ToniForelli Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 (edited) Chapter 3 theme This is my second dyom mission pack and i'm not cancelling this one. It will be about three bikers having themselves into trouble or not and they are proantagonists from each gang, either enemies or friends. Joe: He is a former vice president of the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S(Bikers against stupid, terrible, asswiped, retarted, dumb sh*theads) returning from Vice City he saw that the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S are the weakest gang due to that Desert Racers teamed up with The Scottish MC and with The Triads(their former allies) and he will try to eliminate them whatever it takes. Ray: He is the member of The Scottish MC and a very loyal member in that gang. He has a spy in The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S gang. Who is he? Don't know? You will find out. Michael: He is the leader of Desert Racers a very powerful biker gang using the fastest bikes in San Andreas. He has an alliance to take down The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S, although he will take down other gangs to become a king pin in San Andreas. The chapter is done the trailer is in making. Although i would really want some guides to make a trailer when i'm going to make one. Biker gang that are against stupid, terrible, asswiped, retarted sh*theads. They were powerful gang with The Scottish MC and still were enemies. They had Triads with them, but now Downtown Koreans. Radio Station: K-DST Cars/Bikes: Silver Freeway Guns: 9mm, Sawn-off shotgun Members: Zane(leader) Malcolm(2nd leader) Joe Sam James Jack Joe's brother A biker gang from Scotland and were powerful gang until they joined an alliance with Desert Racers and Triads. They have the same goal as other alliance gangs and it is "To take down The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S" Radio Station: Radio X Cars/Bikes: Blue Freeway Guns: 9mm, Sawn-off shotgun, TEC-9 Members: Gordon(leader) Ray Andrew Alex A biker gang that went from the weakest to the strongest. They have an alliance with Triads and Scottish MC and their plan is "To take down The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S" although Desert Racers plan to wipe out them aswell. Radio Station: SF-UR Cars/Bikes: Blue PCJ-600 Guns: AK47, MP5 Members: Michael(leader) Josef Andrew Alex Dom Arnold Former allies with The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S and now with the alliance. Radio Station: Bounce Fm Cars/Bikes: Green Stratum Guns: 9mm, MAC-10, AK47 Members: Pak Yon(leader) Allies with The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S who send them half of the money they steal from The Triads and help them. Radio Station: CSR 103.9 Cars/Bikes: Light blue Merit Guns: Silenced pistol, MP5 Members: Sun Kinming(leader) Luk Strongest gang with Desert Racers and since Desert Racers blackmailed them, The Bezzinos are up against The B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S Radio Station: Master Sounds 98.3 Cars/Bikes: Black Sentinel, Golden Banshee and Red with yellow stripes Maverick(support and air by). Guns: Deagle, SPAS-12 Members: Lucas Bezzino(leader) Edited July 19, 2012 by ToniForelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 (edited) I'm listing every single character that appeared in missions.(1 mission is released a character will be added) Name Status Description Joe AliveHe is one of three biker proantagonists. He left San Andreas because The Scottish MC second leader is affilated with the cops and Joe shot him forcing him to leave San Andreas and live in Vice City for 8 years. Many years passed and he found out that there is the Alliance in the San Andreas. He will do anything just to take out the Alliance(Desert Racers, The Scottish MC, Triads). James AliveHe is Joe's friend. James is known for his drug trafficking, but it's uknown where he gets the drugs. He is a very loyal member in the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S due to that he succeded to blow up Desert Racers leader bikes in the past. Jack AliveHe is also Joe's friend and a very good gunman. The Scottish MC leader Gordon wants him dead because of his good accuracy with guns. Malcolm DeadHe is second leader and Zane's twin brother. He is one of two traitors in the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S gang and other gang member is unknown. Two gang members are the Alliance spies. Sam AliveHe is Joe's best friend and most trusted member in B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S. He was a former gang member in The Scottish MC until he betrayed them and joined B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S because what Zane told him while during a gang war about The Scottish MC. Zane AliveHe is the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S leader and founder, also Malcolm's twin brother. Zane is the best biker in San Andreas and is feared of his skills. Ray AliveHe is one of three biker proantagonists. He is the powerful gang member of The Scottish MC and nearly powerful than Gordon. He is also feared by his motorcycle skills and almost better than Zane. He was a former member of the Bezzino Crime Family, the best drivers and gunmen gang. Gordon AliveHe is the leader of The Scottish MC. He created a gang because he was thrown out from the gang called Biker Mafia. He had lots of members when he created a gang and has more due to that he wiped out the gang and surviving members joined The Scottish MC making him powerful opponent. Luk AliveHe is Sun Kinming's right hand man of the Downtown Koreans. He helped alot to B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S and with his bosses gang also helped them to rise to the top making Downtown Koreans main allies. Joe for some reason hates Luk. Sun KinMing AliveHe is the leader of Downtown Koreans. Sun has a cousin from the Triads, but he doesn't want to kill him nor fight him. He is known as "Soft Killer" due to that he is too kind to his enemies. Old Man Racer DeadHe is a retired leader of the Desert Racers. According to Joe he is a good biker(possibly his reflexes) and also he lives in The Scottish MC clubhouse due to that many assassins try to kill him. Raymond AliveThe main dealer of the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S gang(formerly, but now rejoins them) and he always works with James due to that he provides him with lots of drugs. He had enough cash to afford bodyguards and he left B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S for atleast 4 years. He now rejoins the gang and hoping that B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S will have enough money to get alot of guns. Andrew AliveDrug dealer of the Desert Racers. He is the most wanted person in San Andreas. Arnold AliveHe is their main gunman in Desert Racers. He is one of assassins in Desert Racers and is responsible for the attack of B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S clubhouse in the past. Alex AliveOne of the most strongest gang members in Desert Racers(not counting Dom and Michael). He is the one who hosts races and robs people. Josef AliveAnother assassin in Desert Racers and also manages snipers. He is famed by his assassinations that lowered Downtown Koreans gang turfs and Triads gained their territories because of him. Dom AliveMichael's cousin and he is the one who killed Joe's brother 13 years ago. Joe swore to kill him, but he never encountered him after his brothers death. Jeff AliveThe cop who is affilated with The Scottish MC and the one who made Joe leave San Andreas. Joe also tells Jeff to leave now, probably because he is feared and can destroy 1 gang without a problem. The Yardie drug lord Alive(Only in Investment(Spare)The drug organization leader(not from Jamaica) that is selling expensive weed(probably that's where the name came) and this drug lord has been enemies with most of the gangs in San Andreas due to that he steals drugs. Seville AliveYet another drug lord, but this one is more dangerous. He runs a drug factory with his farmers who have country rifles and their gun accuracy has trained them very good. Seville is also affilated with The Scottish MC due to them buying his drugs from him very oftenly. Dwayne AliveFormer shopkeeper who became rich by winning a lottery from Bezzinos. He quit Downtown Korean protection and signed in into Bezzino Families protection. However he respects his own enemies and also doesn't underestimate them, much like Sun KinMing. He often uses his own bodyguards instead of Bezzino Mafia members. Pak Yon AliveTriad leader and the guy who is also raided the B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S and the last surviving guy from these days. He is dumb muscle in his gang, but very strong and his vitality is impressive! In all gang history no one even the leaders was that powerul. Edited July 3, 2012 by ToniForelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted January 29, 2012 Author Share Posted January 29, 2012 (edited) Chapter 1(Joe) INTRO B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S Do You Have A Package? Extreme Shooters[1/2] Extreme Shooters[2/2] Getting The Score Even Sell And Get Ambushed Will you pass the test? InvestmentSpare Kill End ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Spare missions: Capture the Prize Prisoner Kill missions: Home Defenders Oh Joe Thought You've Died -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So Long You Bikers Savior Favor Want Some Money? Ask Dwayne Ransom Last Favor Money Talks, Guns Silence! Iced Business Edited July 19, 2012 by ToniForelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malikio12334566687 Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 Played the first 2 missions, and I really like this mission-pack. I think this is promising. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Converse Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 "The San Andreas Chapters" - Intro and B.A.S.T.A.R.D.S OK introduction. It was probably at standard, in terms of action. The bikers riding throughout the road was a good touch. But, I found it a bit "corny" when throughout that cutscene, one of the biker's said "Boo yeah, I like being a biker!" and the other said "Yeah, me too!". To me, that's just something a biker gang wouldn't say. At all. The grammar and punctuation, honestly, was below standard. There were errors in almost every text! You need to significantly improve on that. There was no need for part one and part two of the missions. Both of the missions should've been combined, because the first mission was pure cutscenes, and only lasted about 2 minutes! And the second mission just carried on from the first. So, you should've just combined them both as the first mission. The action was pretty suitable for a first mission. A simple shooting, nothing more, nothing less. The setting was suitable. The actor's animations were, unrealistic, to say the least. Sam's animation, wasn't even completed! He drove and stopped in the middle of the road! And when the protagonist said "Desert Riders are coming.", there was no-one coming. I waited for about a minute, and still nothing. You need to improve in terms of animations and actor realism, because it adds more realism if you complete the little things. You'd be surprised how much. Well, it was an OK start so far. But, if you were to transgress into a DYOM professional, you'd need to work on character's dialogues, grammar and punctuation and animations. Work on those, and you will aspire into a DYOM professional designer. Rating - 5.6/10. Review by Converse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 They're racers not riders because they collect racing type of bikes and they always start a illegal motocycle races. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 Mission Released Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwabs Posted February 1, 2012 Share Posted February 1, 2012 (edited) Going to give this a try. Just 1 thing. Could you use a smaller size for the letters? That's really big Edited February 1, 2012 by ThaBoY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 Lowered EDIT: Try the intro then go to second mission Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 Mission released Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 MISSION RELEASED damn i was temp banned for so long so i uploaded a mission called Extreme Shooters[2/2] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 (edited) Played the missions, you've done a really good job though you have made major mistakes. Also the first and second missions should've been combined. You forgot to hide some actors and made some placement mistakes and unneeded stuff. Overall the missions were good but I see you failed to make some changes which would've made your missions really cool. Good gameplay and style, amazing way you've made the missions! Keep it up! Anyways good job! Good work and good luck! _____________ If you need screenshots just tell me! Look at my bike... how do you expect me to pass the mission? Edited February 14, 2012 by abishai.kochara Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 A bug maybe? It didn't happen to me. Possibly a bug. EDIT: Did you've tried to somehow push the bike or punch it? It would work i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 A bug maybe? It didn't happen to me. Possibly a bug. Uhh.... that bike was like that in a cutscene and in this mission as well...... anyways do you need gameplay screenshots? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 I need them i think. I'm kinda busy right now so take some screenshots and then i will post them in the main page Screenshots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 15, 2012 Share Posted February 15, 2012 (edited) 'Kay then, I'll add you to the requests list here, expect them in some hours...... Also, my bike model is different so the bug.... I guess.... Edited February 15, 2012 by abishai.kochara Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 15, 2012 Author Share Posted February 15, 2012 Look at the size and other bike size. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 Mission released Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 21, 2012 Author Share Posted February 21, 2012 Hey guys i was thinking. Should i put such missions where you can choose to spare him or kill him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 24, 2012 Author Share Posted February 24, 2012 (edited) Mission released. This mission won't be big and you just have to bring the van to the dealer and avoid attention. Also i can give you all a hint for my next mission. That next mission i will be where you have to test your biker skills. Well have fun as usual. Also i need answers about this. Hey guys i was thinking. Should i put such missions where you can choose to spare him or kill him? Edited February 24, 2012 by ToniForelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kwabs Posted February 24, 2012 Share Posted February 24, 2012 (edited) Hey guys i was thinking. Should i put such missions where you can choose to spare him or kill him? It's cool but it isn't necassery. I think this is the best way to do it. At the end of the mission, add a cutscene like "sh*t, he escapes". Then make some cutscenes to make clear that you can choose to kill him. Like "catch him or kill him". Then add a running actor. Then add a timeout objective (between 6 and 10 seconds) with a description like "kill him or let him go". Then add a cutscene "to be continued". Just remember that the player's choice needs to affect the storyline. So you need to make 2 different missions after it. Maybe even 2 different endings... Edited February 24, 2012 by ThaBoY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 24, 2012 Author Share Posted February 24, 2012 I'm thinking the same. I have played GTA IV so many times so it's up to me. If the guy/girl likes this then i'm including this option. I know one mission(probably will be 30 or up and you will like it. It will be where you capture someone. Those Kill him or Spare him options are far away right now.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted February 25, 2012 Share Posted February 25, 2012 Yeah, make those! They're awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted February 25, 2012 Author Share Posted February 25, 2012 Different endings, different missions there will be for example i choose "Spare Him" and then you have to do that mission where you choose spare him, but not kill him. Don't worry i won't mess up the storyline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted March 7, 2012 Author Share Posted March 7, 2012 MISSION RELEASED! finally my long maths studies are over for now and i have created the mission. Sorry if i wasn't here for a bit long. Hope you enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted March 14, 2012 Author Share Posted March 14, 2012 Announcement This mission i am creating is spare or kill and it's the first one. So that's pretty much it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted March 21, 2012 Author Share Posted March 21, 2012 Mission released and the first spare or kill mission. Spare and kill are coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted April 8, 2012 Author Share Posted April 8, 2012 Released Spare part, Kill part and Ending when you do spare or kill. I almost forgot about my mission pack. Hope i will do this one as fast as i can . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted April 17, 2012 Author Share Posted April 17, 2012 Mission released. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted April 20, 2012 Author Share Posted April 20, 2012 Mission released Get ready to fight them . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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