KaRzY6 Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 (edited) Army: Team AGH69 - Created by KaRzY6 Status - Complete Trailer - Made by -S-hark21 Contents Plot Characters Packs Missions Credits Reviews by alifjenius Plot: You play as Fraser Allen, who is sick of living a boring life in Los Santos. He decides to join the army, because that was his childhood dream. He goes to a sign-up in San Fierro, and Sergant Farpot gives him a spot in the army. Sergant Liverpool is the captain of a team called AGH69. Where Fraser is placed. It seems normal at the start, he is gaining much respect. Then some twists occur...Play, to find out what happens. Characters: Characters About Status Fraser Allen Fraser lives in a house on Grove Street, Ganton, Los Santos. And he is sick of living a boring life so he joins the army(his childhood dream). The Protagonist Sergeant Liverpool Sergeant Liverpool is the leader of a army team called AGH69. Friendly Private Goodes Goodes is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly Private Thompson Thompson is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly Private Folk Folk is placed in the same team as Fraser, AGH69. Friendly Agent Holmes Holmes is a F.B.I agent and is the leader of the Secret Operation in Bayside. Friendly Baghdad Osama Osama is a terrorist in San Andreas. He destroyed the Empire Tower in San Fierro, and killed a couple of thousand people. Enemy Gary Heffer S.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama. (Seems like Enemy)Friendly Salvator Hanson S.S.O agent, on a undercover mission to kill Baghdad Osama. (Seems like Enemy)Friendly Sergeant Farpot Farpot is the Army recuiter. Friendly Packs: Pack Cotains Pack 1 Intro, first 7 missions Pack 2 Missions 8-13 Missions: --> Introduction 1--> Training 2--> President In Town 3--> Ghost Town Protest 4--> Secret Operation 5--> Plan Put Into Place 6--> Killing Baghdad Osama 7--> Break - (NOTE: Lots of cutscenes, not alot of game play, but need to play to get storyline). *The mission will begin to come in packs, from now.* 8--> Hostige 9--> Lubeek's Death 10--> Army Door Knocking 11--> Flash Back 12--> Time To Die 13--> Hospitalisation --> Outroduction Credits: KaRzY6 - Designer and writer Dutchy3010 - Making DYOM PatrickW - Making DYOM -S-hark21 - Made the trailer alifjenius - For video reviews Feedback please Reviews by alifjenius Intro, Mission #1 and #2 Mission #3 and #4 Mission #5, #6 and #7 Mission #2.1 and #2.2 Mission #2.3 and #2.4 Mission #2.5, #2.6 and Outro Edited December 22, 2011 by KaRzY6 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 Damn, bro, you work fast! Ima try this later and post feedback. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060838416 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 Yeah, same here. When I got some time I'll try all of your missions. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060838424 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 5, 2011 Author Share Posted November 5, 2011 @ Juan-R Yeah i know, hehe @ Notna Thanks Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060838438 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 I just got done playing the 3 missions (literally, I finished them about 10 seconds ago) and they were great but short. It lacked of length. It could've been put into 1 mission but I liked the plot (objective) to the missions. Nice work, but make 'em longer please Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060840476 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted November 5, 2011 Share Posted November 5, 2011 I'm impressed, short missions but you really know how to do them. Keep the good WORK! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060840519 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 5, 2011 Author Share Posted November 5, 2011 @Juan-R Your i know, but i'll make the missions harder and longer as it goes on. Because he has only just joined the army, his missions aren't as good at the time. @Gorgonit Thank you. I'll begin to make the missions longer and harder. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060842179 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 Progress Updated Mission added. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060842885 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 6, 2011 Share Posted November 6, 2011 (edited) Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic EDIT: Amazing! Awesome! EPIC! Nice mission, bro. With the sound and effect mods I have installed, it was like a full blown war movie in HD. Keep up the great work Edited November 6, 2011 by Juan-R Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060842892 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 (edited) Gonna try it, I'll post my feedback right away on and edit of this reply to avoid "spam" from me on your topic Thanks Juan-R, I made it longer and hopefully a bit harder. But i'm not very good at making hard missions. EDIT: Juan-R Thank you, thank you, thank you Edited November 6, 2011 by KaRzY6 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060842905 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 Progress Updated Mission Added - Secret Operation Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060843292 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 6, 2011 Share Posted November 6, 2011 (edited) As always, I will play and love this mission ^^ Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts. EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply Edited November 6, 2011 by Juan-R Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060843330 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 As always, I will play and love this mission ^^ Also I will edit this reply with my thoughts. EDIT/REPLY TO MISSION 5: Well, it was well thought out, but too short. I just feeel some things could've been added. Oh and again, to prevent spam, I'll edit THIS post every time I have a reply Okay, thanks Juan-R. Um well i couldn't think of what else i could add. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060843481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 6, 2011 Author Share Posted November 6, 2011 Picture added also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. so just wait and bare with me. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060844452 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 Picture added also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. so just wait and bare with me. Sure thing, bro. Can't wait Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060849805 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 7, 2011 Author Share Posted November 7, 2011 Picture added also next mission will be on in a couple of days, laptop needs fixing. so just wait and bare with me. Sure thing, bro. Can't wait I like how Juan-R(A great designer and popular person in forums), likes my missions. It makes my feel like a good designer Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060849820 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 Just speaking my thoughts ^^ But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060849869 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 7, 2011 Author Share Posted November 7, 2011 Just speaking my thoughts ^^But seriously, you are a great designer! I'm sure you be a well-known designer in the GTA SA universe. Oh and just a quick tip, NEVER GIVE UP Thanks Juan-R!!! well i've only been designing for about 4 weeks, so hopefully in a year i'm well-known!!! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060849895 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 8, 2011 Author Share Posted November 8, 2011 Progress updated Mission added - Plan Put Into Place Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060854733 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060854763 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 8, 2011 Author Share Posted November 8, 2011 Yes! At last a new mission! Gonna play it in the morning since it's 1:32 am here and I don't have school (I won't go since I'm sick). So expect feedback in some hours Offtopic: I recently (about 2 - 3 hours ago) made and uploaded an army mission for a ongoing DYOM contest here on forums. And I used the name A69 (which stands for area 69) for one of the teams mentioned. I just noticed that if your series is named AGH69 (without GH it is A69) so sorry bout that, buddy. Hey Juan-R thanks And don't worry bro, i don't give a f*ck about the name. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060855048 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 I forgot to post feedback Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060858774 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 I forgot to post feedback Feedback: I really liked the mission and the objectives! The whole mission was overall fantastic! But I feel it could've been a bit longer. Good work, bro. Thanks bro, middle of making next mission. Shall be done in about 15 mins. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060858788 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 Progess Updated Mission added - Killing Baghdad Osama Also edited the post a bit. Enjoy Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060859000 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 Progress Updated Mission added - Break Note: There are alot of cutscenes and not alot of gameplay. But need to play the mission to get the storyline. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060859238 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exekucnak Posted November 9, 2011 Share Posted November 9, 2011 I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060860670 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 10, 2011 Author Share Posted November 10, 2011 I played all the missions and they are very nice! The Bayside base was best thing i have seen in Army missions, keep it up! Thanks Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060862537 Share on other sites More sharing options...
john12 Posted November 11, 2011 Share Posted November 11, 2011 Downloaded every mission. Gonna play for sure. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060866525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 11, 2011 Author Share Posted November 11, 2011 Downloaded every mission. Gonna play for sure. Thanks bro Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060866543 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaRzY6 Posted November 11, 2011 Author Share Posted November 11, 2011 Topic Updated Characters edited(table added) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/491604-army-team-agh69/#findComment-1060866626 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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