guib 8 Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 (edited) Alright, I was bored so I made another mission, with a simple story. Click here for the mission. Feel free to make comments (also negative comments about the mission is welcome, to improve my missions). If you liked this mission, and you want more of the same storyline, say it and maybe I'll make a storyline about it.... Good luck and Enjoy! The mission has been reviewed by Jetjatlin in the Review topic: Hello DYOM Users, Today I'm going to review a mission made by Guib called The Pirez brothers. This mission is related from this Topic. You can Download the mission from DYOM Site, check out given link below.:- Link: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12507 - Writing: Excellent! Honestly, i didn't saw a single mistake in this mission, also good grammar. Good to see a mission made by user who didn't know much English but Great Work this time! - Presentation: Very Good. Cutscenes are longer, not work hard on cutscenes but the stoyline is great one. I Also like the Setting and you turned off Wanted level which is good for user who is playing the mission. - Length: Good. At the beginning, i thought this mission is short but when i played the mission, its length is so great and enjoyable mission. Definitely done in 6 Minutes as i keep an eye on my watch for this mission. - Difficulty: Easy. Not a difficult mission through. The Enemies have poor accuracy but some has good. The player goes to find Pirez brothers somewhere connected with Los santos vagos, but vagos tried to avoid him. After that he goes to check mansion as he founded the clue in the book. This mission completes after gunfights between player and guard with Vagos. - Variety: Good. This mission includes such a rich family vehicles and high equipments. Weapons Includes Desert Eagle, MP5 (SMG), 9mm and Tech9. I'm not sure about 9mm. Vehicles Include Normal street bike PCG 600, Cheetah, banshee and turismo. Characters Include George the main character, mark, jeremy, Pirez brother, vagos and some guards protecting mansion. Overall, The mission is GREAT . The Author did better this time with good storyline. I Suggest to make difficult mission by turning off headshot. But great work. Keep making missions for this stoyline! Edited May 12, 2011 by guib Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 (edited) Gonna play it. EDIT: played. A great mission with no mistakes, I somehow enjoyed it. One of your better missions, keep it up Edited May 11, 2011 by mati1501 Link to post Share on other sites
guib 8 Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 A great mission with no mistakes, I somehow enjoyed it. One of your better missions, keep it up Thanks, I thought there were some minor text mistakes, anyhow, now i think there is not. I made this in a half of hour and did not put alot of effort in it. Perhaps I should start a storyline based on this mission? Link to post Share on other sites
Mati 13 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 A great mission with no mistakes, I somehow enjoyed it. One of your better missions, keep it up Thanks, I thought there were some minor text mistakes, anyhow, now i think there is not. I made this in a half of hour and did not put alot of effort in it. Perhaps I should start a storyline based on this mission? Good idea. Link to post Share on other sites
pauliux2 0 Posted May 12, 2011 Share Posted May 12, 2011 You said you want negative comments too..I think that this mission sucked..It also had a bad story,and it's not interesting.... Just kidding...The mission was really cool,had some action.I also think that you should make a storyline. Link to post Share on other sites
guib 8 Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 You said you want negative comments too..I think that this mission sucked..It also had a bad story,and it's not interesting.... Just kidding...The mission was really cool,had some action.I also think that you should make a storyline. hehe, even if you weren't joking I wouldn't be mad, anyway Thanks , I really appreciate it!! Hmm, I got now 3 people who say I should make a storyline about this story, too bad I am busy lately with my exam, but still, if 2 or 3 (maybe even 1) more people say I should make a storyline about it, I would try! Link to post Share on other sites
Rytuklis 829 Posted May 13, 2011 Share Posted May 13, 2011 You said you want negative comments too..I think that this mission sucked..It also had a bad story,and it's not interesting.... Just kidding...The mission was really cool,had some action.I also think that you should make a storyline. Lol, when i first saw this i was like WTF? A person goes into somebody's topic saying "THIS MISSION SUCKED SO HARD" and when i saw the last sentence i was like LOL Link to post Share on other sites
guib 8 Posted May 13, 2011 Author Share Posted May 13, 2011 Lol, when i first saw this i was like WTF? A person goes into somebody's topic saying "THIS MISSION SUCKED SO HARD" and when i saw the last sentence i was like LOL Hmm, have you played my mission? Link to post Share on other sites
