alucardiff Posted August 20, 2011 Share Posted August 20, 2011 (edited) The Aftermath universe exists in an alternate timeline that split away from our world after Y2K. After the year 2000, people saw that technology isn't posing that of a huge threat to humanity, and science advanced far more faster than this time. By 2053, the United States of America, the most powerful superpower in the world, became greedy for power. They started a new campaign that was supposed to conquer the whole world in a few days, but a spy from Romania found out about the top secret plan. The European Union and Asia merged to form Eurasis, the new nation formed by the European countries merging with the Asian ones. By now, Eurasis was surely the strongest superpower in the world. They waged war against the USA, and the USA was crushed by the apparently unbeatable nation. In desperation, the USA launched all their nuclear warheads on Europe and Asia, hoping in would cripple their economy and their military plans, but the nukes were intercepted before they could touch Eurasian soil, except for the one that landed on Taiwan. Thirsty for retaliaton, the Eurasian council went insane with power and decided to nuke the whole places that weren't Eurasian. By 2055, the world was a wasteland, with apparently no chance to recover. But, before Eurasis dropped their nukes, the USA used all their electrical power to form and extraordinarily strong shield destined to protect the State of San Andreas by irradiation. All the government officials flocked to SA, and it's assumed they survived the Great Disaster, with no one knowing what happened to them. While the cities of SA are completely deserted, San Andreas's flora remained in a pristine condition. About 300 years later, the world is ready to either recover or face a tragedy worse then the Great Disaster, and the choice lies in the hands of an unknown slave. This, is YOUR story. THE REMNANTS The Remnants are the people who want to restore the USA back to it's former glory, however, with as few casualties as possible. They are known for saving slaves, giving runaways places to live, helping people in danger and stopping the Carrions from pillaging a settlement. While the good and evil don't exist in the Wasteland, the Remnants would clearly classify as the good guys. THE CARRIONS The Carrions are the people who just want to live a good life, regardless of the lives they ruin while living theirs. They are known for raiding villages, leaving no survivors while doing their cruel actions, and interrupting escorts and trade caravans. While the good and evil don't exist in the Wasteland, the Carrions would classify as the chaotic neutral guys, not being evil because they only want to survive. THE SHADES The Shades are the businessmen of the Wasteland, similar to the Illuminati. They are extremely secretive and take no regrets in their actions, doing both good and evil deeds to enrich themselves. Their army consists mostly of extremely professional mercenaries, who often abuse other people when fulfilling The Shades' wishes. While the good and evil don't exist in the Wasteland, the Shades would classify as the neutral guys, because they do both good and evil deeds because of their greed. Edited August 22, 2011 by alucardiff Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Reserved-Also, like Mati once said, comment or no more missions people, seriously, is it that hard to try 2 missions? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060683696 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 (edited) It's a good idea to make the character joinable to a faction, but that don't makes us to just play your mission pack EDIT: I played both missions, short and sweet, the first was not published, so It can be edited... the grammar, perfect,anyway you could maked the missions a bit more "solid",but it's a Demo, I see a good future for this mission pack Edited August 21, 2011 by Gorgonit Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060683726 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Looks similar to a mission pack Kratos2000 (the name) intended to do, but even more to mati's mission pack. Nonetheless, good luck with it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060683925 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 The coma thingy sounds a bit familiar I don't have anything against it though, I'll check it out and give you some feedback. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684125 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 I like the name. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684130 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rytuklis Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Looks similar to a mission pack Kratos2000 (the name) intended to do, but even more to mati's mission pack. Nonetheless, good luck with it. And Mati's are even more simular to my mission pack :D Looks like i started Post Apocaliptic era Anyways, imma try it out when full version will be released Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684134 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 (edited) And Mati's are even more simular to my mission pack :D I had mine in my mind a long time ago, plus I didn't check out yours before opening my topic Edited August 21, 2011 by mati Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684139 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 Well yeah, Mati pretty much inspired me. I played his missions and it reminded me that I own Fallout 3, so I took it all over and fell in love with it yet again, but that coma thing is not stolen, I just didn't want to give the player a story so you can imagine a story of your own for roleplaying freaks like me. But yeah, it's a demo. I'll try to please all you guys. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684351 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 The first actual mission got messed up really bad, I'm so vexed. And it was going so well, goddammit. This doesn't mean I'm abandoning it, I was just wanting to tell you guys the mission was really long and well made, and now it's gone. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684677 Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Scrotum Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 Always keep a backup copy of your mission file with designing one, if you don't want this to happen. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684684 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 21, 2011 Author Share Posted August 21, 2011 (edited) Always keep a backup copy of your mission file with designing one, if you don't want this to happen. Thanks for the tip, I am so f*cking stressed right nao I could practically hang myself. I spent the whole motherfudgin' morning on it. Edited August 22, 2011 by alucardiff Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060684729 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 EDIT: Updated, with full story and faction information. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060685774 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 Full Chapter One uploaded! Click the picture to download - also, please remember to comment - constructive criticism or a good review is widely appreciated! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060687414 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 (edited) Hell yeah! Gonna play it then I'll edit the post... EDIT : Played it, is good, but publish your missions, or they will become editable! (Mission Menu >> Publish Mission), it generates a DYOM0 file and you can uploaded it, another thing, try to keep the story solid, so we can atleast do something... well, not everytime trying to do bad things, if you understand me , for this chapter I give you a 9.2/10 anyways, keep the good work buddy! Edited August 22, 2011 by Gorgonit Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060687432 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 (edited) Hell yeah! Gonna play it then I'll edit the post... EDIT : Played it, is good, but publish your missions, or they will become editable! (Mission Menu >> Publish Mission), it generates a DYOM0 file and you can uploaded it, another thing, try to keep the story solid, so we can atleast do something... well, not everytime trying to do bad things, if you understand me , for this chapter I give you a 9.2/10 anyways, keep the good work buddy! That's why I did 3 factions - the neutral evil way, the neutral and the good way. EDIT: REMEMBER to read the story and the faction info or else the missions will be mumbo jumbo voodo sh*t to you, lol. Edited August 22, 2011 by alucardiff Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060687486 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 I played the first chapter. The first 2 mission could have been merged into one. I like the story so far. Not much to say, there were no bugs, it's a pretty good mission pack. So far a 7/10 (that's very good in my rankings) Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060687525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 22, 2011 Author Share Posted August 22, 2011 I played the first chapter. The first 2 mission could have been merged into one. I like the story so far.Not much to say, there were no bugs, it's a pretty good mission pack. So far a 7/10 (that's very good in my rankings) From now on, I swear an oath that I will try my best to get a 9/10 from you, or else my family shall cast me out from society! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060687567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 Wow! Now that's what I call mission. I just have some 'problems' I noticed, but it's okay, here it is: At the first two mission (demo), why not merge it or just put them on one mission, cause it's a bit short , last, I just see a bit of excessive swearing at the demo's, but still, like what I said, it's not a problem, keep up the good work. 9/10. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060694061 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted August 26, 2011 Share Posted August 26, 2011 I just see a bit of excessive swearing at the demo's Yeah, you should leave that gangsta and swearing language, and place a bit of more "normal" language. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060694336 Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 31, 2011 Author Share Posted August 31, 2011 I just see a bit of excessive swearing at the demo's Yeah, you should leave that gangsta and swearing language, and place a bit of more "normal" language. It's the wasteland. People aren't educated and they SURE aren't polite, honestly, what you're asking me is completely preposterous. EDIT: I kinda ran out of ideas and I'm pretty bored with this idea, but I don't wanna abandon it. Send me PM's with ideas and I'll include you in my missions. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/485028-the-aftermath/#findComment-1060702131 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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