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KaRzY6

The Story Of Leroy Kingston-DYOM

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KaRzY6

The Story Of Leroy Kingston(TSOLK) created by KaRzY6

 

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This is The Story Of Leroy Kingston. My First Series. Play the 8 missions and give me feedback. I'm thinking about making a episode 2 of the series.

 

Plot:

You are Leroy Kingston, who grow up on a farm in the remote San Andreas desert. In the year 1984, (Leroy is 18 at this time) move to Los Santos to find work, with older brother Jamie(24yrs old). In the year 1995(Leroy is now 29), Leroy takes a holiday to Miami for to weeks. But finds that it is AWESOME! So he spend all his life-savings and stays there for a year. A banker, Mr Frewt, sells Leroy's house in Jefferson, Los Santos to pay back debt. Leroy is forced to return to Los Santos now with no money. He Stays with friend Chance because he has no house. Jamie is very pissed at Leroy because he "ran away". Then the worst thing happens.... his father dies from a heart-attack. Jamie and Leroy go home to the desert to their father's funeral. Leroy wants to get away and start a new life, so he moves to San Fierro. On the ship he meets Katie.

 

The rest will be found out in episode 2.

 

Missions:

 

Trailer - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15087

1. Back in town - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15062

2. 52 and Collin - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15063

3. Drug business - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15066

4. Officer dead - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15067

5. Nice Car - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15068

6. Desert Funeral - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15070

7. The end, but also a new beginning - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=15084

 

Enjoy =D

feedback please

 

Should i make an episode 2?

 

Reviews by AznKei

Part 1

 

Part 2

 

Part 3(end)

 

 

Edited by KaRzY6

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Notna

I am gonna try this out later and give you feedback then.

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KaRzY6

@Notna

 

thanks, i would like feedback so i can improve on my next series. colgate.gif

Edited by KaRzY6

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KaRzY6
I am gonna try this out later and give you feedback then.

Thanks colgate.gif

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Nitesh002

Going to play this later. But did you say 'a farm in a desert'?

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KaRzY6
Going to play this later. But did you say 'a farm in a desert'?

yeah?? well i'm not exactly sure what it is, so i just said it was a farm.

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Nitesh002

Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.

 

Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.

 

I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.

 

By the way, welcome to the forums. smile.gif

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KaRzY6
Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.

 

Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.

 

I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.

 

By the way, welcome to the forums. smile.gif

thanks haha. colgate.gif

 

Um after you play it, could you tell me if a 2nd episode would be good. thanks smile.gif

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KaRzY6
Oh ok. Its just that first I thought that having a farm in a desert doesn't make sense. But I realised that there are many types of farms.

 

Anyway, I see that you are also planning to make snother episode of this. Well, if you have a good idea in your mind, then there is no reason for you not to make it.

 

I will play this later as I had said before, and then give you feedback.

 

By the way, welcome to the forums. smile.gif

Oh yeah and thanks for the Welcome colgate.gif

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SatournFan

Next time, please, use the edit button, don't double-post, it's not appreciated here.

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KaRzY6
Next time, please, use the edit button, don't double-post, it's not appreciated here.

Okay thanks for the tip. smile.gif

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alifjenius

@Karzy6 : Well, you could double post if you post the update/the progress for the missions pack

 

Anyway, going to try this missions later. I'll check it

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@Karzy6 : Well, you could double post if you post the update/the progress for the missions pack

 

Anyway, going to try this missions later. I'll check it

Thanks,

Um this mission pack is sh*t. Try Superstar Baseballer(My second mission pack), its alot better. colgate.gif

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Um this mission pack is sh*t.

 

That's so self-critical, man.

 

I tried the trailer, you know, you're right. Writing is awful, no offense, and youdidn't use "Publish mission" feature.

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alifjenius

Ok, I'm trying to be honest. I already see the missions review from AznKei

Try to improve your grammar, and the capital letters used. Punctucation (I don't know if I spell it right), the (!?,'), you have to improve it too

 

It's kinda unusual for an Australian like you. It's an English speaking country, you should have done better than that !

Anyway, good luck with your missions !

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Ok, I'm trying to be honest. I already see the missions review from AznKei

Try to improve your grammar, and the capital letters used. Punctucation (I don't know if I spell it right), the (!?,'), you have to improve it too

 

It's kinda unusual for an Australian like you. It's an English speaking country, you should have done better than that !

Anyway, good luck with your missions !

Haha yeah, i know. Although Australia is english, we are very slang. Anyway, i have improve on my new series colgate.gif

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KaRzY6
Um this mission pack is sh*t.

 

That's so self-critical, man.

 

I tried the trailer, you know, you're right. Writing is awful, no offense, and youdidn't use "Publish mission" feature.

What's the publish mission feature do?? and i know it's self-critisisam but i know it's sh*t coz it's only my first missions(i only made like 3 missions before this pack). but i've played other peoples missions and learnt stuff and now i have improved a bit and my new series is better. colgate.gif

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BeamerBoyCarlos

Publish mission - a DYOM feature that lets you make a file that can NOT be edited. Don't worry, it doesn't overwrite your mission, it just makes a copy of it.

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Publish mission - a DYOM feature that lets you make a file that can NOT be edited. Don't worry, it doesn't overwrite your mission, it just makes a copy of it.

oh okay, thanks. colgate.gif i'll start to use it.

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KaRzY6

Aznkei's reviews added. Part 1, 2 and 3

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john12

BUMB Sorry sad.gif

 

I have downloaded the mission but it will be more better if you put it in a rar but anyways, stay tuned for the feedback!

 

Wow! Didn't really know that you were something like that mercie_blink.gif

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Sorry for the double post but here the feedback, icon14.gif / icon14.gificon14.gificon14.gif

 

Many spelling mistakes but excellent story plus a good chase and an ending.

 

You must make chapter 2 also. I can predict, you chap 2- icon14.gificon14.gificon14.gif / icon14.gificon14.gificon14.gif Good Luck, bro colgate.gif

 

Next, i will give feedback of Superstar baseballer. biggrin.gif

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Thanks bro, might remake the whole series. I was planning to do that, but i thought 'The Creek Banditos' would be better. Though, the remake is still on my to do list. So maybe in a month or two biggrin.gif

 

I thought the remake would be good because i have learnt many new skills and have improved on my designing. I really do like the storyline in 'The Story Of Leroy Kingston', and with better designing. This could turn out to be a hit series smile.gif

 

What you think?

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john12
What you think?

Try LCJ's idea of different costume. Make Leorny a new character. biggrin.gif

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What you think?

Try LCJ's idea of different costume. Make Leorny a new character. biggrin.gif

What do you mean? Like a different skin?

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What you think?

Try LCJ's idea of different costume. Make Leorny a new character. biggrin.gif

What do you mean? Like a different skin?

Yeah, new skin. sad.gif Ryder seems to be pretty boring... Soryy if you love him. sad.gif

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What you think?

Try LCJ's idea of different costume. Make Leorny a new character. biggrin.gif

What do you mean? Like a different skin?

Yeah, new skin. sad.gif Ryder seems to be pretty boring... Soryy if you love him. sad.gif

I do like the Ryder skin though, hehe biggrin.gif

 

But why would i change the skin though? Leroy Kingston is the Ryder skin. I made it that, so it stays like that. There's no point changing, because that's Leroy's person.

 

So sorry john... i'm not changing biggrin.gif

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It's your wish, will be nice missions if you tweak it with Notepad+++

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