Notna Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 (edited) Hey guys, this is my new mission pack. It is in progress and so far it consits of 2 missions. Cal Barrett is an assassin, who never misses. He's working for a man called Johnny Heckler. Cal has got a new job from Johnny. It should be as easy as all of his jobs are, and it is. But the job's consequences are all something completely different. The target is not a normal target - he is the 20-years old son of Marco Lambelli, the head of an Italian group, Lambelli crime family. Cal - without knowing the facts about his target - goes to complete the job, and now he has to face the rage of the Italian. But how does the Italians survive the reason, why the hell needs to be made bigger? Character Name Character Description Cal Barrett The protagonist/playable character. An assassin, who never misses. He has a great collection of guns, and his favourite fire arm is his Colt M1911A1-pistol. Johnny Heckler The mysterious boss of Barrett. Cal has never seen him or talked to him personally either. He was an assassin himself in the past. Marco Lambelli The leader of Lambelli Crime Family. Though guy, whose taste for a revenge never dies. Jesse Mendoza The best friend of Cal. He is a former assassin himself, and he is ready to help his pal in every situation. Chapter 1 Mission 1 - Cal Barrett - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17337 Mission 2 - Friends and broken tires http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17444 More coming soon. Edited February 18, 2012 by Notna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 Good luck with this man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 12, 2012 Author Share Posted February 12, 2012 Thanks, much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwabs Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 (edited) Sounds great Notna. I can't play the 1st mission now, but it's the 1st mission I 'll play when I've time. I wish you good luck with this Edited February 13, 2012 by ThaBoY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 12, 2012 Author Share Posted February 12, 2012 Thanks, appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 I like the story. Playing in a role of an assassin is what I like the most. Good luck with this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 Played the mission goodluck man.You are the first man which has helped me when i was new here,so goodluck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 12, 2012 Author Share Posted February 12, 2012 Thanks Jimmy, great this fits something you like much. And thanks Andrej, and well, you're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 I'm a big fan of assasin type of missions and I'm eagerly waiting for this from you. Good luck, Notna. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 What about James Parker? Is it finsihed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 13, 2012 Author Share Posted February 13, 2012 Thanks guys. SF, no, it isn't finished, but it is going to continue soon. UPDATE: Logo and headers added. Thanks UNRATED69. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ItsAllAboutGTA Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 Going to play this & give you feedback ! Goodluck,Notna ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alan Eastwood Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 I hope you finish this mission pack, I'll give you feedback, good luck with this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 13, 2012 Author Share Posted February 13, 2012 Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 Wow man! Awesome headers! And story too! Love assasination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 13, 2012 Author Share Posted February 13, 2012 Thanks, much appreciated. More missions coming soon. And thank UNRATED for the headers and the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SS Brigade Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 Looks Interesting , Good Luck ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 Looks Interesting , Good Luck ! You call it interesting, say good luck and give it thumbs down and sigh..... are you feelin' alright sir? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 2nd mission has been released. You can download it by clicking this link. Play, enjoy and give me feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 I've played both mission and here's my feedback First mission : 1. Why Johnny didn't know at first that the person Cal gotta killed is Marco's son? Johnny should know who is he first right? 2. You should teleport the player when he do a talking/phone call. I don't want to hear radio. 3. I love how you made the story. It's really awesome. It wasn't like I was expected Second mission : 1. You should make Cal's car locked. Since the tired broke. I just use the car to get to the gas station. 2. I love how you made the mechanic and the Lambelli's goon dead. 3. How did they know where Cal is? Just curious That's all my feedback on the first & second mission. I think that you are very improve from the old days. Rating on the first mission : 8.8/10 Rating on the second mission : 9.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 Wow, that's a great rating. To answer your questions: First mission: 1. He just had personal issues with Marco's son, he didn't know about his backgrounds. 2. Going to do that in future. 3. Thanks. Second mission: 1. I had that in mind first, but I forgot about it. 2. Yeah, I wanted to try something new. 3. They followed him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 (edited) Played the first mission. I liked the phone talking part near the dumbbin or dust bin. Awesome cutscenes. 4.5/5. EDIT: Forgot to close the BB codes Edited February 18, 2012 by shiva s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 Wow, a big rating, thanks shiva. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted February 29, 2012 Share Posted February 29, 2012 Played the 1st & 2nd missions. Sorry for a late feedback, but here's it. Firstly, I very loved the story because it's unique. I loved how you make the introduction(1st mission), it's a good beginning. About the target, he's 20 years old, but he looks old like 30 - 40. It's not very suitable actor, but it's just a small mistake. Doesn't matter. In the 2nd mission, you forgot to locked the car. Yes, I just can drive the car to the gas station. I liked how you chose the warehouse as the hideout. Good choice. Anyway, good luck and keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted February 29, 2012 Author Share Posted February 29, 2012 Thanks. I know that I made the target too old. I had a good story ready, but I made a little change to the targets age AFTER I had mission 1 ready. Thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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