Rewas Posted February 10, 2012 Share Posted February 10, 2012 (edited) Hello, I'm back, kinda. This is my Detective theme mission pack like Cold Year. My DYOM skills are rusty, because it's been a long time since I designed a mission. Also, I don't promise to finish this mission pack, because I won't make the cases so often and I have some school things to take care. Anyway, this thread will be updated later... Case Title Partner Case Type Victim Witnesses Download Link The First Case Mike Newrain Homicide Terry Love • Mai Snow Download Top Investigation Kevin Wright Homicide Aaron Smith • Alan Smith• Scruffy Download Back to the Case One Kevin Wright Homicide Derick Flaus None Download David Delington Debut: The First Case Age: 22 Desk: Homicide Homicide Detective from San Fierro. He came to Los Santos to find Nick Green and kill him, but still helps LSPD with the cases. Kevin Wright Debut: Top Investigation Age: 22 Desk: Homicide Partner in: Homicide cases Homicide Detective and Partner. He's kind and likes to fight with Justice. Chief Alan Smith "Where the f*ck is my coffee?" Debut: The First Case Age: 46 The Chief of Los Santos Police Department. He's lazy when it comes to paperwork and he can be pissed easily. Rod Fort Debut: The First Case Age: 37 Desk: Homicide The Captain of Homicide desk. He tries to be nice around the officers and the Chief. Sam Andreas "I'm the best of the best" Debut: Top Investigation (Top Detective) Age: 32 Desk: Solves all kinds of cases. Top Los Santos Detective. He thinks that he's the best of the best and the best in the world when it comes to solve the cases. Doctor Williams Wood "I'm happy to help" Debut: Top Investigation (Fingerprint Examination) Age: 48 Doctor of LSPD. He scans for fingerprints and checks dead bodies. Mike Newrain "This is going to be in the first page of LS News for sure" Debut: The First Case Age: 35 Partner in: The First Case "Los Santos News" reporter who also works with the police. He also gets double salary. Lucky him. Nick Green Debut: Back to the Case One Age: ?? The Most Wanted criminal in San Fierro. Came to Los Santos for unknown reason. David Delington is pursuing him. Edited February 16, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 10, 2012 Author Share Posted February 10, 2012 (edited) Organizer is a section that shows what special items David carries that often doesn't involve the cases. Item Description Received in Gave away in Detective's Badge Badge that every Detective carries it. Unknown - David's Phone David's phone that has tons of police numbers. Unknown - Terry's Phone Terry's Phone. It isn't checked yet. The First Case - White Buffalo Kevin's car, but David drives it more often. Top Investigation - February 16, 2012 - New Logo and New Case "Back to the Case One" February 11, 2012 - New Case "Top Investigation, Sub-titles added. February 10, 2012 - Ace Detective BEGINS! "The First Case" Old Detective Habits - Complete "The First Case" In Los Santos, we do different things - Complete "Top Investigation" Bad Old Memories - Complete "Back to the Case One" • LSPD, MOTHERf*ckA! - Carjack the Ballas in "The Visit" Edited February 16, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted February 10, 2012 Share Posted February 10, 2012 Lol. Love the Cheifs line. Good Luck coolman! Glad to see you back on the line Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted February 11, 2012 Share Posted February 11, 2012 Yeah, Coolman. Welcome back! Anyway, will play and post feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted February 11, 2012 Share Posted February 11, 2012 COOLMAN12234555896 (yeah, I learned his name) is back to designing, w00t, w00t? Kidding. Finally, we have another great designer back. Wish ya' luck, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 11, 2012 Author Share Posted February 11, 2012 Thanks, guys. Anyway, new case is now uploaded. Top Investigation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 Played the first 2 cases. Great beginning. It has a very good and exciting story. I loved the 2nd case because it has an actions and has more interesting points. One thing that amazed me is when Sam told that the guy in blue was Stone. It make me shocked. Never thought that they guy was the killer. Yeah, he looks like a normal people. The 1st one was really good too. But, the case is a popular cliche. You can use your creativity to add a different things in it. But, as I said, it's good. About the clue around the victim/dead body, don't put a big invisible checkpoint. Yes, I just walked one step and then I touched the checkpoint. Make it smaller and it'll be better. One more thing, there are some parts when we need to chase the suspect(just like the 1st case), our partner will suddenly dissapeared. I don't know, but maybe it's your style. But, in my opinion, just let them follow us. Overall, I loved both of them, and I loved the monologue. Really nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 12, 2012 Author Share Posted February 12, 2012 Played the first 2 cases. Great beginning. It has a very good and exciting story. I loved the 2nd case because it has an actions and has more interesting points. One thing that amazed me is when Sam told that the guy in blue was Stone. It make me shocked. Never thought that they guy was the killer. Yeah, he looks like a normal people. The 1st one was really good too. But, the case is a popular cliche. You can use your creativity to add a different things in it. But, as I said, it's good. About the clue around the victim/dead body, don't put a big invisible checkpoint. Yes, I just walked one step and then I touched the checkpoint. Make it smaller and it'll be better. One more thing, there are some parts when we need to chase the suspect(just like the 1st case), our partner will suddenly dissapeared. I don't know, but maybe it's your style. But, in my opinion, just let them follow us. Overall, I loved both of them, and I loved the monologue. Really nice job. In the 2nd case, the killers actually were his sons, but that old man was behind all this, so I guess he's the real killer. If I make smaller checkpoints, you won't now where to stand when examining clues/bodies, but I guess in the future cases, I'll make them smaller. I only make partners disappear when investigating the crime scenes. Anyway. thanks for your feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 16, 2012 Author Share Posted February 16, 2012 (edited) New Case Back to the Case One New Logo Edited February 16, 2012 by COOLMAN12234555896 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 This looks great, man. I like the ''Organizer'' section. Well thought Clue 6/7: can't.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 16, 2012 Author Share Posted February 16, 2012 This looks great, man. I like the ''Organizer'' section. Well thought Clue 6/7: can't.. Thanks, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnDReJ98 Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 Played first case! I can say it was good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 FUCCK YEAH!!!!! I have been waiting a long time for this, when Coolman returns to desigining. Good luck with this, and I shall give it a go later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rewas Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 @AnDReJ98 Thanks, but other cases are better than the first. @KaRzY6 I knew that you will be happy. Anyway, thanks and please post a feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 @KaRzY6 I knew that you will be happy. Anyway, thanks and please post a feedback Haha, ofcourse I will play this and post feedback. I hope you do well in this and keep designing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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