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Harry Gibson's attempt to get money


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"The money is very important, not my life"

 

 

HISTORY:

Harry Gibson, a 25 years old man, have a very bad life at London, he got a lot of debts,so he decided to go to Las Venturas, money opportunity land, where his brother Mac Gibson lives, he will do his best to get a lot of money, the main objective of his life, he will encounter a lot of problems along the way, will he survive? Will he get a lot of money and become the richest man? Will he buy a potato from a shop? Let's see what happens to him in this history!

 

 

CHARACTERS:

 

Harry Gibson

The main protagonist of the story, he's 25 years old, he came to Las Venturas to get a lot of money. Brother of Mac Gibson.

Status: Friend

 

Mac Gibson

Harry's younger brother, he's 24 years old, he lives at Las Venturas, at Pike Creek. He lives with Harry.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: Brother's Gibson

 

Leoniel Connor

One of Mac's friends, he's 28 years old, he lives near Mac's house. He gives jobs to Harry. He owns a weapon depot too.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: A walk in the park

 

Mervin "Rook" Johnson

Leader of the Rockshore West Thugs gang, he's an old friend of Mac.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: Rockshore West Thugs

 

Marco Forelli

Leader of the Forelli Mafia, he was the old boss of Mac.

Status: Dead

Meet up in: Yet More sh*t

Dies: Yet More sh*t

 

Ray Brevic

Leader of the Russian Mafia, Harry owes him a lot of money.Very dangerous man.

Status: Enemy

Meet up in: Yet More sh*t

 

Ryan McGregor

Leader of the Hunter Quarry, he's one of the old friends of Mac.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: No Ryan, No Work

 

Gotalino

Not much is known about this Bolivian gang leader. He owns the Bolivian Cartel.

Status: Enemy

Meet up in: Just one more step

 

Tom Garrey

One of Harry's new friends. He became friend of Harry when he joined the gang.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: Territory Takedown

 

Tripp Campbell

One of Harry's new friends. He became friend of Harry when he joined the gang.

Status: Friend

Meet up in: Territory Takedown

 

! CHARACTER LIST GETS UPDATED PER MISSION !

 

 

GANGS:

 

Gibson Gang

Harry's gang, owns all Pike Creek and sub urbs area, powerful gang, as Connor supplys it.

Status: Friend

Leader: Harry Gibson

 

Bolivian Cartel

Bolivian gang that owns most part of city's limit. Very dangerous.

Status: Nemesis

Leader: Gotalino

 

Forelli Mafia

Italian mafia that owns most part of The Strip, his main place is the Caligula's Casino. Enemy to the Bolivian Cartel and the Rockshore West Thugs. His place is taken by the Red Tong Japanese Gang.

Status: Destroyed

Leader: Nobody

 

Rockshore West Thugs

Gang that owns all Rockshore West part, his main place is one of the old houses near the shore. A long time ago, they had an affiliation with Mac.

Status: Friend

Leader: Mervin "Rook" Johnson.

 

San Andreas Police Department

Government security service in San Andreas, you hate 'em, they hate you, simple as that.

Status: Enemy

Leader: ?????

 

Mexicanos 4 Life

Mexican gang that owns most part of Spinybed.

Status: Neutral.

Leader: Hazer.

 

Russian Mafia

Russian mafia that owns most part of Los Santos, and outskirts of London.

Status: Nemesis

Leader: Ray Brevic.

 

Red Tong Japanese Gang (RTJG)

Japanese mafia/gang that owns most part of The Strip, they got as main place the Caligula's Casino.

Status: Enemy

Leader: ?????

 

! LIST CAN BE UPDATED !

 

 

MISSIONS:

 

EPISODE 1: Fresh but not fresh start RAR FILE

CHAPTER 1: Getting a life

Brother's Gibson - Harry's arrived to the town.

A walk in the park - Harry meets up Connor, they go around the city to know better it.

Robbing the Store - This time Harry and Connor go to rob a store, but the police are in his tail.

Safehouse - Connor found a safehouse near the suburbs, but It's owned by mexicans.

CHAPTER 2: Hardware

Rockshore West Thugs - Mac,Harry and Connor decided to visit the Rockshore Thugs to get Hardware, but they will need to do a couple of jobs for them.

Hell Launcher - Rook asks the group to destroy a Forelli supply line, anyway Harry will care it by himself.

Yet More sh*t - Rook asks Harry to kill Marco Forelli.

Just one more Step - Finally, Rook gives the hardware location to the group.

No Ryan, No Work - Ryan, a friend of Mac, will assemble the hardware for the group, but Ryan needs some help...

 

EPISODE 2: Up to being rich (you need this mod to play this episode. Here a pic.)

CHAPTER 1: Own problems

Time Bomb - Harry will do a couple of jobs for Ryan, this time he needs to kill a rival of Ryan.

Home Retake - Ryan's quarry has been occupied by the army, he asks Harry for help.

Jackin' Chan - Mac's been kidnapped! Harry must save him.

Payback- Harry and Mac go to payback the Russians.

CHAPTER 2: Our life is our territory

Need for Wheels - As a start, you must get vehicles for your gang.

The Overrun - No more guns! You must get guns for your gang.

Territory Takedown - Time to destroy the Japanese gang, destroy The Visage and capture The Esmerald Isle!

Helping the Thugs - Rook is under attack! , the gang must help him.

Cargo Robbery - Disturb the Bolivians' operation at the airport!

 

 

TROPHIES:

(Inspired by COOLMAN, great work!)

 

Las Venturas Trophies:

 

*Fabulous Las Venturas* - Complete the first mission.

*Crow's Nest* - In the mission "A walk in the park", try to go through all Las Venturas Strip when you need to hang around the zone.

*Bulletproof Idiot* - In the mission "Robbing the Store", when robbing the store, don't kill any of the security guards.

*Flash but not Fast* - In the mission "Robbing the Store", keep with atleast 1 police car and survive until the part where a blockade appears.

*Explosion Launcher* - In the mission "safehouse" find the rocket launcher.

*Fast Movers Inbound!* - Finish the mission "safehouse" under 3:45.

*Intelligent* - Don't die or fail in the mission "Rockshore West Thugs"

*You're a Cat* - Find the Security officer in the mission "Hell Launcher" under the time 1:35.

*You still are a Hitman* - In the mission "Yet More sh*t", kill EVERY ENEMY and ONLY USE HEADSHOTS, (Don't count if enemy don't have headshot on)

*Giant Knife* - Don't use guns inside the factory until you're spotted in the mission "No Ryan, No work"

*You got all your life* - In the mission "Time Bomb", when you need to take away Carl's car, wait until the timer is at 15 seconds and complete the mission.

*Commando* - In the mission "Home Retake", when you are at the first gate, don't let your armour get down 50 percent.

*Chuck Norris* - In the mission "Home Retake", don't destroy Commander's helicopter with the Rocket Launcher, instead of that, do one shot kill with the sniper. Destroying the helicopter.

*Made it!!* - In the mission "Jackin' Chan", when you need to kill the Russian Mobster, kill your brother first, then the mobster.

*Oh yeah, hehe.* - In the mission "Payback", did you noticed that Russian cars are white instead of blacks for the first time you played the mission?

*Russian BBQ* - In the mission "Payback", don't let your health go down 75 percent.

*The f*ck?! - In the mission "Territory Takedown", capture The Esmerald Isle in less than 2:30.

The Armored Man - Don't die in the mission "Helping the thugs".

Blowin' up stuff - Complete the mission "Cargo Robbery".

 

Special Trophies:

 

*Drug Seller* - Find 5 drug canisters.

*Great Brother* - Find 20 drug canisters.

*Prize!* - Find 40 drug canisters.

*Indiana Jones* - Find 100 drug canisters.

*No way!* - Find an easter egg.

 

Credits only go to Dutchy3010 and PatrickW , DYOM creators.

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Since I've finished ''Brian Thompson's heist'' and I don't have any new ideas for a new mission series yet, I'm gonna download these now and give you feedback after I play them biggrin.gif

 

EDIT: I've played the missions and here is my feedback:

 

I liked the coloring text in the cutscenes. But, I've had a little problem reading all the text in them cause they are changing fast. I assume you've put your cutscene lenght to 4, maybe 5 seconds. But, it's alright. I've managed to read almost everything biggrin.gif

 

First mission - It was good for an intro mission. I just have one question: What happened to the airplane that blew up in the air and how did everyone survive the fall?

 

Second mission - I couldn't finish this mission. When I'm supposed to follow Leoniel to his car, he just happens to walk across the street and then bumps into a building wall. I replayed the mission but he walked to that same wall and start bumping into it.

 

Third mission - Good mission. First day in town and Harry gets into trouble alreadybiggrin.gif

 

Overall, since I couldn't finish the second mission, I'd give 5/10. So far, it's good. It's only the beginning of the mission pack. Don't take this as a bad rating. When you get a little deeper into the story, rating will probably go up. Good luck with your future missions biggrin.gif

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Since I've finished ''Brian Thompson's heist'' and I don't have any new ideas for a new mission series yet, I'm gonna download these now and give you feedback after I play them biggrin.gif

 

EDIT: I've played the missions and here is my feedback:

 

I liked the coloring text in the cutscenes. But, I've had a little problem reading all the text in them cause they are changing fast. I assume you've put your cutscene lenght to 4, maybe 5 seconds. But, it's alright. I've managed to read almost everything biggrin.gif

 

First mission - It was good for an intro mission. I just have one question: What happened to the airplane that blew up in the air and how did everyone survive the fall?

 

Second mission - I couldn't finish this mission. When I'm supposed to follow Leoniel to his car, he just happens to walk across the street and then bumps into a building wall. I replayed the mission but he walked to that same wall and start bumping into it.

 

Third mission - Good mission. First day in town and Harry gets into trouble alreadybiggrin.gif

 

Overall, since I couldn't finish the second mission, I'd give 5/10. So far, it's good. It's only the beginning of the mission pack. Don't take this as a bad rating. When you get a little deeper into the story, rating will probably go up. Good luck with your future missions biggrin.gif

Thanks for the feedback Jimmy, about the cutscenes, I put them 4 seconds or 3 seconds, but I don't use 5 seconds.

 

About the first mission, I did not put how the passengers died, but remember that Harry got "debts" at London, that's because the plane exploded, It's like Ray Bulgarin from GTA IV, but I will not reveal the character name until the story goes deeper. About the second mission, there's an invisible checkpoint just where Leoniel stops, I don't know why you have problems to get to it, anyway the checkpoint is at the left upper corner of the car.

 

About the rating, there's no problem man, that's help, why? Simple, it tells you the errors of your mission, you fix them, and you're good, simple as that. Thanks biggrin.gif

 

In the fourth mission, Harry was supposed to kill a Forelli Mafia member at the Esmerald Isle, anyway I cutted it because it was kinda stupid for me. Here a word for the real fourth mission: safehouse.

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Fourth mission released and chapter 1 ends! Give comment and feedback biggrin.gif
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Well, I dont know but... there was no homework to do for tomorrow, sorry for my fail:

 

Sixth mission released! Play, comment and give feedback.

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Played the first chapter.

 

The missions have been nicely made especially as the animations you have made for the actors. Also you tried to make sure that the friend actors almost always remain with the main actor, especially in the 'follow Connor' objectives.

 

Until now there are a few mistakes I saw. Instead of using the word 'Selection' you were writing 'election.'

 

Also, the long drive from Las Venturas to Bayside. It is really boring to drive such long distances with no action going on between. Even though there were three stars wanted level, in the desert, not even one police car could even reach me so it was just like a normal drive.

 

Apart from that the missions are good.

 

More comments after you finish the whole storyline, and I complete playing the missions. icon14.gif

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Played the first chapter.

 

The missions have been nicely made especially as the animations you have made for the actors. Also you tried to make sure that the friend actors almost always remain with the main actor, especially in the 'follow Connor' objectives.

 

Until now there are a few mistakes I saw. Instead of using the word 'Selection' you were writing 'election.'

 

Also, the long drive from Las Venturas to Bayside. It is really boring to drive such long distances with no action going on between. Even though there were three stars wanted level, in the desert, not even one police car could even reach me so it was just like a normal drive.

 

Apart from that the missions are good.

 

More comments after you finish the whole storyline, and I complete playing the missions. icon14.gif

Nice to hear it from you Nitesh, about that spelling mistake thing, for some reason DYOM doesn't type the characters the speed I type, that's because some characters are missing, anyway, I'll try to type more slowy, about the mission "Robbing the Store", theres no logic way to make very hard polices, so I recommend to keep with them so you can have some fun. (especially the scene where everything explodes)Again thanks a lot Nitesh.

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I have played it. What can I say, it isn't the best mission pack out there but so far it's pretty good. There are a couple things that bother me but they have been mentioned before. I didn't have a problem with the long ride though, listening to K-DST should fix the boredom biggrin.gif

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Finally 8th mission uploaded!! Play, give comment and feedback!

 

PS: Search for easter eggs please smile.gif

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Is the 8th mission the last mission? You could upload it as a rar/zip then biggrin.gif

Well done icon14.gif

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Is the 8th mission the last mission? You could upload it as a rar/zip then biggrin.gif

Well done icon14.gif

In the ninth mission I will introduct a new character, a lil great job for the group and character 2 completed, and episode 1 too biggrin.gif , I expect there will be over 30 - 20 missions due to the story. When I complete everything, you will see a .rar file or a storyline.

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I played the first chapter.I gotta say that the story is very good and I didn't have problems with cutscenes and that long distance,especially because they were no cars. sigh.gif

Anyway,you get a 8.5/10 from me. icon14.gif

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I played the first chapter.I gotta say that the story is very good and I didn't have problems with cutscenes and that long distance,especially because they were no cars. sigh.gif

Anyway,you get a 8.5/10 from me. icon14.gif

Thanks man.

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Ninth mission uploaded! Play, give comment, find easter eggs and give feedback!

 

Nevermind, chapter 1 rar uploaded.

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10th mission uploaded! Play, give comment or feedback and find easter eggs!

 

PS: Remember to download the skin mod so you can see a new skin for Harry biggrin.gif

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I will give it a try tommorow and give you a feedback

Now, good night ;D

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I will give it a try tommorow and give you a feedback

Now, good night ;D

O'raight then my friend.

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Sorry for wait guys, here's the 12th mission! Comment, give feedback and find easter eggs!
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Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif, about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

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Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif, about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

Well I honestly just played the first mission and I just had a car spawn in the checkpoint where you leave the car in the driveway, but that's random and not really a bug.

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Few spelling mistakes and fewer bugs. Nice and simple, I like it.

Thanks, I try to do my best when typing wink.gif, about bugs... which bugs you noticed?

Well I honestly just played the first mission and I just had a car spawn in the checkpoint where you leave the car in the driveway, but that's random and not really a bug.

I noticed that bug too, but I just ignored it, because it is a car spawn from GTA, not from DYOM.

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