GTAIndonesia Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 (edited) GTAIndonesia presents Story James Trevor and his brother, Chris Trevor are starting a new life at Las Venturas To get away from problems at Liberty City at Las Venturas, things are fine until they got involved with Drugs, money, Mafia...... Characters: Allies James Trevor A 29 year-old man from Liberty City, he has a brother, Chris, they both came to Las Venturas to start a new chapter of their life Chris Trevor James brother, a bit annoying and clumsy, just can't get enough of things. Marcus "Mark" Jackson James' new best friend, met during a deal, and became good friens after Kate Chris' girlfriend, already dated for 5 years. Characters: Enemies Martinez and Sanchez 2 dealers that wanted to get revenge on Mark because he didn't pay on time ONCE. Rocko Caligula's Casino manager, very harsh, and owns a small time mafia. DOWNLOAD! Chapter One - New Beginning Edited April 26, 2012 by GTAIndonesia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NothingSpecial Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Looks promising. Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Goodluck with this! And logo looks cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Some pics, still in progress ^In action with Mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted April 26, 2012 Author Share Posted April 26, 2012 Chapter one uploaded! It's recomended after "The Damned Deal" Go to Chris first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 (edited) Played the storyline! Sorry man,but this hasn't been very good. Almost every mission started automatic 1 ,and in every mission was just to drive somewhere and kill someone... 2 I like when's there action and please while you making missions use more options from DYOM. (Many people say: there's no much options,but they are wrong. Coz they usually use checkpoint and killing people). Anyway,for some designers,i think if they play this,they should ask you how did you get LC and LC airport! 1 I expect Chapter 2 very better,then i'll give you rating. Now,rating should looks like this: 1 + 2 = 1 = = 1.5/5 Anyway goodluck! Edited April 26, 2012 by AnDReJ98 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted April 26, 2012 Author Share Posted April 26, 2012 Hey, that's embarrassing man, it is the Introductory missions anyway.... I'll work on chapter two better LC Was made with the LC Interior in Sain't Marks Bistro mission. The airport is an unused interior near the place where he said "After ive years on East Coast, it was time to go home" And used when he gets in the cab Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Don't worry man. Anyway thanks for the interiors. Yeah those are intruduction missions But i expected higger quality with your missions,coz you're 2011 designer. Anyway sorry,hope next will be better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 Anyway the Mission starting each other is a bug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted April 29, 2012 Share Posted April 29, 2012 Yeah! Do you know that in DYOM Support,everytime when someone requesting help from other people about starting automatic,on the end that topic gone... Anyhow for me. Automatic bug doesn't work (I had problem before). Now i don't have it,and i sent it as start autorun,and everything is ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted June 14, 2012 Author Share Posted June 14, 2012 Sorry because there has been no updates, But chapter 2 is on it's way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
