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abishai.kochara

Welcome to the forums,

you should add a description of your mission to gain more interest,

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Welcome to the forums,

you should add a description of your mission to gain more interest,

good luck icon14.gif

Thanks smile.gif

 

There's a description on the download page.

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MadMarshMallow

Nice icon14.gif

You're pretty good at designing mission.

Keep it up! smile.gif

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Nice  icon14.gif

You're pretty good at designing mission.

Keep it up! smile.gif

Of course he is.

Since he is already use DYOM a year ago

Anyway, going to play

 

EDIT :

Play the mission

Could be harder and longer

And also make some police stars

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Played the mission, and saw your review request. So here's your review..

 

 

Hello everyone, this is me, KaRzY6, do a DYOM mission review. Today I'm going to review AshleigghJaade.x mission, Bank Job.

 

Bank Job

 

Quick Walkthrough: You play as Gary, a thief. Him and he partner in crime, Jordan, plan to rob the bank while it's closed that day. They make their way to the bank and find it's locked. They find a knife and use 'stealth' to kill a guard. They take his keycard and open the backdoor into the bank. They steal the money, only to find the police on their tail. Gary and Jordan move out of the bank killing the officers. They then steal a cop bike and jump over the old bridge. *Mission Passed*

 

Writing Excellent The writing was excellent. I didn't see any spelling mistakes. The designer is Australian (English speaking), so that's probably the reason.

 

Presentation Good There was only about 4 cutscenes, but they were good. Not many animations were used.

 

Length Good I thought the could be done in about 5-7 minutes.

 

Difficulty Easy It only consists of driving, stealth, timelimit and a small gun fight.

 

Variety Good

 

Actors: Gary (man in grey jumper), Jordan (Millie) and Country Police.

 

Vehicles: Landstalker, Police Ranger and Police Motorbike.

 

Weapons: 9mm, Desert Eagle and Shotgun

 

Pick-ups: Desert Eagle, Armor, Health, Keycard and Money Bag.

 

Objects: 3 Blue Doors.

 

Overall: 7.5/10. Great job bro. Keep it up icon14.gif

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ItsAllAboutGTA

Cool mission you got there ! smile.gif

 

And also add more info about the mission

 

Welcome to the forum & Goodluck icon14.gif

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abishai.kochara
Welcome to the forums,

you should add a description of your mission to gain more interest,

good luck icon14.gif

Thanks smile.gif

 

There's a description on the download page.

haha... lol.gif

already seen it, how could I miss it while downloading?

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@Arejai

Thanks bro smile.gif

 

@-S-hark21

Thank you. Will try and make better missions.

 

@KaRzY6

Thanks so much for the review. Your a great reviewer!

 

@ItsAllAboutGTA

Thanks for the welcome. Hope you liked the mission smile.gif

 

@abishai.kochara

I don't know. Haha

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Oh I forgot to welcome you tounge.gif

So, welcome to the forums! Enjoy your stay

LOL

Thanks -S-hark smile.gif

 

Will try and make another mission soon.

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I'm gonna play it. I love robbery themes very much.

OFFTOPIC: this is not the remake of the movie 'The Bankjob', right?

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I'm gonna play it. I love robbery themes very much.

OFFTOPIC: this is not the remake of the movie 'The Bankjob', right?

It's nothing like the movie. smile.gif

 

@AJ.x

No problem. Thanks for that biggrin.gif

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Alan Eastwood

Hey, im going to review your mission in video, I ask permission of the doubt

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Malikio12334566687

Played the mission. Good work I must say. Looking forward to more of your missions Ash, or as others call you, AJ.x wink.gif Keep it up icon14.gif

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Played the mission. Good work I must say. Looking forward to more of your missions Ash, or as others call you, AJ.x wink.gif Keep it up icon14.gif

Thanks for the feedback. Just call me AJ.x

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