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Grand Thaft Auto London

 

Story -

You play as 21 year old Jay Clarke. You have just been realsed from Young Offenders after murdering youth when you where 13. After being realsed you go to live with you brother Tommy Clarke in a run down estate in Hackney.

The Brother of the Youth you killed murdered you Mum when you was in Youth Offenders and you are looking for revenge....

 

Main Characters -

 

Jay Clarke - Age: 21 - POB: Walthamstow,London - Race: Caucasian

Description - Jay Clarke was a feared youth before he went in and runed the Manor House Estate in Hackney with his older Brother Tommy.

 

Tommy Clarke - Age: 28 - POB: Hackney,London - Race: Caucasian

Description - Tommy Clarke is a respectfull Lad in Hackney, everyone knows him but alot of People want him dead because of Jay.

 

Andrew Pet - Age: 24 - POB: Sutton,Surrey - Race: Black

Description - Andrew Pet is the brother of the youth you murdered , he killed your Mum and you are looking for him.

 

Kim Wong - Age: 40 - POB: Hong Kong - Race: Asian

Description - Kim Wong is the Leader of the London Triads, later in the game you become close and work with him doign various jobs.

 

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Missions -

 

'A Mistake' -

 

You start back when you were 13. Its midnight and you on a BMX with a group of boys on an Estate,

"Oi c'mon boys! lets got show this wasteman who hes f*cking with!" Shouts the boy leading you and the group.

You start the follow on your bike (Pedal by holding down R-Trigger and break by pressing L-trigger)

You follow them to an alley and everyone goes quiet and gets of there bikes.

"Jay? When he walks through the alley way run at him with this knife and stab him up!"

The leader of the group passes you a Knife wrapped in a red bandana.

The victim starts to walk through the alley way , and you run at him and you have to start stabing him. (Tap A to run whilst pushing forward on left anolog stick and L-Trigger to lock on and X,B or Y to swing Knife)

You stab him to death and start to run to get out of the area.

But a Police Car pulls up in front of you and the Officer tackles you to the ground and you are arrested.

Everything fast forwards to when you are in Youth Offenders.

 

Mission Passed

 

'Locked Up'

 

Cutscene -

You are walking down a corridor with two police men holding your arms tight you are walked past different cells and inmates and you can tell they know who you are. You are put into your cell and the mission starts.

 

You can walk around your cell and interact with various items and then you go to the cell door and a Officer shouts "Lights out" The whole Institution goes pitch Black.

You lay on your bed and go to sleep.

You wake up in the Morning and let out your cell you go down to the canteine to get something to eat but you end up bumping into an old enemie. He gives you a dodgy look and shoulder bumps you. You turn around and push him over and start beating him up , then the gaurds drag you of him and you are put back in your cell.

You are moved Prision and then it fast forwards again till you are realesed.

 

Mission Passed

 

--More Missions Soon--

 

Location -

 

GTA London is set in London

 

It Includes the Boroughs of -

 

City Of London

Westminster

Islington

Camden

Lambeth

Southwark

Wandsworth

Lewisham

Greenwich

Bromley

Croydon

Sutton

Kingston Upon Thames

Merton

Hackney

Waltham Forest

Bexley

Tower Hamlets

Newham

Redbridge

Havering

Enfield

Haringey

Kensington And Chelsea

Hamersmith and Fullham

Barking & Dagenham

Ealing

Hillingdon

Hounslow

Richmond

Brent

Harrow

Barnet

 

All to Scale , road names exactly the same as in real life.

 

Also includes some countryside round the M25 and Southend on Sea.

 

Enviroment/Landmarks/The world -

 

Weather-

 

Fog

Mist

Sunny

Snow

Light Rain

Rain

Heavy Rain

Thunder Storm

Blizard

Hail Storm

Hurricane

Flash Floods

Cloudy

Sun

Mild

 

Landmarks -

 

Houses Of Parliment and Big Ben

London Eye

The Gherkin

Tower Of London

BT Tower

Tower Bridge

O2 Areana

Millennium Bridge

St Paul's Cathedral

Canary Wharf

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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It's an OK start but the layout could be better to be honest. Have a look at other concept threads around the section and take tip from them icon14.gif

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Good.. i like it!

 

Needs headers

 

Please include some of Hampshire/ Surrey! you could have stuck up farmers, gravel drives, big SUV's and a good opportunity for myths - the south has some pretty rich folklore..

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I don't know if playing as a 13 year old at the start is a really good idea. I think a cutscene would do better, or perhaps just a flashback to the court ruling to sum up what happened. A 21-year old is still a baby compared to the career criminals you will probably have him associate with. If you plan on making Jay into some rich gangster at some point you should make him at least 25 years old.

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universetwisters

what?

 

no offense, but this needs to be better thought out and organized before you post things

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BondTrader

I like the concept, probably will keep reading it, but the others are right, you need a better lay out, check the GFX request section to get some images.

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Story -

 

You play as 21 year old Jay Clarke. You have just been realsed from Young offenders after murdering youth when you where 13. After being released you go to live with you brother Tommy Clarke in a run down estate in Bow,Poplar.

The Brother of the Youth you killed murdered you Mum when you was in Youth Offenders and you are looking for revenge....

 

Main Characters -

 

Jay Clarke - Age: 21 - POB: Bow,London - Race: Caucasian

Description - Jay Clarke was a feared youth before he went in and runed the Ida Street Estate in Bow with his older Brother Tommy.

 

Tommy Clarke - Age: 28 - POB: Hackney,London - Race: Caucasian

Description - Tommy Clarke is a respectful Lad in Tower Hamlets , everyone knows him but a lot of People want him dead because of Jay.

 

Andrew Pet - Age: 24 - POB: Sutton,Surrey - Race: Black

Description - Andrew Pet is the brother of the youth you murdered , he killed your Mum and you are looking for him.

 

Ron Kray - Age-42 - POB: Hackney,London - Race: Caucasian

Description- Ron Kray is Ronnie Krays son. Ron Kray is taking after his father and have become one of the most feared men in the whole of East London. After Jay is released from Prison , Ron and Jay start to work with each other.

 

Warren Clarke - Age-16 - POB: St Pauls,Bristol - Race:Caucasian

Description- Warren Clarke is Jay's younger cousin from Bristol. Warren want's to roll with the big boys , but his temper and poor attitude holds him back. Warren lives with his Nan (who is also Jay's,Tommy's and bones Nan) in the 'Lego Flat Estate' in Barking.

 

Johnny 'Bones' Clarke - Age-14 - POB: Peckham,London - Race: Mixed Race

Description- Bones is Jay's youngest cousin from Peckham. Bones is only 14 but is stacking bare p's , he respects his olders , unlike Warren and does what hes told. But you dont want to get on the wrong side of Bones because he's a trigger finger.

 

Ard Adz - Age - 20 - POB: Morocco - Race:Mixed Race

Description- Ard's lives in Brixton , and runs one of south londons biggest street gangs, 'PDC'. He is one of Jay's worst enemies , on the streets and in the music business.

 

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Missions -

 

'A Mistake' -

 

You start back when you were 13. Its midnight and you on a BMX with a group of boys on an Estate,

"Oi c'mon boys! lets got show this wasteman who hes f*cking with!" Shouts the boy leading you and the group.

You start the follow on your bike (Pedal by holding down R-Trigger and break by pressing L-trigger)

You follow them to an alley and everyone goes quiet and gets of there bikes.

"Jay? When he walks through the alley way run at him with this knife and stab him up!"

The leader of the group passes you a Knife wrapped in a red bandana.

The victim starts to walk through the alley way , and you run at him and you have to start stabing him. (Tap A to run whilst pushing forward on left anolog stick and L-Trigger to lock on and X,B or Y to swing Knife)

You stab him to death and start to run to get out of the area.

But a Police Car pulls up in front of you and the Officer tackles you to the ground and you are arrested.

Everything fast forwards to when you are in Youth Offenders.

 

Mission Passed

 

'Locked Up'

 

Cutscene -

You are walking down a corridor with two police men holding your arms tight you are walked past different cells and inmates and you can tell they know who you are. You are put into your cell and the mission starts.

 

You can walk around your cell and interact with various items and then you go to the cell door and a Officer shouts "Lights out" The whole Institution goes pitch Black.

You lay on your bed and go to sleep.

You wake up in the Morning and let out your cell you go down to the canteine to get something to eat but you end up bumping into an old enemie. He gives you a dodgy look and shoulder bumps you. You turn around and push him over and start beating him up , then the gaurds drag you of him and you are put back in your cell.

You are moved Prision and then it fast forwards again till you are realesed.

 

Mission Passed

 

--More Missions Soon--

 

Location -

 

GTA London is set in London

 

It Includes the Boroughs of -

 

City Of London

Westminster

Islington

Camden

Lambeth

Southwark

Wandsworth

Lewisham

Greenwich

Bromley

Croydon

Sutton

Kingston Upon Thames

Merton

Hackney

Waltham Forest

Bexley

Tower Hamlets

Newham

Redbridge

Havering

Enfield

Haringey

Kensington and Chelsea

Hammersith and Fullham

Barking and Dagenham

Ealing

Hillingdon

Hounslow

Richmond

Brent

Harrow

Barnet

 

All to Scale , road names exactly the same as in real life.

 

Other Locations -

Southend

Borehamwood

St Pauls , Bristol

M25

Country Side

Dartford

Staines

 

 

 

Enviroment/Landmarks/The world -

 

Weather-

 

Fog

Mist

Sunny

Snow

Light Rain

Rain

Heavy Rain

Thunder Storm

Blizzard

Hail Storm

Hurricane

Flash Flood (Not as bad as in the picture)

Cloudy

Sun

Mild

 

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Resize that pic! Page stretcher or what lol.gif

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universetwisters

uh...why are there 2 of the same thread?

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