The GTAguy23 Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 (edited) GTA V Vice City 2008 and Vice City hasnt changed a lot.Criminal cartels,corrupt policeman,rich and powerful businessman they still rule the city but can one man stand against that system.Juan Costra was a boy when he joined the rebels in Columbia , he saw things nobody shouldnt seen and he learned quickly how to survive.After his brothers death in Columbia he finaly decided to leave his home country but Vice City where he goes is no different and Juan starts to work as a mercenary.Will he survive or is the citys corrupt system stronger than he. Story Chapter 1 The game begins when Juan sleeps and then is waked up by Terrence who is a fellow mercenary and Juans best friend.Together they work for the very rich businessman Jerry Crockers.Terrence and Juan are used by Jimmy Carston the commander of Crockers security to eliminate various enemies of Jerry.But during one mission Jerry is being kidnapped by Frucci Cartel members.Jimmy tries to save him but gets shot and Juan manages to kill the Cartel members and rescue Jerry.After that Jerry becomes closer to him and promotes him but that makes Jimmy unhappy and he tries to kill Juan but Juan kills him first.Juan also meets with Jerrys daughter Nicole Crockers and they secretly fall in love.Juan is then introduced by Jerry to Manuel Orlando the boss of the Orlando Cartel.Jerrys business keeps going down and he suspects somebody has betrayed him and he kills Terrence and then sends assasins to kill Juan.Juan manages to escape from them and then he kills Jerry (he regrets it later) and takes Nicole and escapes from Downtown. Chapter 2 Manuel Orlando calls Juan and he gives a nice house to him and Nicole in condition that he starts to work for him.He introduces Juan to the spanish community of Vice City which is called Barcelona Avenue.This place is ruled by 4 Cartels who are all hostile to each other.But one Cartel the Frucci Cartel is trying to get supreme control of the area.Manuel orders to kill Armando Senchez the leader of the Cartel.After Senchez death the Orlandos with the help of Juan take over Frucci Cartels business in Barcelona District.But instead of completely destroying the Cartel, Manuel puts his own man Jose Armadillo in charge of the Cartel and then makes the Frucci Cartel his ally.In the same time Juan makes friends with Ben Hosting a lawyer representing the Orlando Cartel.Manuel orders then Juan to attack Fort Jackson the military base in Vice City and steal a crate of weapons from there.After this Juan understands that Manuel is planning something.Then Manuel wants Juan to pick up a briefcase from a metro station in River Alley.But then a german assasin Robert Höckler attacks Juan but he manages to defeat him and before the assassin dies he reveals that he was sent by Manuel Orlando.Ben then calls and tells that he is being chased by some armed men.Juan saves Ben and they go to pick up Nicole.The trio rents an apartment and plans a revenge. Chapter 3 In the same time the rest two Cartels the Senito and Corano Cartel start to war each other and Juan,Ben and Nicole understand that this is Manuels job.With hard work the trio manages to stop the war and ruin Manuels plans.And Manuel makes a mistake when he orders to kidnap the Senito brothers sister Eva.Juan saves Eva and this turns the Coranos and Senitos against the Orlandos.Juan even further weakens the Orlando Cartel when he steals Manuels safe.The Senito Brothers inform Juan then that the Orlandos own a warehouse in Vice City Docks.Juan attacks the warehouse but then he meets somebody who he didnt expect to meet.Juan meets his rebel commander in Colombia Antonio Perez.The warehouse is attacked then by a group of heavily armed rebel soldiers.The rebels turn the situation of the Anti-Orlando alliance very tough but with Juans help the alliance of the Senitos and Coranos helds and during one firefight Juan kills Perez which makes the remaining rebels to retreat from Vice City.After seeing that the Alliance is winning the war Manuel starts to terrorize the city and orders his man to attack the Vice City Water supply station.Juan defends the station with the Coranos and Senitos but the Orlandos manage to damage the Electricity station.But many Orlandos doesnt like this tactic so some Orlandos like Jose Armadillo run over to the Alliance side.Finaly Francisco Corano says that Manuel has finnaly decided to leave Vice City.Juan,Ben,Nicole and the Senitos,Coranos assault the Vice City Dock.They encounter the last remaining Orlandos and the trio finaly sees him driving away with a boat full of money.They take another boat and catch him in the open sea where Juan kills him.The trio however think that Vice City is right now too dangerous even if Manuel is dead and they drive away further to the sea with Manuels money. Characters (Juan (to the left) in Colombia with fellow rebels. Juan Costra is the 29 year old protagonist of the game.He was born in Colombia and he and his brother joined the rebels when he was only 13 years old.After his brothers death however he abandoned the rebels which angered his commander Antonio Perez.He is a good friend and loyal but when he is angry he can be destructive.Most he trust his friend Terrence but after his death he become very close to Nicole and later Ben also. Manuel Orlando is the leader of the Orlando Cartel and the antagonist of the game.He came to Vice City when he was 20 years old and soon with cleverness he established his own Cartel which challenged then the most powerful Senito Cartel.Soon he won the Senitos and established himself as the king of Vice City underworld but then the other Cartels came to help the Senitos and Manuel had to made a deal with the other Cartels that they can all do business in Barcelona Avenue.He is very agressive and he is not afraid to kill all his friends if its needed. Nicole Crockers is the daughter of Jerry Crockers and Juans girlfriend.She was born into a rich family so he never had to felt poverty.But she doesnt like his father and steals money from him. Terrence Hudson was Juans best friend.He was known as friendly and he liked to make jokes.He was found dead by Juan in his house . Antonio Perez was the commander of Juan in Colombia.He was a high ranked rebel officer.He is being later contacted by Manuel Orlando who pays him and his soldiers to help him in his fight with the other Cartels. Ben Hosting was the lawyer of Manuel Orlando until he joined Juan in his fight with the Orlando Cartel. Jerry Crockers is a very rich businessman who operates in Downtown,he is Nicoles father. Jimmy Carston is Jerry Crockers security head. Luis Senito is the oldest Senito brother who is in charge of leading the Cartel. Simon Senito is the younger brother who takes care of the Cartels finanical business. Eva Maria Senito is the sister of the Senito Brothers.She owns a nightclub which is an undercover Senito Cartels cocaine supply base. Armando Senchez is the leader of the Frucci Cartel. Jose Armadillo is the puppet leader of the Frucci Cartel but he later joins the Anti-Orlando alliance. Francisco Corano is the leader of the Corano Cartel. (These pictures have been taken from other games) Mercenaries The new thing is mercenaries.After you are betrayed by Manuel you can hire mercenaries to defend yourself or your friends.They usually hang around near bars.There are 4 or 5 of them together (mostly) and they ask about 3500 dollars.They are very reliable and heavily armed.When you need to fight a large group of enemies then they are really useful. Vice City Vice City is the seventh largest city in US.Its crime rate is very high because of the major cocaine route that goes through the city.The city is ruled by 4 Cartels (Orlandos,Senitos,Coranos,Fruccis) who hang around in the Spanish community called Barcelona Avenue.They all own property in there.The citys police officers are well trained and sometimes even brutal.Near the city is Fort Jackson military base.Vice Citys richest man is Jerry Crockers.The city has many nice beaches and good nightclubs.The City has districts River Alley,Barcelona Avenue,Downtown,Lusty Islands,Vice City Docks,Vice Beach,Sunnyford Alley and Hessens. Vice Citys clubs and partys The best partys are in Eva Senitos nightclub Viva La Vice.Juan gets free drinks there after he saves Eva from the Orlandos.Beach partys are also cool and they are almost every night in Vice Beach. Casinos are also a very popular place.When you are lucky then you can get rich in a casino.Vice Citys most popular casino is Startrip Casino. MORE UPDATE COMING. Edited June 28, 2011 by The GTAguy23 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Terrence an fellow mercenary maybe a little grammar would be good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banks. Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 For your first concept thread it's not all bad but you could fix some of your grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AceRay Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 I love how you steal pictures from other games. (is he allowed to that?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blitz Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 I think so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTA_stu Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 It's a pretty good first try, and I'm guessing his first language isn't english so it's a bit harsh to call him om his grammar. And I didn't know so many hitman character creators also worked for R*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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