MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 13, 2012 (edited) Status: In Progress A mafia gang were planning to annihilate the president of San Andreas. They aim to rule San Andreas for their own good. The story begin when Bentley Clay, an elderly poor accidentally overheard the plan. He begged the mafia to not to be killed. As interchange, the mafia gave 3 weeks to him to provide them a 2 MILLION DOLLARS. His sons, Hugh and Cruz, found out the matter and secretly decided to save their father from being killed by the mafia. They'll do anything to get the money no matter what dangerous they need to face. More characters will be update according to the story. CHARACTERS DESCRIPTIONS Cruz Bentley Protagonist/playable character. He's very close to Hugh Bentley, his older brother. Has a natural skills in handling a gun. Hugh Bentley He's a nice brother and a genius person. He got and offer to study at university. However, due of insufficient funds, he refused. He decided to help his father at the farm. Heath Bentley Father of Hugh and Cruz. A very poor farmer but has a kindly heart. Kelli Bentley Mother of Hugh and Cruz. Houston The man that owned the ammunation at Bone County. CHAPTER 1 1) Introduction : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16834 2) A Check : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16870 3) Unbelievable : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16900 4) Training Lessons : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16970 5) 2 Weeks : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17026 6) The Robbery (Part 1) http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17027 7) The Robbery (Part 2) : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17035 8) Hard Luck : http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17103 Click here to download all chapter 1 in a zip file: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17104 Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for making DYOM Secronom President for a help in DYOM forums Chimpso for DYOM tutorial Jimmy_Leppard for the inspiration XTREME0235, xHIGHWAY_REAPERx and blitz for logo and headers The others, for any helped you give THANKS FOR PLAYING AND FEEL FREE TO GIVE FEEDBACK Edited January 28, 2012 by Arejai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 13, 2012 Good luck! I'll almost play all the Transporter mission I play this tomorrow Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 13, 2012 Good luck! I'll almost play all the Transporter missionI play this tomorrow Okay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AnDReJ98 1,297 Posted January 13, 2012 Nice work man! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
guib 7 Posted January 13, 2012 Just looked at the first mission and saw this: Objectives: 100 Very promise full! I will play it when I have time, I am busy at the moment... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kwabs 22 Posted January 13, 2012 100 objectives? looks like a lot of phone calls and cutscenes to me. But I 'll play this when you finished a chapter. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 14, 2012 @Andrej Thanks @guib I'll wait for your feedback @ThaBoy I'll tell you when the chapter is complete Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 14, 2012 That is many objective Going to play After i've done play the transporter (left 5 missions) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 14, 2012 That is many objectiveGoing to play After i've done play the transporter (left 5 missions) It's because of the cutscenes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shiva. 25 Posted January 14, 2012 Awesome post, Arejai. 100 objectives huh? Thats pretty big. Keep it up. Gonna play transporters and then this. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 14, 2012 Play it! Nice introduction Why you make the same situation twice? Eventhough, you already did it If you know what I mean Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 14, 2012 Play it! Nice introduction Why you make the same situation twice? Eventhough, you already did it If you know what I mean It's a kind of flashback @shiva okay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ItsAllAboutGTA 6 Posted January 14, 2012 Goodluck with this Arejai,gonna play it.. cuz,im a little busy ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 14, 2012 Goodluck with this Arejai,gonna play it..cuz,im a little busy ! thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
abishai.kochara 0 Posted January 14, 2012 I'll play this soon! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 14, 2012 I'll play this soon! Don't forget to give feedback Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkaN95 0 Posted January 14, 2012 Now this is what i call an intro... keep up the good work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 15, 2012 So, the credits list : Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for making DYOM Secronom President for a help in DYOM forums Chimpso for DYOM tutorial Jimmy_Leppard for the inspiration XTREME0235 and blitz for logo and headers The others, for any helped you give Jimmy_Leppard for the inspiration eh? Hope to see that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 So, the credits list : Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for making DYOM Secronom President for a help in DYOM forums Chimpso for DYOM tutorial Jimmy_Leppard for the inspiration XTREME0235 and blitz for logo and headers The others, for any helped you give Jimmy_Leppard for the inspiration eh? Hope to see that Don't understand.. anyway, i working on the second mission. Skander [email protected] Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 15, 2012 I mean hoping to see something same as Jimmy_Leppard Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 I mean hoping to see something same as Jimmy_Leppard Well.. when I said that, it's not necessarily same as Jimmy. It's mean that he inspired us to keep working. That's it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 2nd mission has been released. A Check Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 15, 2012 So, it's uploaded Going to play and give feedback Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
abishai.kochara 0 Posted January 15, 2012 I'll play this soon! Don't forget to give feedback I won't! I'll play it tomorrow I guess.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 I'll play this soon! Don't forget to give feedback I won't! I'll play it tomorrow I guess.. Play it when you have a free time Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted January 15, 2012 I got crash when leaving the bank... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 I got crash when leaving the bank... Crashed? Try it again. Btw, I will try to fix it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shiva. 25 Posted January 15, 2012 Damn! I was waiting for the second mission. I gonna play it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 25 Posted January 15, 2012 Damn! I was waiting for the second mission. I gonna play it. Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
abishai.kochara 0 Posted January 16, 2012 played the intro. Good mission as an intro, gameplay = cutscenes and the story keeps on running and keeps me interested. Good luck and good work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
