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MrcTOtheJ

Just read this, and I must say, I can’t wait for Act III.

 

Also the way Albert killed T-Ray was insane.

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@JayCMMX: Thank you so much! Literally blushing! I do plan to continue writing, as it is my passion! The whole idea for this story is to keep fans entertained while we wait for info from Rockstar... and it looks like it is working!

 

@Mr.c TO the J: ACT III is coming along very nicely. I'm going to take a break for the night, as my high is starting to die down, lol. I literally wrote 2,000 more words in the past hour. It's looking good, and I can't wait to share it. My goal is 6,000 words, like the last 2 parts. I imagine I will have it done by Friday.

 

and glad you liked that! smile.gif

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@JayCMMX: Thank you so much! Literally blushing! I do plan to continue writing, as it is my passion! The whole idea for this story is to keep fans entertained while we wait for info from Rockstar... and it looks like it is working!

 

@Mr.c TO the J: ACT III is coming along very nicely. I'm going to take a break for the night, as my high is starting to die down, lol. I literally wrote 2,000 more words in the past hour. It's looking good, and I can't wait to share it. My goal is 6,000 words, like the last 2 parts. I imagine I will have it done by Friday.

 

and glad you liked that! smile.gif

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This is a great story. Please continue to inspire us.

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@gta_fun: Thanks! Much appreciated! smile.gif

 

Going to get some things done around the house, then I am going to write some more. Here's a bit of a teaser... Al gets some small revenge on a minor character in the story.

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Who else thinks this reminds them of the GetALife building. wink.gif

YOUR A c*nt, he wrote a f*cking story, what is so sad about that? look at jk rowling, she writes f*cking stories and she has a hell of a lot better life than you will ever have, same goes to other ignorant c*nt whatever his name is.

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Wow.

 

Just wrote almost 600 more words. sh*t's getting pretty intense, let me tell you.

 

TEASER:

 

 

 

There's going to be a scene in my story that is like the intro to this movie.

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Wow GTA-King your detailed like a mug but I like it biggrin.gif good job icon14.gif

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@rere1love: Thanks! Much appreciated.

 

I'm tempted to post a paragraph from Act III...

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kingcs
@rere1love: Thanks! Much appreciated.

 

I'm tempted to post a paragraph from Act III...

That would be cool. I say go for it!

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@rere1love: Thanks! Much appreciated.

 

I'm tempted to post a paragraph from Act III...

Do it do it do it

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GTA-King

Well, I'll have Act III done pretty soon. So you guys just want to wait?

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Have Mercy
Well, I'll have Act III done pretty soon. So you guys just want to wait?

like today? if not today then now!

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GTA-King

Oh yes, I'd say it will be done by tonight for sure. smile.gif

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Yeah that would be great. At least I can have something to read and focus on in case the Knicks get their ass handed to them.

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Oh yes, I'd say it will be done by tonight for sure. smile.gif

Give us an est. time.

Like, "It'll be on here in 4 hours."

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I'd say by 9 EST time at the latest.

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Enjoy! smile.gif

 

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Al took one last look at the city, then walks back inside from the balcony. He looks at the divorce papers laying on the ground, picks them up, and signs them. He stuffs them into his coat pocket, and then heads out the front door to his car. The deal with the cartel was soon, and he had to pick up Mike. Al then drove to Mike’s hotel. As he was pulling up, he sees Mike standing by the curb, in his new suit. Mike gets in, and then they are off to the drug deal.

 

The deal was going to take place in the middle of the Pollos Hermanos desert, near an old shack. Splice gave them directions over the phone, then they arrived. 2 black SUV’s, and Splice’s car was already there. They were all standing in the middle. Al parked his car, then him and Mike walked over to the deal.

 

“This your guy?” said one of the cartel members.

 

“Yep, this is him.” Splice said.

 

Al raised his hand for a handshake, but the man didn’t return one.

 

“Splice says you have some valuable service you could offer us.” The man said, looking up from Al’s outstretched hand.

 

Al lowered his arm, and then grinned. He looked out towards the sunset. It was always so beautiful in the desert.

 

“Me and my partner here was in the airforce a while back. So we have excellent flight experience. I was told that smuggling drugs has become a bit of a problem for you?

Well, we can change that. We can guarantee your delivery, say as far as Red County. Then, it’s all a matter of transportation from that point. Which is where,” Al points to Slice, “the Jungle Kings fit in. They load up your drugs, and begin distribution on the streets. You make your cut in a safe, orderly fashion. No risk of being caught by border patrol. So what do you say?”

 

The man looked at his men, obviously impressed by the deal. Al caught a glimpse of Slice and Mike. Both looked absolutely shocked. The man then turned back to Al.

 

“And where do you plan on landing this plane?”

 

“I’ll have the place by the end of the week, don’t you worry.”

 

The man then looked back to speak with someone else. After a minute or so, he turned back to Al.

 

“You have until Friday.”

 

They then returned to their SUV’s, and drove off into the sunset. Mike turned to Al, and Al was ready for the explosion.

 

“ARE YOU CRAZY?! FLYING DRUGS OVER THE BORDER FOR THE CARTEL?! WE DON’T EVEN HAVE A DROP OFF POINT!!!”

 

“Mike, calm down and hear me out for a sec. It turns out I already have the spot, but you’ll just have to wait and see.” Al turned to Splice, ignoring Mike’s confused look.

“Splice, I’m going to need you to get some guys together, and meet me under the overpass on I5. Ok?”

 

“Sure, whatever you say dog. Mind letting me know the low-down of the situation?”

 

“No time, just get the guys together. Call me when they leave. Mike, let’s go.”

 

They walked back to the car, and drove off. After awhile, Mike finally looked away from the window.

 

“Care to fill me in now, Al? Exactly where are we going to find an airstrip?”

 

“Red County, at my former place of employment. We’re going to head over there after we meet up with Slice’s guys and we’re going to buy it, with Chris’ cut of the money. I think that would be a good investment, don’t you think?”

 

Mike looked stunned.

 

“And exactly when did you come up with all this?”

 

“It all hit me at once, today actually. I was standing on the balcony at the safe house, looking over at the city… and the idea just suddenly came to me. That’s not even half of it. I’m thinking that once we make some real money working with the cartel, we can make a name for ourselves in the city. Possibly even take over. How’s that sound?”

 

Mike rolled down his window and lit up a cigarette, shaking his head.

 

“I’m glad we had time to talk about this, Al. If we f*ck up with the cartel, it’s not going to just be a slap on the wrist. You realize what they do to people who crosses them?

Decapitation is one of them. I just hope you know what you are doing…”

 

“Mike trust me, it’s a full proof plan. All we have to do is fly. We will have a safe place to land, and then all we have to do is sit back and earn our cut. You just watch.”

 

“How about we just secure the air strip first?”

 

Al arrived at the overpass. He noticed Slice’s goons parked under it, so he drove up next to them.

 

“Get in.” Al said.

 

They did so, and then Al was off to Red County.

 

“So what’s the job?” asked one of the goons.

 

“The job is for you to enforce what I say today. If someone doesn’t agree with me, you are to punch them in the face… or use your imagination. Understand?”

 

“Gotcha, B.”

 

They arrived at Al’s former place of employment, the tourist airstrip in the middle of Red County. They got out of the car, then walked inside the building. Inside was a family of four, patiently waiting for their tour guide. Al’s former boss was behind the counter, talking with someone on the phone.

 

Al leaned towards Mike.

 

“Wait by the door.”

 

He then motioned Splice’s goons to follow. Al walked towards the counter, and rang the bell. Joe looked up from his desk, and his expression widened. He hung up the phone, got up, and walked towards Al.

 

“What in the f*ck makes you think it would be ok to walk back in here?”

 

Al put a briefcase full of Chris’ half of the money onto the counter, and opened it.

 

“Here’s $40,000 for the airstrip. I advise you take it.”

 

He looked down at the briefcase. He stared at it for a moment, almost not being able to look away, and he laughed.

 

“You come in here, after making the rudest of gestures to me when you quit, and have the f*cking NERVE to pull something like this! Why would I sell you my airstrip, huh? You degenerate!”

 

Al looked at his bodyguards, then back at Joe.

 

“Last warning. Accept the deal now, or face the consequences.”

 

Joe then looked at both the men, stunned.

 

“Who are they?” he asked.

 

“These are my businesses associates. They’re job is to enforce what I say. I literally will not take no for an answer. So either you sell me the air strip for $40,000… or things are going to get awfully physical around here.”

 

Joe looked scared now, but also a bit menacing. After a moment or two, he turned back to Al.

 

“$100,000 and it’s yours.”

 

Al shook his head.

 

“Sick ‘em.”

 

The goons grabbed Joe’s shirt, and pulled him across the counter. One of them kicked him right in the side of the face. Then the other picked him off the ground, and punched him right in the stomach, knocking him to the knees. Al walked over to him as one of the goons pulled his hair to face Al.

 

“But I already told you, Joe. $40,000. There’s no option in this. You take the money, and you leave. Simple as that.”

 

Joe was spitting blood onto the floor. He looked up at Al.

 

“But this air strip has been in my family for centuries, ever since air planes were first created! You know that!”

 

“Oh, I know that Joe. You’ve told me a hundred times. Frankly, I don’t give a f*ck. Never have. The point is, you’re going to sell me this place for the exact price I offered, or my boys here are going to do a bit more work on your face.”

 

Joe began sobbing now. After a few awkward moments listening to him cry, Al picked him up and sat him on a nearby bench.

 

“I’ll have you taken to the airport. Go start a new life in Vice City or something. If you were to tell the authorities about this, know that I have contacts that will not only hunt you down, cut off your head, and sh*t down your neck… but will also murder your entire f*cking family. You’ll be doing the right thing, trust me.”

 

Al heard Mike chuckle.

 

“O-o-okay!!! You will n-never see me again! I’ll move to Vice City, and never l-look back! Just please don’t hurt my f-f-family you f*cking b-bastard!”

 

“Just do as I say Joe, and they will remain unharmed. Get him to the car boys.”

 

The goons picked him up, and dragged him to the car. Mike opened the door for them. Al then turned to the family waiting in the waiting room.

 

“Sorry folks, all flights are cancelled for today. Please drive home safe!”

 

They grumbled, and then left. Al then walked over to Mike.

 

“You stay here and watch the fort. I’m going to drive Joe back to the city, and have Slice’s goons take him to the airport. I’ll be back soon. Get the cartel’s number from

Slice, and tell them we got the airstrip secured.”

 

Mike nodded his head, and then Al walked back to his car. Splice’s men were sitting in the backseat, with Joe in the middle of them. The drive back to the I5 underpass consisted of Joe sobbing and sniffeling… Al was glad to finally reach his destination.

 

“Alright, you guys get him to the airport… and make you watch him board a plane and leave the city.”

 

“No problem, Al.”

 

“Joe, don’t you ever set foot in this city again. You have lost all you’re LS privlages. Now, go enjoy your new life.”

 

Joe got out of the car, half sobbing… and walked with the goons to their car. Al then received a text from Mike.

 

Here’s the cartel’s number. They would like a word with you. 555-2405

 

Al saved the number in his contacts, then he called it. It rang only once.

 

“You work fast… this is very respectable. We would like to come down tomorrow to see the new management. In return, we would like to show you where we conduct our end of the business. Meet at some place.”

 

Al then hung up, smiling. He drove back to the airstrip. Mike was standing in one of the old airplane hangars.

 

“Wow… look at this plane. I believe this is the exact model me and you boosted in Liberty all those years ago, right?”

 

“Yep, sure is. The old Dodo. Ha ha, remember what that security guard did?” asked Al, laughing.

 

“Oh yeah, I remember. The dumb bastard tried to jump onto one of the wings as we were taking off. Kept saying, ‘you hoodlums are going to get yourself killed’ then you dipped the wing and he did a face plant on the runway. I believe we crashed it the sea near Bohan. We then swam to shore, and got drunk at that strip club. Man, that was one wild night!”

 

They both started laughing. After awhile, they walked back inside. Al began looking the place over, thinking of their next move. He turned to Mike.

 

“Well, I think the next step would be to see where we will be transporting from. I’ll make sure the deed to this place is signed, legally, by tonight. The cartel is coming by tomorrow to check the place over. Afterwards, I imagine they will want to take us to where the drugs are made. Probably get all plans in order, and I imagine we will be ready for business. Might be in this next month or so. We still need to get a proper system going here. We need forklifts, delivery trucks… the whole works. And most importantly, we are going to need to establish this place as some kind of front, otherwise we will be getting some heat very soon I’d imagine. So keep that in mind.”

They both shut all the lights off, and locked up. It was getting late. They walked back to the car, and Al drove back to the city once again. He dropped Mike off at his hotel.

 

“I’ll call you tomorrow once I learn when the cartel needs us at the strip. Start brainstorming ideas for a front. You were always good at that. See you tomorrow.”

 

Mike walked back into the hotel, as Al drove away. Where was Al to stay tonight? Al didn’t want to upset Kendra more, but he didn’t have anywhere else to go. Perhaps he could try and reason with her, make things right. Afterall, he’s doing this all for her and the kids. If she didn’t accept what he’s done to provide, then all is lost. He pulled into his driveway, and shut off the lights. After a few moments, he walked inside.

 

“Hello? Is anyone home?”

 

The house was dark, and empty. Al turned on the lights, and searched around. No one was home. He sat at the kitchen table. Perhaps they were at Kendra’s mother’s? Al then went upstairs to take a shower. Afterwards, he walked back down into the living room to watch a documentary about Domesti-bots, about how faulty wiring could lead them to having sex with your wife behind your back, heard the door open. He got up, and checked who it was. It was Kevin.

 

“Hey, son. Where have you been?”

 

“Out.” Kevin said, flatly. He then made his way upstairs.

 

“Well, do you by any chance have an idea where your mother is?”

 

“Nope. She was here when I left this morning. You too have been arguing right?”

 

Al turned away for a sec, unable to look him in the eyes.

 

“How… how did you know that?”

 

“Seen her this morning as I was leaving. She looked upset. Not in that mood she gets when it’s that time of the month. It’s that look only YOU can give her. So what’s going on?”

 

Al struggled for the right words.

 

“I believe that is as much as our business as you not telling us where you’re at all day. Care on shedding some light about that?”

 

Kevin looked at his father for a minute, and continued upstairs to his room. Al shook his head, and walked back into the living room. He ends up falling asleep on the recliner. The next day, he wakes up to the smell of bacon coming from the kitchen. He walks in, and sees Kendra cooking, and Lisa sitting at the table texting. Al made the table, and took a seat.

 

“So where was you last night?” Al asked, pouring him and his daugher a glass of orange juice.

Kendra looked up from the frying pan at Al, then at Lisa.

 

“Decided to visit my mother yesterday. Time got ahead of me, so me and Lisa jst decided to stay the night.”

 

Al knew what she was doing. Obviously she expected me to get the rest of my things out of the house while she was away. Also, she didn’t want Lisa to question the situation.

 

“Oh, it’s fine. I was just worried is all.”

 

Kendra made a loud cough, and handed Al his plate, then Lisa’s. She sat down and started eating. Lisa ignored the eggs and bacon in front of her, and continued to text. Al noticed this.

 

“Lisa, eat your breakfast. The bus will be here soon.”

 

“But I’m talking to this nice boy I met on my MyRoom page. He’s from Carcer City.”

 

“Oh, I’m sure he’s a nice boy if he’s from Carcer City. I thought I told you to watch who you talk to on that site? He could be some pedo for all you know. Nevermind, just turn that thing off and eat your breakfast.”

 

After a few moments of eating, Al looked up at Kendra. She was really trying to not to make eye contact with him, he could tell. Al then looked at the empty chair.

 

“I’m guessing Kevin won’t be joining us?”

 

“Nope, he rushed off this morning. It looked like he was running a bit late for something.” Kendra said, not looking up from the newspaper.

 

“Hopefully a job interview.”

 

Lisa’s bus finally arrived. She picked up her backpack, and gave her mom a hug. She ran over to Al, and he kissed her on the top of the head, and hugged her.

 

“Have a good day at school, honey.”

 

“I will dad. Love you!”

 

And she left. It was now just Kendra and Al at the table. After a few awkward moment of staring around the kitchen, Al finally made eye contact with Kendra.

 

“I believe we need to talk.”

 

“What is their to talk about?” Kendra said, he voice shaking a bit. “You’re a criminal. You’ve hid it from me all these years. How in the hell do expect me to react, Albert?”

 

“I’m hoping you at least realise the fact that the only reason I returned to this lifestyle was for you and the kids. Kendra, in just a little under a month I have paid off the mortage, and caught us up on all our bills. This is also for groceries, gas, college tuition for Lisa… and possibly even Kevin. Much more of a comfortable lifestyle. Everything is being handled in a professional manner. Here soon, even more money will be rolling in. So much, you will not believe. I will completely understand if you decide to leave me, Kendra. Just know that I love you and the kids, very, very much. Without my family, I have nothing to lose.”

 

Kendra looked down at her plate. She was obviously a bit torn by his words. After a few moments, she looked right into Al eyes, for the first time in days.

 

“I want you out of here by the end of the week. I’m keeping Lisa. If you come back, I will tell the police what you are. Get out.”

 

Al’s eyes tear up a bit. After all that he’s told her, he thought she would at least understand. She wouldn’t accept the sacrifices he’s made. There was no point in trying. He walked over to the coat hangar and reached into his coat pocket. He pulled out the signed divorce papers, and dropped them onto the table. Kendra looked down at them, her expression slightly surprised. Al took one last look at Kendra, and walked outside to his car. Kendra was probably bluffing, Al thought. No way she would ruin the family by turning him in. What would Lisa think? Al looked at his watch. He had to run by the courthouse to get the deed signed. After that was finished, he went to the hotel to pick Mike up.

 

“Al, I’m really onto something regarding a front for out airstrip.”

 

“Well, let’s hear it!”

 

“Ok, we use our money we earned from the jewelry store job and invest in our own fast food chain. Haven’t thought of a name yet, but this would provide perfect cover for our transportation and distribution. We fly the drugs over, and have them them put into trucks with our fast food logo on it. Hide them in the crates somehow, and ship them across the state. How’s that sound?”

 

“Seems like a full proof plan, but it will take months to get it up on it’s feet. Are you going to pitch that idea to the cartel today?”

 

“Yep. I’m hoping they will also help fund the operation.”

 

Al took the interstate to Red County. The cartel was going to meet them at the strip today, and look over the place. Afterwards, they were to drive back with them to their base of operation in Mexico. It was going to be a very busy day. He turned onto the dirt road leading to the strip. Looks like the cartel was already there. Al parked the car, and him and Mike walked over.

 

“Impressive.” Said the man in the pin stripe suit. “Care to show us around?”

 

“Not a problem. By the way, I haven’t caught your name yet.”

 

“Call me Raja.”

 

Al gave them a quick tour of the place, showing them exactly where shipping was going to be handled and whatnot. After about an hour, Raja had seen enough.

 

“It’s perfect. Now it’s time you seen our side of the operation.”

 

Al and Mike followed Raja and the cartel goons back to the SUV. The drive to Mexico wasn’t that bad… one of the perks of living in southern San Andreas. Border patrol gave the cartel boys a weird look though, but allowed them to pass. As they drove deeper into Mexico, Al noticed the differences in the areas pretty quick. There was an area for tourists, where kids played… and basically just a friendly enviroment. But as they got deeper, things started to change. The streets were more pulluted, graffitii everywhere. Al made out the words, “Sustantivo” which Al new was the drug cartel they were about to meet. Finally, they made it out of the city. The desert in Mexico was very brown. It looked almost like an old Clint Rickett film. They turned onto an old dirt road, between two mountains. It was a nice shady adrea, surrounded by trees. After a bit of a drive, they stopped at a security gate.

 

“It’s us.” Said Raja into the camera.

 

The gate opened, and they proceeded through. There were completely surrounded by trees now. Once the clearing was in view, Al noticed a big mansion. There was a fountain right in the middle, and gardners all around. The cartel member driving the SUV parked at the front entrance. They all got out.

 

“Follow me.” Raja said.

 

Al and Mike followed him into the house. Inside was absoluetly breathtaking. Al noticed the marble flooring, along with the big chandeloir that hung from the ceiling. At the top of the staircase, a door opened. A man with a cane walked out, followed by two other burly looking men.

 

“Gentlemen! Welcome to my home! Raja, please… go get us some drinks!”

 

Al noticed a bit of animosity on Raja’s face. Nonetheless, he still did as he was told. The man with the cane approach Al and Mike, and embraced them into a handshake and hug.

 

“Raja has told me a lot about you boys. It’s good to finally meet you. Please, follow me out onto the patio. We have much to talk about.”

 

They followed the man through the house, and out the back door. There was a large pool, with neatly cut hedges. A few of them were cut to look like bobcats. Al noticed bobcat graffiti in town, so this was probably the cartel’s isignia. They down at one of the patio tables.

 

“I am Don Susantivo. And you must be Albert, correct?”

 

“Yes, and this is my partner Michael. He’s going to be helping me in this operation.”

 

Don Susantivo and Mike exchanged hand shakes. Raja came outside with drinks, and passed them to everyone.

 

“Ah, thank you very much Raja.” Said Don Susantivo.

 

Raja took a seat at the table opposite. There was sme sort of tension between them.

 

“Well now, onto business. I am told that the airstrip is ready on your side, and ready to transport our drugs to?”

 

“That is correct. We can begin delivery whenever is best for you.” Al said, taking a sip of the tequilla.

 

“Very good. I will take you to where we manufacture the drugs here shortly so you can get the idea. Now, about distribution. I am sure you are aware we are going to have to establish some kind of front if we are going to keep our operation out of the feds noses?”

 

“Very much, Don Susantivo.” Said Mike. “It so happens that I already have an idea in mind that I would like to share with you.”

 

Mike pitched the fast food chain idea to him. After a couple of hours talking it through, Don Susantivo agreed to fully fund this venture, as it would be a wise investment.

 

“All you need to do is come up with a name now. Something creative, and catchy. I expect it to be up in running in the next couple of months. Now, let me show you boys what you will be transporting.”

 

They walked down a dirt trail behind the house. After a little way, they came out onto a grassy pasture. There were people tending to some, what looked like, giant pot fields. A duster plane flew over them. The pilot obviously didn’t have much experience, as the wings were rocking back and forth. Red mist flew out the back onto the plants. Some of it fell onto the people, making them violently cough. Al shook his head. No wonder they needed pilots. They walked into the facility. Inside was shelves upon shelves of drugs ready to be delivered… all wrapped up and ready to go. Al noticed one of the packages.

 

“Is this… meth?”

 

Don Susantivo turned around.

 

“Oh yes. Methamphetamine and Marijuana is what you will be shipping. This is where we store all the drugs ready to be shipped. The next room over is the meth lab. We won’t go in there though, because they are in the middle of a cook. As you’ve already seen, we have acres of pot fields. That pilot you seen spraying the fields, Chavez, he’s my nephew. He tries his best to help out… but sometimes I can do without. Anyways, the airstrip is out back.”

 

They walked back outside. There was about half a mile of runway. Perfect. There was also an hangar, with a charter plane in it.

 

“This is the plane you will be using for deliveries. It’s fully stocked, shouldn’t be a problem for you.”

 

Al and Mike checked the plane out. It looked new. There was plenty of room for storage in the back. Looked like it would work out perfectly.

 

“Well, that concludes our meeting gentleman. You will both receive increments that will total up to 1,000,000 a month for you flight services. I’m ready to start business right away.”

 

One of his henchman handed Mike a briefcase.

 

“There’s $500,000 there. Use that to get the front up ‘n running.

 

“Up ‘N Atom Burgers.” Mike said, out of the blue.

 

Don Susantivo looked surprised, as did Al.

 

“That will be the name of the restraunt. Up as in the planes we fly delivering the drugs. And Atom, as in the drugs themselves being the ‘bomb.’ The idea hit me all at once.”

 

Al slapped Mike on the back. Very clever.

 

“I like it! Well, looks like you’ve settled on the name. Now all that’s left is establishing the business. You need to buy delivery trucks, forklifts, a location for the restraunt… not to mention labor workers, which I could provide you with. Things will work out. I’ll contact you boys in a couple months to see how things are going. Please, take this plane as a token of my gratitude.”

 

“Thank you, Don Susantivo.”

 

They all exchanged handshakes. Al and Mike then climbed into the plane, and flew back to the air strip in Red County. During the next few months, Al and Mike found a location for the restraunt, just off Venice Beach. Mike hired one of the best chefs in Vinewood to cook for the restraunt. Al handled getting the delivery trucks and fork lifts together, not to mention the laborers needed for the job. He had a storage facility built at the strip, just in case they ever went over quota. By the end of the summer, there were ready to starting transporting. Al phoned up the cartel, giving them the green light.

 

“We are all set on our end. Ready to start transportation when you are.”

 

“The first shipment will be ready this weekend.”

 

The next couple months consisted of Al and Mike flying over to Mexico to pick up the drugs. They always were accompanied by one of Slice’s goons. Sometimes Mike would go, and sometimes Al would go. It all became very routine. Al’s relationship with Kendra seemed to get better, even though he has been staying in a room at Mike’s hotel. They came into contact one day as Al was picking Lisa up from school. Apparently they got the days mixed up when they would be picking her up. Kendra smiled at Al, and took Lisa home. He doubted she was serious about the divorce. Al wasn’t for sure if it would be smart to start sending them money just yet. He would slowly work up to that. He had no idea what Kevin had been up to. He only seen him about once every few weeks.

 

Al drove over to the restraunt to check on the business. Customers really liked the burgers. That chef from Vinewood was really out-doing himself. Al walked into the backroom where Mike was.

 

“Business is doing good, Al. Just delivered another shipment yesterday. We’ve made $2,000,000 from shipments alone… not to mention earning from the restraunt. The place is a big hit! We’re going to have to start buying more property soon with the money we are raking in… can’t launder it all here.”

 

“Agreed. We will have more money than we know what to do with before we know it. I think the next step would be to hire a lawyer to help take care of legal obligations. How’s Slice holding up his side of the operation?”

 

“Apparently, sales on the street have sky rocketed. They never had a direct line to shipments, and they can get drugs on the street at a lot quicker pace now. Things are going good my man. We’re setting our mark in this city. To think, I’d still be in Liberty making chump change if it wasn’t for you.”

 

Al sat down at the desk. This… this was the life he left behind all those years ago. The criminal life. How could he have left this all behind? Al turned the chair to face the window behind him. Mike walked out of the office to check on the customers. Everything was almost perfect. Once things worked out between him and Kendra, he could provide them with the lifestyle he envisioned all them years ago. The perfect American Dream.

 

“This is MY town now.” Al grinned.

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Sneakerhead.

Shouldn't this be in the writers topic?

 

Also I came here expecting info about that albert guy, ah well, I guess that's what I get for getting my hopes up. sad.gif

 

Good story though! icon14.gif

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018361

I will try to read this, but I'd rather wait for the movie to come out.

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GTA-King

 

Shouldn't this be in the writers topic?

 

Also I came here expecting info about that albert guy, ah well, I guess that's what I get for getting my hopes up. sad.gif

 

Good story though! icon14.gif

No. Read through the topic and you will realise the sole purpose of this story is to maintain hype while we wait for more info.

 

Thanks though!

 

@018361: It will be worth your time. Be sure to read part 1 and2 first if you haven't already.

 

Added Act III to first post. Will start on Act IV: The Riches once the weekend is over.

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A short description of Act IV: The Riches.

 

Al and Mike's criminal network begins to attract new attention. Especially people from the higher class. Al starts buying up new property around Los Santos in order to launder his money. Things are going well for him, besides the NARC unit pestering him for info about the Jungle Kings. Kendra begins to accept what Al is, even taking some of the money he offers her.

 

Well, Al soon becomes drunk with power. Buys stuff he doesn't need, even alienating his closest allies. He forgot how lucrative the criminal life was, and he begins a downward spiral. The biggest twist thus far will be the one that saves him from damnation.

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D3L3TD

Brilliant! smile.gif

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Racecarlock

Still a good story, and still great to read. Especially the way you worked in up n' atom burgers. I can't wait to see what you'll work in next.

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grope_4_that_date

I appreciate this topic. This is what being a fan is all about. Good job GTA-King. Respect. icon14.gif

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xAvenged7x

Just finished reading Part 3, and I gotta say, you're amazing. I'm looking forward to the next part of this story, almost as much as i'm looking forward to GTA V info. It's beautifully written, and i'm jealous that I can't write that good. Hurry up and finish Part 4!

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Still a good story, and still great to read. Especially the way you worked in up n' atom burgers. I can't wait to see what you'll work in next.

Thanks! I'm going to try my best and work in every scene from the trailer. There's about 5 left I haven't used. You really have to play close attention in order to catch them. Perhaps I'll point them all out later on.

 

@grope_4_that_date: Thanks alot man! Respect to you too! smile.gif

 

@xAvenged7x: Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated! Writing is my passion. The show Breaking Bad is known for great writing, which is what my story is inspired by. I try to incorporate elements from that story into my own to create something unique.

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GTAboyWonder

God I wish this were the real GTA V story. biggrin.gif

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God I wish this were the real GTA V story. biggrin.gif

Glad you liked it! icon14.gif

 

Will start on Act IV next week. Going to hang with some friends this weekend and see The Avengers. Just expect Act IV to show off the more richer side of Los Santos, which includes Vinewood! Shifty41s_beerhatsmilie2.gif

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MrcTOtheJ

Great addition to this already awesome story, nice to see them getting everything up and running, keep up the good work, and enjoy the movie this weekend man.

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Still a good story, and still great to read. Especially the way you worked in up n' atom burgers. I can't wait to see what you'll work in next.

Thanks! I'm going to try my best and work in every scene from the trailer. There's about 5 left I haven't used. You really have to play close attention in order to catch them. Perhaps I'll point them all out later on.

 

@grope_4_that_date: Thanks alot man! Respect to you too! smile.gif

 

@xAvenged7x: Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated! Writing is my passion. The show Breaking Bad is known for great writing, which is what my story is inspired by. I try to incorporate elements from that story into my own to create something unique.

Off topic but ohh well.

How is Breaking Bad? I think im gonna start watching it (from the start obviously). Is it like this? A sorta rags-to-riches story?

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