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Brian Thompson's heist [Mission series]


Jimmy_Leppard
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Jimmy_Leppard

 

Chapter 2 feedback.

Well, I must say you've done it nice.

You had gunfights, but not to a point where it's too much.

You had a more stable plot this time, but it was less special than the first chapters.

And Jimmy, the animations. didn't you forget them?  notify.gif

When I said this missionpack lacks animations, I didn't mean putting them all in the same camera view, and let them all move their hands forever.

More like letting only one guy move his hands while he's talking.

But it's much better than the first chapter.

Gameplay's also much better.

You kind of mixed up gunfights, gangsters, and a decent plot. so instead of having a maxed out plot, or over the top gameplay, you had only a bit of everything.  wink.gif

 

I must admit I thought Kiyoshi was a female 'till I saw him. the name is misleading.  tounge2.gif

 

As for the Score -

7.5/10

 

-Less interesting plot

-Clichier enemies

+Better Gameplay

+Better Cutscenes

+Better Dialogues

+Opened Ending

 

 

Overally, it's so much better, yet it missed a small bit out of every aspect that could make it very epic.

Talent, talent, talent is something you have.  wink.gif

Whoa. 7.5. That's much better than your first grade - 4.0 biggrin.gif Thanks, man. I appreciate it very much. And don't worry. I haven't forgot about the animations, I use them all the time. And for the ending - I'm planning to make it as good as I can biggrin.gif

And yea, Kiyoshi sounds a little bit misleading, I must admit also. tounge.gif

 

Stay tuned for more missions.

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Jimmy.. This last few missions are great. Especially 'Total camouflage', that's the best mission in this mission pack. biggrin.gif

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Jimmy.. This last few missions are great. Especially 'Total camouflage', that's the best mission in this mission pack. biggrin.gif

Thanks, man biggrin.gif I'm glad you liked them. Yea, even I failed it couple of times while I was testing it biggrin.gif

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Total Camouflage was one of the best stealth based missions I've seen so far.

 

Good missions Jimmy. icon14.gif

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Total Camouflage was one of the best stealth based missions I've seen so far.

 

Good missions Jimmy. icon14.gif

Well, it seems that Total Camouflage really is special mission in this mission series biggrin.gif

 

Thanks, BDR. I appreciate your feedback. More missions on the way biggrin.gif

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I looked the missions and its DAMN IMPRESSIVE

Thank you very much biggrin.gif

 

If you liked this mission series so far, GTAIndonesia, after it's done, you can check my other mission series I've finished if you want. You can find them in the DYOM Mission Index. biggrin.gif

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Okay, Mr. Cool lol

LOL. Back on topic.

 

UPDATE: 22nd mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks biggrin.gif

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Okay, Mr. Cool lol

LOL. Back on topic.

 

UPDATE: 22nd mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks biggrin.gif

Played the 22th mission, keep the good work amigo!

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Played the 22th mission, keep the good work amigo!

Thanks, Gorgonit. I'm glad you liked the mission biggrin.gif

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Played 22nd mission. Wow, things are getting hot. Good work.

Yea, they are. And thanks, man. biggrin.gif

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UPDATE: 23rd mission uploaded. Have fun, play the missions and give me feedbacks biggrin.gif
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Sorry for triple posting.

 

UPDATE: The last, 24th mission is uploaded. Brian Thompson's heist mission series is over. I hope you've had a great time playing the missions as I've had a great time making them biggrin.gif

 

You are free to leave a comment/feedback about the missions or the whole mission series if you want. It's most appreciated.

 

Thanks to everyone who's been playing the missions biggrin.gif

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What a great final it was. Very good Jimmy. icon14.gif

 

One moment I thought Brian and Garry were gonna die. I almost got cried at that secene.

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What a great final it was. Very good Jimmy. icon14.gif

 

One moment I thought Brian and Garry were gonna die. I almost got cried at that secene.

biggrin.gif Thanks, man biggrin.gif I really appreciate your feedbacks from the start. I'm glad you liked the ending. I didn't expect anyone to cry but, I'm honored if that's true cause it's hard to make someone cry over a mission wink.gif Really thanks.

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Hey, man... Your missions are great. I really liked the ending. Keep up with good mission packs. wink.gif

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Hey, man... Your missions are great. I really liked the ending. Keep up with good mission packs. wink.gif

Hey, man biggrin.gif I'm glad you liked the ending. I really tried to make it ''epic'' and I guess I succeed. I appreciate your feedback, friend biggrin.gif

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Hmm, so can I now bring my feedback or is it too early?

No, it's not to early at all. Feedbacks are always welcome from anyone, especially from designers such as you, I already told that. biggrin.gif

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There is only one word for me to say AWESOME

Awesome comment biggrin.gif Thanks, Skander. I appreciate your feedback very much.

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SevilleCheng

Ah...I'll download and play the final chapter when I find time.

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Ah...I'll download and play the final chapter when I find time.

Great. Make sure you give me feedback when you finish it biggrin.gif

 

EDIT: I uploaded a ZIP file with all the missions in it classified under 3 folders by chapters so that you guys don't have to download all 24 mission seperately. biggrin.gif You can find it on the bottom of the first post in the ''Mission list'' section.

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Thats what I was waiting for, lol a zip file. I never completed the mission pack and got tired downloading 1 at a time.

 

 

 

Ill finish it and give feedback.

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why when i download all missions on zip format i can't open this file?

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@Doublepulse - Thanks, man biggrin.gif But, it looks like the ZIP file is having a problem. I think I'll have to re-upload the ZIP file.

 

@Dimnast - I don't know. I tried to download it to, and even I can't open it. Thanks for reporting this.

 

EDIT: NOTE: The ZIP file I previously uploaded was having some problems and it couldn't be opened after downloading. So, I re-uploaded the new ZIP file and now it's good. You can download it. I've replaced the old link with the new (fixed) one in the Mission list section. biggrin.gif

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I tested it, its a little uh.... but its not bad

I don't think I understand your comment. A few comments back you posted that the missions are impressive and now you're saying it's uh LOL. Are you refering to the mission series or something else?

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