DYOM Chain Story, v2

[CharlieSN95]

1- San Fierro

 

Jack: Hahaha, what a whimp.

Brian: Hehe, yeah. So now that we got our licenses, where to now?

Jack: San Fierro, we can see how things are there. If we like it, we stay, if not we leave.

Brian: Good idea, smart one. Let's get a move on.

Jack and Brian stay in San Fierro for a week and 2 days. They decide to...

 

1- Stay in San Fierro

2- Go to Mt. Chiliad

3- Go to North Rock

4- Go to Fishers Lagoon

5- Go to Las Venturas

 

[john12]

4- Go to Fishers Lagoon

 

Jack:sh*t man there isn't any boat.

Brain:see that man he has a squla.

Brain:Let's jack it.

Old man:hey what you all want?

Jack:your boat, mr.

Old man:f*ck off.

 

The old man takes out a flamethrower.

 

Jack:sh*t, let me use my.....

 

1-tear gas

2-chainsaw

3-minigun

4-greanade

[KaRzY6]

3 - minigun

 

Jack - die mother f*cker.

*old man gets shot and dies*

brian - let's steal the boat and go to...

 

1 - Los Santos

2 - Las Venturas

3 - Fishers Lagoon

4 - Bayside

[abishai.kochara]

3- Fishers Lagoon

 

They reach Fishers Lagoon at night and go the nearest bar in the town. They don't have the money to pay the bill and are then chased by the bar gaurds and then ...

 

1- They see an infernus and jack it

2- They go to a lone spot and use their guns and get into a gunfight

3- The gaurds capture them

4- They come across some of the detectives

[General Scrotum]

2- They go to a lone spot and use their guns and get into a gunfight.

 

Since they have a Minigun, they win the gunfight quickly. One problem; the army arrives because someone called them for terrorist activities. They get captured by the army and they wake up in...

 

1- Base 69.

2- Easter Basin Naval Base.

3- KACC.

4- Nation Guard Depot.

[KaRzY6]

1 - Base 69

 

They woke up with heaps of guns to their faces.

(Jack) - Where the f*ck are we??

(Brian) - We will ***

 

*** -

1. Try to escape/Make an escape plan.

2. Be good and hope that they let us go.

3. Hit 1 of them and steal their gun and shoot them down.

[abishai.kochara]

1. Make an escape plan

 

"Okay we'll moniter the gaurds movements and escape" said Jack "With our luck probably we'll get framed for dropping a nuclear bomb on San Andreas." "If we escape" added Brian.

After a week they make their plan and during the lunch hours after interrogation they escape through the ventilation in the toilet but are captured on camera. They get on the runway, jack a plane and .....

 

1. They crashland in the outskirts of Las Venturas

2. They manage to make make it to San Fierro but their plane gets shot at Easter Naval Basin

3. They make it to Las Santos but are wanted by the police

4. They realize the plane needs refuelling

Edited November 10, 2011 by abishai.kochara

[KaRzY6]

4 -Plane needs refueling

 

(Jack) - f*ck we're going down.

(Brian) - We should of checked the fuel before we jacked it.

 

The planes goes down and crashes at ***

 

*** =

1. Angel Pine

2. Ghost Town (Las Brujas)

3. Dillimore

4. Mountain behind Bayside.

[john12]

3. Dillimore

 

Jack-f*ck it man.

Brian-relax, calm down.... Oh! sh*t run

Jack-What!!

 

They both ran for cover when the gas station exploded. While in the explosion, A corrupt cop comes and say,"come with me."

 

Jack and Brian followed the cop at .....

 

1.Behind the police department.

2.bar shop.

3.his house.

4.middle of nowhere.

[Notna]

4. Middle of nowhere

 

Jack and Brian followed the cop to a creepy forest.

"Who are you?" Brian asked from the cop. Cop kept the silence, and continued walking. After walking for 30 minutes, he stopped. Then, he took his gun and pointed it on Brian and Jack.

"sh*t! We thought you want to help us!" Jack shouted. The cop remained calm and still pointed the gun at Brian and Jack.

"What you want from us?!" Brian asked. The cop started laughing and just watched them. He walked closer to them. Quietly, he came just next to Jack's ear.

"Jack Frazer. Do you remember me?" the cop whispered. "Do you remember our plan?" he whispered again. Jack had no idea what he was talking about. Cop came closer to his ear.

"Jack, I have your son. Isn't it strange, that always you have a problem, your son has too?" he whsipered again. Jack, in rage, shouted: "Motherf*cker!".

"Relax. Now, what you have to do, is to kill Brian. Otherwise, you will die. And your son as well. I am gonna leave now, after you've finished, let the body be here. I'll check it later. If you don't kill him, Kyle dies" the cop whispered. He gave his gun to Jack and in a second, he ran away.

"What did he say? And why did he give his gun to you!?" Brian asked. Jack turned around. "I am sorry Brian." he said. Brian realised what's happening. "Turn around. On your knees" Jack said and a tear was on his eye. "f*ck it! If you're gonna kill me, do it eye on eye!" Brian shouted. Jack kept his finger on the trigger and...

 

1. Killed Brian.

2. Shot in the air.

3. Drop the gun down.

4. Started to run after the cop.

5. Killed himself.

[john12]

4. Started to run after the cop.

 

The cop ran fast but didn't know that they both were following.

There, Jack explains what the cop said.

 

Brian-Its ok man, you are my best friend and I will not forgive him for kidnapping your son and blackmailing you.

Jack-Thanks, man.

 

They both followed the cop near the freeway.

 

Cop-you moron, why didn't you kill him? now you are gonna die.

 

Just that time, a heavy bus came and rammed the cop.

 

Jack-Where you kept my son?

cop-in the......

 

1.his house

2.LS

3.Red county

4.died without saying anything.

[KaRzY6]

4 - Died without saying anything.

 

(cop) - ......

*cop dies*

(Jack) f*ck!!!!! how will i find him now?

(Brian) It's okay, i know a person, ***, she can help us find him, she's in the Army.

 

*** =

1. Private Beth Goonan

2. Corporal Georgie Peters

3. Sergeant Hannah Smith

4. Captain Fay McPhee

[maliksusanto]

3. Sergeant Hannah Smith

 

Brian:I am Sure She can Help

Jack:Ok...Let's go

(Brian and Jack Heard Gunshot)

Jack:What the f*ck is that?

Brian:Let's Check it out

 

They Found Some Army and Ballas Gang

Brian:It's Sergeant Hannah

Jack:What Should we do?

Brian:.....

 

1.Help Army

2.Just Look the Gunfight

3.Run away

[KaRzY6]

1. Help army

 

(Brian) We should help the army, so we get their trust. Then they we help us find your son.

(Jack) Yeah, your right.

*Go start to shoot ballas*

 

1. Brian gets shoot by the ballas in the arm.

2. The army wins and helps Jack find his son.

3. Army begins to shoot at Jack and Brian.

4. A balla car pulls up and has Jack's son hostige, with a gun to his head.

 

 

[CharlieSN95]

1. Brian gets shot by the Ballas in the arm.

 

Jack: Brian, toss me that AK!

*Brian throws an AK to Jack*

Brian: We're in for a hell of a shoot out, Jack!

Jack: I know! Yeehaw!

 

*After 5 minutes of shooting*

 

Brian: Yes! We killed 'em all, take that you Balla piece of sh*t!

*Brian kicks a Balla's corpse*

Jack: C'mon, it's over for now. Let's talk to the Captain.

 

*Arrived to the Captain*

 

Captain: Good shootin', boys. My name is Captain Juan Rami, but you can call me Captain JR.

Brian: I'm Brian. This is Jack. Listen, we're here to ask you for your help.

Captain JR: Sure, what is it, son?

Brian: Well...

Soldier: Captain, a Balla car is inbound!

Jack: What? There's more?!

Captain JR: They must've called reinforcements.

 

*Drift Sound*

*Balla sticks his right arm and his head out the back left window of the purple Majestic*

*Tec-9 gun shots*

*Jack runs after the car while shooting*

*Jack turns around*

 

Jack: Brian!! No, no, no, this isn't happening.

Brian: J-Jack...

Jack: Brian! Hang on! Captain, I need a vehicle that will get me quick to the hospital!

Captain JR: Well we got a Chopper you could use.

Jack: That'll have to work. Help me take Brian onboard the Chopper.

 

*Jack and Captain JR carry Brian to the Chopper and lay him on a seat.*

 

Captain JR: G'luck, kid. And thanks. If you need me, go to this address.

Jack: Will do, thanks, Captain.

 

*Jack takes off*

 

Then...

 

1. Jack makes it to the Hospital in time and Brian survives.

2. Jack makes it to the Hospital in time but Brian dies.

3. Brian dies in the Chopper.

4. Jack gets attacked by someone.

5. The chopper runs out of fuel.

Edited November 13, 2011 by Juan-R

[Satourn]

This story went wrong after that turn with old man's boat and Fisher's Lagoon, but well, let's continue it right way, as characters still need to kill Romeo Lavigne and Mucho Villa.

 

5. The chopper runs out of fuel (a little remark: in the air)

 

Jack already got to hospital, but while flying, he didn't notice that fuel is low. When they're about to crash near the Red County forest, Jack realises that either Captain Rami set them up or someone from his crew set them up.

 

Jack: "f*ck! God, don't let us d.."

 

The chopper crashes in the middle of Red County forest. Jack is nearly dead, trying to get out from the burning heli remains, while Brian's lying dead.

 

Jack: "Please, don't let me... die..."

 

Chopper explodes once again.

 

The next day, at Mucho Villa's residence.

 

News reporter: "Yesterday, a big explosion occured in the middle of Red County forest. Witnesses saw a big fire and heard some loud noise. There were two dead bodies found by police dogs. One of them is still unidentified, while the other one isn't. The identified man was nearly 27 years old, wore a black jacket and brown pants. We had an interview with the police officer Mark Cholung the following day, that's what he said."

Officer Mark Cholung: "We can surely tell you that the identified person was a man, nearly 27 years old. We found out later that his name was Jack Frazer..."

 

TV turned off. Some people are laughing.

 

Mucho: "Now, we can say that we won, brothers. Hahaha!"

Romeo: "Finally... Those f*cks are gone..."

 

Meanwhile...

 

Person: "Oh no... Jack... Bro.. ther.."

Person: "I will find out who did it... I promise... Jack."

 

The person was:

 

1. Jack's brother

2. Jack's sister

3. Jack's cousin

 

Oh, and btw, I think I'm going to ban john12 from enjoying playing this game for 1 week for making this story stupid a bit.

 

And, another announce. Now, Chapter 1 is done, Chapter 2 will start as soon as the next writer will continue the story. I think I'm now going to make Chapter 1 into missions.

Edited November 14, 2011 by SatournFan

[Notna]

So we are(or you) gonna make this story into missions? And yes, that flamethrower & minigun part sucked...

 

1. Jack's brother

 

"YOU WILL PAY, MOTHERf*ckER!" he screamed. Someone walked next to him.

"Thomas? What's wrong, honey?" female voice asked.

"Kelly... It's my lil bro, Jack... He's dead" Thomas answered. Kelly started to cry and he hugged his sad husband.

 

Thomas took his 9mm gun and opened the door. "Thomas!" Kelly shouted, drying his eyes. Thomas turned around.

"Please. Don't go. If someone did something to your brother, he will hurt you as well" she said in fear. Thomas watched on her eyes, and walked out and closed the door of his house in Palomino Creek.

"I have to get some evidence. I should go to..."

 

1. Jack's house in Los Santos.

2. To speak with Jack's friend in Fallen Tree.

3. To Red County forest, where the accident happened.

[Satourn]

2. Speak with Jack's friend from Fallen Tree.

 

Thomas: "I know there's that guy, Martin Spodes, who knew my bro very well, was like a good friend of him. I need to meet with him, but f*ck me, I dunno where he lives."

 

Phone rang.

 

Thomas: "Speak."

Person: "Darn, you must be Thomas Link-Frazer, Jack's elder bro', right?"

Thomas: "Ye.. Wait, how the hell..."

Person: "My name is Martin, Martin Spodes, I was Jack's friend."

Thomas: "I was just referring to you. I just want to meet up. Where you live?"

Martin: "Come to Fallen Tree bar, under the bridge, we'll talk there."

Thomas: "Okay, dude. See ya' in 2 hours. (hanged up)"

Thomas(to himself): "Now, when I know where he is, I just need to speak with him."

 

Thomas put his phone away and caught a taxi.

 

Thomas: "Fallen Tree, please."

 

Taxi drove away. Thomas, being tired from everything, fell asleep. Next minute he woke up somewhere he never been before.

 

Thomas: "Hey, what the f*ck? Damn, where are we? Who the f*ck are you?"

Taxi driver: "This ride will cost you much, f*ckster. Now, sleep."

Thomas: "What the..?"

 

Thomas fell asleep again after he was poisoned. He woke up in some warehouse, next to him there were two men standing and holding MP5.

 

Goon 1: "Look, he woke up. Go call the boss."

 

Second goon ran away, only to appear in next 5 minutes, with the good-dressed person, calling himself Mucho.

 

Mucho: "So, huh, you're Thomas Link-Frazer, huh? Welcome to your new home, clown. We killed your brother, and now we'll kill you. Well, not now. Later. You, check this dickhead, and you, come with me."

 

One of the goons went with Mucho.

 

Some hours later, Thomas' phone rang. It was Martin.

 

Goon 1: "Answer. Don't even dare to tell about us, or you're dead."

Thomas: "Speak."

Martin: "Thomas?! Where are you? I'm waiting for..."

Thomas: "Listen. I'm inside the mystery, okay? Understand me. (to goon) Where this warehouse is?"

Goon 1: "Heh, you wanna sh*t me? Well, I'll give you a try, f*ckster. We're at xxx"

Thomas: "The mystery is xxx, okay? If you won't help me, mystery will eat me. Come. Please. (hanged up)"

 

Few hours later...

 

xxx is:

 

1. LVA Freight Depot

2. Sindacco Abbatoir

3. Caligula's Casino Ground Floor

 

What happened?

 

1. Martin came and saved Thomas

2. Martin didn't came

3. Martin came and... (writer's choice)

[alifjenius]

2 - Sindacco Abbatoir

3 - Martin came but found out that no one was in Sindacco Abbatoir

 

Martin : What the f*ck ? Why he lied to me ???

 

Meanwhile, at the place Thomas was held

 

Thomas : Wait a minute, this wasn't even an Abbatoir ! f*ck you ! Where am I exactly ?

Goon 1 : He he he, you were a dickhead to believe me. There wasn't even a meat's smell around here, idiot ! Think again, that club sound, all of these boxes....

Thomas : (It's look like a warehouse or something. Something like.... An underground base)

Goon 1 : Now you know it, Einstein ?

Thomas : What the f*ck, I just realized ! I'm at XXX ground floor

Goon 1 : You are right. Ha ha ha ! Now your friend is on our trap !

Thomas : What the f*ck !

 

Back again to Martin, outside the abbatoir. He found a truck

 

Martin : What the hell this truck is doing in here ? Wait a minute... This is a ....

 

Martin checked the back of the truck it was a bomb...

 

Martin : f*ck !!!

 

xxx is...

 

1- Four Dragon Casino

2 - Caligula Casino

3 - The Visage

 

What Martin will do ?

1 - Run

2 - Disarm the bomb

3 - Take off the bomb, throw it away

4 - Shoot the bomb from far away

[Satourn]

Heh, I see that multiple decision is popular

 

xxx is 3). The Visage

 

Martin 1). Ran away

 

Martin ran away from the truck, noly to be stopped by a speeding white Admiral, almost hitting Martin.

 

Goon: "Here you are, asshole! Prepare to die..."

 

Goon fell on the ground. Martin took his pistol and shot every goon near the Admiral.

 

Martin: "Now, where can Thomas be? Stop, what is that?"

 

Martin came to the car and read a company sign.

 

Martin: "The Visage Hotel: make some rest, be the best. Okay, Thomas, I'm going to you."

 

Meanwhile, in the Visage.

 

Goon 1: "f*ck, I need to go to toilet. Don't even dare to run away."

Thomas: "Whatever, monkey."

 

Goon went to the toilet, with Thomas left in a room with phone.

 

Thomas: "Gotta... make... a call"

Thomas: "Martin? Is it you?"

Martin: "Yeah, it's me, Thomas, and I'm coming. I'm nearly here, wait."

Thomas: "Wha..?! How..?! Well, it doesn't matter, be fast."

 

What happened?

 

1. Martin came and saved Thomas

2. Martin came, tried to save Thomas, but was wounded

[Satourn]

Umm, bump.

 

So, anyone's up to continue this story? Or should we start new one?

[CharlieSN95]

I think a new one will be good, since the main characters died in this one. A new story will be interesting, lets see what others think about it.

[abishai.kochara]

lets start a new one

[General Scrotum]

Let's start a new one.

[Satourn]

Okay, so let's start a new one.

 

You woke up lying on ground, gunshots can be heard. A person is crouching near you, trying to wake you up.

 

Person: "Thank God, you're alive. How's your head?"

You: "What... happened?"

Person: "You don't remember, xxx?"

 

xxx (you) is:

 

1. Matthew Sunside

2. Fraser Allen

3. Josh Carr

 

Also, meaning this is the new story, I unban john12.

[CharlieSN95]

2. Fraser Allen

 

Person: You don't remember, Fraser Allen?

Allen: No. W-what happened? Where am I?

Person: Well,...

 

1. We're in war for San Fierro. You jumped away from a grenade and hit your head.

2. We're in the Los Santos Bank, there is a robbery going on. Shh, or else they'll kill us.

3. We're in Mount Chilliad, we were captured by Global Terrorists. They killed our commrads.

4. We're in your room, you were in a car crash. You damaged your head.

5. We're in Area 69's shooting range, we rescued you from a battle against a criminal organization.

[KaRzY6]

1. We're in war for San Fierro. You jumped away from a grenade and hit your head.

 

Person: Well..we're in war for San Fierro. You jumped away from a grenade and hit your head.

Allen: Who are you again?

Person: WTF!! You don't remember my name? It's me, ***

 

*** =

1. Private Goodes

2. Sergeant Liverpool

3. Matthew Sunside

4. Captain Lubeek

[Satourn]

4. Captain Jack Lubeek

 

Jack: "It's me, Jack. Damn, you lost some of your brains... We need to go."

Fraser: "W-Where?"

Jack: "We're going to hospital. It's time to heal you up, soldier."

 

Jack and Fraser, crouching through dead bodies and gunshots, going slowly out of sight. While after, they appeared at hospital. Nurse and the commandos are watching at Fraser.

 

Commandos: "Private Allen!"

Fraser: "Sir, yes, sir!"

Commandos: "Why you're here? You need to go down there and battle for our destiny!"

Jack: "Are you crazy, General Williams? You see, his head is gonna blow off his shoulders! He almost got blown off by grenade!"

Williams: "Oh... Sorry, Private! You two, get yourself a car and head to the base, Bone County, Area 69."

Jack: "Thanks, General."

 

Jack and Fraser got in Patriot and head to Area 69. Suddenly, on their way to base...

 

1. Terrorists attacked them.

2. Their car destroyed.

3. They were stopped by Secret Service agents.

[GTAIndonesia]

Keep it up guys.

[john12]

Sorry guys that i made story stupid. I will not do it again, SatournFan.

 

1. Terrorists attacked them.

 

Fraser: Why this happens to us? Everytime we only get troubles.

Jack: Now shut up! They are coming our way. We need to take them out. Go to the trunk. Now!

 

Fraser went to the trunk.

 

Fraser: Here! Take this Rifle.

Jack: Cool! We will take them down in distance.

 

Terrorists 1: sh*t! They are gonna snipe us down! What to do?

Terrorists 2: Say goodbye to the world. I will miss you. Aiie!

 

***= What happened?

 

1. They both died.

2. Terrorist 1 killed Fraser and Jack.

3. Fraser's sniper trigger was broken.

4. Fraser and Jack spared those fools.

 

If you think this story is stupid, then continue with any other option. Sorry again