The Harsh Thunder

[Shiva.]

@abishai Thanks for your feedbacks, Man. I understand your point but if I add a knife to the player then the missions will become too easy. I want the players to think just like you do in god of war games.

@ -S-hark21 Thanks fore the honest feedbacks, man. And, yes, I'll keep your points in mind for sure . I'm still learning so I won't consider any critics as an offense. But, your feedbacks will make me improve. Thanks once again.

[Shahonix]

Your welcome

[abishai.kochara]

@abishai Thanks for your feedbacks, Man. I understand your point but if I add a knife to the player then the missions will become too easy. I want the players to think just like you do in god of war games.

 

Ok I get it but you could've added more gaurds but your missions, your style!

Never played any GOW games

[Shiva.]

@Shark21 I neeed this type of feedbacks a lot.

@Abishai thanks once again.

[abishai.kochara]

@Abishai thanks once again.

you're welcome sir.

[Shiva.]

3rd Mission has been released. Check the main post for the link. No bugs discovered yet. Negative feedbacks are much appericiated than positive ones. Feel free to give whatever you have in mind.

[Shahonix]

I've played the third mission and here's my feedback

 

1. I like the way how you use the cutscene and animations especially when killing Big Bear.

 

2. The mission are not hard but, you made the thugs have 1000 health, you need to reduce it. It's way too many.

 

That's all the feedback that I can give to you right now.

Rating :

 

7.5/10

[Shiva.]

Thanks for the honest feedbacks once again, Man. Good to hear from you. I'll try to decrease the actor health in the upcoming missions. Thanks for the rating.

[abishai.kochara]

 

Look at the radar map, theres two objectives.....

a bug/gltich...

[Shahonix]

Already tell you on FB

If you use the car objective, that's a normal thing.

[Shiva.]

@abishai I said it already. Check out my replies. Anyway, thanks for pointing it out by giving a screen shot.

[abishai.kochara]

 

Already tell you on FB

If you use the car objective, that's a normal thing.

Yeah but that was later.....

 

@shiva

no probs.

[abishai.kochara]

 

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Edited February 13, 2012 by abishai.kochara

[Shiva.]

The 4th mission has been released. Play, rate and give feedbacks. No bugs discovered yet.

Negative feedbacks are much appericiated than positive feedbacks.

You should try more than three times to get on the top of the truck.

[Shiva.]

Hey, Guys. The 5th mission has been released. Sorry for the delayed release but I'd been busy lately. Play it and give feedbacks. The game play is apparently low in this mission but has lot of cutscenes. As always, negative feedbacks are much appericiated than positive feedbacks.

[Shiva.]

The 6th mission has been released. Check the main topic for the link. The last two missions didn't earn any feedbacks. Hope this mission will get some feedbacks. Again, negatives feedbacks are much appericiated than positive feedbacks.

[Alan Eastwood]

Hey buddy you're not alone, I will play your missions when I can Edited February 26, 2012 by TheXProyect

[Shiva.]

Hey buddy you're not alone, I will play your missions when I can

Thanks a lot, Man. Waiting for your feedbacks.

[Shahonix]

Played the 4, and 5 mission and here's my feedback

 

Mission 4 : The Stranger

 

1. I love the way how you make the objective. Just on the truck roof. Brilliant idea! I might use it. Hope you don't mind.

 

2. I've failed the mission 1 time because the second try I just use the phoenix to follow the truck.

 

Damn, in this mission, you got no red. Congrats!

 

Rating : 9/10

 

Mission 5 : I didn't sign for this

 

1. Damn, love how you made the twist. Darren and Wade is fighting for money! Just one thing, why won't they open the bag earlier?

 

2. Where did the girl sit when Wade are going home?

 

Rating : 8.9/10

[Shiva.]

Played the 4, and 5 mission and here's my feedback

 

Mission 4 : The Stranger

 

1. I love the way how you make the objective. Just on the truck roof. Brilliant idea! I might use it. Hope you don't mind.

 

2. I've failed the mission 1 time because the second try I just use the phoenix to follow the truck.

 

Damn, in this mission, you got no red. Congrats!

 

Rating : 9/10

 

Mission 5 : I didn't sign for this

 

1. Damn, love how you made the twist. Darren and Wade is fighting for money! Just one thing, why won't they open the bag earlier?

 

2. Where did the girl sit when Wade are going home?

 

Rating : 8.9/10

Atlast, I was waiting for your feedbacks. Thanks for the big rating. You can use anything from mines I won't mind. Now, answer to your question. They were just having a good time dreaming about their future before opening the bag. The girl sat in the car where else? Thanks for your feedbacks, Man.

[Shahonix]

I mean where did she sit in the car? The bonnet? (or whatever you call it)

[Shiva.]

I mean where did she sit in the car? The bonnet? (or whatever you call it)

That's up to your imagination. I can't find an accurate solution for this.

[Alan Eastwood]

This good the mission pack, but I think it has more scenes than gameplay, and a little bit bored of it (in my opinion) but apart from that, the missions are designed like a pro! Was good, especially the scene of the girl XD

 

My rating: 4.5/5

[Shiva.]

This good the mission pack, but I think it has more scenes than gameplay, and a little bit bored of it (in my opinion) but apart from that, the missions are designed like a pro! Was good, especially the scene of the girl XD

 

My rating: 4.5/5

Thanks for your feedbacks, Man. Ofcourse, there's a less gameplay. This is just chapter 1. Check out chapter 2 it's gonna have a lot of gameplay. Once again thanks for your huge ratings and feedbacks.

[Shiva.]

The 7th mission has been released. Check the main topic for the link. There's a bug in the last part of the mission where the actors are deleted. In this mission, the much awaited mystery man Garry Bottom will be revealed. Play and give feedbacks.

[Shiva.]

The 8th mission has been released. Play and give feedbacks.

Also, chapter 1 ZIP file has been uploaded. Make sure you play them all and give feedbacks.

Negative feedbacks are much appericiated than positive feedbacks.

[Notna]

I played the first two missions.

 

I really see a good potential in these series. First I want to mention your grammar, it's good, not many major errors, few here and there. Just fix your spelling. Think wise where goes the caps and so on.

The plot is new and original. That's what I really much liked. And another thing, usually I see perfect protagonists, unselfish guys who always want to help everyone. But this is awesome, a protagonist whose a complete asshole. The intro was really interesting, but the second mission dissappointed me a bit, because it wasn't a exact continuation for the first mission. It would had been more natural if there'd be a connection between Wade and Garry Bottom from the beginning. Or maybe there is, I don't know yet, I haven't played all missions.

 

About the second mission: How in the hell can I get the car down? I used the jetpack cheat to get on and drive the car to the Pay'n Spray. How is it supposed to be done?.

 

Anyway, my rating is 7.5/10. Never give up, this is really potential.

[Shiva.]

I played the first two missions.

 

I really see a good potential in these series. First I want to mention your grammar, it's good, not many major errors, few here and there. Just fix your spelling. Think wise where goes the caps and so on.

The plot is new and original. That's what I really much liked. And another thing, usually I see perfect protagonists, unselfish guys who always want to help everyone. But this is awesome, a protagonist whose a complete asshole. The intro was really interesting, but the second mission dissappointed me a bit, because it wasn't a exact continuation for the first mission. It would had been more natural if there'd be a connection between Wade and Garry Bottom from the beginning. Or maybe there is, I don't know yet, I haven't played all missions.

 

About the second mission: How in the hell can I get the car down? I used the jetpack cheat to get on and drive the car to the Pay'n Spray. How is it supposed to be done?.

 

Anyway, my rating is 7.5/10. Never give up, this is really potential.

Thanks a lot for the honest feedbacks, man. Yea, I'm improving in my english. Play the other missions and you'll learn the real truth.

Answer to your question.

I wanted to add a little puzzle in the 2nd mission. Just think and main thing explore the area. There's a way. Once again thanks for your feedbacks. I'll show more improvement.

[MadMarshMallow]

Played the chapter 1.

 

Firstly, I very love the story because it's original plot I think(in DYOM forums). About the writing, I don't really care much. It's okay as long as I can understand the words.

 

The part when we need to jump to the truck is very exciting and fun. It's very creative. Good job.

 

About the cutscenes, sometimes it's too long and sometimes it's very short. For the running/walking actors, make it a little bit shorter while for the long dialogues, make it a longer.

 

At the dock, when we need to go to our hideout(with the little girl), you forgot to hide the officer's car.

 

You always leave Darren alone when we need to do something; robbing, go home, etc..

 

The mission when we role as Garry, we need to run from the enemies and follow the checkpoints to the dock. The mission is very hard because the car has a low health.

 

Love the scene(in the last mission) when Garry jumped from the hill. But, it could be longer.

 

Overall, it's balance between story and actions. Improve the cutscenes & writing and it'll be better. Don't give up.

 

 

 

 

[Shiva.]

Played the chapter 1.

 

Firstly, I very love the story because it's original plot I think(in DYOM forums). About the writing, I don't really care much. It's okay as long as I can understand the words.

 

The part when we need to jump to the truck is very exciting and fun. It's very creative. Good job.

 

About the cutscenes, sometimes it's too long and sometimes it's very short. For the running/walking actors, make it a little bit shorter while for the long dialogues, make it a longer.

 

At the dock, when we need to go to our hideout(with the little girl), you forgot to hide the officer's car.

 

You always leave Darren alone when we need to do something; robbing, go home, etc..

 

The mission when we role as Garry, we need to run from the enemies and follow the checkpoints to the dock. The mission is very hard because the car has a low health.

 

Love the scene(in the last mission) when Garry jumped from the hill. But, it could be longer.

 

Overall, it's balance between story and actions. Improve the cutscenes & writing and it'll be better. Don't give up.

Thanks a lot, Man. I'd been waiting for your feedbacks. I'm still working on my writings. Yea, sometimes I make short as well as cutscenes. I can't judge it properly but I'll improve soon. I know, you'd love Garry's role in the last mission. Thanks once again for your feedbacks. I'll be working on the next mission soon. Don't forget to give feeds.