universetwisters Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 (edited) working on something better ATM Edited September 10, 2011 by universetwisters RyanDri3957V and Femme Fatale 2 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akavari Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 (edited) Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. Edited June 24, 2011 by akavari112 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060355814 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lolwut Pear Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Optional First Person View Jizz In Mah Pants. But, jizzing aside, I agree with akavari, you need to separate the wall of text and organize it a little bit, but aside from that, well done, man. f*ckin' A. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060355818 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TommyMufc-Champs Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Maybe use spaces between each section of writing but not bad for first time Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060355820 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Avenue Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 It's a pretty good start though. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060355839 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuisBellic Posted February 26, 2011 Share Posted February 26, 2011 Welcome to the forums. This is not a bad start for your first concept thread, even though I can't pronounce the title If you're looking to improve this, I would take some time to organize it and break up the information a bit so it isn't a huge wall of text. Then you could add some more to this story, explaining who the main character really is and who he meets in this place. I say the same thing. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060355877 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted February 27, 2011 Author Share Posted February 27, 2011 mkay, i fixed it. Hows it nao? Femme Fatale 1 Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060356429 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrownBear Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 Interesting, this is good for your first topic. However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060357104 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted February 27, 2011 Author Share Posted February 27, 2011 Interesting, this is good for your first topic.However the location is obscure and the storyline is a little weak. well i just dont wanna go too far into the storyline cause im thinking about making this into a real game under a different name. and the location? Its just unique to me, compared to tall buildings and ghettos. think of it as "Raising hell in a small town" Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060357159 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sound of Milli Vanilli?! Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 1995 Volvo 240 .....Does not exist. Also, stop making threads on /b/. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387442 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 1995 Volvo 240 .....Does not exist. cool man thanks for pointing that sh*t out Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387446 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docfaustino Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 1995 Volvo 240 .....Does not exist. Also, stop making threads on /b/. Threads on /b/? How did this happen. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387466 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 Threads on /b/? How did this happen. I was posting this on /b/. I am planing on turning this into a real game, minus the "gta" title. you can see my thanks to /b/ in my "Special Thanks" section Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387572 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drift-Kingz Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 This is a good start. Not bad Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387703 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 This is a good start. Not bad thnx Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387715 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vega LVI Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060387806 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces. how can i make the said header? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060388182 Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 (edited) The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol Edited March 19, 2011 by drscot Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060388255 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060388267 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vega LVI Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces. how can i make the said header? Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first. Hope this helps you out. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060388305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 19, 2011 Author Share Posted March 19, 2011 Pretty damn good for a first concept I have to say. Maybe toss in a few headers and logos and it would be aces. how can i make the said header? Two ways you can obtain a header, you can make one if you know how. But, if you don't have no idea on how to make a header, head to the GFX Request & Tutorials in the Experession forum and create a post stating what you would want and wait for somebody to make it for you. When you get to the GFX & Tutorial page, you might want to read the guidelines first. Hope this helps you out. ill pass thanks though i wanna keep the old school look Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060388391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugoy Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Hey, put in "Never Gonna Give You Up" by Rick Astley in WTFM. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060390996 Share on other sites More sharing options...
blitz Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Hmm. How do you pronounce the title? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060391174 Share on other sites More sharing options...
xpb Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Not bad, needs a logo, though. Some headers would be nice, too Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060391176 Share on other sites More sharing options...
drscot Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 (edited) The language of the Gaels? gaelic? nice topic but random name lol i love mallaig my in-laws live there lol wow you know gaelic? epic. not a lot of video games these days have any gaelic in them, and i hope to change that yeah its my natural tounge lol Blitz: the title Cànan Nan Gàidheal is pronounced cannon-nan-gayd-hal and isnt it St. Leonard? Edited March 21, 2011 by drscot Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060391537 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted March 25, 2011 Author Share Posted March 25, 2011 and isnt it St. Leonard? Nope. In the early stages of the game, i wanted it to be in the real life town of Leonard, Maryland. (Ghosts/Aliens reference). However, my friends decided to make it a fictional location, so I kept the name and changed the map, making the surrounding area similar to Narrows Park, MD, a small town outside of Cumberland. I guess you can say that Leonard is based on Narrows Park, judging by its location. However, i decided to base it on just a generic small town/suburb in the Rust belt. If you want to learn more, look at "location" Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060397054 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted April 2, 2011 Author Share Posted April 2, 2011 Also, stop making threads on /b/. i dont mean to sound like a prick, but give me a good reason not to Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060409389 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrannonTDS Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 Great stuff ya got here...looks epic! Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060411079 Share on other sites More sharing options...
LEXTY Posted April 4, 2011 Share Posted April 4, 2011 Nice stuff man. Maybe request a logo and headers in the GFX section. I'm sure they'll be happy to make you one up. You can find the GFX section the the left side navigator. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060411116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
universetwisters Posted April 9, 2011 Author Share Posted April 9, 2011 Great stuff ya got here...looks epic! cool thnx Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/470670-gta-c%C3%A0nan-nan-g%C3%A0idheal/?do=findComment&comment=1060419168 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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