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GTA-King

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Gtaghost22

Nice.. You have some really good writing skills mate, keep up the good work smile.gif

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Fireboyd78

I love how you incorporate aspects from the trailer into your story. What a way for T-Ray to die, lol.

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Racecarlock

Man, when you included the monologue from the trailer I just about freaked out. This IS rockstar level writing. This is writing at it's best. Are you going to make an act 3? Please say yes.

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walkingsickness

for the people who are saying "I didn't even read the post"...but yet you still want to

comment on it...that's why we come out with words like "toll" and "trolling"

 

What sense does it make for you to respond about a post that you didn't even read...

 

OT: Great concept bro...keep doing your thing.

 

Also another thing...for the ones that are saying Albert is not the protag, its a CONCEPT!

NOT the actuality of the game

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GTA-King

@Gtaghost22: Thanks man, appreciate that!

 

@CarLuver69: Thanks! And yeah, I like to throws those in as "easter eggs". smile.gif

 

@Racecarlock: Thank you so much! That really means alot to me. And yeah, I was excied putting the monologue into context. Next I will be writing Act III: The Cartel. I've got a lot of tricks up my sleeve for it, so embrace yourself!

 

@walkingsickness: Thank you! And I will! smile.gif

 

When I get home from work I'm going to fix some grammar errors in Act II, then I MIGHT start on Act III. It depends how I feel. I'm going to try and get it done sooner though, because I hear it could be possible R* is going to release more info sooner than we thought.

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Leve-O

Great story man. I really enjoyed it!

 

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Sean5

 

I am so tempted to write a negative response, it's killing me.

 

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who cares?

Nice story by the way lol.gif

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Racecarlock

I'd rather you didn't rush it. Good writing takes time. However, you could always take a short clipping from future acts and post it here as a preview. Like how game companies release trailers. Only, you should probably post previews more often than rockstar does.

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GTA-King

 

I'd rather you didn't rush it. Good writing takes time. However, you could always take a short clipping from future acts and post it here as a preview. Like how game companies release trailers. Only, you should probably post previews more often than rockstar does.

You're right. I'm just afraid people will lose interest if more V info comes out soon like they said. The whole idea of me even doing this story was to keep everyone entertained while we wait.

 

And here's what Act III: The Cartel is going to be about...

 

Al and Mike attend the deal between the Jungle Kings and the Cartel. Al offers his services as a pilot for the Cartel, delivering drug shipment so they don't have to deal with border patrol. They then begin working for them, raking in in thousands of dollars. Al tells Mike he plans to start his own criminal empire by buying businesses that are about to flop. I don't want to ruin the surprise, so long story short, Al is establishing himself as a Vinewood Hotshot/Drug King Pin in Los Santos. Oh, and something really dramatic is going to involve his family!

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GTA-King

Update:

 

Fixed alot of grammar errors in Act II and started writing Act III. Got about 4 paragraphs so far. Act III marks the official start of Albert's rise in the criminal underworld of Los Santos. So embrace yourselves!

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TrialzGTAS

Did you go to a special school for writing? Damn, this is mad good!

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GTA-King

Update:

 

Added new logos to the first post, and typed 3 more paragraphs of Act III: The Cartel. Up 'N Atom Burgers = A Front. Enough said about that... tounge.gif

 

Just expect something like this:

 

 

 

p.s. it looks like my story is starting to lose interest. *sigh*

 

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Racecarlock

If they do come out with new info, all you'll have to do is declare the story fan fiction. They'll probably release a screenshot, then go back to sleep for 5 more months.

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GTA-King
If they do come out with new info, all you'll have to do is declare the story fan fiction. They'll probably release a screenshot, then go back to sleep for 5 more months.

True. Regardless though, I tend to see this story to the end.

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domnage

I bet Rockstar already saw this. They do read these forums haha

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Akavari

Shouldn't this be classified as a concept/writers project? Not trying to instigate or anything but I feel like it's out of place in the forum for GTAV even though it takes place in it.

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GTA-King
Shouldn't this be classified as a concept/writers project? Not trying to instigate or anything but I feel like it's out of place in the forum for GTAV even though it takes place in it.

You may be right, although the whole point I made this was because I wanted to keep the hype for V going by offering my version of the story to allow people to be immersed when reading it, thus creating hype. So I think it does belong here, just for that.

 

The mods haven't said anything about it, so I think it's alright.

 

You should read it when you get a chance. icon14.gif

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locolow2011

Hey man, just read act II, haven't been here for a while, i have to say i really enjoy reading your stuff, it really gets me hooked you know?

 

Also i've been watching the 2 first Breaking Bad seasons and i can see where your inspiration comes from, amongst other things, i absolutely love how you implement things from the trailer and the GTA world into your story, its a very subtle effect but reminds me that its still GTA.

 

About the story, i really didn't think T-Ray would do something like that, being a womanizing gangmember and all that stuff,

i hope Rockstar releases a new trailer soon so that you might be able to include some of the parts from the new trailer into the story, anyways great job dude and like Racecar said don't rush it, all works of art end up better without any rush or pressure into it.

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GTA-King

@locolow2011: Thank you for your wonderful feedback! Breaking Bad is my favorite show of all time. Alot of aspects from that show works in my story, while still being original and entertaining. Also, I plan to keep using scenes from the trailer, but I must admit, I'm starting to run out. Anyways, I'm really glad you rnjoyed my story man, it makes me happy to know I'm still getting hyped up while we wait for more info from Rockstar. Stay tuned for Act 3: The Cartel coming soon!

 

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Have Mercy

HURRY UP WITH PART 3!!!! I CHECK EVERYDAY FOR IT!!! IM HOOKED!!!

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GTA-King

I'm seriously sorry for the big delay everyone. I've been working 7 days a week for the past 2 weeks at my new job. I seriously hate it. Might quit soon. Anyway, I've been so tired when I get home. Only have about 3 paragraphs for Act 3. I'm really going to crack down whenever I finally get a f*cking day off.

 

But yeah, you all are going to really enjoy it. In Act 3, Al officially starts his rise through Los Santos' criminal underworld... and that's all I'm saying lol. Just think Gus from Breaking Bad. icon14.gif

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dansgas1000

HOLY HOLY MOLY HOLY CRAP CARP CRAPPY THATS ALOT OF WRITING BLOODY GOOD JOB!!!

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D3L3TD

bumping this thread to see the status on the story smile.gif

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GTA-King

Oh man... I was hoping people forgot about this, lol.

 

Honestly, I gave up on it due to the stress of my last job. Had to work 7 days a week. Well, I recently quit, so I'll have alot of time to get the story finished. Matter of fact, I'm going to make it a point to get part 3 finished by the end of the week. So stay tuned! smile.gif

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Carmelo

TL;DR

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GTA-King
TL;DR

You're going places, kid. icon14.gif

 

Think I might start writing again here soon after I burn one.

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Carmelo

lol nah I'm playing, will read later on.

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dont_feed_the_troll

when i just clicked this topic i thought u had ACT 3 done but sadly no. sad.gif

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GTA-King

 

when i just clicked this topic i thought u had ACT 3 done but sadly no. sad.gif

Just started writing again. Pretty much in the zone right now after smoking that bowl, lol. I'll have it done by Friday.

 

You guys are in for a treat let me tell you. All I'm going to say is that by the end of Act III, Albert is going to turn into Gus from Breaking Bad.

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JayCMMX

I have been a member of these forums since 2001, and I have to tell you...

 

I honor the work you've put into these original writings. Thank you, much respect! I can only hope you'll be around here well into the future with your talented writing and other quality contributions. icon14.gif

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