DYOM Chain Story, v2

[Satourn]

Hello, dudes. I'm here to recreate the DYOM Chain Story. The old topic is here: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showtopic=475608

 

 

HOW TO PLAY
1	Someone will write part of a story. i.e. Johnny then stole a car and traveled to...
2	Then the writer must add up to five options for the next writer. i.e. The Docks or Unity Station
3	Any person can take over from that point

RULES
1	The character can perform actions only that can be done in the game, meaning no he goes fishing, napping etc. You can do character is kidnapped just to keep things interesting.
2	No pointless "go no where" plots
3	No more than 5 options for a story part
4	You are allowed to kill off main characters but not permanently they just respawn a day later. But try to refrain from killing them too often, or I'll stop you. i.e. Seville Cheng, John Secronom, Johnny, etc... Note you can kill the main character, he just respawns at the hospital
5	No cheats. i.e. Then the character got infinite health and armour
6	Who ever posts first between 2 more people the first story will continue as normal, the 2nd or 3rd story replying to a same story part must edit their post and must say 'never mind this' to not cause confusion
7	No stupid myth crap eg. Aliens, Leatherface, Piggsy, CJ's mum's ghost or any supernatural sh*t that isn't in the game
8	Please do not edit your story if it IS used already by another writer
9	You can say the character finds weapons but only in correct and real spawn points in the game
10	The same writer can NOT reply to their own story

Please pay the most attention to the Underlined and Bold Rules

 

 

TRY TO KEEP THE STORY BELIEVABLE AND REALISTIC, NO STUPID IDIOTIC OPTIONS/POSTS

 

Please try to refrain from using 'Kill everyone with a Minigun' or anything including the words 'kill everyone' with some sort of weapon.

If you do use these, you're an idiot

I will go 1st

 

You woke up in some building, lying on white bed. After you saw a nurse coming to you, you realise that you're in hospital.

 

Nurse: Oh, you woke up, I see. Let's look... Oh, your name is...

 

OPTION 1 Johnny Nixon

OPTION 2 Jack Frazer

OPTION 3 John Secronom

OPTION 4 Another protagonist not mentionned above.

 

 

Currently On BanReasonTimeNo one

Edited November 19, 2011 by SatournFan

[Notna]

Jack Frazer.

 

"Why am I in a hospital?" Jack asks.

"Well, you got..."

 

1. Stabbed in a bar fight.

2. Shotted by an assasin.

[Jimmy_Leppard]

''Well, you got stabbed in a bar fight.'' Nurse replies.

''Goddamn. I have to call my pal to pick me up.''

 

I'll call..

 

1. Brian Thompson

2. Logan Jett

[Satourn]

nvm

Edited October 16, 2011 by SatournFan

[Notna]

I'll call Brian Thompson.

 

"Brian, it's me, Jack. I am in a hospital, can you pick me up?"

"I..."

 

1. I am coming right now.

2. I am sorry, but I can't come right now. I'll pick you up later.

3. I am coming, but I need your help in one thing.

[Satourn]

1. I'm coming right now.

 

Brian: "I'm coming right now, wait"

Jack: "Okay"

 

Few minutes later, a guy appears at Jack's ward, calling himself Brian.

 

Jack: "Oh, it's finally you"

Brian: "C'mon, let's go. We'll drive to..."

 

1. My house

2. Our hideout

3. Another place

[Mati]

1. My house.

 

Brian takes the driver seat, while Jack painfully steps into the front passenger seat.

As they drive, they discuss the old times. But suddenly, the xxx appear behind them!

 

xxx=

1. Triads

2. Assassins

3. Zombies

4. Ballas

5. Detectives Norman and Lemon

[Notna]

Nevermind.

[Satourn]

2. Assassins

 

But suddenly the assassins appeared behind them, driving in black Admirals.

 

Jack: "sh*t, who the f*ck are those goons?"

Brian: "You don't remember anything? Those guys tried to kill you at the bar!"

Jack: "What?! Oh, hell no..."

Brian: "Those are Naysmith's goons, he hired the assholes to eliminate you"

Jack: "Then f*ckin' drive faster!"

 

Brian hits the gas and his car drives way more faster, and after few seconds it disappears from assassins's sight.

 

Brian: "Phew, I think we shaked them. Now we can drive easily"

 

Brian and Jack approach Brian's house, where they're already waited by...

 

1. Seville Cheng and his goons

2. Johnny Nixon

3. Bikers

4. Another person

Edited October 16, 2011 by SatournFan

[Notna]

2. Johnny Nixon.

 

"Johnny, man, how are you?" Jack asks when he leaves Brian's car.

"Fine, but how 're yo' dude? I heard that yo' were stabbed" Johnny says.

"Yeah, that was what they said. Brian, you were there with me, what happened?" Jack asks and looks Brian.

"Well..."

 

1. We were drinking when those assasins come from behind and hitted you with knife.

2. You tried to stop a fight between two guys, when the another assasin entered the bar and throwed a knife to your back.

Edited October 16, 2011 by Notna

[Satourn]

I'm doing this because someone can take my turn.

[General Scrotum]

1. We were drinking when those assasins came from behind and hit you with knife.

 

Jack: Damn! What do we do now?

Brian: We go see the man who's the best to deal with such situations without losing his nerves...

Jack: Who is it?

Brian: John Secronom!

 

1. They go to John's house.

2. Mister Naysmith happens to be passing around.

3. More assassins show up.

[Notna]

1. They go to John's house.

 

Brian drives his car to John's house. Brian, Jack and Johnny leave the car. Jack knocks on John's door, but nobody answers.

Finally, John arrives from his carage but don't notice who are the comers.

 

1. John draws his Desert Eagle on the comers.

2. John starts running to his car.

3. John asks: "Who the hell are you!?"

[General Scrotum]

1. John draws his Desert Eagle on the comers.

 

Jack: Calm down, man.

John: Who are you?

Jack: We need your help. I heard you were the man to speak to in stressful situations.

John: Ah... I see.

 

1- They go in his house and discuss.

2- They go in his house and discuss, but some assassins show up.

[Notna]

2. They go in his house and discuss, but some assasins show up.

 

Jack, Brian and Johnny sit down on John's sofa. John watches through his window and saws a man with a sniper rifle.

"GET DOWN!" He screams and everybody dives to the ground. Gunshot, and a bullet goes through the windows and it hits the wall.

John draws his Desert Eagle again. "Jack, there's a shotgun in the kitchen, take it!"

 

1. Jack takes the shotgun and jumps through the door and shoots the assasin.

2. Jack takes the shotgun and runs to Brian's car.

3. Jack jumps from the window and runs to John's van.

[Gorgonit]

1. Jack takes the shotgun and jumps through the door and shoots the assasin.

 

Suddenly, a car comes with 3 assasins inside the car. They get out and start shooting at John and Jack, then...

 

1.- John does a super-quadruple move and kills the three assasins with a headshot.

2.- Jack and John run to Brian's car.

3.- Jack gets shoot on his leg.

[Notna]

2. Jack and John run to Brian's car.

 

Jack starts Brian's car, and Brian and Johnny runs to John's van. Assasin start to chase them. Johnny takes a UZI from John's van and start to shoot at the assasins.

One of the assasins shoots to Brian's cars tires, and Jack loses the control of the car. The car smashes to a fence of a bridge over a river.

 

1. The car goes through the fence, and Jack and John jump out.

2. Car doesn't start anymore, and Jack and John run to John's van.

3. Jack and John leave the car and jump to the river, where's a boat coming.

Edited October 16, 2011 by Notna

[Gorgonit]

2. Car doesn't start anymore, and Jack and John run to John's van.

 

They get in the van and start driving, 2 cars with two assasins start pursuing the van, Johnny opens the van's back door and start shooting to the assasins.

 

1. Johnny pops a tire of one of the assasins' cars, making them crash with the traffic.

2. One of the van's tires gets popped and the van crashes in a nearby tree.

3. Cops appear and start pursuing the assasins.

[Notna]

1. Johnny pops a tire of one of the assasins' cars, making them crash with the traffic.

 

"OH YESH! Old school style!" Johnny screams.

"Good job, no one is chasing us anymore" Jack says.

"Yeah, but this is not over" John says.

"Hey guys, where am I driving to?" Brian asks.

"Drive to..."

 

1. Fallen Tree to meet Seville Cheng.

2. Ammu-Nation shop.

3. Airport.

[Gorgonit]

1. Fallen Tree to meet Seville Cheng.

 

The group arrives to the Fallen Tree, they meet Seville Cheng at there.

 

Seville: Sup' guys, what do you want?

Brian: We need a hideout, some assasins are after us.

Seville: Assasins? f*ck, I have a little house near here. A farm.

Jack: Good! Will you come with us?

Seville: Got some work to do, here, a map. Now go there.

 

 

1. The group go to Cheng's hideout. (( Safehouse near Whetstone junkyard ))

2. They go to the Ammu Nation and get some new weapons.

3. They go to the Strip Club to see some bitches.

 

 

[Notna]

1. The group go to Cheng's hideout.

 

The group arrives to the hideout. Jack closes the door but notices that someone is in the bush, watching them, but then it disappears. Jack thinks that it was nothing and closes the door. Some hours later, Jack goes to take a walk outside. When he turns, he saws someone holding a TEC-9 on his head.

"Oh my god! It is you! You are..."

 

1. Naysmith's bodyguard.

2. Naysmith himself.

3. Someone else.

 

This is my 300th post!

[tote514]

1. Naysmith's bodyguard.

 

Men: im here to kill you...

Jack: Try if you can.

 

 

Jack runaway and later...

 

1. Take the men car to escape from City.

2. Knockout the guy and take his gun.

3. Another option.

 

 

( I think this is correct, see u later)..

Edited October 16, 2011 by tote514

[Gorgonit]

 

1. Naysmith's bodyguard.

 

Men: im here to kill you...

Jack: Try if you can.

 

 

Jack runaway and later...

 

1. Take the men car to escape from City.

2. Knockout the guy and take his gun.

3. Another option.

 

 

( I think this is correct, see u later)..

Sorry but that's stupid, because the bodyguard could have already killed you

And you put at there "Jack runaway" but the second option says "Knockout the guy and take his gun".

[General Scrotum]

2. Knockout the guy and take his gun.

 

After a one-minute thinking, he decides to...

 

1- Kill him.

2- Let him live, but send him back to Naysmith as a Christmas gift.

3- Take a shovel and shovel a hole to burry him alive.

[Notna]

2. Let him live, but send him back to Naysmith as a Christmas gift.

 

Jack walked back to Cheng's hideout. He explained what happened. Then, Seville Cheng entered the hideout.

"You guys can't hang on there. I heard your discussion, Naysmith is already on you. I know a guy in San Fierro. He's powerfull there, he can help you"

The group leaves the hideout and in couple of hours, arrived to San Fierro on the location that Seville told you. In the building there waits...

 

1. Mafia boss Tony Cole.

2. Seville's friend.

3. Logan Yett.

[Gorgonit]

1. Mafia boss Tony Cole.

 

Tony C: Welcome fellow friends, Sev gave me a call about you guys. What do you all need?

Jack: Naysmith, wants our head, we need to take him outta of our way.

Tony C: That son of a bitch? I hate him with all my heart, hey, I got a house, that nobody knows about it, it's at Palisades. I give it to you all to avoid Naysmith.

Johnny: Thanks...

 

1.- The group go to the hideout.

2.- They kill Tony Cole and his bodyguards, then run off to Las Venturas.

3.- They go to the nearest Cluckin' Bell and eat some infected food, leaving Brian and Jack knocked out.

[Notna]

1. The group go to the hideout.

 

Jack, Brian, John and Johnny arrive to the hideout. John says that he has some business to do in San Fierro, and he leaves the group. Jack, Brian and Johnny enter the hideout, but Jack notices a bomb in the living room. He watches it. "AWW sh*tT! A bomb!"

 

1. The three runs out of the building, and the hideout blows up.

2. Jack starts to disarm the bomb.

[Satourn]

2. Jack starts to disarm the bomb.

 

Jack begins to disarm the bomb, making Johnny and Brian looking confused and surprised.

 

Brian: "Hey, what the hell you doin'?"

Jack: "I know what I'm doing, mate. I was learned how to do this at army."

Brian: "Oh, okay."

 

While Jack's disarming the bomb, Johnny hears a little noise at another room and decides to investigate it.

 

A while after, Jack disarms the bomb.

 

Jack: "Phew, fina... Hey, wait, where's Johnny?"

Brian: "He's ov... Hey, he was here just now."

 

Just after, a scream comes from the other room. Jack and Brian run to it, only to see Johnny, lying on the floor, stabbed.

 

Brian: "Oh, sh*t, Johnny! Speak to me, Johnny!"

Johnny: "Ah, f*ck... That... hur..."

 

Johnny dies. Brian and Jack, really scared, going to leave the hideout, but they're stopped by a man, dressed in smoking, holding an Uzi.

 

?: "Say hello to your friend, Frazer!"

 

A person points his gun barrel at Jack's head.

 

Jack: "Ow, f*ck. It's xxx"

 

Person shoots at Jack, but Brian, in order to save him, catches his bullet. A while after, Brian...

 

xxx is:

 

1. Frank Naysmith

2. Tony Cole

3. Alex Pablo

4. Another person

 

Brian...

 

1. Dies

2. Survives, but he's nearly dead

3. Survives

[Notna]

4. Prison guard from the time when Jack was in prison.

 

2. Survives, but he's nearly dead.

 

Jack punches the prison guard in the face and takes his gun The guard falss to the ground.

"Hey man. f*ck you" Jack says and shoots the whole magazine to guards body.

Jack takes Brian, who's still alive. Jack takes him to John's van, what's still there. Jack starts the van, when he hears a scream inside the hideout. Jack goes on looking what it was, and he realises that Johnny is still alive. He takes Johnny outside, but he realises that the van is taken and someone is driving it up the hill. Luckily, Jack notices binoculars on the ground and looks who's the driver.

"sh*t! It is...!"

 

1. John Secronom.

2. Romeo Lavigne.

3. Someone else.

[Satourn]

2. Romeo Lavigne

 

Jack: "sh*t, it's Romeo Lavigne! The rob-ass punk who stole my money few days ago!"

Brian: "How you know him?"

Jack: "We had connections back in old times, were working for Frank..."

Brian: "Frank?!"

Jack: "Yeah, we had to work together: he, me, Romeo and some other guy, I don't remember his name"

Brian: "Okay, good story, but how are we supposed to move now?"

Jack: "I don... Hey, look, a car!"

 

Jack, Brian and Johnny run to the car, only to notice a dead body inside.

 

Brian: "Ow, f*cken' sh*t!"

Jack: "Hmm, I recognize that guy. Dunno how but I remember him."

Johnny (almost whispering): "Ouch, f*ck, it's getting painful, dude."

Brian: "sh*t, don't dare to die, Johnny!"

Jack: "Hey, I see his driving license! Let's look... uhuh... it's..."

 

1. Leo Chang

2. Nick Tuckerwood

3. Jeff Parker

4. Someone else