South_Side20 Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 (edited) The Summer Of 1980 On the East Side of Los Santos right off of 29th Grove Street was the notorius Grove Street Families who were clicked up with the PJ Orange Gangstas who were originated nearly across the street from grove street families in the Ganton Orange Projects were better known throughout San Andreas as the Orange Grove Families. The Orange Grove Families were powerful since being outnumbered by Ballas gang members they had no choice but to be ruthless, many of their OG's were known to be Viscous earning a great deal of respect towards the gang. A Grove Street OG by the name of Dasean "Sweet Toofy" Johnson was known throughout the community to be deadily he was as loyal as they came, as dangerous as they come, and as respected as ever, his brothers and him grew up in the Ganton Orang Projects throughout their entire childhoods but Dasean with other members of the neighborhood like Big Weezle, T.L.(Tender Luv), G-Man, Devil, Fat Duppy, Nappy Head, the twins Saw Dawg and Raw Dawg and as well as many other OG's founded the Grove Street Families right off of 29th and Grove Street. Sweet-Toofy's 5 older brothers Ricky "Ricky Owe" Johnson, Cordale "Bug" Johnson, Ronnie Johnson, Larry "Larry Low" Johnson, and Teddy Johnson and many members of the Ganton Orange PJ's founded the PJ Orange Gangstas. Edited May 20, 2011 by South_Side20 SmokesWithCigs, cl55684 and Tony johnson 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEXTY Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 Say What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 I second that. What? How is this chronilogically accurate at all? "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 There's a few things wrong here, putting aside the chronological and historical inaccuracies because it's fair game to rewrite anything as far as I'm concerned, as long it's clear that's what you're doing. However, you're saying it's a prequel so I'm assuming you want it fairly accurate. First, your grammar needs fixing a little. I recommending reading other fan fictions and/or prequels that are peppered around this board. It'll give you more of an idea of how to kick things off and how to start things off. It's only simple mistakes, but it makes a world of difference when it comes to others reading and understanding. Watch your colour tags too - if you're going to make something green, be sure to close the tag afterwards like this: [color=green]This is a green piece of text.[/color] Another thing that may help, read up on some background characters on gtawiki. It'll help when it comes to writing about people who may have had a history beforehand. It's the little things that add accuracy. Like I said, rewrite it how you wish but make it clear that's what you're doing. One more thing is giving The Introduction a watch, which is essentially a preview to San Andreas and answers a lot of questions in terms of how characters came to meet and just what they were doing before CJ arrived back in Los Santos. If you gain nothing from it, it's still a good watch. Good luck, and I hope to see something a little more intricate next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
South_Side20 Posted May 17, 2011 Author Share Posted May 17, 2011 (edited) Chapter 2 The bloodline lives on Back in 1965 when "Sweet Toofy" was in his 18, he met a beautiful girl by the name of Beverly Brown and like Dasean she grew up in a big family as well. Beverly's family stayed in the heart of Grove Street right in the cul de sac in a big house(well bigger than the average ghetto homes), and since the gangbanging era had just began she would see Dasean on the daily basis in the neighborhood with his brothers just shooting the sh*t. Dasean had feelings as well for Bev and he let them be known when he asked her out on the last day of their seinor year of high school and she gladly accepted. The next day Sweet Toofy took Bev out to eat to a bar/grill down the street called the "Ten Green Bottles" they talked all day and Dasean showed her a side that he forbidded any of his homies or enemies to see, which was a gentlemen. After six months of been dating the two fell deeply in love and shortly after that Bev gave birth to their first son "Sean Bevell Johnson" on January 9, 1966. When Sean was born Dasean started to settle down from the gangbanging world a little to find a decent paying job to support his child and while doing so he came across a gig in Idlewood at a pizza joint called "Mario's Pizza Shack" which he didn't hold for very long. 1969 Two years after Sean was born, Bev had given birth to another boy named "Carl Eric Johnson" and a year later in 69 Dasean was arrested and charged with felony aggravated assault stemming from an previous incident on which he beat a marijuana dealer critically for selling him a laced bag of weed, he was convicted and sentenced to three years in county jail but before he started his bid Beverly gave birth to a babygirl just one week before named "Kendl Lynette Johnson". 1972 Dasean is released from county and returns back home to the grove to see how much respect and territory his street soldiers had gained in the streets. He hops right back into the gangbanging and pays a rival balla member named "Purple Paul" from Front Yards a visit after he allegedly stabbed Sweet Toofy's younger brother "Bug" over a gamble dispute. Dasean had always had a nice phisique for he was very muscalar but after he came out of jail he was even bigger which mean that he was probaly more deadly. So Sweet Toofy caught Purple P slipping in a dark alleyway outside of Mario's and beat him with his bare hands and then beat his face with a brick causing Purple P to be in ICU for weeks. 1978 Sweet Toofy's children were now a little older and Beverly had given birth to one more child in 1974 named "Brian Canden Johnson". The oldest three were now becoming aware of who their father really was in the streets and the name he carried. Sean who was in his last year of middle school had already been put on Grove Street by his older cousins and older grove members. Sean who earned the hood name "Lil Sweets" attended Lovitt Middle School with other young grove members like Lance Wilson who went by "Ryder", Derrick Veeland who went by "Big Devil" his father was an original member from GSF, Jarrod "Little Weasel" Burke, Mark "B-Dup" Wayne whose father was Fat Duppy from the grove, Barry "Big Bear" Thorne, Ron "Big Chug" Stewarts, Tony Harris, and a fat ass boy named Melvin "Big Smoke" Harris who was 5x older than the other members in the click but just couldnt seem to make his way out of the 8th grade. As for CJ who had not been put on the hood yet he went to the same school as sweet and linked up with the other kids from his neighborhood like Kevin "Little Devil Veeland who was already banging at young age, Jeffery "Clown" Martin who was not grove street at all but perpetrated to be every chance he got, Jay Owens and many more children. Part 3 coming tonight Edited May 17, 2011 by South_Side20 SmokesWithCigs 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
South_Side20 Posted May 17, 2011 Author Share Posted May 17, 2011 This Is Tony Harris http://www.gtagaming.com/images/sanandreas/art/gang.jpg Big Devil http://ps2media.ign.com/ps2/image/article/...1415249-000.jpg Big Chug http://www.gamespot.com/users/Raptomex/vie...4Ff7x4v7h2V5Brg Little Devil http://www.grandtheftwiki.com/images/thumb...Loc-Artwork.jpg OG G-Low(In the black and green) http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/695/g...gs2134.png/sr=1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted May 17, 2011 Share Posted May 17, 2011 There is a story here, the problem is you're telling it wrong. Add more detail and character development. Also the story does not fit with that of San Andreas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
South_Side20 Posted May 18, 2011 Author Share Posted May 18, 2011 (edited) PART 3: Time To Be The Man Of The House 1980 Sean who was now in 10th grade and attending West Rock High School which was located downtown and dominated by Orange Grove Families , Temple Drive Families, and a few Westside Grove Street members decided that on the last day of school that OGF would attack two new students who were rumored to be members of the Orange Grove Families biggest rival "Front Yard Ballas". One of the rivals was "Mondo" who was the younger brother of Kane and High Ball; loyal soldiers to the Front Yard Ballas and very significant members within the gang, had recently been transferred to West Rock High after being involved in a fight with a Vago at East Rock High which was dominated by Front Yards, Temple Drive Ballas, and Dallas Ave Locs(Ballas). The Other rival was a small freshman no older than 14 named "Lil Ticc" who had recently been released from juvie and had only come to West Rock as part of his probation, he is the nigga said to be responsible for shooting at CJ and Brian at a bus stop last year but was caught running back to the Front Yard Projects with the gun, he was apprehended after encountering a crash unit on his way back and charged with a simple misdemeanor for minor in possesion of a firearm. So the last day of school approaches and the plan given by Sweet was to beat "Lil Ticc" ass at school while they had the chance and catch "Mondo" slipping on his way back to the projects and since Idlewood members did not attend West Rock he would have to get dropped off by the bus on the east side of the tracks along with the OGF members so it broke down perfectly. During lunch Big Bear, Little Weasel, and Big Devil catch Sean before he enters the last lunch of the year and warns him that Lil Ticc was smoking a blunt in the back of the school off camera near the parking lot and instanly they were on their way to beat his ass. So before they enter the near parking lot they spot him slipping with his back turned thats when Sean walked up with the three OGF members circling around the endangered balla. Sean(Already Knowing Who Lil Ticc was): Watup Homie Lil Ticc: sh*t wasup cuzz i think i be seeing yall in the hood all the time Sean: Oh yeah? Where you from homie? Lil Ticc(thinking everything was cool): The Big Bad Yard Gang Cuzz, Front Yard's till the cradle Sean: f*ck yo hood you lil ball sack bitch this OGF on mines famlee Lil Ticc: (suprised and in shock doesnt respond) Sean: Speak bitch! you think i aint know yo punk-ass shot at my brothers last year Huh? Ticc: (Now realizing that he was in danger) Naw cuz that wasnt me Thats when the OGF members knocked the small balla off his feet and began stomping his head to the ground causing severe bleeding but since it was the last day of school help would be no where near. When they got done beating him leaving him with a broken nose, Fractured Ribs, black eye, and minor concussion, Big Devil took out a green spray can and sprayed O.G.F. on his forhead and slowly walked back to their last class of the day. When the final bell rung while the other students celebrated and parlaed Sean and the OGF members loaded the bus ready for their next attack but were quickly put in shock when Mondo boarded the bus and walked to the back where the OGF members were sitting and approached Sean. Mondo: Yall some bitches for what yall did to the lil homie earlier cuzz and I want all yall to know payback's coming Sean: Who the f*ck you think you are ballsack, f*ck that lil nigga and f*ck you to homie I could give two f*cks about who your family is to my nigga Mondo: On Yards cuzz i'll beat yo ass right here Thats when Sean who had said f*ck the plans for later and Punched Mondo knocking him down to the ground and began kicking in his face causing his nose to bleed, Big Devil picked up Mondo off the ground to slam him on the floor. The beating continued for a couple more minutes before Little Weasel entered the bus and began pulling off the OGF members repeating Chill out Grove this my little cousin chill chill chill. Sean: What the f*ck you saying Weasel, you know dam well aint love for the enemies. Weasel: This is blood though he my relative at the end of the day Sean: So f*ck you to then Weasel and thats real sh*t Weasel: So what u saying then homie we can squab later on in the hood if you feeling like that. Sean: Lets do it then bitch Quickly Big bear, Big devil, and B-dup seperated the two from each other while Weasel helped his cousin off the ground and to the front. The bus driver who was in a rush to get the hoodlums off the bus had sped the whole way to the bus stop near the Ganton Orange Projects and let them off. When they got off Weasel made sure that his cousin made it across the tracks safely without harm but the conflict between him and Sean was far from over when Sean told Weasel to come to the cul de sac and get his beat. Weasel who was anxious to fight as well as Sean walked with a fast pace to the grove only to be in for another suprise. When Little Weasel approached the cul de sac he seen the block was deep extra deep with OGF members and all the OG's were outside celebrating Ricky Owe's release from prison, When Weasel approached the middle so did Sean thats when the two squared off to fight, the OG's intervened asking what the f*ck was going on but when Sean let them know what was happening the single 1 on 1 had now turned into a violation. Little Weasel had to now fight 7 members from the hood which included Sean,B-Dup, Big Bear,Big Devil,Tony,Ryder,and Little Devil and he indeed got beat tremendously especially by Tony who took Little Weasel's actions as disrespect towards the hood. OG Rick Owe: If your dad knew what the f*ck you did he woulda killed you OG Chug: Yea nigga you carrying on his name while he locked down OG Sweet Toofy: (lifted weasel off his feet in the air) If i ever here you went soft for a Balla youre done -------------------------------------------------- The next day Sweet Toofy and Beverly who were now married were sitting in the home that Bev's mom left to her before dying watching the basketball game when something caught his eye on tv. The news came on during the halftime of the game saying breaking news Carol James: Hi and welcome to WKTV newswatch 7, we top today with a breaking news story from the upper East Side of Los Santos near the corner of 33rd and Dallas Avenue where a shooting has occured we take you to Diane Adams for complete coverage Diane Adams: Thankyou Carol, and thats right as you can see behind me there is this green colored chevy riddled with bulletholes. There were four occupants in the car and so far three have died and the other in critical condition at Jefferson Memorial Hospital. The victims have been identified as 26 year old Ricky Johnson, 28 year old Teddy Johnson, and 24 year old Cordale Johnson, all said to be related. Now police haven't given much information but have said that the four occupants were believed to be getting their car washed at the car wash behind me when another car pulled in front of them blocking them in, thats when a tall male exited the other car aiming a heavy caliber handgun at the victims, he has has said to have fired 16 shots hitting all three victims in the head multiple times. As new information becomes avaliable we will keep you informed Carol James: Ok, now the surviving victim can you shed any light on that Diane: Yes, from what police have said the surviving victim had been struck twice in the torso but managed to get to a local store to signal help he is also said to be in his late teens. Carol: Thanks Diane, keep us informed Before the story could even finish after hearing that his brothers were dead Sweet Toofy was already in rage and headed out the door with a handgun by his side rushing towards the Ganton Orange Project's to get to his other two brothers. While he was running he seen how the whole grove had heard of the sadden news of the deaths of their OG's and began mourning, when he finally reached the PJ's he met up with his othr brother who were already in mourning and Sweet Toofy joined in crying, The three just held each other tight while the whole grove came to where they were to comfort them as well. After mourning thats when the questions and answer time had come and Big Devil and Sweet had just come from the hospital to check on G-Low who was the surviving victim. Being an OG made things alot easier when it came to getting answers. Sweet Toofy: So what the f*ck do we know happened Tony: Yea big homie I was talking to Princess from the hood on the phone and she gave good info Sweet Toofy: So what the f*ck she say lil nigga(Impatiently) Tony: She said that about 20 mins before it all went down that the homies had got into with Ragg and Turtle from Dallas Ave at sub-urban, and that OG Teddy beat the sh*t out of Ragg with a glock outside the store Larry Low: And then what(Anxious to find out the story) Tony: She said after the homies left that the same car that was said to be at the shooting came to sub-urban and two dudes hopped out to help get Ragg off the ground asking him what happened and sh*t, but he was done for he was unconcious so they said they were taking him to the hospital, but the news described Turtle as the shooter a tall male and thats what everything is pointing at Ronnie J: So f*ck it tonight we move in on them Dallas Ave fa**ots Larry Low: Hell Yeah, but i still cant figure out why the f*ck they would be in the rival hood not to mention Sub-urban out of all places thats in the heart of Rollin Heights? Sweet Toofy: Look Larry we cant sit around wondering we got to take action immediately for our family Larry Low: Your right bro So that night 10 members from the OGF arrived in the PJ's at Ronnie and Larry's house to discuss details of tonights attack. The original plan given by Sweet Toofy was to take two cars onto 30th and Dallas Ave one car coming from the north the other coming from the south and began unloading on any and everybody standing outside this was the heart of their hood so they were assured to be hanging out. So everyone agreed and the hit was definately on, in one car it was Big Devil, Sweet Toofy, Larry Low, Ronnie, and Tony, while in the other vehicle was a stolen huntley sat Big Chug, Ryder, Big Bear, Little Weasel, and Sean. The cars approached the light right in front of the car wash where the homies had been killed earlier that day and they all just sat in sadness thinking about the OG's. Both cars had been in their position and they took off at the same time spraying everybody who was standing outside including women and children but Tony hopped out the car and headed towards a tall and linky balla who was trying to make a way to safety Tony then raised his Mac 11 at the would be slain balla firing a full clip into his chest, that slain balla had been recognized as Turtle. -------------------------------------------------- The following week After attending the three brothers and OG members from the OGF funeral Sweet Toofy returned home and while driving had a conversation with Sean. Sweet Toofy: Sean promise me if anything ever happened to me that you would step up and take care of the responbilities in the house Sean: I promise dad why whats wrong Sweet Toofy: Nothing just keep your promise That conversation turned out to be quite ironic but neither one of them would know until now. While eating dinner at home the LS SWAT and police kicked in the Johnson's house and arrested Sweet Toofy as well as his remaining brothers and many members of OGF after being indicted on counts of robbery, assault, murders, and false statements, also while conducting a search through the house they found 12 loaded weapons seven of those being handguns and the other five being military assault rifles. While being taken out the door he gave his wife a final goodbye as well as the children, Sweet just looked on with disbelief. Six months later Dasean "Sweet Toofy" Johnson who was already on probation for an previous assault charge was convicted of 3 counts of robbery, 5 counts of murder, and 1 count of aggravated assault, and was given the maximum of life in prison, which would change the whole Johnson Family. Part 4 NEXT Edited May 20, 2011 by South_Side20 SmokesWithCigs 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEXTY Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Is this suppose to be a concept thread. It sounds and looks more like one to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
South_Side20 Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 Update to 1984 Los Santos "The City Of Spirits" had now turned into an even deadlier war than before, with the rise of new gangs appearing on the scene. The Westside Groves(Near Santa Maria Beach) on the Westside of LS had now emerged in 1981, they were known to be official by Family sets because the original "Grove Street" runs from the West to the East of LS. The Mid Town Mob(Mid Jefferson) who were a Families set had also emerged in the late 1980's but were constantly getting packed out by bordering gangs like the Rollin Heights Ballas, and Dallas Avenue Loc's. As for the Temple Drive Families(North Temple), Seville BLVD Families(Playa Del Seville Projects), and Orange Grove Families their numbers had climbed into the thousands each, The TDF's are wiping the neighboring Temple Drive Ballas(South Temple) at every chance, SBF's are in a war with Dallas Ave Locs(East Jefferson), Rollin Heights Ballas(East Jefferson), Varrios Los Aztecas(South Los Santos), and 15th Street Vagos(East Los Santos), OGF's are in an even deadlier war with Front Yard Ballas(Fron Yard Projects in Idlewood), Rollin Heights Ballas, Kilo Tray Ballas(33rd Street in Willowfield), Dallas Avenue Locs. Under an alliance between Family OG's OGF"s, SBF's, TDF's, MTM's sets are all clicked up together, as likewise for the Front Yard Ballas and Kilo Trays, and the Rollin Heights Ballas and Dallas Avenue Locs. Tony from OGF was now being called Tony Montana after he wounded Kane and killed Tiny Tim from Kilo Trays after the 'Scarface" movie premier, Sean was now being called "Sweet" and had now earned his stripes in the gang world, C.J. and Brian were now following in the same footsteps as their father and older brother, Beverly Johnson is under a huge amount of stress still coping from the incarceration of her husband and the bad decisons that her sons were making, Kendl had started dating Little Devil from OGF and is working at the Cluckin Bell in Willowfield, Ryder had been thrown out school for fighting a teacher and was now heavily gangbanging with the rest of the hood, Smoke was now an OG after putting in much work for OGF, Little Devil was balling hard as hell from robbing and selling weed and taking care of Kendl as his lady, Big Devil was robbing everybody in LS and making a killing off it, Big Bear and B-Dup were robbing, killing, and hustling together and living good, Little Weasel is now locked up in the San Andreas Youth Authority for stabbing a lady in Los Flores for a purse. The Ballas had also a tremendous climb in numbers, The Front Yard Ballas expanded with three sub-sets the PJ Side(Front Yard Projects), Ave Line(43'rd Avenue, in the area of the gas station in Idlewood), and VillageTown(the little housing complexes in Ganton/Willowfield directly south of the Ganton Orange Projects). The Rollin Heights Ballas had also expanded into sub-set's the Parkside Gangstas(Glen Park), Six Deuce Street(66th Street Near Hospital in Jefferson), and Five' Fo Street(54th Street, same street as Sub-Urban clothing store in Jefferson). Along with the numbers internal conflicts amongst Balla sets turned to the Balla-on-Balla war with the Front Yards and Kilo Trays connecting, Rollin Heights and Dallas Ave Locs clicking up, and Temple Drive Ballas turning EBK(everybody killers) but were still Ballas. -------------------------------------------------- PART 4: Everyday sh*t in the hood May 9, 1984 On a sunny afternoon in the Grove the Orange Grove Families gathered in front of Big Smoke's house in Ganton, Sweet: Aye Family who got the good Weed in the hood? Big Devil: sh*t my brother back on with the work Family, that sh*t smoking too Sweet: Where Little D at Gangsta Big Devil: You know that nigga in love with Kendl, they at my house this nigga said he cooking her dinner (laughing) CJ: Man, that nigga a sucker for love now Sweet: (Laughing) Hell yeah they both is, but sh*t lets walk over there to buy a bag Family Big Devil: Let's Go The gangsters walked over to the Devil's house which was right across the street from the Johnson House, Big Devil went in to get Lil D Lil Devil: Wasup Family Sweet: sh*t gangsta, let me get a ten sack Lil Devil: Dam Family, I just sold my last bag to Jeffery Sweet: Dam homie I need some bud Ryder: Family! Big-Tap from Temple Drive got some sticky sh*t and the bags fat Sweet: Let's go see wasup with that nigga then Ryder: Lets go then Lil Devil: Alright homies, Im going back in here to cook for Kendl Sweet: (Laughing) Little lovebirds Big Devil: You think your girl gon let us use her car to go get it Big Smoke Big Smoke: Hell yeah, that bitch smoke more than a motherf*cker Big Devil: Cool The homies then walked back down to Smoke's house to get his Girl's car and then headed to the Temple area, on the way out the Grove they saw Tony Montana walking towards the cul-de-sac and picked him up as well and then they were on there way Big Smoke: Wasup Tony, Where was you coming from Tony: sh*t from f*cking Tasha, that bitch got some good pussy on her CJ: Thick ass Tasha? The one with Grove tatted on her titties? Dam Tony you the f*cking man Tony: Yeah Yeah now CJ dont get your little dick hard, wait till we get out CJ: See nigga you always playing and sh*t Ryder: I want to f*ck with her sister "Denise" that bitch was in my 4th period at school, she ghetto, sexy, and gangster! My f*cking dream girl Sweet: Ryder youll f*ck anything you can *Everybody in the Car begins to laugh* Ryder: I sure will Sweet: Anyway, Tony what else you been on all day Tony: Oh yeah I almost forgot *Tony pulls out his new Glock 40 with an extended clip* Tony: This bitch is nice huh family? Sweet: Hell yea Gangsta, where they f*ck you get this bitch from G? Tony: OG Emmet in the Seville's, and he threw me a sh*tload of bullets CJ: Dam, I bet your crazy ass done used this bitch already huh f*cking pshyco Tony: Naw, not just yet I hope we see an enemy on the way there, though Big Devil: Tony you too gangsta my nigga The homies approach Temple, and go to Big-Tap's house who stays in the apartments next to Burger-shot. They spot all the TDF homies walking around the hood deeper than usual, and greet them by doing the Family handshake while Ryder runs in to get the weed, they see J-Brown who was the only mexican from TDF J-Brown: Wasup Gangsters Big Smoke: Wasup Brown Baby, I aint seen you in forever J-Brown- Yeah holmes I just got out of YA Big Smoke: Welcome home homie, Was you locked up with any Family niggas? J-Brown: Hell yeah it was gang of homies in there from the Drive, a few homies from Midtown, a lot of G's from Westside Grove was in there too Sweet: Did you see any OGF niggas J-Brown-Yeah actually I did, I saw Weasel in there but Im not to sure on that vato Sweet: What you mean Family? J-Brown: I mean he wasn't really putting on for the Families like he should've, everytime you would see him he would be with some ball-sack bitches from Front Yards Tony: I knew Weasel was a bitch *After hearing about Weasel the gang just looked in dissapointment and confused* Ryder: I got the bud let's go fat boy(talking to smoke) Big Smoke: Yeah, yeah Ryder. Alright J-Brown you got to stop by the Grove one day so we can talk Sweet: Yeah, homie we gotta funktion J-Brown: Cool homies, I'll see yall around The gang left out of Temple, and back to Ganton but on the way discussed the actions of Little Weasel, wondering if J-Brown was lying or not Big Smoke: Dam shame about Lil Weasel Ryder: What happened to Weasel, Family Tony: He's a bitch that's what, I should've been shot him CJ: Weasel been down for a minute, that just dont sound like him Sweet: What the f*ck do you mean CJ, have you forgot about the time he basically turned against us when we jumped "Mondo" Big Devil: When Weasel get out he gon have to see me beileve that Tony: He gon have to see all of us f*ck that sh*t, When do he get out by the way Big Devil: His mom said he got an additional 2 years so in 86. Ryder: Dam homie -------------------------------------------------- The following night Sweet, CJ, Brian, Little Devil, Big Devil, Big Bear, B-dup, Ryder, Smoke, G-low, Big Chug, and Jeffery gathered on the Johnson's front porch to smoke and drink. Suddenly they heard "Pop! pop! pop! pop! pop! pop! pop!" coming from nearby and then two mins later "Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom!, Boom, Boom!,". What the f*ck was that Family asked Sweet, I dont even know Gangster that sh*t was loud as f*ck though replied Ryder. They could hear police and rescue squad sirens zeroing in near the projects by that time the whole neighborhood had come outside to see what happened, the OGF members exited the Johnson porch and quickly moved towards the PJ's to see what happened. When they arrived they saw a body laying on the street near the entrance to the projects, and about 20 more police cars and 3 more ambulance arrived. An Hour had passed before a yelling voice shouted "Not my f*cking baby, noooooo, god no, please god please god not my baby noooooooooooooooo" shouted a Mother, what they thought to be one dead person turned out to be four slain victims. Don't nobody know what the f*ck happened Family, I done talked to everybody out here already shouted Big Chug, all they saying is that four boys were shot and more information would be avaliable when the news comes on in five minutes, sh*t Sweet lets go watch that sh*t. 11:00PM had hit and the news had came on Beverly and Kendl joined the gang in the living room to see what happened. Carol James: Hi, welcome to WKTV newswatch 7 at 11. Tonight we have breaking news coming out of the Ganton area near the Ganton Orange Projects, We take you Laura Walton for more coverage, Laura? Laura Walton: Thank you Carol, and thats right three young males believed to be no older than 16 are in severe condtions in "County General Hospital", one of the victims has already been pronounced dead at the scene and that victim has been identified as 15-year old "Rio Lovington". Carol James: Do officials know exactly what happened Laura Walton: Yes Carol, According to a witness at the scene this shooting may be a retaliation from an earlier physical altercation in Idlewood. Three of the victims had allegedly been in an altercation with the deceased victim at a nearby gas station earlier in Idlewood, witnesses also say the decased victim later returned to these housing projects behind me in a blue two door majestic armed with a large caliber handgun, the deceased victim then opened fire on the three victims near the back of these projects, while running towards his get-away car another male came running from the back and opened fire on the car and the deceased victim striking him 7 times with another Large Caliber gun, the majestic sped off before he finished unloading his weapon. As more information becomes avaliable we will keep you informed Carol James: Thanks Laura....We have just been informed from officials at "County General" that two of the victims have just been pronounced dead. We also have identified these victims as 16-year old "Cameron Wilcox" and 15-year old "Leon Border", the third victim has been identified as "Darren Harris" we will keep you informed Tony came running over to the Johnson house in a hurry, sh*t what happened Tony you kool asked Sweet, No Family my little cousin Darren just got popped in front of me responded Tony. The victims had turned out to be baby gangsters from OGF and Darren happened to be the cousin of Tony Montana, what the hell happened asked Sweet Tony: You know earlier when we went to get the weed, him and the little homies was riding they bikes through the Front Yard's hood and I guess one of they tires went flat, so they they took their bikes over to the gas station to get air. When they was getting they bikes straight "Rio" showed up with "Lil Ticc" and they just started beating the sh*t out them ball-sack bitches and I guess they didnt like the beating they got so Rio came to the hood in HighBall's blue majestic and ran to the back of the Bricks and just started gunning down the little homies. Thats when I saw the lil nigga running towards the car and lit his little ass up, but that was my little cousin man this sh*t is Deep Well sh*t homie you know we down to ride for whatever shouted Sweet, I want all the Front Hards heads on a plate nigga but we got to go to the Seville's before we ride on these busters though So we can get some heavy sh*t responded Tony Tony, Sweet, Big Bear, and Big Devil rode to the Seville's in a car they had just stolen outside of the Willowfield. When they arrive they see the OG seville members shooting dice and playing basketball when they spotted Big Emmet. Tony: Emmet, Aye family let me holler at you Emmet: Wasup Homies, what the f*ck happened in Ganton though? The hood straight Tony: Naw, our little homies got shot today and I killed the nigga who did it, but we about to ride on the other Front Hard pussys and we need some big sh*t Emmet: What yall need Family, I'll give a good price on all my hardware Tony: You got that AK I used on the Vago's last week Emmet: Hell yeah, and I will sell it for $250 Tony: Im buying one now Sweet: What else you got Family? Emmet: sh*t I got an SK, Glocks, Colt 45's, 22.'s, 25.'s, Mac 11, and 44.'s. Sweet: Let me get that Mac 11 Big Bear: I want that SK Big Devil: I want two 44.'s Emmet: Alright homie for all that just give 600 thats it Sweet: Thats a deal Emmet brings out the weapons from the Seville Projects and helps load them into the car, Yall be easy Family said Emmet, you already know G Families 4 lyfe responded Sweet. The four headed back to the cul-de-sac with their new arson of weapons, they pulled up and seen the homies loading up the other weapons owned by OGF. After packing up the weapons into the car the gang was heading into rival territory, Idlewood. When they entered enemy borders they spotted the Front Yards posted in front of a house and also spotted the blue majestic, the gang then slowly crept down the street before unloading more than 140 rounds together on the ballas, they could see bodies being hit and people taking cover, then quickly sped back to the Grove. When they returned to the Grove they heard the police and ambulance sirens once again but this time they already knew what happened and were satisfied for what they did. -------------------------------------------------- PART 5 tonight SmokesWithCigs 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Why do I get the feeling he's not listening to us? "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted May 27, 2011 Share Posted May 27, 2011 The format is all over the place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ziggy455 Posted May 28, 2011 Share Posted May 28, 2011 The format is all over the place. Bro... [Places hand on gta_talk's shoulder] He's gone mad with ignorance. "I might have laughed if I'd have remembered how." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEXTY Posted May 29, 2011 Share Posted May 29, 2011 The story was good I think. A story's a story, whether you like it or not. Even though it's layout wasn't as good as can be, it's still a story. NqkoJ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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