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Army: Team AGH69 - Created by KaRzY6

 

Status - Complete

 

Trailer - Made by -S-hark21

 

 

Contents

 

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Plot:

You play as Fraser Allen, who is sick of living a boring life in Los Santos. He decides to join the army, because that was his childhood dream. He goes to a sign-up in San Fierro, and Sergant Farpot gives him a spot in the army. Sergant Liverpool is the captain of a team called AGH69. Where Fraser is placed. It seems normal at the start, he is gaining much respect. Then some twists occur...Play, to find out what happens.

 

Characters:

 

Characters About Status
Fraser Allen Fraser lives in a house on Grove Street, Ganton, Los Santos. And he is sick of living a boring life so he joins the army(his childhood dream). The Protagonist
Sergeant Liverpool Sergeant Liverpool is the leader of a army team called AGH69. Friendly
Private Goodes Goodes is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly
Private Thompson Thompson is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly
Private Folk Folk is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly
Agent Holmes Holmes is a F.B.I agent and is the leader of the Secret Operation in Bayside. Friendly
Baghdad Osama Osama is a terrorist in San Andreas. He destroyed the Empire Tower in San Fierro, and killed a couple of thousand people. Enemy
Gary Heffer S.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama. (Seems like Enemy)Friendly
Salvator Hanson S.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama. (Seems like Enemy)Friendly
Sergeant Farpot Farpot is the Army recuiter. Friendly

Packs:

 

Pack Cotains
Pack 1 Intro, first 7 missions
Pack 2 Missions 8-13

 

Missions:

--> Introduction

1--> Training

2--> President In Town

3--> Ghost Town Protest

4--> Secret Operation

5--> Plan Put Into Place

6--> Killing Baghdad Osama

7--> Break - (NOTE: Lots of cutscenes, not alot of game play, but need to play to get storyline).

*The mission will begin to come in packs, from now.*

8--> Hostige

9--> Lubeek's Death

10--> Army Door Knocking

11--> Flash Back

12--> Time To Die

13--> Hospitalisation

--> Outroduction

 

Credits:

KaRzY6 - Designer and writer

Dutchy3010 - Making DYOM

PatrickW - Making DYOM

-S-hark21 - Made the trailer

alifjenius - For video reviews

 

Feedback please biggrin.gif

 

Reviews by alifjenius

Intro, Mission #1 and #2

 

Mission #3 and #4

 

Mission #5, #6 and #7

 

Mission #2.1 and #2.2

 

Mission #2.3 and #2.4

 

Mission #2.5, #2.6 and Outro

 

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I just got done playing the 3 missions (literally, I finished them about 10 seconds ago) and they were great but short. It lacked of length. It could've been put into 1 mission but I liked the plot (objective) to the missions. Nice work, but make 'em longer please smile.gif

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@Juan-R

Your i know, but i'll make the missions harder and longer as it goes on. Because he has only just joined the army, his missions aren't as good at the time.

 

@Gorgonit

Thank you. I'll begin to make the missions longer and harder.

 

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Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic tounge.gif

 

EDIT: Amazing! Awesome! EPIC! Nice mission, bro. With the sound and effect mods I have installed, it was like a full blown war movie in HD. Keep up the great work icon14.gifcookie.gifcookie.gif

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Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic  tounge.gif

Thanks Juan-R, biggrin.gif

 

I made it longer and hopefully a bit harder. But i'm not very good at making hard missions.

 

EDIT: Juan-R

Thank you, thank you, thank you biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif

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As always, I will play and love this mission ^^

Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts.

 

EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply colgate.gif

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As always, I will play and love this mission ^^

Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts.

 

EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply colgate.gif

Okay, thanks Juan-R. Um well i couldn't think of what else i could add.

 

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Picture added

 

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. sad.gif

so just wait and bare with me.

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Picture added

 

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. sad.gif

so just wait and bare with me.

Sure thing, bro. Can't wait colgate.gif

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Picture added

 

also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing.  sad.gif

so just wait and bare with me.

Sure thing, bro. Can't wait colgate.gif

I like how Juan-R(A great designer and popular person in forums), likes my missions. It makes my feel like a good designer biggrin.gif

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Just speaking my thoughts ^^

But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP wink.gif

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Just speaking my thoughts ^^

But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP wink.gif

Thanks Juan-R!!! biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif well i've only been designing for about 4 weeks, so hopefully in a year i'm well-known!!! biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif

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Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours colgate.gif

 

Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. biggrin.gif

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Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours colgate.gif

 

Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. biggrin.gif

Hey Juan-R thanks biggrin.gifbiggrin.gif

 

And don't worry bro, i don't give a f*ck about the name. biggrin.gif

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I forgot to post feedback lol.gif

 

Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. icon14.gif

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I forgot to post feedback lol.gif

 

Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. icon14.gif

Thanks bro, middle of making next mission. Shall be done in about 15 mins. smile.gif

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Progress Updated

 

Mission added - Break

 

Note: There are alot of cutscenes and not alot of gameplay. But need to play the mission to get the storyline. smile.gif

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I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up!

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I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up!

Thanks biggrin.gifbiggrin.gifbiggrin.gif

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