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Jack McAffrey Story


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Story is very confusing and i can't understand it due to major grammar failures... But i guess i'll give it a try

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Ok.. Just gave it a try... Already told you i cant understand the story due to major grammar mistakes.. And about a mission... Total no-sense... Only one beggining cutscene with text "Motherf*cking training, atleast i'm alive" ... No introduction to what happened.. Nothing, only some cowboy cop commanding me what to do... Seriously... i would give this mission 1.5/10... Remember, it's only my opinion...

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Ok.. Just gave it a try... Already told you i cant understand the story due to major grammar mistakes.. And about a mission... Total no-sense... Only one beggining cutscene with text "Motherf*cking training, atleast i'm alive" ... No introduction to what happened.. Nothing, only some cowboy cop commanding me what to do... Seriously... i would give this mission 1.5/10... Remember, it's only my opinion...

It's your opinion and I respect it, I will give a better design for the next mission.

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You'll have to work the story out a bit. The story so far feels kinda rushed, take it a bit slower. The mission wasn't badly designed, but the story was a bit confusing. So far, a 4/10.

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You'll have to work the story out a bit. The story so far feels kinda rushed, take it a bit slower. The mission wasn't badly designed, but the story was a bit confusing. So far, a 4/10.

I'm on that, it was because of BUYSAG >.<, now I'm designing another mission, the Prelude, then, you guys will be able to play the whole story.

For now I'll put out the mission "New Comer".

Thanks a lot for the feedbacks, it really helps.

EDIT: Fixed story.

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UPDATED CHARACTER/GANGS LIST!

MISSION 2 OF CHAPTER 1 ADDED!

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Srry guys but I'll take more time of my life doing homework/things of life than doing missions, I expect the third mission will be released the other week.
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Guys, I got bored of this, I don't have ideas for the missions, so I leave the project on stand by, no more missions until I change my mind, I'll start another story, but this mission pack will be on stand by. Thanks for being patient at reading this.
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