john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) WELCOME This is- by John12. I will use the Logo of UNRATED and Headers of Narcis. Sorry Grope_4_That day, i won't use it for now. You are Zero living in San Fierro. Your life is pleasent but you have some problems. You girlfriend left you because of your enemy, Berkly. One night, your house get's burglared and you go to Burglary Corporation. You join them in burglary but Berkly has also set up a Burglary. It's time to see who get's money and Klye! Zero- He is really smart enough and his IQ is 376.5577. He doen't use a gun but learns the art of guns. He is the Main Character. He has a problem with Berkly. Cheetah- Zero's favourite blue cheetah. It drives and jumps fast but get's destroyed easily. Klye- She was the girlfriend of Zero but left him. Berkly was responsible for the break-up. Berkly- He is really interested in creating things and robbing items. He was forced to leave SA in 1992 but returned at 1995. He hates Zeor and want's to destroy him. Justin (not Justin Bebear )- He looks like a clown but he is the leader of Burglary. He has a huge area in Doherty. The area where people filled the form is now under Berkly's control. Gaurds- They protect the Corporation from any harm. They are friendly. Workers- Actually they don't work but burglar people's house. Alen Winks- He was a worker in B.C. (Burglary Corporation) and was patner of Berkly in earning money but Berkly killed him and took the Form filling's building's key. Rick- He is your patner in burglaring. He Respect you and disrespect you. Don't know why... Triads- Born to be dark. There are many of them and they are your and Rick's Friend. Cops- They roam around and try to find out what's going on. Gay- The word says everything . Da Nang Boys (DNB)- These are Rick's enemy aswell as Triads. They are really strong. They deal with Barbars. Barbers- They have top grade drugs. They are all around SA. More coming soon 1. Burglary is my Passion 2. Ocean Drive 3. Lurk is Jurk 4. Dark is the Source 5. Act upon 69 - Part 1 6. Act upon 69 - Part 2 7. A Night with no wonder... 8. A day beating night * Chapter 1 More soon 1. THE CRASH!!! is on hold because of lack of ideas. But i will continue it too. 2. Please give feedbacks for every mission. 3. This is a Burglary Mission pack so I guess no one has ever made it. Edited December 30, 2011 by john12 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) Continue from down Edited December 15, 2011 by -S-hark21 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) Here you all can see the Reviews, Pics and Videos for this Mission Pack. Credit for the pic goes to me. Credit for making the Trailer goes to -S-Hark21. More to Come Edited December 20, 2011 by john12 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) This is just the place for Entertainment I will ask questions based on the missions- 1. What do you think how did Berkly came? 2. Why is Rick like that? Why does he like and dislike you both? 3. What is Shining Lighter? 4. What do you think their research would be? 5. Triad was dead. Is something related with Rick? 6. What were the Gays doing (Heatseeker and Dildo)? 7. Why was Rick taking the weed? 8. How do you think cops escaped? More Questions Coming soon You can answer them anytime. Here I will put the News what will happen next. Time for 2nd chapter. 1. Me 2. Dutchy3010 and PatrickW 3. GFX Team 3. All the supporters 4. And you (points at you) Thanks and Have Fun Edited December 30, 2011 by john12 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) Ok guys Just then what I post, ignore itAbout feedbacks here it is. Eventhough it's a starter mission, we already in a gunfight But still, it's awesome! The cutscene, the talk, the story , the car. By the way, you should make some car locked. Because the van are usable because it din't been locked And for answer the questions 1. What do you think how did Berkly come? No idea but I think I got one, I think Berkly came with his friend in the first cutscene after some burglar. Hope you forgive me John12 Sorry for the post Edited December 15, 2011 by -S-hark21 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 Simply edit it and type this- Continue from down. Thanks for the feedback and i will look after it. The Headshots were on Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 Guys, gonna upload- Ocean Drive Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 15, 2011 Wating for it.. I'm will send you feedback for sure Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Notna 203 Posted December 15, 2011 I will play this just when we have finished the multi designer project. And, congrats on your over 1,000 posts Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 Guys uploaded the mission- Ocean Drive Link at the main post. Tip:There aren't any case or something but there are invisibe checkpoints which you need to find and cross. Good Luck @Notna: Thanks. My 1000th post was on Community Survey topic . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SatournFan 707 Posted December 15, 2011 john, you know what? You have so nyan avatar. Ooooh! Gonna try these missions. Good luck. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 http://i.imgur.com/z681E.jpg try it out but it is the same Thanks and it is 100 objective mission. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 Guys gonna upload- Lurk is Jurk Not today but tomorrow. Now i will wait for feedbacks. This theme is really easy and able theme in which we can make many missions. I saw that the title and the topic title is different . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 15, 2011 Here's my feedback : The mission was easy but sometimes when I want to assassinate them with a knife, They were looking at me. So I gotta to kill them using my silenced. Don't know why that happen, I guess it's a bug. And also after the police know we were stealing, You should make the time limit to 0. Cause they already we were stealing. But still, awesome mission and keep it up! Question no. 2 : My answer will be no idea Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 15, 2011 As in real SA, there is no stoping of time until daylight. That isn't a bug but a feature in SA. If someone dies nearby it turns behind. Thanks for the feedback Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 16, 2011 Guys, uploaded the mission- Lurk is Jerk I guess there might be bugs so report. Thanks! Tip: Don't try to mess around just take care of the traffic and you will do fine Next mission on the way Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 16, 2011 (edited) Alright ! Going to play and give feedbacks Here's my feedback : There are some spelling mistake but still understandable And also that mission was more easy than the other one But still, this is so awesome ! I think this will be my favorite mission pack Edited December 16, 2011 by -S-hark21 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 16, 2011 Thanks. Updated the page and Entertainment Section Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadMarshMallow 26 Posted December 16, 2011 I'm going to play it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 16, 2011 Gonna upload- Dark is the source My school is on holiday because our principal was insulted. Politics were doing wrong. Respect of our principal was down and our teachers couldn't bear it and thrashed them. Well done, my teachers Ok, it was off-topic Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Darkseller63 0 Posted December 16, 2011 (edited) Good design of the main post! Gonna play your missions and give feedback! Edited December 19, 2011 by Darkseller63 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 16, 2011 Thanks Dark Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Darkseller63 0 Posted December 16, 2011 Played the missions. What can I say? The idea is very cool, but there are some spellings in the dialogues, but don't mind on that. Great work! Keep it up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 17, 2011 Thanks alot Dark. More missions on the way Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KaRzY6 16 Posted December 17, 2011 I'm going to play after the first chapter is complete. Put in a .zip file Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 17, 2011 Guys uploaded the mission- Dark is the Source Link at the main post Tip: You must open the parachute ASAP, good Luck ] @K6: Thanks, buddy. This will be over soon. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 17, 2011 Guys, gonna upload- Act upon 69 - Part 1 It has two parts and it will continue. So, stay tuned Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shahonix 4 Posted December 17, 2011 Going to play and give feedback I will edit this post Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 17, 2011 Thanks -s-. No need to edit now. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
john12 0 Posted December 17, 2011 Guys, added a pic. I forgot to say that please activate Cinematic Camara View for better chase C'mon guys, be more active and don't stay still. I am Double-posting but it is an update. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites