LuisBellic Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 (edited) Credits: UNRATED69, Narcis_speed6, Money Over Bullsh*t Theme Song Screenshots: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 1. Characters2. Weapons 3. Missions 4. Minigames & Side Missions 5. Entertainment 6. Clothes 7. Vehicles See Liberty City through the eyes of Sergei Kamarov. Having little money, always in a bar, and no good job oppurtunites, Sergei decides to work with Liberty City's russian mob. As you play through the story you will start as an associate and later a member. You also will work with some other criminal organizations. Edited June 8, 2011 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 (edited) Major Characters Sergei Kamarov: The protagonist. A 26 year old russian living in Hove Beach Broker. Sergei was born in Moscow but moved to Ukraine at a young age, because of the disaster there, his family decided to move to Liberty City. When he was 16 he got involved with crime and met some friends by the names of Drang and Andriyv. Later, Sergei became homeless but later met a Bar owner and Bartender Mickey. Sergei has been living in the upstairs of the bar and needing Mickey to help him survive. Later, he met Vlad Glebov who offered him some criminal work. Although Sergei is poor and a loser who always drinks alchahol, he dreams of one day being rich. He appears in Grand Theft Auto IV during the missions Bull In A China Shop and Clean Getaway. Drang Borislav: Sergei's friend. He is the 30 year old bodyguard and personal hitman to Mikhail Faustin and later Dimitri Rascalov. As a hitman, he has access to weapons and will sell all DLC exclusive weapons to Sergei. He can be called for friend activites and backup. He drives an Oracle. Rustam Karloff: Also Sergei's and Drang's friend. He appears along with Drang during friend activites, or if he's called for back-up. He is a car mechanic and if Sergei's vehicle is damaged or destroyed, you can call him to come by and pick up his vehicle to repair. After a couple game days he will have Sergei's vehicle fixed. It will cost $200. (Which is alot cheaper than Pay N' Spray but takes alot longer). He drives a red Infernus. Mickey "Mickey The Bartender" Charles: Bartender and owner of Comrade's Bar. He is Sergei's best friend (rescuing and helping him many years ago). He can be called for friend activites. Sergei can also help him with his Bar Work which will earn Sergei some cash. Vlad Glebov: Sergei's drinking buddy, he offers Sergei some jobs but is killed early in the storyline by Niko Bellic. He is an asshole with a cocaine addiction. Unlike Niko, Sergei isn't afraid to talk sh*t to Vlad and understands his sense of humor better. Mikhail Faustin: Leader of the faustin family. He gives Sergei some jobs. Thinking Lenny Petrovic was a rat, he sent Niko Bellic to have him killed. This sparks a huge war with the Petrovic family, which Sergei finds himself involved in. Dimitri Rascalov: Mikhail's associate. Because of his american greed, he has Faustin killed to take over the Faustin's. He betrays nearly everyone he's worked with except for Sergei, Drang, and Ray Bulgarin. He gives many missions. Ray Bulgarin: Dimitri's new partner. Sergei is sent to do some work for Bulgarin. He want's back some stolen diamonds and sends Sergei to try and retrieve them during several points in the story. Ray drives a Landstalker. Nathan Pelosi: A soldier in the Ancelloti Family and the brother of Rocco Pelosi. Dimitri develops a connection to the ancelloti's and send's Sergei to help Nathan as a favor to Giovanni Ancelloti. Moe Schwartz: The congislerie of The Lupisella Family. James owes a small debt to Moe so sends Sergei to help pay it off. During these missions Sergei will end up having a relationship with The lupisella's don's daughter Danielle. Kenny Petrovic: Leader of the Petrovic Mob. After his son Lenny is killed by Mikhail Faustin, a war starts between the Faustin's and Petrovic's. Minor Characters Mel Ivan Bytchkov Niko Bellic Icon's by: akavari112, EduardKoeleJuck, Money Over Bullsh*t Weapon Name Weapon Description Axe Coming Soon... Chainsaw Coming Soon...Fully Automatic Pistol Pretty much a mix between The Standard Pistol and The Lost and Damned's Automatic Pistol. A pretty useful weapon if you wan't to kill someone but can't afford something such as an Assault Rifle or SMG.Russian Shotgun Coming Soon...Silenced SMG(No Icon Yet)Coming Soon...Assault Rifle With Grenade Launcher (No Icon Yet)Coming Soon...Bullpup Rifle Coming Soon...Russian Sniper Rifle Coming Soon...Heavy MG A very powerful and accurate MG with a fast rate of fire. And good for quickly taking out vehicles. It usually kills someone with one or two shots. (three if one has body armor) It is not unlocked until quite late in the game. Flashbang Grenades Coming Soon...Parachute Coming Soon... Edited June 10, 2011 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 (edited) # Mission Name Mission Giver 1 Survival Is The Reward For Violence N/A 2 Bringing In The Drink Mickey The Bartender 3 Paying Up Vlad Glebov 4 Smuggler's Run Vlad Glebov 5 No Money, Mo Problems Vlad Glebov 6 Bar Star Mickey The Bartender 7 License Troubles Mickey The Bartender 8 White Trash Vlad Glebov 9 The Serbian Drive Mikhail Faustin • ZR-350• Kuruma • BF Injection • Monster Truck • LCPD Motorcycle Vladivistovik FM Tangerine Dream - "Love On A Real Train" Carbon Based Lifeforms - "Photosynthesis" PPK - " "PPK - "Russian Trance" Karsh Kale - " " Liberty Rock Radio Edited July 5, 2011 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious MOB Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 This looks pretty good so far but you're gonna have to work hard to differenciate this from FRWM. Also.. about that character model.. Fast forward to 6:34.. Maybe this could be the climax of your story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 explain the title? Wrath of Conduct seems like two 'clever sounding' words taped together to make a mediocre sounding title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious MOB Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 explain the title? Wrath of Conduct seems like two 'clever sounding' words taped together to make a mediocre sounding title. It was actually me who suggested the title albeit indirectly as it was taken from a comment I intended to be humorous. Somebody suggested the titles "Streets of Wrath" and "Code of Conduct" so as a joke I put forward two mish mash tiltles, these being "Wrath of Conduct" and "Code of The Streets" the latter of which of course having already been used by me. Then LB chose the name "Wrath of Conduct" presumably thinking it was a suitable one for this concept. The name pretty much suggests that this is a revenge story a la Kill Bill etc. It doesn't seem that this is the actual theme of the story so far but it would definitely be a very interesting angle in my view and would give this story a certain level of appeal that other concepts on here don't have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 (edited) Sorry that I didn't add more. I ran out of time so I just posted what I have now. I'll post the first mission when this gets to 2 pages. About the Diamond thing, it's bit of a good idea with the character... but I wanted the story to go on a little longer than that mission. I also planned the finale involving Kenny Petrovic. Alot of the story won't really be the same as FRWM except for The Roman kidnapping. Edited May 13, 2011 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mati Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 You put characters twice. Nice start, will you write missions longer than KOTC? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 You put characters twice. Nice start, will you write missions longer than KOTC? Yeah. I'll ask for a few more reserves and organize everything better... im also going to request for some headers (im asking UNRATED69 cus he made the logo). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blitz Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 Nice! Was really looking forward to this. Here, have some catloaf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 14, 2011 Author Share Posted May 14, 2011 I got some headers, im a bit lazy right now so I don't feel like posting them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banks. Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 Looks good man, can't wait to see more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanjeem Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 This is good, and I have faith that you will make this topic excelent but there is too little content at the moment, so I will comment more effectivley once it's complete matey. Optional theme song? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5yMR82F-Qg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 14, 2011 Author Share Posted May 14, 2011 This is good, and I have faith that you will make this topic excelent but there is too little content at the moment, so I will comment more effectivley once it's complete matey. Optional theme song? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q5yMR82F-Qg Not a bad idea for a theme, I like it. Maybe it could be the end credit theme. Im also thinking of Sergei getting involved with The Albanians. I plan the story about wither 36, 38, or 40 missions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted May 14, 2011 Share Posted May 14, 2011 The story and everything seems like it may be interesting, but the thread as a whole is a real mess man. Half the weapons are matched up with the wrong names, there are duplicates of the same section, and basically a lack of actual substance to the concept. I don't see why you would want to post it in this condition, it doesn't really a good first impression. Nevertheless I'll be following it for updates and if you need help with the story or anything I'll see if I can help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 15, 2011 Author Share Posted May 15, 2011 The story and everything seems like it may be interesting, but the thread as a whole is a real mess man. Half the weapons are matched up with the wrong names, there are duplicates of the same section, and basically a lack of actual substance to the concept. I don't see why you would want to post it in this condition, it doesn't really a good first impression. Nevertheless I'll be following it for updates and if you need help with the story or anything I'll see if I can help. I could've done all that when I first posted it but I ran out of time. Im just copying my KOTC weapon table and looking for icons to add and whatnot. Im fixing the layout so that it wont look like sh*t. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 16, 2011 Author Share Posted May 16, 2011 (edited) I fixed the weapon table and gave credit to anyone who made the icons. If you don't want your icon in the topic, let me know and I will remove it immediatly. I tried using russian guns and weapons I haven't really seen in many other topics. Im also reworking parts of the story. Im planning on having Sergei work for The Albanians. Edited May 25, 2011 by LuisBellic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xpb Posted May 18, 2011 Share Posted May 18, 2011 Good job, Luis. I see great potential here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 19, 2011 Author Share Posted May 19, 2011 Good job, Luis. I see great potential here. Thank's. Today was my last day of school, so i'll get around to fixing up the topic layout today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 This looks pretty good so far but you're gonna have to work hard to differenciate this from FRWM. Exactly...I think you got a little too much from that. That being my near dead topic of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious MOB Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 This looks pretty good so far but you're gonna have to work hard to differenciate this from FRWM. Exactly...I think you got a little too much from that. That being my near dead topic of course. Are you giving up on it man? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docfaustino Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 I haven't read either yet, but are the similarities that jarring? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 (edited) This looks pretty good so far but you're gonna have to work hard to differenciate this from FRWM. Exactly...I think you got a little too much from that. That being my near dead topic of course. Are you giving up on it man? I just had to do that. I bumped with a preview yet evryone ignored. I guess we could say it's forgotten, but..I will return it. Edited May 24, 2011 by The Lolwut Pear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Notorious MOB Posted May 24, 2011 Share Posted May 24, 2011 This looks pretty good so far but you're gonna have to work hard to differenciate this from FRWM. Exactly...I think you got a little too much from that. That being my near dead topic of course. Are you giving up on it man? I just had to do that. I bumped with a preview yet evryone ignored. I guess we could say it's forgotten, but..I will return it. Alot of things are getting ignored on here lately.. it's kinda becoming the norm in a way. I for one will look forward to it's triumphant return though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 25, 2011 Author Share Posted May 25, 2011 Im glad you ain't giving up on FRWM. It's a great topic. If you haven't noticed, I have the headers in the topic and will post the introduction soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted May 25, 2011 Author Share Posted May 25, 2011 Im thinking of having the story in Chapters like MOB's Family Ties. There will be about 36 missions in total. Part 1 would be when Sergei is just a poor drunk loser helping Mickey The Bartender and doing Vlad's sh*t (Missions 1-8). Chapter 2 would be about Sergei getting involved with The Faustin's (Missions 9-14). There will also be a few more chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Claude4Catalina Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 so you're planning on using someones inovative idea and butchering it with substandard writitng? I'm sure there's a reason I haven't bothered updating Two Underbosses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 Yeah I don't know if chapters are a great idea...writing doesn't seem to be your main thing so I would go with the brief mission descriptions or dialogue like you did in TKOTC. To be honest I think you could go back and improve on that concept instead of making this new one, but it's up to you. Whatever interests you more I suppose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam998 Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 Very nice work. I really like the weapons, especially the bullpop rifle (Steyr AUG it seems) you should add some descriptions, doesn't seem like it would be too hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 I really like the weapons, especially the bullpop rifle (Steyr AUG it seems) you should add some descriptions, doesn't seem like it would be too hard. I thought it was worth mentioning that I have this weapon in my concept. And I was the only one to have a Steyr AUG,and it even has the name 'Bullpup Rifle'. Also, the icon was made by EdwardKoeleJuck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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