MonstaMasha Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 (edited) Hi all, I hope to use this thread to showcase my work to the public of GTAF, and hopefully receive some feedback on how I could improve I will be happy to do requests on anything, so just ask Most desktops I make will be 2560 x 1440, as that is my screen resolution On with the show! Just click on each to see the picture! (Just so you know, my real name is Sam Kyle, which is why the name pops up in a few of these) //swag.exe iPhone background Portal 2-Inspired Planet Desktop for a fake graphics company I made up Real Life Apple Logo Desktop OS X Lion-Inspired Desktop Hell Desktop from a tutorial A test of various filters and adjustments. Some help from a tutorial Surreal Futuristic Motivational Poster I'll be posting more things as time goes by, so keep checking back In case I forget to upload anything here, try checking my deviantArt page. Cheers, Monsta Edited July 26, 2011 by MonstaMasha Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcis_speed6 Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 I really like the last one, you did a great job with the color filters. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619108 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 23, 2011 Author Share Posted July 23, 2011 Thanks man Admittedly a tutorial did guide me through that one, albeit with me changing settings and adding different effects in places to suit the picture, I think I can do that pretty confidently now Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619115 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rokas. Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 I like the last one, but I don't like the second one and others of it kind. I hope you don't mind if I post some criticism? It looks like you've used too much of stock photoshop effects, it would be cooler if you'd use more hand made stuff, or like different brushes and stuff. Well, like the last one, that one looks good to me so yeah, good work, keep it up Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619203 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 23, 2011 Author Share Posted July 23, 2011 Thanks man! Criticism is entirely what this thread is about! I just want constructive criticism on anything that I make, so I know how to hone my skills Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619219 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rokas. Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 Cool, I'm glad you accept it Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619367 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LongHairedFreakyGuy Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 The apple one could have done with some alterations to the side of the apple, since it looks 2d on the sides, but 3d on top and bottom. On the "Fake Graphics Company" one, the text really does need changing to something much easier to read, or a stroke maybe? On the one with the planet, the shadow needs to be alot bigger, since you put a 'light source' at the back of the planet. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619419 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 23, 2011 Author Share Posted July 23, 2011 I thought those had something wrong with them Thanks Butters, I'll definitely take those into account if I ever make similar graphics Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060619434 Share on other sites More sharing options...
boyben Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 I really like the Lion desktop one. I'm gonna use it if you don't mine Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060620086 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 Sure thing man! I'm glad you like it that much <3 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060620691 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 Updated the original post with my Surreal Futuristic Motivational Poster Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060625839 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy-Vercetti19 Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Awesome, your work is really good for a beginner! Keep it up man. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060625857 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonstaMasha Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 Did..... did I..... Did I just get complimented by Tommy? *faints* Holy sh*t, thanks man! That means a lot to me coming from you Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/482462-monstas-visuals/#findComment-1060625871 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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