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working on something better ATM

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Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title biggrin.gif

 

If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. icon14.gif

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The Lolwut Pear

 

Optional First Person View

Jizz In Mah Pants.

 

But, jizzing aside, I agree with akavari, you need to separate the wall of text and organize it a little bit, but aside from that, well done, man. f*ckin' A.

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Maybe use spaces between each section of writing but not bad for first time icon14.gif

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Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title biggrin.gif

 

If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. icon14.gif

I say the same thing.

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mkay, i fixed it. Hows it nao?

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Interesting, this is good for your first topic.

However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak.

 

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Interesting, this is good for your first topic.

However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak.

well i just dont wanna go too far into the storyline cause im thinking about making this into a real game under a different name. and the location? Its just unique to me, compared to tall buildings and ghettos. think of it as "Raising hell in a small town"

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The Sound of Milli Vanilli?!

 

1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.

 

Also, stop making threads on /b/.

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1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.

 

 

cool man thanks for pointing that sh*t out

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1995 Volvo 240

.....Does not exist.

 

Also, stop making threads on /b/.

Threads on /b/? How did this happen.

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Threads on /b/? How did this happen.

I was posting this on /b/. I am planing on turning this into a real game, minus the "gta" title. you can see my thanks to /b/ in my "Special Thanks" section

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This is a good start. Not bad icon14.gif

thnx smile.gif

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Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. biggrin.gificon14.gif Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

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Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. biggrin.gificon14.gif Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

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The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

 

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

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The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

 

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that

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Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say.  biggrin.gif  icon14.gif  Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first.

 

Hope this helps you out. biggrin.gificon14.gif

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Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say.  biggrin.gif  icon14.gif  Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces.

how can i make the said header?

Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first.

 

Hope this helps you out. biggrin.gificon14.gif

ill pass thanks though i wanna keep the old school look

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Hey, put in "Never Gonna Give You Up" by Rick Astley in WTFM.

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The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol smile.gif

 

i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol

wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that

yeah its my natural tounge lol wink.gif

Blitz: the title Cànan Nan Gàidheal is pronounced cannon-nan-gayd-hal wink.gif

 

and isnt it St. Leonard?

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and isnt it St. Leonard?

Nope. In the early stages of the game, i wanted it to be in the real life town of Leonard, Maryland. (Ghosts/Aliens reference). However, my friends decided to make it a fictional location, so I kept the name and changed the map, making the surrounding area similar to Narrows Park, MD, a small town outside of Cumberland. I guess you can say that Leonard is based on Narrows Park, judging by its location. However, i decided to base it on just a generic small town/suburb in the Rust belt. If you want to learn more, look at "location"

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Also, stop making threads on /b/.

i dont mean to sound like a prick, but give me a good reason not to

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Nice stuff man. Maybe request a logo and headers in the GFX section.

I'm sure they'll be happy to make you one up.

You can find the GFX section the the left side navigator.

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Great stuff ya got here...looks epic!

cool thnx

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