Notna Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 (We have a problem here. Brian was in the van what Romeo stole) 4. Someone else "It's... this doesn't say. The name is cutted of." Jack said. "Great. This is going deeper and deeper..." Brian said and looked to the hills, and saw... 1. Cops. 2. Armed men. 3. More assasins. 4. Military. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060770679 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuntzman Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 2. Armed men. One of the armed men had gotten behind them and planted another bomb. It explodes and everyone pass out. Jack wakes up, and sees Johnny tied up and being tortured. Jack tries to speak to make him stop, but he can't . A man with sunglasses walks up to Jack. It is... 1. John Secronom 2. A CIA agent 3. Mike Toreno Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060770852 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted October 17, 2011 Share Posted October 17, 2011 3. Mike Toreno He is followed by John Secronom. Toreno: We need to liberate him. John: We managed to sneak behind them. It's time to get the job done. 1- Toreno and John kill everyone and untie both Jack and Johnny. 2- They untie Jack, kill everyone, then untie Johnny. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060771470 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 18, 2011 Author Share Posted October 18, 2011 1. Toreno and John kill everyone and untie both Jack and Johnny. Jack: "Oh, man, thanks. What's your name?" Mike: "Mike Toreno." Jack: "Thanks, Mike. Now, we need to finally move to hospital, we have no time." Mike and John: "We parked the car just outside." Brian: "Alrighty then! Let's..." Johnny: "LET'S f*ckIN' GO!" All of them are moving to the car, only to notice a man, wearing a smoking. Man: "Well, well, what a meet! Jack f*cking Frazer! Long time, is it?" Jack: "Oh no!" Brian: "What again?! Don't tell me it's another ghost from the past!" Jack: "But, it is." Brian: "Wha..?! Oh, man!" Man: "Yes, another ghost. I think you recognize me." Jack: "Yes, I recognize you, xxx." Xxx: "Then, let's have a little conversation, Jackie." Jack: "xxx, we have no time, our friend's gonna die!" Xxx: "It doesn't matter to me." Jack: "Then, you doesn't matter to me too..." xxx is: 1). Jim Jenkins 2). Mucho Villa 3). Carl Robbins 4). Wade Paulson What happened next? 1). Jack shoots xxx dead. 2). Jack wounds xxx, but instead he's wounded too. 3). Jack shoots xxx, but instead xxx kills Johnny(Brian, Mike or John) at last moment 4). Jack shoots at xxx, but misses, and gets wounded. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772105 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 2. Mucho Villa(Isn't he the main antagonist from your new mission pack?) 4. Jack shoots at xxx, but misses, and gets wounded. Mucho Villa laughs and runs away. Jack falls down. "Aww sh*t!" Brian screams. Toreno jumps in his car and starts following Mucho, who takes his Sanchez-motorbike and drives away. "Hey, Toreno, wait!" Johnny screams. John realises that Mike is not tracking Mucho, he's helping him to escape. John draws his Desert Eagle on the car and... 1. He shoots the back glass of Toreno's Washington and hits Toreno in the shoulder. 2. He pops Toreno's tire. 3. He lets Toreno go. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772163 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 18, 2011 Author Share Posted October 18, 2011 Yes, he's the main antagonist. I chose 3 antagonists of mine and one antagonist of yours. 1. He shoots the back glass of Toreno's Washington and hits him in the shoulder A scream is heard. Mike: "Aargh!" Mike lets the steering-wheel of his car of and loses the control. His car drives in random way, but, unluckily, the steering-wheel turns around and the car drives left, exactly in the big gas tank. Mike "Oh, nooo!" The car crushes in the tank, making it explode. The group runs to the place of explosion, only to see very injured Mike trying to get out of his car. More than half of his body has been burnt. Mike: "(Painful scream)" Jack: "It's time to die, fool!" Jack snatches Jack's Desert Eagle from his hands and shoots three times at Mike's body. Mike dies. The group's going away from the place. Jack: "f*ck, Villa escaped." John: "Don't panic, Jack, we'll find the asshole. Now, let's..." 1. Rest 2. Eat 3. Sleep 4. Do something Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772179 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 If it's about 1 guy's Mission Pack, that's boring. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772213 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 (edited) If it's about 1 guy's Mission Pack, that's boring. What the heck are you talking about...? Edited October 18, 2011 by Notna Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772222 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 If it's about 1 guy's Mission Pack, that's boring. It's a mix of everyone's mission packs. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772377 Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 If it's about 1 guy's Mission Pack, that's boring. It's a mix of everyone's mission packs. I don't get this topic, is someone going to make a missionpack out of it? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772398 Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauliux2 Posted October 18, 2011 Share Posted October 18, 2011 :FACEPALM: No...It's just a CHAIN GAME...Chain-Game...(Chain-game) Read the rules... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060772447 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 I don't get this topic, is someone going to make a missionpack out of it? As Secronom President said already, this is just a story about protagonists we made. Though, I'm not interested to make a mission pack about it. If someone do, then he'll make it, I think. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060773250 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 Guys, sorry for double post, but the bump. Any replies? Or is it already dead? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776073 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 I was just watching the topic, thought that I would reply to the story, so... 2. Eat The group goes to Cluckin' Bell nearby. While sitting on the table, eating food, Brian notices something. "Watch that car. It's driving really fast!" he says, and in the same time, a black Washington stops just before hitting the wall of the restaurant. The glasses open and three men start firing from the car. "Oh sh*t, a drive-by!" Jack screams and they all dive to the floor. John takes his Desert Eagle and fires few shots, but then he hears a click from the gun, and realises that it is jammed. "sh*t. Guys, the back door!" John says and they start to run to the back door. When they open the back door... 1. In the alley is a man holding a gun on them. 2. They run through the alley and steal a car. 3. They jump through the window of a building nearby and continue running in the building. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776076 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 21, 2011 Author Share Posted October 21, 2011 2. They run through the alley and steal a car. Jack: "Look, there's a car we can take! C'mon, hop inside!" After the group sat in the car, another car with firing goons is smashing the building and starts to chase Jack, Brian, John and Johnny. Johnny: "Aargh, f*ck, I'm gonna die in my own blood!" Jack: "sh*t, we still need to get Johnny to the hospital. Brian! Hit the gas, we'll take care of those assholes!" A Sentinel the group is inside starts to drive in random. One of the goons hits a wheel by bullet. Car turns over to its ceiling. Brian: "Oh, shiit!" Sentinel hops from each side to each side several times before it lands on its wheels. It nearly blows. The two who stayed alive, Jack and Brian, get outside the car and stand on the feet. The chasing car stops near them. Goons point their guns at the survivors and... 1. They shoot Jack and Brian in cold blood to death. 2. They shoots at both, but miss. 3. They tried to shoot but they're out of ammo. 4. They shoot at both, but only one dies(choose who). Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776081 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 (edited) 3.They tried to shoot,but they're out of ammo. A fast black Premier speeds to them, a guy in a black suit, a glasses,a nametag reading "07",Kills the ones who tried to kill Brian and Jack Agent: (Wielding a SPAS 12) You two!,Unless you want to live, Get in the car! So, Jack and Brian..... 1.Knocks out the Agent and escape. 2.Stay with the Agent to Pentagon for Interrogation Edited October 21, 2011 by GTAIndonesia Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776368 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 (edited) 2. Stay with the agent to Pentagon for Interogation After a long drive, the agent tell the group to follow him and sit in front of a room which has "Interogation Room" sign on the door. He leaves the group and a man calls Jack for the interogation. Inside the room, an agent carrying an M4 stand beside the door, and 2 chairs with 1 table are the only things in the room. Jack sits on the chair and wait for the agent. Jack asked the guard about the agent that helped him whereabout Jack : Where is the agent ? Guard : He will come soon. Just sit in that f*cking chair Jack : Whatever Few minutes later, a man with a document in his hand enter the room. He sits on the chair in front of Jack, put his coffee cup in the table and start to open the document. While he reads the document, he asks a question Agent : So, what just happened ? Why those guys chased you and your friends ? You're hiding something, don't you ? Jack then... 1 - Tell all the truth about what just happened 2 - Altered his story about what just happened 3 - Make a bullsh*t story (What ? San Andreas has a Pentagon ? Or maybe this is from GTAIndonesia's missions pack ?) What grammar are we using in this story ? Past simple or Present simple ? Edited October 21, 2011 by alifjenius Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776396 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtreme_Xecution Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 Awesome story guys! And don't start to spam that topic with non-sense just tell story. Cool. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776477 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 (Dunno about the past and present, just using my style, I am noob in the terms of writing, althrough everyone said that I am good writer... And yes, 07 and Pentagon are from GTAIndonesia's mission pack) 1. Tell all the truth about what happened. Jack explained everything. Agent listened him carefully and wrote everything in his little notebook. Jack didn't lie, cause he was sure that the agent can get a some type of a deal for him. After Jack had told everything, Agent gave the notebook for a guard, who gave it to a officer, who ran away, possibly taking the notebook for their boss. "For your own best, I hope you told the truth. Maybe you can avoid the death row now. I am going to talk to your friend now" Agent said and leaved the room. Jack realised that he's not going to get away with his crimes. Killing 3 people and stealing at least one car after the morning, it was very possible that he would receive the reward of the death row. Jack saw only one choice. He screamed for a guard. Guard entered the room and asked what he wants. Suddenly, Jack stands up, hits the guard in the face and crashes his head on the table. Jack takes his M4 and leaves the room and... 1. Goes Rambo and kills every one in the Pentagon office. 2. Stealth kills anyone in his way out and leaves the building. 3. Tries to find Brian. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060776541 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted October 22, 2011 Author Share Posted October 22, 2011 2. Stealth kills anyone on his way and leaves the building Luckily, Jack found a knife on one of the tables. After escaping, Jack suddenly realises that he forgot about Brian. Jack: "Oh, f*ck, I forgot Brian there. Well, I still have my M4." Jack goes inside the building and heads to where Brian's holding. Painful screams heard around the room. Jack(to himself): "Oh, you f*cking bastard, you gotta pay for this." Jack enters the room, only to surprisingly notice that Agent is lying on the floor in blood, and Brian stands in front of him. Jack: "Oh my..." Brian: "Yes, that was nice, I know. Now, let's get the f*ck outta here, man." Jack and Brian heading outside the building. Jack: "Well, we had a wonderful day. Let's go home, I'm so f*cking tired." Brian: "Same here. Look, there's a car." The two go to the car and sit in it. The next day... 1. Jack finds out that Brian's missing. 2. Brian finds out that Jack's missing. 3. The two rise in some building. 4. Everything goes fine, until... (choice of next writer). Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060777379 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 Man, the Agent was the protagonist of my Mission Pack Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060777445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 Man, if your character dies in this, it doesn't mean that he/she is dead in your mission packs dimension. This is like a crossover dimension, where nothing what occurs in this "dimension" occurs in the "right" dimension. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060777504 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 4. Everything goes fine until... Jack and Brian leave the house and saw a black stripped Hunter flying in direction to the house. Jack: The f*ck is that helicopter? Brian: I don't know... Suddenly, the helicopter starts shooting at they with the Machine gun. Brian: Get in the car, QUCIK! They get in the car and... 1. One of the missiles hit the car and they go hell. 2. They start running from the helicopter. 3. Suddenly, there was a RPG in the car, and Jack uses it at the helicopter. 4. They go to Clucking Bell and have a eat. Meanwhile, the helicopter shoots the building up. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060777781 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 2. They start running from the helicopter. Brian drives so fast than the car can. Jack's watching how the helicopter is coming closer and closer. Jack gets an idea when he notices that the helicopter is about to launch rockets. "Brian, U-turn, now!" Jack screams and Brian does so. Helicopter launches the rockets, but misses. Brian hits the gas and Jack watches from the backglass, when the hunter crashes on a tall building nearby. "Yeehaa!" Brian says gladly and stops the car. "We can't stay in San Fierro anymore. Let's go to..." 1. Bayside. 2. El Castillo del Diablo. 3. Las Venturas. 4. Fort Carson. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060777800 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 1. Bayside. When they are there, they find an empty house and make themselves at home. They even decide to go to the boat school to learn how to 'boat' (?) a boat. They... 1- Get their licenses. 2- Don't get their licences. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060786273 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 2 - Don't get their licenses Jack remember about the crash he has made with the school's boat. That made Jack kicked out from the school. Brian stucked his Hovercraft on the beach, thus make the Hovercraft exploded. It made him kicked out from the school too. They go home and have a conversation to discuss about their licenses Jack : Man, we have to get those f*cking licenses ! I have a plan to... 1 - Go to Los Santos by sea 2 - Earn money by Boat attraction 3 - Fish some fishes Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060786380 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alifjenius Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 *BUMP* Who wants to continue the story ? Sorry for double post Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060850748 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted November 7, 2011 Share Posted November 7, 2011 2 - Earn money by Boat attraction Jack: If he doesn't want to give them to us, we'll convince him. Brian: Seems like a good plan. They... 1- Try to get them again and pass the tests. 2- Try to get them again, fail, and convince the school owner the licenses to them. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060852833 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlieSN95 Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 2 - Try to get them again, fail, and convince the school owner the licenses to them. Teacher: Sorry boys, you failed the test...again. Jack reaches in his left pocket slowly taking out 2 $100 bills. Jack: You were saying, teacher? Teacher: You... 1- Pass and get the licenses. 2- Don't pass and lose $200. 3- Get reported by the cops for "bribery". (I dunno if that's a valid reason to call the cops but hey, this is a game, right?) 4- Don't pass and get in a fist fight with the teacher. (I don't know if I am doing this right, if I'm not, let me know please ) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060854587 Share on other sites More sharing options...
abishai.kochara Posted November 8, 2011 Share Posted November 8, 2011 4- don't pass and get in a fist fight with the teacher They beat up the teacher and he is lying on the floor with a bleeding nose, "Wait! I will give you a license but please don't hurt me." After this they both leave for 1- San Fierro 2- Mount Chiliad 3- Fishers Lagoon 4- North Rock Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/489002-dyom-chain-story-v2/page/2/#findComment-1060854653 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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