Mati Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 (edited) Episode One: Dave Jacobs' Story Theme Song Factions and characters: The Brotherhood - Monica - Manny - The Menace WDR (Wild Desert Raiders) - Aisha - Monica - Manny - Scorpio The Reclaimers - Dr. Black The Cerberus Company (?) - Miranda Chapter one: One Thousand Questions The Rebirth gives us Dave Jacobs' point of view over the post-apocalyptic State of San Andreas in the year 2200. 200 years ago, the world suffered by the Third World War, with huge influence of Nuclear Warfare. The survivors have grounded small groups called factions and are trying to gain control over the State. Dave Jacobs has survived the bombing because he was asleep in a cryo inside a mysterious facility, even if the facility was strongly infected by radiation. As he gets woken up 200 years later, he has thousands of questions, friends and enemies, trying to understand the whole situation. This mission pack is strongly inspired by the Fallout series but has no connections both story-wise and gameplay-wise. Genesis New Life in Las Payasadas? The Brotherhood The Reclaimers Heavy Rain Chapter 2: The Spirit of Brotherhood The continuation of Dave Jacobs story, after his awakening in The Reclaimer facility and living inside the WDR, Dave decided to join The Brotherhood, a well organized faction with smart steps and no mercy for its enemies. Dave along with his new friends Diana and Manny are working for The Menace, a paranoid and naive leader of The Brotherhood. Will they manage to rule the desert sands and expand to other cities? And will Dave manage to revive his memories from over 200 years ago? Blood on the Bayside Homefront Old World Blues The Takeover Reclaim The Truth Edited September 21, 2011 by mati Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted August 5, 2011 Share Posted August 5, 2011 Looks good. Looking forward to this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 5, 2011 Author Share Posted August 5, 2011 Thanks! First mission uploaded on gtagarage! Genesis. I couldn't upload it on the DYOM site because of an error. Enjoy and give me some feedback. I'd be glad about a new logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted August 6, 2011 Share Posted August 6, 2011 Thanks! First mission uploaded on gtagarage! Genesis. I couldn't upload it on the DYOM site because of an error. Enjoy and give me some feedback. I'd be glad about a new logo. Try not adding Screenshot when you upload mission. I think that's the problem... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 6, 2011 Author Share Posted August 6, 2011 Thanks. Now ready for download on dyom.gtagames.nl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted August 6, 2011 Share Posted August 6, 2011 Played it. It kinda have a promising story. Looks good. I'll be waiting till the whole mission is done and then play it. For the first mission / intro, I'll rate it 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 6, 2011 Author Share Posted August 6, 2011 That's a great rating, thanks for playing. More is coming soon. I'm searching for a good theme song, suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted August 6, 2011 Share Posted August 6, 2011 That's a great rating, thanks for playing. More is coming soon. I'm searching for a good theme song, suggestions? I'm no good with theme songs. But try checking B.B's (Breaking Benjamin) Songs. I find them entertaining for Zombie movies/games. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 6, 2011 Share Posted August 6, 2011 The DYOM download link is fluffled, repost it please? I really wanna try that missions (especially cause it's a post apocalyptic one). For a theme song I think Mr Sandman ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xDXT7wC9jrc ) and I think you should like for a video to post on youtube show a video of the wasteland and destroyed cars, and stuff like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 6, 2011 Author Share Posted August 6, 2011 The DYOM download link is fluffled, repost it please? I really wanna try that missions (especially cause it's a post apocalyptic one). For a theme song I think Mr Sandman ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xDXT7wC9jrc ) and I think you should like for a video to post on youtube show a video of the wasteland and destroyed cars, and stuff like that. It should be there on the dyom site, I have no problem downloading it. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=13824 The theme song fits very well. But people who haven't played fallout will think ''wtf is this the theme song?'' How about this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sk0n Posted August 6, 2011 Share Posted August 6, 2011 I loved it i absolutley loved it nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 7, 2011 Author Share Posted August 7, 2011 Thanks everyone. Next mission is coming tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exekucnak Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 I just finished playing Fallout 3, so I tried this, pretty nice mission with nice atmosphere. The scene over the map was brilliant Looking forward for more missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 8, 2011 Author Share Posted August 8, 2011 Update! Three new character descriptions have been added. One new faction has been added. One new building has been added. New mission: New Life in Las Payasadas? This took me a lot of effort, feedback is appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exekucnak Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 (edited) Pretty nice mission, the village is designated very well, nice athmosphere again and nice lenght of the mission, only the Police stars could be turn off 9.5/10 Can't wait for next mission Edited August 8, 2011 by Exekucnak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 8, 2011 Author Share Posted August 8, 2011 Ah damn, I knew I forgot something! Just imagine that the police are The Reclamiers Thanks for your feedback, I put much effort into the village. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sk0n Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 Nice mission loved the village design... keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 10, 2011 Author Share Posted August 10, 2011 Thanks for the feedback Theme song updated! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ePw5-70JZk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 10, 2011 Share Posted August 10, 2011 Alright, just finished bombing duh bar on mission 2. So, I have to say, I didn't like Genesis AT ALL, but the New life in Las Payasadas one made up for it - well done Mati, I really want more. Also, I loled my ass out when I hear all kinds of "WE GOT A MURDER IN LAS PAYASADAS, CHHH", lol dude, HOW can you forget removing the police? Oh and the theme song fits pretty well may I say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 10, 2011 Author Share Posted August 10, 2011 Thanks man, more missions are on the way. The first chapter will contain 10 missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 I see your tried to add more gameplay elements to it? buildings, fractions? I still have no idea what those are meant for and I'll be sure to check it out but I'd request a smaller chapter so I would be able to review it, if you're interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 11, 2011 Author Share Posted August 11, 2011 Well, I was planning to do something... let's say ''special'' after the 5th mission (won't tell what though) so the 1st chapter could contain 5 missions. A new mission is coming tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 I like the missions, f*cking great, oh, and the name "Las Padasayas" is mispelled, it's "Las Payasadas" lol, but good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Good job with the missions, mati. I like post-apocalyptic mission series Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 12, 2011 Author Share Posted August 12, 2011 (edited) Thanks everyone New mission released! The Brotherhood Remember to have fun and give me some feedback. I know the dyom page says its the 2nd mission, my mistake. Edited August 12, 2011 by Mati. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 15, 2011 Author Share Posted August 15, 2011 Nobody? I have something huge in my mind, be sure to follow the story.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgonit Posted August 15, 2011 Share Posted August 15, 2011 Nobody? I have something huge in my mind, be sure to follow the story.. I like your way to create missions, specially the "The Brotherhood" one, it was good, keep the good work man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 15, 2011 Author Share Posted August 15, 2011 Thanks, that's exactly what I needed. The 4th mission is ready for an upload, but I'm getting the 403 forbidden again ._. It's great that you enjoy my style of missions, because the next one works quite similar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted August 16, 2011 Author Share Posted August 16, 2011 (edited) Da news: New Mission uploaded. The Reclaimers Please have fun and leave me some feedback. Somehow, my first post removed itself after I edited it I don't have time to write things like characters down again, maybe I do it some other time. Offtopic: Don't worry, that guy on my avatar is not me. Edited August 16, 2011 by Mati. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted August 16, 2011 Share Posted August 16, 2011 This is great. Good luck with future missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
