yo-g Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 ciao sono un italiano, e o provato dyom e mi e piaciuto molto questo mod per missioni, sarei interresato a crearvi delle missioni se volete io sono disponibile e vedro se e possibile che le vostre richieste siano eseguibili... spero che capirete la mia lingua o gia fatto altre missione e sono: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12479 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12480 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12481 sono in italiano ma sono tutte basate sul gioco e non sulla storia ..... per capire la mia lingua andate su google traduttore: http://translate.google.it/# grazie per aver letto.... e se volete risp... cercherò di imparare l inglese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Satourn Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 La prossima volta, si prega di scrivere in inglese. E se si desidera pubblicare la loro missione, un argomento in questo forum: http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?showforum=263 Benvenuti nel forum! E mi dispiace se ho fatto qualcosa che non va tradotto. Faccio ancora, e il russo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 or found missions made by me and my friends ... These missions are: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12361 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12370 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12371 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12408 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12415 are in Italian missions and a story ... However if you want to create more complex ones that let me know .. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maliksusanto Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 ci sono nuove DYOM bella macchinetta, come post satournfan nel link Speriamo che si può imparare inglese Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 sei italiano per caso???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 Oh you guys take too much advantage with the Google Translator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uros12 Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 Speak ENGLISH this is ENGLISH forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 because I do not know the language should I do so ... and also useful to understand what people say in English Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 8, 2011 Share Posted May 8, 2011 If your missions are english, more people will play them, so try learning english better, and make english missions to become a better missions maker.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 8, 2011 Author Share Posted May 8, 2011 thanks for the advice .. dyom for use as the first time or started like this ... now I'll try to do the missions in English and learn a little English with the Board ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 thanks for the advice .. dyom for use as the first time or started like this ... now I'll try to do the missions in English and learn a little English with the Board ... Cool, I will happily play them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 this is my first mission in English ... hope you like it or think of the continuing story .. but if you do not like to leave it alone and create another story .. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12494 let me know if you like and tell me what you think ... thanks story after 10 years in Vagos, Jimmy decided to leave to make a new life .... Vagos but will not accept that Jimmy has left the Vagos .. and so kill her sister Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 (edited) Alright, I can see clearly that you still have alot of work to do, before you are a awesome mission maker.... Here is some advice: -Try to use CAPITAL letters, your mission looks a little sloppy without it... -Try to write every word properly.... -Add more action... -Try using Pick-ups and Objects, your mission will look cooler with it.... Ofcourse I am sure other DYOM members around here, can give you more advice..... Edited May 10, 2011 by guib Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 -Try to wright every word propperly.... Mate... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 -Try to wright every word propperly.... Mate... thanks for the support Atleast I am trying to help somebody and not acting like a asshole.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos2000 Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 (edited) -Try to wright every word propperly.... Mate... thanks for the support Atleast I am trying to help somebody and not acting like a asshole.... Asshole? I'm pointing out. and not acting like a steak with an insane amount of smilies you use when you feel you're insulting someone just to make it look nicer. Edited May 10, 2011 by Kratos2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 guib .. thanks for the advice but this was not a true mission and his own but it was to see if I can do with the English there or not .. I ask you something, the words were right or wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 guib .. thanks for the advice but this was not a true mission and his own but it was to see if I can do with the English there or not .. I ask you something, the words were right or wrong? Some words were not correct... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 thanks I'll try to do more when I'm free .. but the text is understood to want to know?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 thanks I'll try to do more when I'm free .. but the text is understood to want to know?? Well, parts of it, but not always..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 so the story goes that well or done?? or I make another?? so I set to work on creating .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guib Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 so the story goes that well or done?? or I make another?? so I set to work on creating .. Yeah, the story was good.... In my opinion......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 thanks ... then I will get to work and I'll try to make it more lively with more action possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 (edited) STORY $$$INFERNAL TRAP$$$ ( This is the second part ) after killing the right arm of Victor Mendez, the Vagos plan a plan to kill Jimmy, and make a pact with a street groove, the groove is from a man saying that groove jimmy wants to help but in return wants to say where is victor Mendez, Jimmy does not know, but he knows where the men are more faithful to Victor Mendez, and so he goes to the port and discovered that it was a trap Vagos That should kill the men mendez victor who tended the trap .. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12501 You can leave your comments and help on where the mission or wrong or to congratulate me Edited May 10, 2011 by yo-g Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted May 12, 2011 Author Share Posted May 12, 2011 This is the third part after revenge and infernal trap ... and an action-filled quest to unload it and good game! Difficulty: Normal / Hard (depends how good you are to shoot) time: 10 minutes you can say your comments both positive and negative I will try to Sharpening ( 3 part ) http://dyom.gtagames.nl/?act=show&id=12511 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yo-g Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 hello people, if not a long game gta san andreas 3 months are probably not touch it anymore, I plan to do a storyline, and I was wondering if you can help me on what to do?? give me advice on what to make history:) ... I hope you give me a hand soon sorry for my bad english Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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