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(MISSIONPACK) George's Story!

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Drugs, lately it has become very powerful in San Andreas, it controls almost everyone, including you!

You can make it and get a wealty man, or you'll end up killed!

 

The year is 1991, you are George, a man who has been raised in Vice City, until you realize you can't make it in Vice City, you want to become rich, and you don't want to work for another drug business (Tommy Vercetti!) , you wanna become succesful and take care of things yourself, that is why you moved to Los Santos, a city full of gangs, drugdealers, and opportunity! Everything you learned back in Vice City are you going to use here! How hard can that be?

 

 

IMPORTANT: this missionpack is based on this mission!

 

Review:

 

 

Missions:

Intro mission: Leaving the past

Second mission: Making a start

Third mission: Problems on the streets

 

Under construction!

 

Credits:

-Dutchy and PatrickW for creating Dyom!

-Narcis_speed6 for making a cool new logo!

-Doublepulse for making a review of my first two missions!

 

Edited by guib

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SatournFan

Finally, you published your missionpack.

I'm waiting for it.

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guib

Update! Intro mission uploaded, Theme song uploaded, check the main post for the stuff! icon14.gif

 

(it is a short one, since it is a intro mission)

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TheDru1d

Looking forward to more missions guib

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guib
Looking forward to more missions guib

Thanks! I will try to make another one tomorrow!

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ComicalBiker

Damn...

 

I love this mission,because it is so cool.

 

There's so many thing's what i like in the mission.

  • I like grammar i mean you're writing style.
  • It look's realistic.
  • And many more

I'm waiting for more. alien.gif

 

Oh... And one more thing.

 

You gave me idea of my missionpack,

 

 

When that dude says ''Do you have hideout or something like that''

 

Then it gave me idea Lol..

smile.gifsmile.gif

 

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guib
Damn...

 

I love this mission,because it is so cool.

 

There's so many thing's what i like in the mission.

  • I like grammar i mean you're writing style.
  • It look's realistic.
  • And many more
I'm waiting for more. alien.gif

 

Oh... And one more thing.

 

You gave me idea of my missionpack,

 

 

When that dude says ''Do you have hideout or something like that''

 

Then it gave me idea Lol..

smile.gifsmile.gif

Thanks!

I haven't seen you before? So welcome on this forum! icon14.gif

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ComicalBiker
Damn...

 

I love this mission,because it is so cool.

 

There's so many thing's what i like in the mission.

 

I like grammar i mean you're writing style.

 

It look's realistic.

 

And many more

 

I'm waiting for more. alien.gif

 

Oh... And one more thing.

 

You gave me idea of my missionpack,

 

 

When that dude says ''Do you have hideout or something like that''

 

Then it gave me idea Lol..

smile.gif  smile.gif

Thanks!

I haven't seen you before? So welcome on this forum! icon14.gif

Thanks.

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guib

Update! Second mission uploaded, have fun and enjoy

 

Feedback will be appreciated!

 

It is easy mission, since it is the second mission....

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Mati

... Guib and mission packs? tounge.gif

Finally! I'll give you some feedback soon.

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guib
... Guib and mission packs? tounge.gif

Finally! I'll give you some feedback soon.

Thank god!

Atleast somebody is checking out my missions...

 

It isn't populair enough dontgetit.gif

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... Guib and mission packs? tounge.gif

Finally! I'll give you some feedback soon.

Thank god!

Atleast somebody is checking out my missions...

 

It isn't populair enough dontgetit.gif

Don't worry about it, I'm sure it will get more popular. I played your missions, I like them very much. Although I would raise the difficulty a bit. icon14.gif

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Although I would raise the difficulty a bit. icon14.gif

Thanks for the feedback icon14.gif

 

My next mission will be harder, but since my exam started, i don't have time to make missions now, so I expect to have another mission in 2 weeks (after my exam)

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Update!

 

Doublepulse made a awesome review of my mission, Check it out at his topic, or just here in my first post! icon14.gif

 

Btw, sorry for not making any missions anymore, but I will make more missions! icon14.gif

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SevilleCheng

I played your missions, they're really great for gangster storylines. Maybe you could make them in storyline feature.

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guib
I played your missions, they're really great for gangster storylines. Maybe you could make them in storyline feature.

Yeah, thanks! icon14.gif

 

Anyway, I don't think I am not going to finish this story:

 

-It is too old

-I don't know how to continue.. (No, really. Some ideas would be appreciated for the next mission.)

-It is not exiting enough for me to continue.

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Doublepulse

It really does sound silly a little bit, but sometimes to gain back all the motivation for the story and think of good ideas, sometimes you want to think about the ending before the beginning.

 

 

What is George trying to accomplish?

 

Who is the antagonist/enemy and how does he attempt to get away or destroy George?

 

How will you like the ending to play out?

 

 

Questions like these get you thinking about what you really want to see in your own missions. You want to think of awesome endings to get you motivated and think "that is where I want to be". If you think of good missions more towards the end, it is sometimes easier to find out what happens before that.

 

 

I know what you mean about

 

-It is too old

-I don't know how to continue.. (No, really. Some ideas would be appreciated for the next mission.)

-It is not exiting enough for me to continue.

 

 

Sometimes i feel the same with my main missionpack Las Venturas Crew, it has been a year and I am still not done with it tounge.gif only 60% and I have everything I want to happen planned out. (no im not trying to advertise -.-).

 

- First if you mean "old" as in been in the forums for too long, no its not old, maybe the theme is not so original, but sometimes the originality is what is "different" in your mission than what you see in others. I personally would play any gang story if I enjoy how it is represented. tounge.gif I haven't seen enough of George Story to fully make up my mind, but it looks like a nice beginning.

 

- Look at what I said in the beginning about thinking of a cool ending. You kind of have to just sit down for bout 20-30 mins, ask yourself questions on what do you want to see in your missionpack, and think of the ending missions to work your way to the beginning and how does everything connect together.

 

- That is why you think of something exciting to do tounge.gif, its a free roam of thoughts, anything can happen.

 

 

Honest part people can give you interesting ideas to work around, but you have to exercise them after that to continue the story. My suggestion is maybe George should try being a movie star or look at different job opportunities like being a pimp or something, and he realizes getting to be that movie star or pimp takes a lot more work and other people are competing for the job.

 

Sometimes it is better to have everything planned out before making a mission pack, planning is key part because if you do not know how to continue something and you are half way in the story, then sooner hell is going to break lose biggrin.gif

 

 

That is all I have to say for now, just take it easy and think about it.

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Jimmy_Leppard

 

It really does sound silly a little bit, but sometimes to gain back all the motivation for the story and think of good ideas, sometimes you want to think about the ending before the beginning.

Absolutely. That is the best advice you can get. Believe me. I always think about or write down possible play-outs or endings of my mission packs before the introduction.

 

I think that when you make the ending first, you can only make a full circle (By that I mean that you have your goal/ending line and you can't go over that and stuck in ''never ending story''.) It's much easier to plan a mission pack when you have your ending done. biggrin.gif

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So, I have to make the ending first??

(Btw, thanks for the advice, icon14.gif )

 

Hmmm, yeah, maybe I should add some more backround story about George himself...

 

Anyway, I don't really have a antagonist, and I don't know really how the end is going to end out. Anyway, what George wants to accoumplish is becoming rich, after everything he learnt from Tommy Vercetti, he want to use some sort of same tactic to become rich, Hmmm, Maybe I should add a antagonist in my next mission, I have something in mind.

 

Anyway, Thanks! icon14.gif Both of you! biggrin.gif

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So, I have to make the ending first??

 

You don't have to make the ending first, but what would be good for you to do is to have in mind how the mission pack you want to play out. Put some kind of a circle around your summary of the story and then fill in the holes inside.

 

And you're welcome. We're here to help biggrin.gif

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guib
Put some kind of a circle around your summary of the story and then fill in the holes inside.

Sorry, I don't understand that part, could you explain this alittle more?

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Mati
Put some kind of a circle around your summary of the story and then fill in the holes inside.

Sorry, I don't understand that part, could you explain this alittle more?

I ain't 100% what he means. I think you should make a rough ''picture'' in your mind of the story. Like who is the protaginist, what are the most important jobs, what is the ending. Then fill out the spaces in between.

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Put some kind of a circle around your summary of the story and then fill in the holes inside.

Sorry, I don't understand that part, could you explain this alittle more?

I ain't 100% what he means. I think you should make a rough ''picture'' in your mind of the story. Like who is the protaginist, what are the most important jobs, what is the ending. Then fill out the spaces in between.

Exactly. biggrin.gif

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I am restarting this missionpack, and have already made the third mission, look at the first post for the stuff!!

 

Please, I would appreciate feedback very much! icon14.gif

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Mati

I'm glad you're continuing this. I played the missions once again. The new missions offers a good story (when I heard that Felix hasn't sold anything yet, I thought he run away, lol biggrin.gif ). The shootout part was great as well, you put in a good amount of objects. But I had to cheat, one of them was stuck in the container confused.gif

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one of them was stuck in the container confused.gif

AGAIN?!

 

How is that possible, I make the actor on the container, then I play the mission, then he was in it, then I remake that actor, then played it again, and it was fine, now you are telling me he is in it again?

 

I don't get it, it was also a problem in one of my BUYSAG mission, I will delete the actor right away!

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Mati

Just leave the f*cking containers alone lol.

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Just leave the f*cking containers alone lol.

Yeah, I shouldn't make actors on them, anyway, mission edited, I have put the actor next to it, then I have tested it, then I tested the pubished version of it....

But still, I would appriciete it if someone played it again, just in case...

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SatournFan

I played the missions.

 

I enjoyed playing them, however, I didn't like that some of the sentences start from small letter, not capital.

 

I f*ckin' liked the use of objects in third mission biggrin.gif !

 

Keep the good work and good luck with continuing!

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I played the missions.

 

I enjoyed playing them, however, I didn't like that some of the sentences start from small letter, not capital.

 

I f*ckin' liked the use of objects in third mission biggrin.gif !

 

Keep the good work and good luck with continuing!

Thanks! icon14.gif

I hope to keep this missionpack alive, but i find it very hard to keep it interesting....

I want to have a main antagonistic, but I don't know how to introduce him... Or who it should be...

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