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Jimmy_Leppard

The Runaway

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Jimmy_Leppard

 

Well, I played the last two missions of chapter one.

 

Well, as usual, there's always someone from the neutral party that 'betrays' the main character. We can't really blame him though: he did what he thought that was right. There wasn't much action in it, but the cutscenes were still entertaining.

 

The only thing I can say about the last missions is that the team, which is the name of chapter two, reminds me of a crew in another mission pack. I think it was 'Las Venturas Crew' by Doublepulse. Anyway, sounds like there's another similarity with another mission pack: FBI helping Jeff and Spencer. In this one, Holding is an FBI agent helping them and in The Story of Jack Frazer there is a secret organisation helping the main character (if I remember quite well.)

 

Anyway, keep up the good job and I hope to see chapter two soon. icon14.gif

Thanks for the feedback, man biggrin.gif

 

Well, it's explained in the end of the mission why Lou had to do it. Agent Holding tracked down Jeff and Spencer for killing the cops in Bayside and he connected Lou's and Spencer's friendship. Since Lou has to do everything FBI asks him to do, otherwise he'll go back to jail, he had to set Jeff and Spencer up cause that's what Holding asked him to do. (However, we don't see that in the mission)

 

Anyhow, my idea didn't have anything to do with DP's LVC or TTOJF. I made the name Brad Holding this morning, so it's quite a surprising coincidence. To be honest, the part of the ''crew'' or a ''team'' is actually inspired by some of the missions of my former mission pack '' GTA Prison Break''.

 

More missions on the way biggrin.gif

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SatournFan

Okay, I finished the missions. It had less gameplay, but cutscenes did it.

 

Waiting for more missions, man! biggrin.gif

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Nitesh002

Just completed chapter 1.

 

Great story as always. Good variety of gameplay, from hand to hand combat to checkpoint time trials. Everything else has been said by the others, so I don't want to repeat everthing again.

 

BTW, you also gave me an idea for my current mission pack.

 

Looking forward to the next chapters.

 

Also a question I wanted to ask, how do you plan for your stories? Do you write the whole synopsis beforehand or some other way?

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Jimmy_Leppard

@ SatournFan - Thanks, man. I'm glad you liked the missions. biggrin.gif

 

@ Nitesh - Thanks for your feedback aswell. And cool, good luck with re-creating that idea into missions wink.gif Well, I only write a short summary of the story and then I expand it and make it up further along the way biggrin.gif

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nitrousoxide

I finished the chapter. superb missions, jimmy. I really wonder what will happen in future missions.

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Jimmy_Leppard
I finished the chapter. superb missions, jimmy. I really wonder what will happen in future missions.

Thank you, dude. Stay tuned for more missions biggrin.gif

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john12

Played every mission from start.

 

Awsome, makes same feeling again and again. Its like a movie. Did you get ideas form others or you yourself made these? Still awsome feeling.

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Jimmy_Leppard
Played every mission from start.

 

Awsome, makes same feeling again and again. Its like a movie. Did you get ideas form others or you yourself made these? Still awsome feeling.

Thanks, man biggrin.gif

 

I made the story up myself. biggrin.gif

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Mati

I said I will play this when the first chapter is done, that's what I'm going to do now icon14.gif

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Jimmy_Leppard
I said I will play this when the first chapter is done, that's what I'm going to do now icon14.gif

Alright. I'm waiting for your feedback biggrin.gif

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Jimmy_Leppard
Update: 9th mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks, people biggrin.gif

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Notna

Played the mission.

 

The cutscenes had the movie feeling, once again. It's great that you change the scene and there's the same text, it's really like a real movie! The driving part wasn't boring, I had fun while jumping my way out of Randolph Industrial biggrin.gif And the searching part was something unique and new, and fresh! I haven't seen a mission like that before. And the shooting part was hard, but fun.

 

What can I say, keep up the awesome work! icon14.gif

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alifjenius

Yeah, just like Notna said. The search thing was different, and those cutscenes with the same text giving us some movie feeling, like a guy is talking and the camera focused on various people

 

Anyway, about the title. I think that's a reference of a book authored by Agatha Christie called "And then there were none", a mystery book that I already read. Well, is it ?

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Jimmy_Leppard

@ Notna - Thanks, dude. It was the first mission of the second chapter, so I needed it to be something more ''fresh'', as you said biggrin.gif

 

@alifjenius - Thanks. I'm glad you liked the mission. Well, there is a connection between what you said. I used the name of the mission partially from Agatha because of the mistery, just like you said. biggrin.gif

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Jimmy_Leppard

Hi, guys. This is a quick questionaire, just so that I know what is your opinion on some random stuff from the story so far: Just copy the questions and answer them in your response. biggrin.gif

 

1.) In your opinion, who is the most badass character of the story so far? Why?

 

2.) Do you think Jeff feels sorry for his brother's murder though they didn't get on well?

 

3.) How did you like Spencer's role in the story so far?

 

4.) Do you think General Mills is: a) A psychopath? b) Blood thirsty killer? c) A true American Hero d) A man who would do anything to gain power? Why?

 

5.) Do you justify Lou's action in the mission ''Cat and mouse''? Why?

 

 

That's it, guys. I would like everyone who played the mission series so far to answer this little questionaire. biggrin.gif

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Nitesh002

 

1.) In your opinion, who is the most badass character of the story so far? Why?

- Jeff is obviously the tough guy in this story. He had the guts to go against General Mills. He even planted that bomb on that army jeep. He killed those police instead of just surrendering. He accepted the polygon challenge and so many other things he has done.

 

2.) Do you think Jeff feels sorry for his brother's murder though they didn't get on well?

- Yeah. His brother gave him room to stay when he was in trouble, and didn't give him away to General Mills and those other army men.

 

3.) How did you like Spencer's role in the story so far?

- Not sure what this question is asking, but, I like his role. He is the one who is taking the story forward by helping and introducing Jeff to new characters.

 

4.) Do you think General Mills is: a) A psychopath? b) Blood thirsty killer? c) A true American Hero d) A man who would do anything to gain power? Why?

-d. He carries out unauthorised secret operations, and just to keep it a secret so as to keep his position, he endangers life of many people out of which some are even killed.

 

5.) Do you justify Lou's action in the mission ''Cat and mouse''? Why?

-yeah. He did it for the benefit of himself, and also the action taken by Lou actually helped Jeff. It introduced him to that agent who is investigating General Mills.

 

I did this based on my knowledge of Chapter 1. I still haven't started the missions in chapter 2.

 

EDIT: Changed the answer to question 1. Misinterpreted the question before.

Edited by Nitesh aka AAAAAAA

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Notna

 

1.) In your opinion, who is the most badass character of the story so far? Why?

- Jeff Parker. Jeff is a real man, he's trained soldier and dangerous. He's not emotional less killer but does it when he has to do so.

 

2.) Do you think Jeff feels sorry for his brother's murder though they didn't get on well?

- Yes. Althrough they weren't the best friends, he still was his brother.

 

3.) How did you like Spencer's role in the story so far?

- Spencer is a true hero aswell. He's Jeff's best friend and helpful for Jeff.

 

4.) Do you think General Mills is: a) A psychopath? b) Blood thirsty killer? c) A true American Hero d) A man who would do anything to gain power? Why?

- d. He just wants more attention and honor for himself.

 

5.) Do you justify Lou's action in the mission ''Cat and mouse''? Why?

- Yes. He didn't have any choices, so he had to do so

Here's my answers.

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Jimmy_Leppard
Thanks for your answers so far, guys. I like the fact that you have different POV's about the situations biggrin.gif

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nitrousoxide

1.) In your opinion, who is the most badass character of the story so far? Why?

Jeff Parker. He is smart and he is cool. I like when he blow up armys truck at rick's house.

 

2.) Do you think Jeff feels sorry for his brother's murder though they didn't get on well?

Yes. He was his brother. Who wouldn't feel sorry?

 

3.) How did you like Spencer's role in the story so far?

I find Spencer a good friend and ''ready to roll'' gunman. He is also really cool.

 

4.) Do you think General Mills is: a) A psychopath? b) Blood thirsty killer? c) A true American Hero d) A man who would do anything to gain power? Why?

d) He wants to become a world leader.

 

5.) Do you justify Lou's action in the mission ''Cat and mouse''? Why?

Yes. He had no choice because he will go to prison otherwise.

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Nitesh002

What does 'badass character' mean? You are giving completely opposite answer to what I expected. I might not have understood it properly.

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Jimmy_Leppard

 

What does 'badass character' mean? You are giving completely opposite answer to what I expected. I might not have understood it properly.

By badass I meant like the ''coolest'' or the ''toughest'' character in the story until now.

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Notna

 

What does 'badass character' mean? You are giving completely opposite answer to what I expected. I might not have understood it properly.

As I know, it means something like "tough guy".

 

EDIT: Jimmy beat me on answering biggrin.gif

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Nitesh002

LOL. I thought badass meant evil. So I was giving the most evil character. I was shocked to see why everyone thought that Jeff is evil. lol.gif

 

Here's my new answer:

 

Jeff is obviously the tough guy in this story. He had the guts to go against General Mills. He even planted that bomb on that army jeep. He killed those police instead of just surrendering. He accepted the polygon challenge and so many other things he has done.

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Doublepulse

Beat me too.. I just was about to post the same thing. I'm still going to play this awesome story when I get time, just letting you know man.biggrin.gif

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Mati

Jimmy, I played this. This is truly awesome. I'm glad you're still developing this similar to your previous mission pack with putting much effort into the story. The setting and the story itself is a nice twist too. Well done icon14.gif

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Jimmy_Leppard

@ Doublepulse - Hey, man. Good to hear from you. I'm expecting your feedback soon then, right? wink.gif

 

@ Mati - Thanks, man. I really appreciate your feedback biggrin.gif I'm glad you liked the story so far. And yea, I know that my last mission series ''Brian Thompson's heist'' is, by far, my most successful mission series, but as you said, I'm putting a lot of effort in this mission series aswell and I'll try to make it as more ''twisty'' and ''unpredictable'' I can. biggrin.gif Stay tuned for more missions biggrin.gif

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guib
I am not trying to sound like a dick, but this missionpack is not that great as your previous ones, maybe it is just me, I don't like the military theme...

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Jimmy_Leppard
I am not trying to sound like a dick, but this missionpack is not that great as your previous ones, maybe it is just me, I don't like the military theme...

No problem, man.

 

I mean, it's ok if you don't like a military theme and I can't argue on that, but this isn't 100% a military theme. It's actually only 50%, not even that. It's much more of a twisting action thriller story with some elements of military theme. However, if you don't like this story, no hard feelings biggrin.gif Everyone has his/her taste for story themes. Maybe you'll like the next mission series biggrin.gif

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Notna
Maybe you'll like the next mission series biggrin.gif

That was what I was waiting for! A clue that this one is not your last mission series biggrin.gif

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alifjenius

 

1.) In your opinion, who is the most badass character of the story so far? Why?

Jeff Parker. Well, he's the main character, I'm the one who can control him to be a badass or goodass. But.... outside my control, his strategy like blowing up the truck at Rick's house and the others, make him the most badass character.

 

2.) Do you think Jeff feels sorry for his brother's murder though they didn't get on well?

Totally yes. He's his brother, it's obvious that he feels sorry.

 

3.) How did you like Spencer's role in the story so far?

A friend in needed, that's I'd like to say. And yes, I like his role.

 

4.) Do you think General Mills is: a) A psychopath? b) Blood thirsty killer? c) A true American Hero d) A man who would do anything to gain power? Why?

D). Because he would do anything to get rid of Jeff that will interfere his action so he could continue to rule the world

 

5.) Do you justify Lou's action in the mission ''Cat and mouse''? Why?

Yeah, that's the only thing he can do. If he won't do it, like Holding said, he will be in prison for the illegal racing (is it right ?)

 

That's the answer,

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