Killing Grove Street's Garbage Collectors

[fatih54102]

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Firstly, iam sure you will love this mission.

Secondly, it has a lot of dumpers and actions.These are reason of why this mission is very good in another site.

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Storyline:

-You are Ryder, and you saw a lot of garbage packs in front of your home.

-Then you saw a big dumper,too.

-You said "Why you couldnt collect this garbages?" to a garbage collector

- And he said "We are in strike. Goverment doesnt give a sh*t"

-Then you killed it, but another collector saw you.

-And he crushed sidewalk and broke it, and he climb down and wanted to kill you with his big dumper. [screenshot]

-Then you phoned cj and said that "help me quickly" and he got there and recovered you from polices.

-Then you planted TNT to each collector's home.

-*There is a little bug there*

-Then another collector saw you again , but he pick many collectors on his dumper. And he tries to crush you.

-Then a collector tried to enter your home, but you jumped with jump stuff and killed him.

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Difficult: Medium

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Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16889

[Kwabs]

Well, I played it but I DON'T GET IT AT ALL.

 

But about your mission now,

It isn't bad but it isn't very good, somewhere between there, cause of this

 

I don't understand the story

 

- that's because of many spelling mistakes

- and because the story doesn't really make sense

 

It isn't realistic (I'm not talking about the story, cause the story is crazy enough )

 

- Cause suddently you teleport us to the roof with a heat seeking rocket launcher

- And suddently you teleport us on a dumper with Tempenny and Toreno shooting on us in a police car

- And suddently we have to walk over the roof of CJ's house and then suddently we're on Ryders roof

 

And there're some other things but I don't care about them (cause I also make such mistakes sometimes)

And of course now when you're reading this you think "What an a**hole "

But I'm not trying to put you down or something, I just say this to help you cause in made such mistakes by myself

 

Overall, it's a good mission.

But if you can work on that things, then it 'll be better

So please don't hate me cause of this post, okay

 

Wow...my longest feedback till now

[fatih54102]

Well, I played it but I DON'T GET IT AT ALL.

 

But about your mission now,

It isn't bad but it isn't very good, somewhere between there, cause of this

 

I don't understand the story

 

- that's because of many spelling mistakes

- and because the story doesn't really make sense

 

It isn't realistic (I'm not talking about the story, cause the story is crazy enough )

 

- Cause suddently you teleport us to the roof with a heat seeking rocket launcher

- And suddently you teleport us on a dumper with Tempenny and Toreno shooting on us in a police car

- And suddently we have to walk over the roof of CJ's house and then suddently we're on Ryders roof

 

And there're some other things but I don't care about them (cause I also make such mistakes sometimes)

And of course now when you're reading this you think "What an a**hole "

But I'm not trying to put you down or something, I just say this to help you cause in made such mistakes by myself

 

Overall, it's a good mission.

But if you can work on that things, then it 'll be better

So please don't hate me cause of this post, okay

 

Wow...my longest feedback till now

Ah man... Thanks for your feedback.

The only reason of these ;

'i just wanted to use the bridge bug which used by last s.a mission -end of the line-.'

 

And i have made it 1 hour .

Also i dont know make english sentences. (i dont know english.)

 

But , why you couldnt understand story? It made me sad

 

and i wrote this reply for 15 minute

[Kwabs]

1 hour?

That's fast man. I make mine in 4 days or something (but I don't have a lot of time for DYOM).

Maybe that's something you can work on. Just play your mission a few times, ask by yourself "is it fun to play" and "is it good enough" helps for me.

 

But I don't get the story cause your grammer isn't very good in every sentence. It's understandeble but sometimes hard to understand what you mean.

 

Anyway...

I'm waiting for your mission pack cause, ehhh how do you say that in english, your ideas were good but...gosh I don't know the english word for it....de uitwerking was minder goed (just use google translator, dutch to english or your language)