GTAIndonesia Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 I think i saw something wrong in a mission but i cant remember Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 I think i saw something wrong in a mission but i cant remember OK. If you remember, tell me so that I could know what to improve in my next missions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 Trying it nao! or maybe later... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 Trying it nao! or maybe later... Alright. Make sure you give me feedback after you play them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 I'm already waiting for your next project. Although I'd like to see something new, you always do packs like ''the story of (insert name here)''. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 I'm already waiting for your next project. Although I'd like to see something new, you always do packs like ''the story of (insert name here)''. Thanks, but what about ''The Forgotten'' or ''GTA Prison Break'' ? When I come up with a new idea, I won't call it ''The story of -----'', don't worry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IX-MJ-XI Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 Played it. Nice Mission Series. Good Story, it grabs you as you progress, making you want to finish the game to find out the ending. Just some minor things to improve (nonetheless GOOD). Ratings (7.5/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 21, 2011 Author Share Posted July 21, 2011 Played it. Nice Mission Series. Good Story, it grabs you as you progress, making you want to finish the game to find out the ending. Just some minor things to improve (nonetheless GOOD).Ratings (7.5/10) Thanks for your feedback and a very good rating you gave me. I'm glad you liked the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted July 22, 2011 Share Posted July 22, 2011 (edited) I downgraded the overall score of your last chapter to 6.9 because it was nothing like what I've seen here. Chapter 3 Feedback So first off, I do not intend to put spoilers. In my opinion - a well colored post>spoilers so anyone who haven't finished the story should not read it rather than the final score. For the first time, someone made me use my imagination - but that's probably because you're a very lazy animator. The animations we alot better than the first two chapters. though sometimes you just forget to animate actors, like rick from the final mission - standing still and shouting at you from a very long distance. The "action" from the last mission had is something I never experienced in anyone else's missions, just yours. One thing I did not like, was the four "jobs" Morita made you do. It added nothing to the story and was your way of making the chapter longer - Do not repeat it, you should make a chapter longer only by adding necessary details. Another very bad thing is the fact that you let us drive a motorcycle in Las Venturas - that thing killed most of my brain cells and let me kill the rest by telling you everything - -First off, I went to the checkpoints and in the way hit thousands of cars. -Then, when I returned this interesting proccess started: I hit a few cars again, then a street sign, then a very thin tree. Then suddenly I almost hit another car, but managed to stop one second before hitting it, but then I hit another tree, and another car which was followed by another tree. Worst gaming experience. EVER. And I felt you kind of forgot to add the sister's personality. The chapter was great and I dare to say it's almost flawless. Rating -Four "space-filling" missions. +"Action" +Intense storytelling. +Animations +Great Cutscenes Score 8/10 Much better than your first chapters, and don't forget I'm quite harsh in rating so missions should be stunning to get an eight. Now think, how would've this missionpack ended if without my 4.0? those low scores only help people get up, or give up. Just joking, I hate it. Edited July 22, 2011 by Kratos2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted July 22, 2011 Share Posted July 22, 2011 (edited) Just joking, I hate it. -So much, infact you got a nine. Rating -Four "space-filling" missions. +"Action" +Intense storytelling. +Animations +Great Cutscenes +Great in almost every other aspect Score 9/10 Edited July 22, 2011 by Kratos2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 22, 2011 Author Share Posted July 22, 2011 I downgraded the overall score of your last chapter to 6.9 because it was nothing like what I've seen here. Chapter 3 Feedback So first off, I do not intend to put spoilers. In my opinion - a well colored post>spoilers so anyone who haven't finished the story should not read it rather than the final score. For the first time, someone made me use my imagination - but that's probably because you're a very lazy animator. The animations we alot better than the first two chapters. though sometimes you just forget to animate actors, like rick from the final mission - standing still and shouting at you from a very long distance. The "action" from the last mission had is something I never experienced in anyone else's missions, just yours. One thing I did not like, was the four "jobs" Morita made you do. It added nothing to the story and was your way of making the chapter longer - Do not repeat it, you should make a chapter longer only by adding necessary details. Another very bad thing is the fact that you let us drive a motorcycle in Las Venturas - that thing killed most of my brain cells and let me kill the rest by telling you everything - -First off, I went to the checkpoints and in the way hit thousands of cars. -Then, when I returned this interesting proccess started: I hit a few cars again, then a street sign, then a very thin tree. Then suddenly I almost hit another car, but managed to stop one second before hitting it, but then I hit another tree, and another car which was followed by another tree. Worst gaming experience. EVER. And I felt you kind of forgot to add the sister's personality. The chapter was great and I dare to say it's almost flawless. Rating -Four "space-filling" missions. +"Action" +Intense storytelling. +Animations +Great Cutscenes Score 8/10 Much better than your first chapters, and don't forget I'm quite harsh in rating so missions should be stunning to get an eight. Now think, how would've this missionpack ended if without my 4.0? those low scores only help people get up, or give up. Just joking, I hate it. WOW. An 8 corrected to a 9/10 !! You bet it's stunning and I thank you very much for that. You are right. If there wasn't for that 4.0, I wouldn't know what to improve. I always want people to give me honest feedbacks. I'm not a noob to lose my mind and start attacking everyone cause of a bad rating. I appreciate every advice. I really thank you for that 4.0 and for the other 2 feedbacks aswell. As I said before, getting good/almost perfect ratings from designers that I respect very much is like a birthday present to me. And one more thing: I must say that re-telling the ''motorcycle accidents'' during a mission was the funniest thing I've read in quite a long time. I also must say that you're a very bad driver then, huh? Peace, bro. Thanks for your time you've put into playing and analysing my missions. Jimmy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nitesh002 Posted July 23, 2011 Share Posted July 23, 2011 I completed the whole mission pack. And as always, your story rocks. You really know how to make good storyline for your missions. I liked the variety of missions you put in the mission pack. You know, shoot outs, stealth killing in some missions, cutscenes etc etc I also have some few things to say about the last mission. The mission was good in terms of so many twists and also the suspense in the cutscenes, but one thing, all the 'villains' were killed and none of them was killed by the 'main hero.' There was very little gameplay at first were we had to killl those goons. The rest, it was just cutscenes which was doing the job. I also like the way you tell every little detail about the story and I also learnt a lot of things about making missions from this mission pack. Just a suggestion, you kept some missions that were not neccessarily needed and the story would have still gone on without them [as Kratos had said]. This is just my opinion, if you like to make missions which are just 'side missions' why not make the missions using the storyline mode. About the difficulty, most of the missions were easy, so why not make them a bit harder, by increasing the number of enemies or giving the enemies more powerful weapons. [i only had 'mission failed' in one mission only. The one where there was stealth killing required] In conclusion, the missions were very good and I really enjoyed going through the mission pack, and of course, looking forward to the next project of yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 23, 2011 Author Share Posted July 23, 2011 I completed the whole mission pack. And as always, your story rocks. You really know how to make good storyline for your missions. I liked the variety of missions you put in the mission pack. You know, shoot outs, stealth killing in some missions, cutscenes etc etc I also have some few things to say about the last mission. The mission was good in terms of so many twists and also the suspense in the cutscenes, but one thing, all the 'villains' were killed and none of them was killed by the 'main hero.' There was very little gameplay at first were we had to killl those goons. The rest, it was just cutscenes which was doing the job. I also like the way you tell every little detail about the story and I also learnt a lot of things about making missions from this mission pack. Just a suggestion, you kept some missions that were not neccessarily needed and the story would have still gone on without them [as Kratos had said]. This is just my opinion, if you like to make missions which are just 'side missions' why not make the missions using the storyline mode. About the difficulty, most of the missions were easy, so why not make them a bit harder, by increasing the number of enemies or giving the enemies more powerful weapons. [i only had 'mission failed' in one mission only. The one where there was stealth killing required] In conclusion, the missions were very good and I really enjoyed going through the mission pack, and of course, looking forward to the next project of yours. First of all, thanks for your great feedback. I'm glad you liked the mission series. Now, I will answer your questions and thoughts. Well, in the last mission, I wasn't sure if I should kill the main antagonists/villans by gameplay or with cutscenes. I used cutscenes cause I can control the story in a more ''intense'' way, to put it that words. I can use more ''twists'' as you said and make it more epic in some way. If I let you kill them in gameplay, some of the players maybe use cheats so if they blast a villan with a bazooka, it's not realistic to make him be able to shoot at the protagonist in the next cutscene. That's why I used the ''cutscene option''. For the thing Kratos and you said about missions for Morita. They aren't 100% side missions. SPOILER: Brian and Garry agreed to do the jobs for Morita in order to get to see Diane. Technically, Garry had a choice and he could've said I don't want to do jobs for you, but Brian couldn't because of his sister. Garry, in an act of friendship, agreed to do jobs to in order to help Brian. About the difficulty. Yes, I know most of them weren't so hard. In my next mission series I will make the missions a little more harder by using your suggestions In the end, thanks for your time you've put into playing my missions. I really appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simi10 Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 I played all the missions and i can say they are really good and i had lot of fun playing them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 26, 2011 Author Share Posted July 26, 2011 I played all the missions and i can say they are really good and i had lot of fun playing them Thanks, simi. I appreciate your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evanthebassist Posted July 29, 2011 Share Posted July 29, 2011 Hey man, I gotta give it to you, there has only been 2 other story lines that I have actually enjoyed so much that I have anticipated playing more in the future, and that number has just changed to 3. Everything is great, I've played all of chapter 1 and 2 and I will play 3 later. The only thing I can say I disliked is how much driving there is, even though it is kind of a necessary for the driving, I usually try to go around that when I make my missions. Otherwise, I'll give you a 9/10. Also, when you're not busy, why not try out some of my missions, I used to make tons like half a year ago and I'm just coming back into it. Under The Blue Moon -Evan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted July 29, 2011 Author Share Posted July 29, 2011 Hey man, I gotta give it to you, there has only been 2 other story lines that I have actually enjoyed so much that I have anticipated playing more in the future, and that number has just changed to 3. Everything is great, I've played all of chapter 1 and 2 and I will play 3 later. The only thing I can say I disliked is how much driving there is, even though it is kind of a necessary for the driving, I usually try to go around that when I make my missions. Otherwise, I'll give you a 9/10. Also, when you're not busy, why not try out some of my missions, I used to make tons like half a year ago and I'm just coming back into it. Under The Blue Moon -Evan Hey, man. Thanks for your feedback and a great rating. I appreciate it very much And yes, I'll play your mission now and give you feedback later. Jimmy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nitrousoxide Posted August 14, 2011 Share Posted August 14, 2011 Jimmy, I played this mission pack of yours. I enjoyed it very much. I played many mission packs in this 4 days since I downloaded dyom and I liked your best. Some missions had a lot of drive, but nothing else I can say that was bad. I especially liked the ending and the whole intense situation with brian and garry when they were shot. The best mission from your mission pack for me was total camouflage. I will play your other mission packs to. My score: 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted August 14, 2011 Author Share Posted August 14, 2011 Jimmy, I played this mission pack of yours. I enjoyed it very much. I played many mission packs in this 4 days since I downloaded dyom and I liked your best. Some missions had a lot of drive, but nothing else I can say that was bad. I especially liked the ending and the whole intense situation with brian and garry when they were shot. The best mission from your mission pack for me was total camouflage. I will play your other mission packs to. My score: 9.8/10 Hey, man. Thanks a lot. You gave me the highest score I'm glad you liked the story. And welcome on the forums Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alucardiff Posted August 23, 2011 Share Posted August 23, 2011 I tried this and I have one thing to say: f*ckING AWESOME! Now seriously, at first I thought "ah sh*t, yet another bad grammar sh*tty gameplay mission pack..." but no! And even now I don't really get it WHY did I like it so much? The gameplay? The not really developed story? But hoooly sh*t, I was proved wrong. I played Chapter 1 and it was of epic proportions, really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted August 23, 2011 Author Share Posted August 23, 2011 I tried this and I have one thing to say: f*ckING AWESOME!Now seriously, at first I thought "ah sh*t, yet another bad grammar sh*tty gameplay mission pack..." but no! And even now I don't really get it WHY did I like it so much? The gameplay? The not really developed story? But hoooly sh*t, I was proved wrong. I played Chapter 1 and it was of epic proportions, really. Hey, man. Thank you very much. I saw you're very strict when it comes to criticism. Well, I know English well. You won't have any problems with grammar in my missions I hope you'll play the rest of the mission series. Be sure to give me feedback when you finish it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Notna Posted September 19, 2011 Share Posted September 19, 2011 I finally managed to play the rest of the mission pack, and one word: AWESOME! The final mission was very interesting and funny Rick: Yo. Best line of the mission pack! Just amazing, great job Jimmy. Waiting for your next mission pack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Just noticed that I didn't gave the whole feedback. I liked playing this a lot, especially the last chapter with the most gameplay I saw in your missions. I'm looking forward to your next mission pack, wish it will be very soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 20, 2011 Author Share Posted September 20, 2011 @Notna - Thanks, friend. I'm glad you liked the whole mission series. I appreciate your feedback @SatournFan - Thanks to you to, man. I haven't heard from you in a while. I'm glad you still play my mission series. I really appreciate for your feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RamiTR Posted September 20, 2011 Share Posted September 20, 2011 Great mission series! Everything about it was just amazing. The storyline, the mission design, the drama, everything! Nice work Jimmy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 21, 2011 Author Share Posted September 21, 2011 Great mission series! Everything about it was just amazing. The storyline, the mission design, the drama, everything! Nice work Jimmy Thank you very much, Juan. I'm glad that newcomers play my missions to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior. Posted September 21, 2011 Share Posted September 21, 2011 I just got my PC back and I'll get SA soon so I can play The Tale of Jack Frazer and Brian Thompson's Heist and give feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 22, 2011 Author Share Posted September 22, 2011 I just got my PC back and I'll get SA soon so I can play The Tale of Jack Frazer and Brian Thompson's Heist and give feedback Great. Thanks, man I'll be waiting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junior. Posted September 22, 2011 Share Posted September 22, 2011 Got SA, now I'll just play the MPack! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimmy_Leppard Posted September 25, 2011 Author Share Posted September 25, 2011 Got SA, now I'll just play the MPack! Be sure to post a feedback after you finish the mission series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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