Shahonix Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 (edited) WELCOME TO Thanks to Narcis_speed6 for the title and headers Don't stop giving up on what you must do - Thomas Reed In a year of 1985, a story about a guy named Alex Reed. His brother, Thomas Reed was a great man, did many good things in Los Santos. He's the one who always solve people problems. Many people love him. He's a great cop. Not until one day.... Alex Reed have to kill his own brother because of Hart Snyder, a guy who work with Thomas Reed himself. After Alex killed his brother, he move to San Fierro with John. That's where he met Taylor Handerson and Smith Johnson. Taylor is a leader of a gang called Downtown Shooters. They were the strongest gang... But after 2 years... Alex Reed decided to go to Liberty City to start a new life. He thought it was a good choice, but he was wrong. He felt lonely, everything he had was gone. After 5 years in Liberty City, he moved back to San Fierro. To be with his gang again. The gang is no longer the strongest, but they are the weakest. Now.... It's time for Alex to show what he got. This is now his new life, new adventures and as a new person. It is his job to make his gang, the strongest, the biggest, the most powerful. Name Decription Protagonist Alex Reed He live in Liberty City for 5 years, because of killing his own brother. Major Character John Griffin Alex friend since childhood. Owe people a lot of money. Gonzalez Hugo One of the Southside Locos gang. He make deal of peace with the Downtown Shooters. Brian Galley A guy you'll met in Bayside. Use to be a drug dealer. Minor Characters Friend Taylor Handerson The leader of Downtown Shooters. A really smart guy. Smith Johnson Bestfriend of Taylor. Knows how to handle guns. A really strong guy. Thomas Reed He is Alex older brother. Died 7 years ago, in Los Santos. Killed by his own brother, Alex. Cruz Daniel A friend of Gonzalez, which is one of the gang. Barry Leroy Also a friend of Gonzalez. Doesn't like to talk much. Victor Santiago The leader of Southside Locos gang. A strong guy but weaker that Ivan Javier. Richard Burnett Harris White A friend of Brian. He was once a gundealer. Enemy Jimmy Diego The leader of High Rolling 5s gang in San Fierro. Smart and hard to kill. Ivan Javier The leader of Northside Posse. Strong guy and too hard to kill. Frank A guy that supposed to meet Taylor. Sherman Doyle Owner of the Caligula's casino. Paul Lindsey Sherman right hand man. Loyal to Sherman Doyle. Name : Downtown Shooters (Grove Skin) Status : Friend About : Used to be a strong gang but the High Rolling 5s and Northside Posse turned their back against this gang. Name : High Rolling 5s (Ballas skin) Status : Enemy About : The most sworn enemy of Downtown Shooters. Work together with Northside Posse. Nickname is HR5. Name : Northside Posse (Da nang boys skin) Status : Enemy About : Work together with High Rolling 5s on taking over the San Fierro. The most sworn enemy of Southside Locos. Name : Southside Locos (Aztecas skin) Status : Friend About : Used to be enemy to Downtown Shooters but now a friendly gang .Hate the Northside Posse. Name : East Side Thugs Status : Enemy About : The gang who lives in Bayside. Nickname is EST. Feedback would be appeciate Chapter 1 : The start of a new life [Download] • The day it began.. - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16096 • Smith and Taylor - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16097 • Beat the High Rolling 5s - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16098 • Taylor's Favor - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16099 • Protection in need - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16100 • Getting a car - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16101 • Bodyguard - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16102 • To the rescue ! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16103 • Southside Deal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16104 • Plan to attack - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16105 • Rain has come, funeral situation - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16106 • Back in the map - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16107 • Helping hand - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16108 • Delivering the package - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16109 • Attacking the HR5 [Part 1] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16129 • Attacking the HR5 [Part 2] - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16162 Chapter 2 : No where to go[Download] • Welcome to Bayside - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16458 • To live in Bayside - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16972 • Unknown Caller - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=16984 • Giving a hand - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17063 • Ambush! - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17081 • The 'unknown' call again - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17283 • Going to Las Venturas - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17307 Chapter 3 : Money talks • All about money - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17382 • East Side Thugs Ambush - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=17603 • Money to live • Meet Ray the "rich" • Hits • Phone call to meet • Jordan help • Ambush in the casino • Just business • Owner of Caligula • Sherman's right hand • The Mafia fight • An old friend • 7 years ago, Los Santos. • Making an escape • One step closer Chapter color : Yellow - Finish Green - In progress Red - Not started Review [AznKei] : ====== Mission 1 & 2 ====== ====== Mission 3 & 4 ======= ====== Mission 5 & 6 ====== ====== Mission 7 & 8 ======= ====== Mission 9 & 10 ====== ====== Mission 11 ====== ====== Mission 12 ====== ====== Mission 13 ====== ====== Mission 14 - 16 ====== Hey guys! Today, I'm gonna review some missions from Shark21's series 'Alex Reed Stories'Now to the review! Writing Good Except for a few grammer mistakes, everything else's alright! Presentation Excellent The camera angles and timing are excellent! Really good job! Everything fits properly! Welcome to Bayside Length Very goodYou'll take about 7minutes to pass, you land up in Bayside without knowing where you are with two cops........ Difficulty Easy As long as you don't do sh*t, play it properly, the accuracy the enemies have is very low. Vareity Very Good Two cops, two guns, you and new friend, a bike, a home, thats all! To live in Bayside Length Good It'll take you some time about five minutes, if you drive quickly without wasting time and complete the missions, you drive to a friend's place and on reaching...... Difficulty Medium There are enemies with melee weapons and all, they're beating up your friend, whom you need to save! Vareity Very Good Good skins chosen, good job with the weapons! Unknown Caller Length Very good It'll take you about 10-15 minutes, you get a call after which........ Difficulty Easy There are a few enemies with UZIs, as long as you're dodging their bullets and using cover, which isn't needed, you're safe. Vareity Very Good The Mexican in the mission really fits his role and the gangsters were well chosen and well placed! Overall good job, just improve grammar and you're awesome! Good job and good luck! This's a must try for all! If you got some screenshot, post it here. Video and ScreenShot will be here • Dutchy3010 - Making DYOM • PatrickW - Making DYOM • Shark21 - For designing the mission • Narcis_speed6 - For the logo and header • AznKei - For the video review Chapter 1 • abishai.kochara - For the written review Chapter 2 • More character will be update • More gang will be update • I got the idea already so, right now I making the missions • Sometimes I will change the mission name Edited June 7, 2013 by -S-hark21 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Looks great. I am gonna definetely play this. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060936809 Share on other sites More sharing options...
john12 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Good Luck! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060936810 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 11, 2011 Author Share Posted December 11, 2011 Thanks for the support guys. I will do this mission ASAP. Just wait alright? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060936859 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Hey, how about the other missions pack ? That Army missions pack Anyway, good luck with this Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060936891 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 12, 2011 Author Share Posted December 12, 2011 (edited) Hey, how about the other missions pack ? That Army missions packAnyway, good luck with this That will be stop for a while cause that is my friend idea Right now he got no idea and said he want to stop for a while and find the idea for that mission pack Maybe later it will continue Edit : I have taken over the mission pack now! My friend is lack of ideas. He said he want me take care of it. Edited March 6, 2012 by -S-hark21 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060938070 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 15, 2011 Author Share Posted December 15, 2011 UPDATE : Trailer has been added guys Check the main post to watch Sorry for the lag guys Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Mission post looks cool, man. Good luck. Offtopic: Are you an old user? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945334 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 15, 2011 Author Share Posted December 15, 2011 Mission post looks cool, man. Good luck. Offtopic: Are you an old user? Nope, join a month and a half ago Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945342 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Kay' I'll be waiting. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945355 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 15, 2011 Author Share Posted December 15, 2011 Alright make sure you can give some feedbacks after chapter 1 is uploaded IF you want too, and the chapter 1 mission about 7 missions left to create Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945357 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiva. Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 You dont need to mention that. I'll give feedbacks and thats sure. Moreover myself and John12 will always be giving feedbacks which will improve the newbies. Thats our attitude Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945362 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 The trailer was nice, but remove the HUD next time And I am gonna play these missions when I have time. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945547 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 15, 2011 Author Share Posted December 15, 2011 (edited) The trailer was nice, but remove the HUD next time And I am gonna play these missions when I have time. Remove the HUD? How do I do that? I still new at it You can tell me by using PM if you want Edit : Already know how to remove Thanks to Notna Edited December 15, 2011 by -S-hark21 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060945601 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 Nice! I'll play it when the upload is completed Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060946831 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 16, 2011 Author Share Posted December 16, 2011 Alright! Thanks I will tell you when the Chapter 1 missions is uploaded Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060946921 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ItsAllAboutGTA Posted December 18, 2011 Share Posted December 18, 2011 Can't wait for the 2nd chapter!Goodluck with it! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060951959 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 18, 2011 Author Share Posted December 18, 2011 Chapter 1 is almost done, only left 2 missions to be done Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060951974 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted December 18, 2011 Share Posted December 18, 2011 Really waiting to play this and give feedback. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060951984 Share on other sites More sharing options...
john12 Posted December 19, 2011 Share Posted December 19, 2011 I guess until you don't get good feedbacks for your missions, is won't worthy to review them. Better wait for nice feedbacks and select your best missions. I can't lie that even if a mission is a sh*t it's awesome. Tip: It is better to release missions one by one not by making 1 chap and then another one. This will push back your topic. It keeps this topic updated. Let me see... 5 good feedbacks and i will review them. Remember, we have a life. I stick to Orignal San Andreas than DYOM. Sorry for some harsh talks. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954099 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 No probs, Alright then, gonna do what you say I will upload the mission 1 by 1 Be sure to give feedback guys Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954355 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 Alright guys, I know it's a double post But it an update The mission has been uploaded to the DYOM website Check the main post to download Give feedback guys Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954377 Share on other sites More sharing options...
john12 Posted December 19, 2011 Share Posted December 19, 2011 I just can't stop loling. Watched the trailer. You ned to remove that radar and Hud sh*ts. Looks promising. How many missions do you want reviewed? I will wait for the feedback Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954421 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted December 19, 2011 Share Posted December 19, 2011 The mission has been released. I'll play it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954618 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 Give feedback alright? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954626 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted December 19, 2011 Share Posted December 19, 2011 Give feedback alright? I will. I'm playing the missions right now. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060954749 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadMarshMallow Posted December 19, 2011 Share Posted December 19, 2011 I had played the 1st mission until "To the resque" so far. It's a great beginning of the story. And some of the missions is pretty hard, especially when fighting the guards. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060955114 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 Glad you like it 2 more missions before the first Chapter 1 is done Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060955121 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shahonix Posted December 20, 2011 Author Share Posted December 20, 2011 Update : Added the mission Attacking the HR5 [Part 1] Waiting for your feedback Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060956473 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Played nearly half of them. Quite good enough, but improve your English. Will you release them as storyline after or they will remain as single missions? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/495409-alex-reed-stories/#findComment-1060956784 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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