Kwabs Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Wow, that's an awesome trick Nitesh Will keep that one in mind... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 Played the 4th and 5th mission. Wow, the case become interesting and it makes me want to play more. I loved the conversation things, it's very creative! Nice idea. I liked the story of Ian. He has a secret that even his friends didn't know what is it. A very great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted March 12, 2012 Author Share Posted March 12, 2012 Thanks for playing and giving feedback Arejai. Glad you liked the missions. None of the characters mentioned so far knows of that secret yet. You will find out more about Ian's past story in the next chapters. Thanks again, Arejai, I really appreciate it. I will start working on the next mission later today, so I may release it tomorrow. Chapter 2 will have more gameplay and action compared to chapter 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuntzman Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 (edited) Hell, that's clever. I'll add it to my trick topic, if you don't mind. I'd credit you. I tried viewing it with camhack, and found a car exploding there, I was like wtf Edited March 12, 2012 by Stuntzman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted March 12, 2012 Author Share Posted March 12, 2012 Thanks. Of course you can add it in your trick topic. I have no problem with that. Just try to break it down in steps so that it's more clearer instead of using paragraphs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 New mission: Let the fun begin uploaded. Have fun and your feedback, question and thoughts will be highly appreciated. If you find any bugs in the mission even if they are minor, please report them so that I can try to fix them before releasing the chapter zip files and the final zip file. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 1, 2012 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 (edited) New mission uploaded: It just happens.. Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Note: Have used a new trick in the mission, so if you have any questions on that or even suggestions please give them. Thanks. Spoiler ahead, do not read if you haven't played the mission yet. In this mission you find out that YOU HAVE BEEN FOOLED HAHA. Oh btw, this is not a useless bump. Also wanted to say that this is not dropped or forgotten. My PC is not working since two weeks now so I couldn't make and play any missions. You can expect a new mission with the same title as soon as it is fixed. Have a good day and a request, please don't spoil the fun by revealing this. Thanks. Edited April 1, 2012 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Played the mission, it's short but cool cause of the trick It's awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 It's not hard to understand that it's a joke, because the link leads me to the picture. Anyway, nice try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 1, 2012 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 @Notna Thanks for playing and glad you liked the trick. More missions coming soon. @SF Thanks for playing. A simple yet effective trick, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwabs Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Played the mission. It's a nice idea but I didn't expect that from you But I didn't play this MP yet. I 'll play all the missions and give you feedback a'ight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 6, 2012 Author Share Posted April 6, 2012 New mission uploaded: It just happens.. Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Please report any bugs so that I can have them fixed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 Played the 6th and 7th mission. Wow, I loved the parkour challenge. It's very enjoyable even though I failed it 2 times. About the 7th mission, you can make some cutscenes about how Helena is shot by the enemy. But, it's still a good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 10, 2012 Author Share Posted April 10, 2012 Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback. Well, I had in mind about showing how Helena was injured, but it wouldn't have been possible because the player could have driven to any possible position in SA, while attacking/being attacked by those guys. So it was impossible to determine where I should keep the cutscene. Anyway, it can be even possible that Helena would have been injured because of car bumps and not being shot. In the objective text, I had just said Helena is hurt, not how she was hurt. Thanks again for playing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwabs Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 (edited) Okay, I finally played your MP. But only chapter 1. So, here're my thoughts. Mission 1: I already give you my thoughts about it on the 1st page. Mission 2: You made little typos ("hve" instead of "have") Except that, great. I've no words for it, it's great. Mission 3: I like the race but all those checkpoints are close to each other. And it's amazing how you made that accident. HOW??? But it's kinda short. Mission 4: Again some little typos. But I just couldn't complete the investigation. So I just started shooting at sh*t and the gas tanks of parked cars, then firetrucks spawned and I shot those too. Till I accindently jumped on that bullet So it wasn't very clear to me. I also saw one of those cars of the dialogue explode when I arrived at the LSPD. Mission 5: Those little typos again. It was very interesting, but we only needed to drive to Anthony's place. So, a few questions. Did Ian kill helena?? If so, why did he kill her?? How can Anthony still work if he's blind (or however it's called)?? Going to play chapter 2 soon. It's a great MP nitesh, keep it up Though, I can't give negative feedback to better designers than me. So there're no negative things I pointed out. Or that's just because there're no negative things to point out Edited April 11, 2012 by ThaBoY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 12, 2012 Author Share Posted April 12, 2012 Thanks for playing and the feedback. I'll be careful with the typos in the future missions. The bullet is actually an object that I have kept near the car. The checkpoint is kept small, so that may have been the problem. About the questions, without spoiling anything, I will just say you have to find out by playing the rest of the MP. Thanks again for playing and giving feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted April 16, 2012 Author Share Posted April 16, 2012 Sorry for the double post. This mission pack is on hold for some time because I am away from home and so don't have access to my PC. The third mission of chapter 2, Testing my skills, is already in progress (Around 30 objectives has been done). A small optional questionnaire for those who have played or are going to play this MP. Please give your answers in spoiler tags. 1. What do you think about the story so far? 2. Was it a good idea to start with the suicide and investigations first and then bring a flashback of Ian's story or I should have just gone linear (starting with Ian's story and continuing with the events)? 3. How did I do on designing the investigations and questioning missions? Any suggestions for improving them? 4. There is a line (Only 1 sentence from a dialogue) I have used in chapter 1 which hints to a very important aspect of the mission pack. Have you noticed it? If yes, what did it hint at? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 7, 2012 Author Share Posted May 7, 2012 New mission uploaded: Testing my skills Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Please report any bugs so that I can have them fixed. Optional questionnaire for chapter 1. (Please answer in spoiler tags): 1. What do you think about the story so far? 2. Was it a good idea to start with the suicide and investigations first and then bring a flashback of Ian's story or I should have just gone linear (starting with Ian's story and continuing with the events)? 3. How did I do on designing the investigations and questioning missions? Any suggestions for improving them? 4. There is a line (Only 1 sentence from a dialogue) I have used in chapter 1 which hints to a very important aspect of the mission pack. Have you noticed it? Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonFedrizzi Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 (edited) Just finished playing your missions, and, man, they are great! I really felt confused and kinda' "excited", it's like that 'investigation' atmosphere... I have some theories until the moment, but I really think that I'm missing something, and that's what make this kind of missions awesome. It's like if you were in a dark room, and could only see what's very close to you; there's still more and more to see and to discover... man, congratulations. Oh, I answered the questionnaire: 1 - I think that the story is great - you really feel like a detective, and it's like 'nobody is 100% trustable', I mean, you're always discovering more and more things... It's great. Great story, great missions. 2 - Honestly, I prefer those 'flashbacks', I think it is more like 'misterious'. I mean, you start the first mission thinking that the cops are 'good' and that they have a 'clean' past and things, so it's really nice when you find out that it's not really like that... (Although I focused on Ian when Anthony told about Helena's ex). 3 - In my opinion, there's nothing to change - they're cool, both the questionning and the investigating missions. But, if you want a suggestion, you could try a "1st person camera" on the questionning scenes. It's not necessary, it's just an idea. Things are good the way they are. 4 - Uhmm... I don't think I have noticed the "right" sentence, but I have some 'ideas' and theories of what happened from some things of each character that I noticed. But, from my 'thinking line', I think Anthony is the actual "murderer". Although I don't trust 100% on Ian, too... Oooh, if you really excuse me, I have a question about something in your missions: sometimes, for example, the checkpoint appears on the minimap, but the cops also talk when driving to its location, or in the scene when Helena "got hurt", the checkpoint changed location in my minimap. Could you tell me how do you do it, please? I found it great! Edited May 9, 2012 by DonFedrizzi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 9, 2012 Author Share Posted May 9, 2012 (edited) @DonFedrizzi Thanks for the feedback and answering the questions. I really appreciate it. I will not say much about your theory because I really don't want to spoil anything for you and the others, so I will say is you will have to find out. Thanks for thinking that out. Btw, what do you mean by "1st person camera" in your suggestion? Please explain it a bit because I don't understand it. About your questions, click here to see how the 'marker appearing while dialogues' is done. About the changing checkpoint it's almost similar but you set the health of the car higher, spawn an enemy actor without any weapons in the car and add a friend actor nearby. Set the behavior of friend to hold position otherwise he will take the enemy actor out of the car. Give the friend actor any appropriate weapon (depending on the time when you want the checkpoint to change) so that he shoots the car to kill the enemy actor. Then create a checkpoint objective where you want the new marker to be. When the car is destroyed the objective is completed and the new marker of the checkpoint will appear. Don't forget to hide the two actors near the car, just in case someone curious goes to check the original marker. Thanks again for playing and giving feedback. Edited May 9, 2012 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonFedrizzi Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 Hey, thank you too much for the link and the explanation! I really appreciate it! And, again, congratulations for your great work - Oh, and about the '1st person camera' during questionning, I got inspired by the game LA Noire. There, when you 'interview' someone, you see the person from the eyes of the detective (in the case, from Ian's point of view). Sometimes you did something like that, so my suggestion is quite 'pointless'. Just to interrogate someone with the cutscenes camera showing the suspect, like if you were Ian... but, forget that... I think the missions are great just the way they are. My overall rating: 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 11, 2012 Author Share Posted May 11, 2012 I think I get what you mean by "1st person camera", and I might use it in a mini case that will be appearing in a later chapter. Thanks for the suggestion. Expect the next mission within 48 hrs. For those who are waiting for a zip file, only three missions, which shouldn't take a lot of time to make because I have almost everything planned, are remaining. Chapter 2 will contain a total of 6 mission. Originally it was 7 but I removed one because of a small change in the events of the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 12, 2012 Author Share Posted May 12, 2012 (edited) Sorry but double post, but.. New mission uploaded: Growing relations Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Please report any bugs so that I can have them fixed. Optional questionnaire for chapter 1. (Please answer in spoiler tags): 1. What do you think about the story so far? 2. Was it a good idea to start with the suicide and investigations first and then bring a flashback of Ian's story or I should have just gone linear (starting with Ian's story and continuing with the events)? 3. How did I do on designing the investigations and questioning missions? Any suggestions for improving them? 4. There is a line (Only 1 sentence from a dialogue) I have used in chapter 1 which hints to a very important aspect of the mission pack. Have you noticed it? Thanks. .... Only one more mission to go for the end of chapter 2. I realised that that the two missions can easily be made to fit in one. The zip file of chapter 2 will be released either tomorrow or on Monday. Edited May 12, 2012 by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonFedrizzi Posted May 14, 2012 Share Posted May 14, 2012 Just played the mission... Great work, it's awesome, the story, the mission... Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 18, 2012 Author Share Posted May 18, 2012 Thanks for playing the mission, DonFedrizzi. I have already made the last mission of chapter 2, but there's a bug, making the mission unplayable, which I will have to fix before releasing. I will try to fix it tomorrow and release it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted May 18, 2012 Share Posted May 18, 2012 Played some missions from chapter 1&2. I can say it was great. I like the type of mission-pack. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 19, 2012 Author Share Posted May 19, 2012 Thanks Andrej New mission uploaded: Hard Luck Click here to download the zip file containing the whole of Chapter 2. Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Please report any bugs so that I can have them fixed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lee. Posted May 21, 2012 Share Posted May 21, 2012 Played the Chapter 2 Nitesh. It was great as always. And, now I understand why Helena is killed (Or suicide). Maybe because Ian work at the LSPD, during that time Helena have a relationship with Anthony, and when Ian want to come back to Helena, Ian found that he already married with Anthony. That's just my thought. And, it was fun when the whole Chapter 2 is flashbacks missions. And, I found a mistake in the mission "Growing Relation". When we need to escape from those guys, why Ian said "quickly!" while he's driving the car? You can make his friends to said that, but it's not a major problem Anyway, great missions Nitesh. Waiting for the next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 Thanks for the feedback Lee. About the mistake, I can't remember it but I will check it out and if possible, fix it for the full zip file containing all the chapters. The next 3 chapters will still be a flashback. Thanks again for playing, giving feedback and sharing your thoughts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 After a long time, chapter 3: Start of a profession has started. I will be editing the main post soon. First mission uploaded: This is too easy! Have fun and your feedback, thoughts and questions will be highly appreciated. Please report any bugs so that I can have them fixed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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