Tell me what you think.

[mayday123456]

Hi Guys,

 

I have a picture I draw of a sort of comic thing here it is

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1755/ppp001.jpg[/img]

please tell me what YOU think

Edited March 8, 2011 by mayday123456

[txdeditor]

It's alright.

But, you won't get any better if you will only draw without learning anything.

So you have to learn at least the basics of face proportions and shading (that shading you did on the hair is horrible, you have do the shading line by line, not smudge everything into one big spot).

Unfortunately I don't have any good tutorials to give you, but here are few tips:

Try to draw faces from 3/4 view or from the side, not from the front (because front is hardest). And I'd say firstly learn how to draw the nose, because that what gives the drawing realism.

Good luck

[mayday123456]

Thanks for the info

[mayday123456]

I'm might make a new topic with some new pics on

[Narcis_speed6]

Don't double post, edit them, also update first post everytime you have new works, don't create new topic if unnecessary.

 

Edited March 5, 2011 by Narcis_speed6

[mayday123456]

ok then

[txdeditor]

Yes, just post your new drawings right here, so I can tell you what's wrong and what's better.

[Tommy-Vercetti19]

All of the above and don't forget to draw from a model or reference. Always define a point of light so you can decide where your going to shade.