ToniForelli Posted August 10, 2011 Share Posted August 10, 2011 GTA: LCS ACTION STORY Ok different thing about this one is that you have to write many things in chain story are short in action story are large. Rules: Cheats don't exist. Proantagonist can't die. Can't end action story quickly. Must be many lines and action story doesn't have endings even if all die in Liberty City. Must be 5 choices. Toni Cipriani quitted Leone family and joined Yardies just not to get killed. And when he meets King Courtney he says: Toni: Hi I want to work for Uptown Yardies. KC: Ok but first meet Leon McAfrrey. Toni: Again. KC:Yes. He headed to the Bedford Point(Leon's new house) with Black Banshee and when he met him he said: 1. Go to hell leave me alone you dead prick. 2. Hi im in the Yardies give me some missions 3. Hi im gonna shoot you with minigun. 4. *Fist hit* Im tired of you 5. I want to work for LCPD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shayan Shaffey Posted August 10, 2011 Share Posted August 10, 2011 This is a chain story, with a different name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted August 11, 2011 Author Share Posted August 11, 2011 Not really read it first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerokills555 Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Yay first poster: Hi im gonna shoot you with minigun. Leon: Why Toni i thought we're best friends. Toni: Nope you sucked really. And kills Leon. Then he goes to see Ruyard(King Courtney's right hand) to get some missions. Later he passed the mission and saying: Ruyard: Hey nice work Mr. Cipriani. Toni: Not bad to you, plus you look like from Vice City. Ruyard:... 1. Yes, I am. 2. Nope im from Liberty City. 3. Nope im from San Andreas. 4. WHAT THE HELL is Vice City. 5. Somewhere from Brazil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted August 11, 2011 Author Share Posted August 11, 2011 Somewhere from Brazil. Toni: Then what are you doing here. Ruyard: Ask our boss if you tell this he will kill you. Toni: Ok. Then Toni walks away and gets attacked by several Colombian Cartel goons at Newport. Later in Francis Intl. Airport Miguel flying his bulletproof maverick and says: Miguel: You think im dead well amigo you are wrong. Toni: WTF are you talking about. Miguel: You killed me in Contra-Banned mission remember. Toni: Yea. And with stubby shotgun shot by them and later he awakes and the savior was: 1. Franco Forelli and his guys 2. Salvatore Leone with his helicopter(stole from Sicillians). 3. Tommy Vercetti with his fastest boat. 4. Random pedestrian riding Reefer. 5. LCPD with their Predator(ship). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zerokills555 Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Salvatore Leone with his helicopter(stole from Sicillians). Toni:Sal. Sal: Yes Toni its Salvatore listen I know you quitted Leones but I recently discovered that Yardies will betray you once all Colombians are wiped out. Toni: Ok so when this is gonna happen. Sal: Its happening now their Cartel mansion is destroyed, their airport planes and other and once Miguel is dead they gonna kill you. Toni: So what gang should i join now. Sal: Triads. Toni: Triads! Why. Sal: ... 1. To make sure you have a gang. 2. Well its complicated. 3. Your dad was a Triad. 4. So that you won't get shot when you enter Chinatown. 5. Just temporarily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 Well its complicated. Toni: Why Sal: Dunno I see you around Toni. Then Toni Cipriani meets The Wong Brothers and asks them to join a gang, but suddenly Diablos attack triads and one brother was dead. Wong Brother #3: WTF HES DEAD!!! Wong Brother #2: TONI!!! f*ck the Diablos. Toni: Ok. Then he kills them and what does Toni do: 1. Kills the brothers to become a leader 2. Helps their brother to reach the graveyard in Staunton Island 3. Leaves the gang and goes to join Diablos. 4. Threatens to shoot them if they don't give up their gang. 5. Goes to see Salvatore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shayan Shaffey Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 After reading your first post which mainly consisted of bad grammar, I still can't see a difference. Except for the fact that there must be 5 choices, if you want to make a chain-story then make it in another sub-forum, we already have one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAIndonesia Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 Quitted the Leones? Whatg the f*ck?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ToniForelli Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 You suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugoy Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 No, the plot of this story sucks. What do you have against Toni being a member of the Leones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shayan Shaffey Posted August 12, 2011 Share Posted August 12, 2011 You suck This story, its elements, its rules and its sudden and bad drifting-away-from-the-in-game-facts element sucks. Also your debating skills suck and your creativeness sucks. There is absolutely no reason to make two (failed attempts) at stealing my topic. You might wonder why the above things make this story and you suck: 1)This story sucks b/c: It is poorly written. 2) Elements b/c: toni is not a part of the leones and he decides to join the Yardies because he was bored. 3) Rules b/c: you may not use cheats. There must be 5 choices... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So as you see I DO NOT SUCK Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! Give me ten valid reasons why I suck! You are a thief of creativity and you have no reason to say I suck, just because my topic turned out better. Stop making lousy topics! Stop making lousy topics! Stop making lousy topics! Stop making lousy topics! Stop making lousy topics! Stop making lousy topics! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Girish Posted August 13, 2011 Share Posted August 13, 2011 Brilliant. You all suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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