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Shayan Shaffey

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Shayan Shaffey

Liberty Train

i am rewriting the whole story I will be done soon.

Please, ignore the comments below, they were for the old version!

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I think it's really inventive that you've replaced elements of the lyrics with GTA related ones, and it's quite a humorous tale when you know what it's all going on about.

 

...but it's still plagiarism. confused.gif

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I think it's really inventive that you've replaced elements of the lyrics with GTA related ones, and it's quite a humorous tale when you know what it's all going on about.

 

...but it's still plagiarism. confused.gif

So I have no chance at winning?

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Well... the words aren't yours, you see. You haven't written it, you've just taken the lyrics from a song and substituted the word 'devil' for 'Jack Thompson' and 'god' for 'Dan and Sam Houser', for example. It's an interesting, cool little idea... but it's not your own writing, is it?

 

It's definitely creative, but it's not your own work, so it can't be entered. What would be very cool, though, would be if you maybe wrote the whole thing out as a story, in your own words, and tried to enter that instead?

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Well... the words aren't yours, you see. You haven't written it, you've just taken the lyrics from a song and substituted the word 'devil' for 'Jack Thompson' and 'god' for 'Dan and Sam Houser', for example. It's an interesting, cool little idea... but it's not your own writing, is it?

 

It's definitely creative, but it's not your own work, so it can't be entered. What would be very cool, though, would be if you maybe wrote the whole thing out as a story, in your own words, and tried to enter that instead?

Thanks I'll try that

 

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I'm going to go and lock this so you can start afresh. Also, please remember to follow this theme when posting:

 

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