both of them are moving their hands, I don't know which one is who. There are also some typo, but nevermind that. Overall, the mission is awesome. KEEP THIS UP!

 

RATING:

4.1/5

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Intro:

• The mission is overall nice and simply...... AWESOME!

• I like how the way you introduce the character. They got into a accident, problem happens then another one happen.

• Nice usage of cutscenes, explains a brief of history about the happenings, gangs, problems, and other important stuff. A additional point to me. biggrin.gif

• Good thing that you really put an effort to learn a bit of Russian, another plus on that.

• The shoot-out. Damn, nice, the covers, "head-shottable" enemies, simply flawless.

• There are some things you forgot. When about to face the enemies, you've equipped Tom with M4 (correct me if I'm wrong, if you put that on purpose). On the first cutscenes, you should've focused on Dustin or Tom when they are the one talking, since both of them are moving their hands, I don't know which one is who. There are also some typo, but nevermind that. Overall, the mission is awesome. KEEP THIS UP!

 

RATING:

4.1/5

Thanks a lot for your detailed feedbacks, mate. Thanks for such a high rating. Glad you liked it. Yeah, Tom had a M4 in his hand. I think, it's some sort of bug.

Well, I asked SatournFan's help for the Russian language. You should appericiate him. Thanks once again. Can't wait for your feedbacks for the further missions.

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Doublepulse

Alright, I see the intro has been released. I will start commentating soon then biggrin.gif.

 

Good luck with this series man!

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Shiva.
Alright, I see the intro has been released. I will start commentating soon then biggrin.gif.

 

Good luck with this series man!

Thanks a lot, Doublepulse, really glad to get reviews from you. Can't wait for your reviews and feedbacks.

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Shiva.

Sorry ofr the double post but please don't consider this as an useless bump. But, I ewanna hear your opinion. Which you think is the best way of releasing?

- Releasing missions one by one?

- Releasing two or three missions at a time?

Tell me.

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Lee.
Sorry ofr the double post but please don't consider this as an useless bump. But, I ewanna hear your opinion. Which you think is the best way of releasing?

- Releasing missions one by one?

- Releasing two or three missions at a time?

Tell me.

It's your choice mate wink.gif

But I prefer to release 2 or 3 mission at the same time icon14.gif

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IX-MJ-XI
Sorry ofr the double post but please don't consider this as an useless bump. But, I ewanna hear your opinion. Which you think is the best way of releasing?

- Releasing missions one by one?

- Releasing two or three missions at a time?

Tell me.

As for me, as much as possible, 3-8 missions at a time. IT will be a less hustle to you and the players. But take note that, if making many missions take much time, which can cause you to lose some of your supporter.

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Shiva.

Thanks, guys. Much appericiated. But, I will be releasing only one mission today. I'll try my best to release more missions at a time. Thanks once again.

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Shiva.

Attention! The second mission has been released. Play and give feedbacks. I'd appericiate negative as well as positive feedbacks. From now, I'll be releasing two or three missions at a time.

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NothingSpecial

 

Downloading... wink.gif

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Shiva.

 

Downloading... wink.gif

LOL. Can't wait for "feedbacking".

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Yezz007

I played, liked the situation , Night and some mess up from his team.

But only one hard part for me:

finding the download link

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Shiva.
I played, liked the situation , Night and some mess up from his team.

But only one hard part for me:

finding the download link

Thanks, man.

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AnDReJ98
Goodluck with this! Mabey,when i have some time,i'll test it...

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Shiva.
Goodluck with this! Mabey,when i have some time,i'll test it...

Thanks, mate. I'll wait for your feedbacks.

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sayooj

hey man, a guy like you making a military theme missions pack will be awesome, but what happened to the storline life in purple shoes?

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Shiva.
hey man, a guy like you making a military theme missions pack will be awesome, but what happened to the storline life in purple shoes?

Thanks for the compliment. I may think about it in the future.

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Feedbacking...

 

Intro

Positive:

* Nice introduction.

* The shootout is epic!

* Approtiate animation for actors. See my MP for a good example.

Negative:

* Don't appreciate the camera angle so much.

* What was that weird languange? Germany?

 

Rating: 8/10

 

Wayne Johnson

Positive:

* Some quotes are funny.

* Finally the weird languange's translation.

* Makes me wonder what happened to Wayne's assistant.

 

Negatiive:

* None

 

Rating: 9/10

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Feedbacking...

 

Intro

Positive:

* Nice introduction.

* The shootout is epic!

* Approtiate animation for actors. See my MP for a good example.

Negative:

* Don't appreciate the camera angle so much.

* What was that weird languange? Germany?

 

Rating: 8/10

 

Wayne Johnson

Positive:

* Some quotes are funny.

* Finally the weird languange's translation.

* Makes me wonder what happened to Wayne's assistant.

 

Negatiive:

* None

 

Rating: 9/10

Thanks a lot, man. Glad you liked the shootout. The language used is Russian. Thanks for the negative points and such a high ratings. Love to hear more from you.

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Lee.

Well, I've played the 2nd mission (Sorry for the late feedback, didn't noticed it). I love how you use those Russian language to be a funny quote. But, the enemies accuracy is way to high (It's sets to 75? Maybe 100?), I died 4 times in the shootout. Anyway, awesome mission icon14.gif

 

Rating: 8/10

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Hey, it's okay, man. Infact, I feel happy that you've played my mission. Sorry about the high accuracy. I will improve it next time. Thanks for the high rating. Waiting for your feebacks for the further missions.

Btw, two more missions have been released. New achievements have been unlocked. Play and give feedbacks.

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